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1、Introductory Lesson of Summary Writing Introductory Lesson of Summary Writing 概要寫作概要寫作 Learning AimsLearning Aims 1. Know what the summary writing is 2. Learn the criteria(標(biāo)準(zhǔn)) of a good summary 3. Master how to write a good summary 普通高等學(xué)校招生全國(guó)統(tǒng)一考試英語(yǔ)科考試說(shuō)明 概要寫作： 提供一篇350詞以內(nèi)的短文，要求考生基于該短文 寫出一篇60詞左右的內(nèi)容概要。（

2、滿分25分） 詞數(shù)詞數(shù)少于少于4040的和的和多余多余8080的，的， 從從總分中減去總分中減去2 2分分 檔次檔次描述描述 第五檔 (21-25) 理解準(zhǔn)確，理解準(zhǔn)確，涵蓋全部要點(diǎn)涵蓋全部要點(diǎn) 能準(zhǔn)確使用相應(yīng)的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯能準(zhǔn)確使用相應(yīng)的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯 有效地使用了有效地使用了語(yǔ)句間的連接成分語(yǔ)句間的連接成分，使所完成的概要結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，使所完成的概要結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊 完全使用自己的語(yǔ)言完全使用自己的語(yǔ)言 第四檔 (16-20) 理解準(zhǔn)確，涵蓋理解準(zhǔn)確，涵蓋絕大部分要點(diǎn)絕大部分要點(diǎn) 所使用的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯雖有些錯(cuò)誤，但完全不影響意義表達(dá)所使用的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯雖有些錯(cuò)誤，但完全不影響意義表達(dá) 比較有效地

3、使用了比較有效地使用了語(yǔ)句間的連接成分語(yǔ)句間的連接成分，使所完成的概要結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，使所完成的概要結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊 有個(gè)別整句抄自原文有個(gè)別整句抄自原文 第三檔 (11-15) 理解較為準(zhǔn)確，涵蓋大部分要點(diǎn)理解較為準(zhǔn)確，涵蓋大部分要點(diǎn) 所使用的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯雖有些錯(cuò)誤，但不影響意義表達(dá)所使用的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯雖有些錯(cuò)誤，但不影響意義表達(dá) 應(yīng)用簡(jiǎn)單地語(yǔ)句間的連接成分，使上下文內(nèi)容連貫應(yīng)用簡(jiǎn)單地語(yǔ)句間的連接成分，使上下文內(nèi)容連貫 出現(xiàn)兩句以上整句抄自原文現(xiàn)象。出現(xiàn)兩句以上整句抄自原文現(xiàn)象。 第二檔 (6-10) 出現(xiàn)兩句以上整句抄自原文現(xiàn)象。出現(xiàn)兩句以上整句抄自原文現(xiàn)象。 第一檔 (1-5) 多個(gè)句子抄自原文多

4、個(gè)句子抄自原文 檔次檔次描述描述 第五檔 (21-25) 理解準(zhǔn)確，理解準(zhǔn)確，涵蓋全部要點(diǎn)涵蓋全部要點(diǎn) 能準(zhǔn)確使用相應(yīng)的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯能準(zhǔn)確使用相應(yīng)的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯 有效地使用了有效地使用了語(yǔ)句間的連接成分語(yǔ)句間的連接成分，使所完成的概要，使所完成的概要 結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊 完全使用自己的語(yǔ)言完全使用自己的語(yǔ)言 第四檔 (16-20) 理解準(zhǔn)確，涵蓋理解準(zhǔn)確，涵蓋絕大部分要點(diǎn)絕大部分要點(diǎn) 所使用的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯雖有些錯(cuò)誤，但完全不影所使用的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯雖有些錯(cuò)誤，但完全不影 響意義表達(dá)響意義表達(dá) 比較有效地使用了比較有效地使用了語(yǔ)句間的連接成分語(yǔ)句間的連接成分，使所完成的，使所完成的 概要結(jié)構(gòu)

