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1、話題詞匯，詞組，句型：話題詞匯，詞組，句型： 外貌：外貌：good-looking相貌英俊的，相貌英俊的，funning-looking外表可笑的，外表可笑的， ugly-looking丑陋的，丑陋的， ordinary-looking外貌平平的，外貌平平的， white-haired白頭發(fā)的，白頭發(fā)的，near/far-sighted 近近/遠(yuǎn)視的，遠(yuǎn)視的， charming有魅力的有魅力的, 時(shí)尚的時(shí)尚的fashionable, 苗條苗條slim 性格氣質(zhì)：性格氣質(zhì)：kind-hearted好心的，好心的， warm-hearted 熱心的，熱心的，absent-minded 心不在焉的，

2、心不在焉的，bad-tempered 壞脾氣的，壞脾氣的，a strong will很強(qiáng)的意志力，很強(qiáng)的意志力，naughty 淘氣的，淘氣的，smart/bright 聰明的，聰明的， wise睿智的，睿智的，diligent 勤奮的，勤奮的，humorous 幽默的，幽默的， attractive 有魅力的，有魅力的，talkative能說(shuō)會(huì)道的，能說(shuō)會(huì)道的，confident 有信心的，有信心的，independent 獨(dú)立的，獨(dú)立的，patient 有耐心的有耐心的 生日、出生地、年齡生日、出生地、年齡 , (who was) born in , is a , a , is a wit

3、h a height of and a weight of 家庭背景：家庭背景： was born in/ into a poor/rich family 出生在貧窮的出生在貧窮的/富裕的家庭富裕的家庭 as a child of years old, he 還是個(gè)還是個(gè)歲的孩子時(shí)歲的孩子時(shí) spend his childhood in 在在度過(guò)了他的童年度過(guò)了他的童年 live a happy/hard life 生活很幸福生活很幸福/艱苦艱苦 教育背景：教育背景： be admitted to university考取考取大學(xué)大學(xué) graduate from department of u

4、niversity從某大學(xué)某系畢業(yè)從某大學(xué)某系畢業(yè) receive/get a doctors degree 獲取博士學(xué)位獲取博士學(xué)位 主要事跡：主要事跡： serve as做某種工作做某種工作 devote oneself /ones effort to/ be devoted to 一生致力于一生致力于 concentrate /apply oneself to 專注于專注于 make up ones mind to do/be determined to do決心做決心做 have a gift for / be gifted in 有有的天賦的天賦成就：成就：1. one of the

5、 best/most important 最好的最好的/重要的重要的之一之一2. set a example to為為樹(shù)立榜樣樹(shù)立榜樣3. be honoured as被譽(yù)為被譽(yù)為； win the prize 獲得獲得榮譽(yù)榮譽(yù)4. make great contribution to 為為作出巨大貢獻(xiàn)作出巨大貢獻(xiàn)人物簡(jiǎn)介的一般步驟：人物簡(jiǎn)介的一般步驟：give the right order( )教教育育：education ( )外外貌貌性格性格appearance ,character( )生生平平big events in his or her life ( in order of t

6、ime )( )評(píng)評(píng)估估evaluation( )概概況況age, sex, birth-place, background概況概況,外貌外貌,教育教育,生平生平,評(píng)估評(píng)估 a. 概況概況 :譯：鐘南山年出生在廣州，他是中譯：鐘南山年出生在廣州，他是中國(guó)最偉大的醫(yī)生之一國(guó)最偉大的醫(yī)生之一1) born in guangzhou in 1941, zhong nanshan is one of the greatest doctors in china.2)zhong nanshan, one of the greatest doctors in china, was born in guang

7、zhou in 1941.語(yǔ)法，句法高分語(yǔ)法，句法高分tips可以用分詞短語(yǔ)可以用分詞短語(yǔ),同位語(yǔ)結(jié)構(gòu)同位語(yǔ)結(jié)構(gòu),使文章簡(jiǎn)潔使文章簡(jiǎn)潔,通順通順1.a. 概況概況 :語(yǔ)法，句法高分語(yǔ)法，句法高分tips可以用分詞短語(yǔ)可以用分詞短語(yǔ),同位語(yǔ)結(jié)構(gòu)同位語(yǔ)結(jié)構(gòu),使文章簡(jiǎn)潔使文章簡(jiǎn)潔,通順通順 譯：費(fèi)孝通，我國(guó)著名的社會(huì)學(xué)家和社會(huì)活動(dòng)譯：費(fèi)孝通，我國(guó)著名的社會(huì)學(xué)家和社會(huì)活動(dòng)家，年月日家，年月日生于生于一富裕家一富裕家庭年月日因病庭年月日因病逝于逝于北京北京born in a well-off family on november 2,1910, fei xiaotong, a famous chines

