（整理版高中英語）高考英語書面表達(dá)專題指導(dǎo)練講及習(xí)作評(píng)析（第二部分

1、高考英語書面表達(dá)專題指導(dǎo)、練講及習(xí)作評(píng)析第二局部專題練評(píng)專題一 文字提綱式3作為生，你經(jīng)歷過屢次考試，體驗(yàn)過成功，也遭遇過失敗。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，簡(jiǎn)要概述生中普遍存在的對(duì)考試失敗的兩種態(tài)度，并結(jié)合自身實(shí)際，說明你的態(tài)度和理由。積極態(tài)度消極態(tài)度你的態(tài)度及理由分析失敗原因改良學(xué)習(xí)方法增強(qiáng)自信心情緒低落喪失信心不再繼續(xù)努力？注意：詞數(shù)150左右。講 評(píng)第二 頭腦風(fēng)暴快速搜索詞組句型第一組have/take many tests or exams do well in the exams/fail (in) the exams achieve success/ enjoy successsuffer

2、from failure/face(with) failureexperience both success and failure第二組take different attitudes towardsthere be different attitudes towardswhen it comes to failure, different people have different attitudes.faced with failure, different people have different attitudes.the attitudes toward failure amon

3、g people are quite different.have/take active attitudes have passive/negative attitudesfind out/ analyze the causesencourage oneselfbuild up self-confidenceavoid making similar mistakesbe in low spirits/be on bad moodbe in bad moods and upset lose heart/confidenceno longer study hard no longer try o

4、nes best not work hard any longer(any more)第三 變點(diǎn)為句2.生中普遍存在對(duì)考試失敗的兩種態(tài)度。faced with failure, different middle school students have different attitudes.there are two different attitudes towards failure among middle school students.when it comes to failure, different middle school students have different

5、attitudes.the attitudes toward failure among middle school students are quite different.3.有些人考試失敗時(shí)持積極的態(tài)度：分析失敗的原因；改良學(xué)習(xí)方法；增強(qiáng)自信心。other students have the positive attitude to failure.others think quite the opposite. they have a positive attitude.other students are positive even if they have failed.they

6、will spend some time analyzing the reasons why they failed in the exam.when they fail, what they will do is not to complain their bad luck, but to analyze the reason why they have made so many mistakes.they will analyze the reasons for their failure, which will help them polish their study skills an

7、d strengthen their confidence.they will analyze the causes and polish their study skills so that they can build up confidence.they will improve their approaches to learning, and make themselves confident.they will find a better way that is suitable for them.5.我的態(tài)度及理由在談我的態(tài)度及理由時(shí)當(dāng)然要從積極的方面去考慮?？傮w來說：對(duì)待“失敗

8、如何正確處理的問題。具體的講，我們生應(yīng)該可以想到的起碼有兩點(diǎn)：一是“失敗是成功之母；二是“絕不言敗，堅(jiān)持就是勝利，也就是說：有志者事竟成。under no circumstances can we lose our confidence. as middle school students, we should use our intelligence to deal with all kinds of failure. in a word, we cant give up before having a try. as an old saying goes, “where there is

9、a will, there is a way.failure is the mother of success, which can teach us a lot in the process of reaching our goals, and only by tasting failure can we enjoy the fruit of success. i agree with those with active attitudes. as we all know, failure is the mother of success. even great men have faile

10、d many times before they succeeded. so we must deal with our failure correctly.第四連句成篇as far as im concerned, under no circumstances can we lose our confidence. as middle school students, we should use our intelligence to deal with all kinds of failure. in a word, we cant give up before having a try.

11、 as an old saying goes, “where there is a will, there is a way.參考答案案例分析在我們做案例分析前，先來看一看高考書面表達(dá)評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)中最高檔次的要求：第五檔 很好(21-25分)：完全完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，完全到達(dá)了預(yù)期的寫作目的，覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)；應(yīng)用了較多的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯；語法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面有些許錯(cuò)誤，但為盡力使用較復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)或較高級(jí)詞匯所致；具備較強(qiáng)的語言運(yùn)用能力；有效地使用了語句間的連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。請(qǐng)看下面的考場(chǎng)學(xué)生習(xí)作(8)however, there are some students show the oppos

12、ite attitude. (9)they become upset and lack of confidence because of the shock. (10)they cant come up with a solution to the problem, only wait for others, taking no efforts. (11)it is obviously that they cant achieve success any more due to lack of working hard.(12)as far as im concerned, under no

13、circumstances can we lose our confidence. (13)as we are a middle school students, we should use our intelligence to deal with it. (14)we cant give up before having a try. (15)as an old saying goes, “where there is a will, there is a way.該習(xí)作中的以下句子各有什么特色？(3)considering carefully, i think what matters

14、is not the outcome, but the attitudes towards texts, which have a great influence on it.(5)there is no doubt that many factors contribute to the result.(6)therefore, they analyze the causes and polish their study skills so that they can build up confidence.(7)besides, they value correcting the mista

15、kes they made very much, which will help them achieve success in the next examination(11)it is obviously that they cant achieve success any more due to lack of working hard.(12)as far as im concerned, under no circumstances can we lose our confidence.(15)as an old saying goes, “ where there is a wil

16、l, there is a way.由此可知作者運(yùn)用了較多的語法結(jié)構(gòu)。再讀該習(xí)作，看看作者是否使用了較高級(jí)詞匯？這些高級(jí)詞匯是(2) as well as 也 (5)contribute to導(dǎo)致 (6)polish 提高；build up建立 (7)value 重視 (10)come up with 想出；a solution to the problem這個(gè)問題的解決方法。由此可知作者運(yùn)用了較多的高級(jí)詞匯。再讀該習(xí)作，看看作者是否恰當(dāng)使用了連接詞，以使文章更為流暢，更具可讀性？(3)considering carefully, i think what matters is not the

17、 outcome, but the attitudes towards texts, which have a great influence on it.(6)therefore, they analyze the causes and polish their study skills so that they can build up confidence.(7)besides, they value correcting the mistakes they made very much, which will help them achieve success in the next

18、examination由此可知作者有效地使用了語句間的連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。再讀該習(xí)作，看看有哪些可改良之處？(3)considering carefully, i think what matters is not the outcome, but the attitudes towards texts, which have a great influence on it. 此句中的最后的it應(yīng)改為us。(8)however, there are some students show the opposite attitude. students后應(yīng)加who。(9)they become upset and lack of confidence because of the shock. lack of 應(yīng)改為lacking in。(10)they cant come up with a solution to the problem, only wait for others, taking no efforts. 去掉句中的“, only wait