高考英語寫作公開課精編版

1、 Learning Aims 1.Learn to write an outline composition. 2.Develop a good writing habit analyze organize polish. 3.Develop the abilities to solving the outline composition writing, the proof and the rational cloze. What is a good writing？ Content: * everything needed included which is related to your

2、 view.( 內(nèi)容要完整內(nèi)容要完整) Structure: * Good beginning and ending(好的開頭結(jié)尾好的開頭結(jié)尾) * Well organized and smoothly developed (結(jié)構(gòu)合理結(jié)構(gòu)合理,行文流暢行文流暢) Language: * No Chinglish (避免中文式英文避免中文式英文) * No Grammatical mistakes (沒有語法錯誤沒有語法錯誤) * With exactly used words and relatively changed sentence patterns (詞語的準(zhǔn)確運用和句式的富于變化詞

3、語的準(zhǔn)確運用和句式的富于變化) How to write a composition Six steps to write a composition Analyzing the task Finding out the main points Thinking of key points/phrases Forming sentences Combining the sentences into a passage Copying normally (云南省云南省第第二二次次統(tǒng)測統(tǒng)測)每年都有許多人出國旅游，一些人的不每年都有許多人出國旅游，一些人的不 文明行為引起了社會關(guān)注。文明行為引起了

4、社會關(guān)注。某英文報社正在舉行以某英文報社正在舉行以“文文 明出國旅游明出國旅游”為主題的為主題的討論討論。假定你是李華，請給報社。假定你是李華，請給報社 專欄編輯專欄編輯寫一封信寫一封信，呼吁大家做文明游客呼吁大家做文明游客。要點如下：。要點如下： 1.尊重習(xí)俗；尊重習(xí)俗； 2.不高聲喧嘩不高聲喧嘩； 3.其它。其它。 注意注意:詞數(shù)詞數(shù)100120個個,開頭已經(jīng)寫好開頭已經(jīng)寫好,不計入總詞數(shù)。不計入總詞數(shù)。 【審題審題抓準(zhǔn)信息抓準(zhǔn)信息 快速推斷快速推斷】 項目項目 結(jié)論結(jié)論 體裁體裁_ 話題話題以以 為主題為主題 時態(tài)時態(tài) _ 人稱人稱_ 書信（給編輯一封信）書信（給編輯一封信） 一般現(xiàn)在時

5、為主及情態(tài)動詞的應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時為主及情態(tài)動詞的應(yīng)用 第一人稱為主第一人稱為主 Step1 .Step1 .Analyzing the taskAnalyzing the task “文明出國旅游文明出國旅游” 【定點定點把握要點，遣詞造句把握要點，遣詞造句】 第第1 1段：點明話題段：點明話題出國旅游，一些人的不文明行為出國旅游，一些人的不文明行為【引入引入6 6分分】 【信息信息】每年都有許多人出國旅游，一些人的不文明行為引起每年都有許多人出國旅游，一些人的不文明行為引起 了社會關(guān)注。了社會關(guān)注。 【遣詞遣詞】1. 假日游客假日游客: 2.出國旅游觀光出國旅游觀光: 3.不文明行為不文明行為

6、: 4.引起了社會關(guān)注引起了社會關(guān)注: 【造句造句】Every year, a great many go abroad ,while they a r e e n j o y i n g t h e m s e l v e s , s o m e o f them , which . Step2.Step2. Finding out the main pointsFinding out the main points and forming sentencesand forming sentences holidaymaker go abroad for sightseeing and re

7、laxation behave rudely cause a big concern holidaymakers for sightseeing and relaxation behave rudely causes a big concern 第第2段：針對不文明行為三條建議段：針對不文明行為三條建議【作文重點作文重點12分分】 【信息信息】1.尊重習(xí)俗尊重習(xí)俗；2.不高聲喧嘩；不高聲喧嘩；3.其它。其它。 【點撥點撥】擴充要點擴充要點, 使文章條理使文章條理 【運用運用】 建議注意自己的行為。首先，建議注意自己的行為。首先，尊重習(xí)俗尊重習(xí)俗；其次，；其次，不高聲不高聲 喧嘩喧嘩，再次，插隊

