浙江省稽陽(yáng)2019屆高三4月聯(lián)考英語(yǔ)試題0

1、【題文】閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫(xiě)，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。after study for hours, i went outside and up to the roof nearby for a break and watchedpeople cwimming in the sea. it was a sunny daya blue, cloudless sky over a calm sea. but then,as i looked in the distance. i discovered a series of three or four big waves heading

2、 towards the shore. id seen these mini-tsunamis (小型海嘯)many times before. they were heading at speed inthe direction of the swimming area. most people knew to look out for them, but from the screams that started coming from the beach, i could tell someone was in trouble.without thinking, i ran down i

3、nto the street, holding my bodvboard (沖浪板)on the way andshouted at a stranger to call the coastguard(海岸警衛(wèi)).my neighbor tom had heard thescreaming as well and was also outside with his bodyboard, so togetlier we rushed to the steps that led down to the sea.once we got closer, we discovered the waves

4、had pulled a bov and a girl into the open sea. iknew that the nearest boat would take at least 30 minutes to reach us. i wasnt used to this sortof emergencyid never been trained as a lifeguardbut i didnt think twice about trying to savethem. i suppose in a way i wanted to impress everyone; at 19, a

5、deal like that can seem like a good opportunity to show off.tom and i dived into the water and it took us 10 minutes to get to them. when we finallyreached them, they were almost lifeless with only their heads coming in and out of the water. wecould tell they were still alive from their small breath

6、s but it was clear they wouldnt have beenable to stay there much longer. i held the boy and pulled him over my board. tom then moved the girl onto his board.paragraph 1:we discussed pushing them back to the shore, but we were too far out._paragraph 2:that night, word came from the hospital that the

7、two kids were in good condition._【答案】we discussed pushing them back to the shore, but we were too far out. we had to wail,trying to keep them on the body boards. patting their faces to wake them up, we continuouslytold them to be strong. after what seemed a century, i fell extremely exhausted while

8、swimminghard to keep myself afloat casting a look at tom. i could tell he was also apparently worn-outlooking at the vast sea, i fell a sense of fear surging through my whole body. salt stinging my eyes,i could hardly know how long i could hold on. but 1 still shouted in my head: focus. in sheerdesp

9、eration, i finally caught sight of some boats with lifeguards on them heading towards us inthe distance. thank you, lord. quite soon, i fell strong arms pull me out of the sea onto the board.that night, word came from the hospital that the two kids were in good condition. sighing is arelief, i could

10、nt stop thinking about the whole event. i knew they would have died if they hadbeen in the sea for any longer. obviously i had done a big deal which is surely a good opportunityto show off. 1 had expected to experience some sort of sense of wellbeing or greatness, but noneof that came. rather than f

11、eel like a hero i believe anyone who could swim would have done the same thing.【解析】【分析】本文是一篇文章續(xù)寫(xiě)?！驹斀狻客ㄟ^(guò)閱讀所給文章可知：作者看到了有人在海中遇險(xiǎn)，告知陌生人向海岸警衛(wèi)求救的同時(shí)，和鄰居 tom 帶著沖浪板進(jìn)入海中，進(jìn)行營(yíng)救。續(xù)寫(xiě)部分分為兩段，第一段開(kāi)頭是： 我們商量過(guò)把他們推到岸邊，但我們離得太遠(yuǎn)了。，所以應(yīng)該寫(xiě)作者和 tom 對(duì)遇難者如何進(jìn)行施救；第二段開(kāi)頭是：那天晚上，醫(yī)院傳來(lái)消息說(shuō)這兩個(gè)孩子的情況良好，本段應(yīng)該寫(xiě)對(duì)援救結(jié)果表示欣慰的同時(shí)，自己的感受。寫(xiě)作時(shí)考生要注意謀篇布局的順序，運(yùn)用

12、合適 的連接詞連接全文，同時(shí)選擇高級(jí)的詞匯和語(yǔ)法項(xiàng)目讓文章更有文采。【點(diǎn)睛】本片作文要點(diǎn)齊全，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，條理清晰，應(yīng)用了較多的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯，熟練地使用了語(yǔ)句間的連接成分，使整個(gè)文章結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，很好地完成了寫(xiě)作任務(wù)。例如：patting theirfaces to wake them up, we continuously told them to be strong. 運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞作伴隨狀語(yǔ)；after what seemed a century, i fell extremely exhausted while swimming hard to keep myself afloat 運(yùn)用了

13、賓語(yǔ)從句；casting a look at tom, i could tell he was also apparently worn-out.運(yùn)用了賓語(yǔ)從句；salt stinging my eyes, i could hardly know how long i could hold on. 運(yùn)用了獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)和賓語(yǔ)從句；that night, word came from the hospital that the two kids were in goodcondition.運(yùn)用了同位語(yǔ)從句；i knew they would have died if they had been in the sea for mylonger. 運(yùn)用了賓語(yǔ)從句和虛擬語(yǔ)氣；obviously i had done a big deal which is surely a goodopportunity to show off.運(yùn)用了限制性定語(yǔ)從句；1 had expected to experi