8、e sociologist and active social worker, passed away for illness in beijing on april 24, 2005 .b.外貌外貌,性格性格:譯：我的歷史老師是個(gè)漂亮女人，她長(zhǎng)著譯：我的歷史老師是個(gè)漂亮女人，她長(zhǎng)著兩只大眼睛，留著長(zhǎng)發(fā)兩只大眼睛，留著長(zhǎng)發(fā).my history teacher is a beautiful woman with two big eyes and long hair.巧用巧用with做定語(yǔ)做定語(yǔ)c. 教育經(jīng)歷：教育經(jīng)歷：可以用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞可以用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞, 使文章精煉使文章精煉after she

9、graduated from the english=after graduating .=having graduated . department of zhongshan university, she went on further education and received a doctors degree.1.在中山大學(xué)英語(yǔ)系畢業(yè)后在中山大學(xué)英語(yǔ)系畢業(yè)后,她繼續(xù)學(xué)習(xí)她繼續(xù)學(xué)習(xí),獲得了博士學(xué)位獲得了博士學(xué)位.d生平：生平：可以用復(fù)合句倒裝可以用復(fù)合句倒裝,非限定定語(yǔ)從句非限定定語(yǔ)從句等，潤(rùn)色文章等，潤(rùn)色文章not only is he interested in science,

10、but (also) he has a gift for music.he set a new world record of swimming, which won a gold medal for china team.=winning .1.他對(duì)科學(xué)極有興趣他對(duì)科學(xué)極有興趣,也有音樂(lè)天賦也有音樂(lè)天賦.2. 他創(chuàng)了一個(gè)新的游泳記錄他創(chuàng)了一個(gè)新的游泳記錄,為中國(guó)隊(duì)贏得了一為中國(guó)隊(duì)贏得了一 塊金牌塊金牌.e評(píng)估評(píng)估：注意運(yùn)用一些動(dòng)詞、形容詞等短語(yǔ)、詞組注意運(yùn)用一些動(dòng)詞、形容詞等短語(yǔ)、詞組li shizhen makes great contributions to medical litera

11、ture.lei feng set us a good example , so we all show great respect for him .1. 雷鋒給我們樹(shù)立了一個(gè)良好的榜樣雷鋒給我們樹(shù)立了一個(gè)良好的榜樣,我們都我們都很敬重他很敬重他.2. 李時(shí)珍為醫(yī)學(xué)做出了巨大的貢獻(xiàn)李時(shí)珍為醫(yī)學(xué)做出了巨大的貢獻(xiàn).根據(jù)以下信息用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文介紹袁隆平根據(jù)以下信息用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文介紹袁隆平教授。教授?；拘畔⒒拘畔?.1937年年9月月7日出生于重慶的一個(gè)貧困的家日出生于重慶的一個(gè)貧困的家庭。自幼刻苦學(xué)習(xí)庭。自幼刻苦學(xué)習(xí),酷愛(ài)農(nóng)業(yè)科學(xué)；酷愛(ài)農(nóng)業(yè)科學(xué)；2.自從自從1953 年大學(xué)畢業(yè)以后年大學(xué)畢

12、業(yè)以后,他已經(jīng)研究水他已經(jīng)研究水稻近半個(gè)世紀(jì)稻近半個(gè)世紀(jì),一直在為世界農(nóng)業(yè)默默耕耘。一直在為世界農(nóng)業(yè)默默耕耘。主要成績(jī)主要成績(jī)3由于他的研究由于他的研究,我國(guó)水稻產(chǎn)量快速增長(zhǎng)我國(guó)水稻產(chǎn)量快速增長(zhǎng), 為為很多國(guó)家解決了糧食不足的問(wèn)題很多國(guó)家解決了糧食不足的問(wèn)題;4.他被譽(yù)為他被譽(yù)為“雜交水稻之父雜交水稻之父” “father of hybrid rice”;5.雖然他很出名雖然他很出名, 但是他過(guò)著簡(jiǎn)樸的生活，但是他過(guò)著簡(jiǎn)樸的生活，不計(jì)名利不計(jì)名利;1.1937年年9月月7日袁隆平出生于重慶的一個(gè)貧日袁隆平出生于重慶的一個(gè)貧困的家庭。自幼刻苦學(xué)習(xí)困的家庭。自幼刻苦學(xué)習(xí),酷愛(ài)農(nóng)業(yè)科學(xué)；酷愛(ài)農(nóng)業(yè)科學(xué)