8、是不被接受的。，再次，插隊是不被接受的。 【遣詞遣詞】1.尊重習(xí)俗尊重習(xí)俗：respect and follow local customs 2.高聲喧嘩高聲喧嘩：talk loudly in public places 3.插隊：插隊：queue jumping 【造句造句】 In my opinion, it is necessary to watch our manners. First, we must_, Besides, wed better _to avoid disturbance to others, Also, be aware that _is unacceptable

9、in many countries。 respect and follow local customs not talk loudly in public places queue jumping 第第3段：向社會呼吁段：向社會呼吁【結(jié)尾結(jié)尾6分分】 【信息信息】呼吁大家做文明游客呼吁大家做文明游客 【點撥點撥】適度發(fā)揮適度發(fā)揮, 以使文章符合邏輯以使文章符合邏輯 【運用運用】我們在國外旅游，代表我們的國家形象，因此要注意自己的我們在國外旅游，代表我們的國家形象，因此要注意自己的 行為。只有這樣，才能開心旅游。行為。只有這樣，才能開心旅游。 【遣詞遣詞】 1.代表國家形象：代表國家形象：rep

10、resent our country 2.注意：注意：be cautious about 3.只有這樣：只有這樣：only in this way 【造句造句】 more importantly, we should bear in mind that we are _while abroad, so we need to_ how we act, _can we enjoy our trips abroad and have beautiful memories as well. representing our country be cautious about only in this

11、way Dear Editor, Ive read your discussions on how to behave properly when travelling abroad. Every year, a great many holidaymakers go abroad for sightseeing and relaxation, while they are enjoying themselves, some of them behave rudely ,which causes a big concern. How to be a civilized tourist has

12、become a heated topic. In my opinion, it is necessary to watch our manners. First, we must respect and follow local customs, Besides, wed better not talk loudly in public places to avoid disturbance to others, Also, be aware that queue jumping is unacceptable in many countries, more importantly, we

13、should bear in mind that we are representing our country while abroad, so we need to be cautious about how we act, only in this way can we enjoy our trips abroad and have beautiful memories as well. yours, LiHua Step3. Combining the sentences into a passageStep3. Combining the sentences into a passa

14、ge 【連句成篇連句成篇】 【書面表達書面表達-短文改錯短文改錯-新完型填空三位一體新完型填空三位一體】之短文改錯之短文改錯 Dear Editor, Ive read your discussions on how to behave proper when travelling abroad. Every year, a great many holidaymakers goes abroad for sightseeing and relax, while they are enjoying themselves, some of them behave rudely, that cau

15、ses a big concern. How to be a civilized tourist have become a heated topic. In my opinion, it is necessary to watch our manner. First, we must respect and follow local customs; However, wed better not talk loudly in public places to avoiding disturbance to others, Also, be aware that queue jumping

16、is unacceptable in many countries, more important, we should bear in mind that we are representing our country while abroad, but we need to be cautious about how we act, only in this way can we enjoy our trips abroad and have beautiful memories as well. yours, LiHua properly go relaxation which has

17、manners Besides avoid importantly so Dear Editor, Ive read your discussions on how1_behave properly when travelling abroad. Every year, a great many holidaymakers go abroad for2_(sightsee) and relaxation, while they are enjoying themselves, some of them behave3_(rude) ,which causes a big concern. Ho

18、w to be a civilized 4_(tour) has become a heated topic. In my opinion, it is necessary 5_(watch) our manners. First, we must respect and follow local6_ (custom）; Besides, wed better not talk loudly in public places to avoid disturbance to others, Also, be aware that queue jumping is7_(unaccept) in m

19、any countries, more importantly, we should bear8_mind that we are representing our country while abroad, 9_we need to be cautious about how we act,10_in this way can we enjoy our trips abroad and have beautiful memories as well. yours, LiHua to sightseeing rudely tourist in to watch unacceptable so

