中考英語寫作講評一

1、 暈輪效應(yīng)又稱“光環(huán)效應(yīng)”，屬于心理 學(xué)范疇，是指當(dāng)認(rèn)知者對一個人的某種 特征形成好或壞的印象后，他還傾向于 據(jù)此推論該人其他方面的特征。本質(zhì)上 是一種以偏概全的認(rèn)知上的偏誤。 cleandirty messy neat over moderate 1 2 3 書寫書寫 handwriting 字?jǐn)?shù)字?jǐn)?shù) number of words 格式格式 format standard and clean neat and clear not too many or too few 1 書寫書寫 handwriting 字母書寫規(guī)范 字母大小合適 卷面布白均勻 留白 傾斜度 一致 2 格式格式 form

2、at 假設(shè)你是李華，現(xiàn)就讀于某寄宿制中學(xué)。你的室友王明經(jīng)常違反寢室（dormitory）規(guī)定，如不 整理床鋪，休息時間大聲撥打電話，未經(jīng)許可（permission）動用他人物品，離開寢室不關(guān)燈 等。為了提醒他改正不良習(xí)慣，做個文明室友，你決定寫一封電子郵件給他。 要求： （1）包含以上所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫； （2）字?jǐn)?shù)：60-80詞（信得開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不介入總詞數(shù)）； （3）信中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實(shí)姓名，學(xué)校名和地名。 參考詞匯： respect each other 互相尊重 therefore 因此 obey the rules 遵守規(guī)定 without permissio

3、n 未經(jīng)允許 3 字?jǐn)?shù)字?jǐn)?shù) number of words Dear Wang Ming, Im writing to kindly remind you of the dormitory rules. As we live in the same room, we are like families thus we should love each other and respect each other. Whats more, we should make our room clean and tidy. Therefore, I hope you can read the follow

4、ing rules and obey them. Rule No.1 When you get up in the morning, remember to make the bed. Rule No.2 Dont make phone calls when we are sleeping. Rule No.3 Dont use others things without permission. Rule No.4 Turn off the lights before you leave the room. I hope all of us can obey these rules and m

5、ake our room more and more comfortable. Best wishes, LiHua 85 113 Im writing to kindly remind you of the dormitory rules. As we live in the same room, we are like families thus we should love each other and respect each other. Whats more, we should make our room clean and tidy. Therefore, I hope you

6、 can read the following rules and obey them. Rule No.1 When you get up in the morning, remember to make the bed. Rule No.2 Dont make phone calls when we are sleeping. Rule No.3 Dont use others things without permission. Rule No.4 Turn off the lights before you leave the room. I hope all of us can ob

7、ey these rules and make our room more and more comfortable. 1010行 每行1010個字； 8 8行 每行1212個字 1 2 3 書寫書寫 handwriting 字?jǐn)?shù)字?jǐn)?shù) number of words 格式格式 format 書寫規(guī)范 大小合適 布白均勻 不宜太多 不宜太少 10*10/ 8*12 結(jié)構(gòu)清楚 三段式 總分總 “Outer beauty” comes first! If another opportunity is given, one of my colleagues will give a presentation on the “inner beauty”. THANKS 1 書寫書寫 handwritin