13、；born in a poor family in chongqing on september 7, 1937, yuan longping studied hard when (he was) young, showing(=showed) great interest in agriculture. 2.自從自從1953 年大學(xué)畢業(yè)以后年大學(xué)畢業(yè)以后,他已經(jīng)研究水他已經(jīng)研究水稻近半個(gè)世紀(jì)稻近半個(gè)世紀(jì),一直在為世界農(nóng)業(yè)默默耕耘。一直在為世界農(nóng)業(yè)默默耕耘。since/after graduating from university in 1953, yuan has done researc

14、h on rice for over half a century, devoting all his time and energy to the study of agriculture.3由于他的研究由于他的研究,我國(guó)水稻產(chǎn)量快速增長(zhǎng)我國(guó)水稻產(chǎn)量快速增長(zhǎng), 為很多國(guó)家解決為很多國(guó)家解決了糧食不足的問(wèn)題了糧食不足的問(wèn)題;because of his research, chinas rice production is increasing rapidly, solving the problem of the lack of food for many countries.4.他他被譽(yù)為

15、被譽(yù)為“雜交水稻之父雜交水稻之父” “father of hybrid rice”;he is honored as “father of hybrid rice”5.雖然他很出名雖然他很出名, 但是他過(guò)著簡(jiǎn)樸的生活，但是他過(guò)著簡(jiǎn)樸的生活，不計(jì)名利不計(jì)名利;though he is famous, he lives/leads a simple life and cares little about money and fame.born in a poor family in chongqing on september 7, 1937, yuan longping studied hard

16、, showing great interest in agriculture. as a matter of fact, since his graduation from university in 1953, yuan has done research on rice for over half a century, devoting all his time and energy to the study of agriculture. because of his research, chinas rice production is increasing rapidly, sol

17、ving the problem of the lack of food for many countries. as a result, he is honored as “father of hybrid rice”and was rewarded with many prizes for his great contributions to the world. though he is famous, he lives a simple life and cares little about money and fame.假如你叫李明，你的美國(guó)朋友布魯斯開(kāi)始學(xué)習(xí)中假如你叫李明，你的美國(guó)

18、朋友布魯斯開(kāi)始學(xué)習(xí)中國(guó)文學(xué)，來(lái)信詢問(wèn)魯迅其人及作品。你回信介紹國(guó)文學(xué)，來(lái)信詢問(wèn)魯迅其人及作品。你回信介紹魯迅，內(nèi)容如下魯迅，內(nèi)容如下:（1）魯迅，原名周樹(shù)人，浙江紹興人）魯迅，原名周樹(shù)人，浙江紹興人（2）為了國(guó)家，棄醫(yī)從文。）為了國(guó)家，棄醫(yī)從文。（3）著名的作家）著名的作家,思想家思想家,而且還是中國(guó)現(xiàn)代文學(xué)而且還是中國(guó)現(xiàn)代文學(xué)的開(kāi)創(chuàng)者的開(kāi)創(chuàng)者.（4）小說(shuō)被譯成多種文字，并被制成電影，如）小說(shuō)被譯成多種文字，并被制成電影，如阿阿q正傳正傳、祝福祝福這兩部影片。這兩部影片。（5）一些作品還被選入了中學(xué)和大學(xué)課本。）一些作品還被選入了中學(xué)和大學(xué)課本。參考詞匯參考詞匯:阿阿q正傳正傳:the tru

19、e story of ah q 祝福祝福：the new years sacrifice注意注意:介紹必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)介紹必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn),但不要逐條譯成但不要逐條譯成英語(yǔ)英語(yǔ).寫(xiě)作要求寫(xiě)作要求只能使用只能使用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部?jī)?nèi)容。文章個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部?jī)?nèi)容。文章首尾已給出，不算字?jǐn)?shù)。首尾已給出，不算字?jǐn)?shù)。評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)句子結(jié)構(gòu)的準(zhǔn)確性，信息內(nèi)容的完整性句子結(jié)構(gòu)的準(zhǔn)確性，信息內(nèi)容的完整性.dear bruce, i was glad to know you began to study chinese literature. now let me tell you something a

20、bout luxun. _. since you are learning chinese literatures, i think reading lu xuns novels will help you to know more about it. yours, li mingdear bruce, i was glad to know you began to study chinese literature. now let me tell you something about luxun. born in shaoxing, zhejiang province, lu xun wi

21、th real name zhou shuren abandoned the study of medicine because he thought he could change society more through writing. not only was lu xun a well-known chinese writer, thinker, and translator, but also he was the father of modern chinese literature. his novels have been translated into many languages and some of novels have been made into films, such as the true story of ah q and the new years sacrifice. some of his novels have been collected in high school and college textbooks. since you are lear