20、Only 【書面表達書面表達-短文改錯短文改錯-新完型填空三位一體新完型填空三位一體】之新完型填空之新完型填空 customs 假如你叫李華假如你叫李華,你校同學(xué)正在就你校同學(xué)正在就“高三學(xué)生要不要參加體育鍛煉高三學(xué)生要不要參加體育鍛煉 ”這一主題展開討論這一主題展開討論,請根據(jù)下面所給的信息請根據(jù)下面所給的信息,給某英文報社寫給某英文報社寫 一封一封 信信,介紹討論情況介紹討論情況,并談?wù)勀愕目捶?。并談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?贊成（贊成（55%）反對（反對（45%） 1.應(yīng)該每天進行體育鍛煉應(yīng)該每天進行體育鍛煉,如如 做早操、打乒乓球、打籃球等。做早操、打乒乓球、打籃球等。 2.鍛煉能增強體質(zhì)鍛煉能增

21、強體質(zhì),減少疾病。減少疾病。 3.鍛煉能使大腦得到休息鍛煉能使大腦得到休息,使使 學(xué)習(xí)效果更好。學(xué)習(xí)效果更好。 1.鍛煉浪費時間。鍛煉浪費時間。 2.鍛煉后很興奮鍛煉后很興奮,難以快速投入難以快速投入 學(xué)習(xí)。學(xué)習(xí)。 3.鍛煉使人疲勞，而且可能會鍛煉使人疲勞，而且可能會 受傷。受傷。 注意：注意： 1.詞數(shù)詞數(shù)100左右；左右； 2.內(nèi)容充實，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，語義連貫；內(nèi)容充實，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，語義連貫； 3.書寫須清晰、工整。書寫須清晰、工整。 參考詞匯：體育鍛煉參考詞匯：體育鍛煉physical exercise Writing practiceWriting practice 【審題審題抓準(zhǔn)信息抓準(zhǔn)信

22、息 快速推斷快速推斷】 項目項目 結(jié)論結(jié)論 體裁體裁_ 話題話題以_ 為主題 時態(tài)時態(tài) _ 人稱人稱_ 書信（給英文報社一封信）書信（給英文報社一封信） “高三學(xué)生要不要參加體育鍛煉高三學(xué)生要不要參加體育鍛煉 ” 一般現(xiàn)在時為主及情態(tài)動詞的應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時為主及情態(tài)動詞的應(yīng)用 第一人稱為主第一人稱為主 【定點定點把握要點，遣詞造句把握要點，遣詞造句】 第第1 1段：點明話題段：點明話題高三學(xué)生要不要參加體育鍛煉高三學(xué)生要不要參加體育鍛煉【引引 入入6 6分分】 【信息信息】我我給你寫信給你寫信談?wù)勗谖覀儗W(xué)校的一個談?wù)勗谖覀儗W(xué)校的一個熱點熱點話話 題題, ,那就是那就是, , 高三學(xué)生高三學(xué)生要不

23、要要不要參加體育鍛煉。參加體育鍛煉。 【遣詞造句遣詞造句】 普通表達普通表達: :I will tell you about a discussion. Should students of Senior 3 take physical exercise? 高級表達高級表達: :利用進行時態(tài)、非謂語動詞、連接短語等利用進行時態(tài)、非謂語動詞、連接短語等。 Im _ you about a _discussion among us students in our school,_, whether students of Senior 3 should take physical exercise

24、. writing to tellheated that is 第第2 2段：提出一種觀點并具體闡述理由段：提出一種觀點并具體闡述理由【作文重點作文重點1212】 【信息信息】有55%的同學(xué)贊成參加體育鍛煉。 【運用運用】55%的同學(xué)認(rèn)為認(rèn)為我們應(yīng)該每天進行體育鍛煉進行體育鍛煉, 如做早操做早操、打乒乓球、打籃球等。 【遣詞造句遣詞造句】 普通表達普通表達:55% of the students think that we should take physical exercise every day. We should do morning exercise. We should play