5、緊湊概要結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊 有個(gè)別整句抄自原文有個(gè)別整句抄自原文 第三檔第三檔 (11-15) 理解較為準(zhǔn)確，涵蓋大部分要點(diǎn)理解較為準(zhǔn)確，涵蓋大部分要點(diǎn) 所使用的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯雖有些錯(cuò)誤，但不影所使用的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯雖有些錯(cuò)誤，但不影 響意義表達(dá)響意義表達(dá) 應(yīng)用簡(jiǎn)單地語(yǔ)句間的連接成分，使上下文內(nèi)容應(yīng)用簡(jiǎn)單地語(yǔ)句間的連接成分，使上下文內(nèi)容 連貫連貫 出現(xiàn)兩句以上整句抄自原文現(xiàn)象。出現(xiàn)兩句以上整句抄自原文現(xiàn)象。 第二檔第二檔 (6-10) 出現(xiàn)兩句以上整句抄自原文現(xiàn)象。出現(xiàn)兩句以上整句抄自原文現(xiàn)象。 第一檔第一檔 (1-5) 多個(gè)句子抄自原文多個(gè)句子抄自原文 概要寫作解題步驟 Step1: 速讀文章 確定主

6、題結(jié)構(gòu) text type(體裁) / topic (主旨/主題句)/ structure (篇章結(jié)構(gòu)) Step2: 精讀原文 提取內(nèi)容要點(diǎn) 找出每個(gè)段落的主題句 把握句際邏輯、厘清信息層次(主要點(diǎn)、次要點(diǎn)、冗余信息) Step3: 精準(zhǔn)釋義 重組原文語(yǔ)言 語(yǔ)言轉(zhuǎn)化+壓縮表達(dá) Step4: 運(yùn)用銜接手段 連貫成文 巧用銜接，完美過(guò)度 Step5: 批判重讀修改 完美成稿 Step1: 速讀文章確定主題結(jié)構(gòu) text type(體裁) topic (主旨/主題句) structure (篇章結(jié)構(gòu)) Shyness Are you shy? If you are, you are not alo

7、ne. In fact, close to 50 percent of people are shy. Almost 80 percent of people feel shy at some point in their lives. These days, shyness is becoming more and more common. Now, scientists are trying to understand shyness. They have some interesting ideas about why people are shy. Is it possible to

8、be born shy? Many scientists say yes. They say 15 to 20 percent of babies behave shyly. These babies are a little quieter and more watchful than other babies. Interestingly, these shy babies usually have shy parents. As a result, scientists think that some shyness is genetic. Family size might cause

9、 people to be shy as well. Scientists at Harvard University studied shy children. They found 66 percent of them had older brothers and sisters. As a result, they became shy. At the same time, children with no brothers and sisters may be shy as well. Growing up alone, they often play by themselves. T

10、hey are not able to learn the same social skills as children from big families. You may also be shy because of where you were born. When scientists studied shyness in different countries, they found surprising differences. In Japan, most people said they were shy. But in Israel, only one of three pe

11、ople said so. What explains the difference? One scientist says the Japanese and Israelis have different opinions of failure. In Japan, when people do not succeed, they feel bad about themselves. They blame themselves for their failure. In Israel, the opposite is true. Israelis often blame failure on

12、 outside reasons, such as family, teachers, friends, or bad luck. In Israel, freedom of opinion and risk taking are strongly supported. This may be why Israelis worry less about failure and are less shy. For shy people, it can be difficult to make friends, speak in class, and even get a good job. Bu

13、t scientists say you can get over your shyness. They suggest trying new things and practicing conversation. And dont forget-if you are shy, you are not the only one. phenomenon + topic reason 1 reason 2 reason 3 consequence + solution phenomenon + topic reason1reason2 consequence + solution reason3

14、text type: 事理說(shuō)明文 topic: reasons for shyness structure: 總分總 shyness Step2: 精讀原文提取內(nèi)容要點(diǎn) 找出每個(gè)段落的主題句，并思考主題句的涵蓋面 把握句際邏輯、厘清信息層次(主要點(diǎn)、次要點(diǎn)、冗余信息) Paragraph 1 Are you shy? If you are, you are not alone. In fact, close to 50 percent of people are shy. Almost 80 percent of people feel shy at some point in their l

15、ives. These days, shyness is becoming more and more common. Now, scientists are trying to understand shyness. They have some interesting ideas about why people are shy. phenomenon + topic Shyness is becoming more and more common, and scientists have some interesting ideas about why people are shy. T

16、ip 1: Clarifying the logical relationship can help identify the Tip 1: Clarifying the logical relationship can help identify the key and minor points . key and minor points . 分清邏輯關(guān)系有助于辨析主次要點(diǎn)分清邏輯關(guān)系有助于辨析主次要點(diǎn) Paragraph 2 Is it possible to be born shy? Many scientists say yes. They say 15 to 20 percent