25、 table tennis or basketball. 高級表達高級表達:利用同位語從句、高級詞匯、非謂語動詞等利用同位語從句、高級詞匯、非謂語動詞等。 55% of the students hold the view that we should _ every day, such as , _,playing table tennis or basketball. take physical exercise doing morning exercise 【信息信息】贊成的同學(xué)認(rèn)為參加體育鍛煉有很多好處贊成的同學(xué)認(rèn)為參加體育鍛煉有很多好處。 【運用運用2】鍛煉能鍛煉能增強體質(zhì)，減少疾病

26、增強體質(zhì)，減少疾病。鍛煉能使。鍛煉能使 大腦得到休息大腦得到休息；使學(xué)習(xí)效果更好。；使學(xué)習(xí)效果更好。 【遣詞造句遣詞造句】 普通表達普通表達：It can build our body. It can reduce illnesses. It can make us have a rest. We will have a better learning effect. 高級表達：利用并列句、非謂語動詞和高級詞匯等高級表達：利用并列句、非謂語動詞和高級詞匯等。 It can build_ illnesses, _(同時), it can _(make sb adj) a better learn

27、ing effect. and in the meanwhile make us relaxed for our body and reduce 第第3 3段：提出另一種觀點，并具體闡述理由段：提出另一種觀點，并具體闡述理由 【信息信息】 ：鍛煉浪費時間。 【運用運用2 2】：45%學(xué)生持反對意見，他們認(rèn)為鍛煉浪費時 間。 【遣詞造句遣詞造句】 普通表達普通表達：However，45% of the students dont support that. They think that they should not take physical exercise. It is a waste

28、of time. 高級表達高級表達: :利用定語從句、高級詞匯、非謂語動詞等利用定語從句、高級詞匯、非謂語動詞等 However, 45% of the students are against that ， _ complain that _ is a waste of time. who taking physical exercise 第第4 4段：表明自己的傾向，闡述理由段：表明自己的傾向，闡述理由 【信息信息】: :適度鍛煉。 【運用運用】: :我認(rèn)為適度鍛煉是必要的,但是不能太 劇烈. 【遣詞造句遣詞造句】 普通表達：普通表達：I think that proper physica

29、l exercise is necessary. But we should never take exercise too hard. 高級表達高級表達：利用賓語從句、高級詞匯等。利用賓語從句、高級詞匯等。 I_ think that proper physical exercise is necessary but_. personally never too hard Dear editor, I m writing to tell you about a heated discussion among us students in our school, that is, whethe

30、r students of Senior 3 should take physical exercise. 55% of the students hold the view that we should take physical exercise every day, such as doing morning exercise, playing table tennis or basketball, etc. It can build our body, keep us healthy and reduce illnesses and in the meanwhile it can ma

31、ke us completely relaxed for a better learning effect. However, 45% of the students are against that, who complain that taking physical exercise is a waste of time. It can make us tired or feel too excited for further learning. Moreover we may get hurt during the play. I personally think that proper

32、 physical exercise is necessary but never too hard. yours sincerely Li Hua 【連句成篇連句成篇】 【書面表達書面表達-短文改錯短文改錯-新完型填空三位一體新完型填空三位一體】之短文改錯之短文改錯 Dear editor, I m writing to tell you about a heating discussion among our students in our school, that is, whether students of Senior 3 should take physical exercise

33、s. 55% of the students hold the view which we should take physical exercise every day, such as do morning exercise, playing the table tennis or basketball, etc. It can build our body, keep us health and reduce illnesses and the meanwhile it can make us completely relaxed for a better learning effect

34、. Therefore, 45% of the students are against that, who complain that taking physical exercise is a waste of time. It can make us tired and feel too excited for further learning. Moreover we may get hurt during the play. I personally think that proper physical exercise is necessary but never too hard. yours sincerely Li Hua heatedus exercise that doing healthy However or in 書面表達書面表達-短文改錯短文改錯-新完型填空三位一體新完型填空三位一體】之新完型填空之新完型填空 Dear editor, I m writing to tell you about a heated discussion1. _us students in our school, that is, whether students of Senior 3 s