17、of babies behave shyly. These babies are a little quieter and more watchful than other babies. Interestingly, these shy babies usually have shy parents. As a result, scientists think that some shyness is genetic. Tip 2: Pay attention to the topic sentence of each paragraph. Tip 2: Pay attention to t

18、he topic sentence of each paragraph. 善善 于利用段落結(jié)構(gòu)抓住主題句，同時(shí)關(guān)注銜接詞于利用段落結(jié)構(gòu)抓住主題句，同時(shí)關(guān)注銜接詞 reason 1 Some shyness is genetic. Paragraph 3 Family size might cause people to be shy as well. Scientists at Harvard University studied shy children. They found that 66 percent of them had older brothers and sisters. A

19、s a result, they became shy. At the same time, children with no brothers and sisters may be shy as well. Growing up alone, they often play by themselves. They are not able to learn the same social skills as children from big families. reason 2 Family size might cause people to be shy as well. Tip 3:

20、 Tip 3: 關(guān)注銜接詞關(guān)注銜接詞 Paragraph 4 You may also be shy because of where you were born. When scientists studied shyness in different countries, they found surprising differences. In Japan, most people said they were shy. But in Israel, only one of three people said so. What explains the difference? One s

21、cientist says the Japanese and Israelis have different opinions of failure. In Japan, when people do not succeed, they feel bad about themselves. They blame themselves for their failure. In Israel, the opposite is true. Israelis often blame failure on outside reasons, such as family, teachers, frien

22、ds, or bad luck. In Israel, freedom of opinion and risk taking are strongly supported. This may be why Israelis worry less about failure and are less shy. Tip 4: Tip 4: 段落主題句概括性不夠的情況下，應(yīng)該進(jìn)行適當(dāng)?shù)慕舛温渲黝}句概括性不夠的情況下，應(yīng)該進(jìn)行適當(dāng)?shù)慕?釋和補(bǔ)充。釋和補(bǔ)充。 reason 3 You may also be shy because of where you were born, as different

23、 countries /cultures shape peoples attitudes towards failure. Paragraph 5 For shy people, it can be difficult to make friends, speak in class, and even get a good job. But scientists say you can get over your shyness. They suggest trying new things and practicing conversation. And dont forget - if y

24、ou are shy, you are not the only one. consequence solution Shyness can cause people some trouble, but scientists say you can get over your shyness by trying new things and practicing conversation. Tip 5: Tip 5: 提煉提煉/ /表達(dá)要點(diǎn)時(shí)要學(xué)會(huì)用概括性語(yǔ)言來(lái)概括描述性語(yǔ)表達(dá)要點(diǎn)時(shí)要學(xué)會(huì)用概括性語(yǔ)言來(lái)概括描述性語(yǔ) 言。言。 Shyness is becoming more and more

25、common, and scientists have some interesting ideas about why people are shy (phenomenon + topic). Some shyness is genetic (reason1). Family size might cause people to be shy as well (reason2). You may also be shy because of where you were born, as different countries/cultures shape peoples attitudes

26、 towards failure (reason3). Shyness can cause people some trouble, but scientists say you can get over your shyness by trying new things and practicing conversation (consequence + solution). Step3: 精準(zhǔn)釋義重組原文語(yǔ)言 語(yǔ)言轉(zhuǎn)化+壓縮表達(dá) Language database: 1. 越來(lái)越 2. 弄清楚，弄明白 3. n. 想法，意見(jiàn) 1. increasingly 2. figure out /

27、work out / find out 3. opinion / thought /view phenomenon + topic Shyness is becoming more and more common, and scientists have some interesting ideas about why people are shy. 1. Scientists have _ the possible reasons for shyness, _ is becoming _ common. 2. More people _, scientists have _ the reas

28、ons for it. 3. Scientists have _ about why more and more people are shy. figured/worked/found out which being/feeling shy figured/worked/found out several opinions/thoughts/views phenomenon + topic Shyness is becoming more and more common, and scientists have some interesting ideas about why people

29、are shy. increasingly Language database: 1. 遺傳的，天生的 2. 因果關(guān)系匯總 inborn natural reason 1: Some shyness is genetic. 1. verb (2) account _; bring _; contribute _; give _; give rise _; lead _; result _ (3) be _ for; be _for (4) play a (major) role / part in; as a _; accordingly; consequently; hence; so; t

30、herefore; thus 1. verb phrases: 1. verb phrases: 2. prepositional phrases arise from; lie _ as a _ of; because of; due to; on account of; owing to; thanks to 3. grammar :3. grammar : grammar: (1) v-ing / v-ed / to do / with structure(with結(jié)構(gòu)) (2) adverbial clause(狀語(yǔ)從句) cause effectcause effecteffect

31、causeeffect cause cause for about to birth toto toin to blame responsible consequence/result result in consequence/result 1. Some shyness is _. 2. Some shyness _genes. 3. Some shyness _genes. 4. Genes _ some shyness. 5. Genes _. inborn / natural is decided/determined by results/arises from/lies in a

32、ccount for / bring about contribute to / lead to /. plays a major role / part reason 1: Some shyness is genetic. Language database: 促成/導(dǎo)致因素，成因：a contributing cause / factor Another _ is family size. contributing cause / factor reason 2 Family size might cause people to be shy as well. 1. Where you w

33、ere born might be _, as different cultures shape peoples attitudes towards failure. 2. _ for shyness is birthplaces, _ different cultures shape peoples attitudes towards failure. 3. Where you were born might _ your shyness, as different cultures shape peoples attitudes towards failure. another contr

34、ibuting factor Another reason where account for / bring about contribute to / lead to /. plays a role/part in reason 3 You may also be shy because of where you were born, as different countries /cultures shape peoples attitudes towards failure. Language database: 1. 給人帶來(lái)麻煩的(adj.)： 2. 克服，戰(zhàn)勝： 3. 溝通，交流

35、： troublesome/worrying/annoying overcome / fight against communicate (communication) /talk to others / exchange ideas consequence + solution Shyness can cause people some trouble, but scientists say you can get over your shyness by trying new things and practicing conversation. 1. Shyness is _, but

36、scientists believe people can get over it by _ and _. 2. Scientists agree that the _ shyness can be _ by trying something new and communicating more. 3. To help _(深受害羞困擾的 人們), scientists offer several suggestions: trying something new and _. troublesome/worrying/annoying trying something new communi

37、cating more troublesome/worrying/annoying communicating with others consequence + solution Shyness can cause people some trouble, but scientists say you can get over your shyness by trying new things and practicing conversation. overcome/ got over people suffering from shyness Step4: 運(yùn)用銜接手段連貫成文 巧用銜接

38、，完美過(guò)度 Now scientists have figured out the possible reasons for shyness, which is becoming increasingly common (phenomenon + topic). Some shyness is inborn (reason1)._, shyness may result from family size(reason2). Where you were born might be _ contributing factor, as different cultures shape people

39、s attitudes towards failure(reason3). Shyness is troublesome/worrying. _, scientists agree that people can overcome the troublesome shyness by trying something new and communicating more with others(consequence + solution). (62 words) Besides/Also another However Step5: 批判重讀修改完美成稿 檢查要點(diǎn)是否齊全 檢查要點(diǎn)的準(zhǔn)確性

40、檢查語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤 檢查拼寫和標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)錯(cuò)誤 實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練-dirt Step1: 速讀文章 確定主題結(jié)構(gòu) text type(體裁) / topic (主旨/主題句)/ structure (篇章結(jié)構(gòu)) Step2: 精讀原文 提取內(nèi)容要點(diǎn) 把握句際邏輯、厘清信息層次(主要點(diǎn)、次要點(diǎn)、冗余信息) Step3: 精準(zhǔn)釋義重組原文語(yǔ)言 語(yǔ)言轉(zhuǎn)化+壓縮表達(dá) Step4: 運(yùn)用銜接手段連貫成文 巧用銜接，完美過(guò)度 Step5: 批判重讀修改完美成稿 Step1: 速讀文章確定主題結(jié)構(gòu) text type(體裁) ： topic (主旨/主題句) : structure (篇章結(jié)構(gòu)): Getting rid o

41、f dirt, in the opinion of most people, is a good thing. However, there is nothing fixed about attitudes to dirt. In the early 16th century, people thought that dirt on the skin was a means to block out disease, as medical opinion had it that washing off dirt with hot water could open up the skin and

42、 let ills in. A particular danger was thought to lie in public baths. By 1538, the French king had closed the bath houses in his kingdom. So did the king of England in 1546. Thus began a long time when the rich and the poor in Europe lived with dirt in a friendly way. Henry IV, King of France, was famously dirty. Upon learning that a nobleman had taken a bath, the king ordered that, to avoid the attack of disease, the nobleman should not go out. Though the belief in the merit(好處) of dirt was long-lived, dirt has no longer been