2020版第3部分層級(jí)1第2講寫(xiě)作常見(jiàn)的3類錯(cuò)誤及防范措施

1、第 2 講 寫(xiě)作常見(jiàn)的 3 類錯(cuò)誤及防范措施【小試身手尋盲點(diǎn)】改正下列句子中的錯(cuò)誤1. People throwed cans, paper, bags and so on into the rivterrowedthrew2. During my summer vacation, I spent half a month in the country and played veryhappyhappyhappily3. We must pay attention our pronunciation when we speak English.attentio后 加to4. Its high

2、time we do something to reduce traffic accidentslodid5.There have been more and more road accidents happened in recent yearshappenedhappe ning6. Dr. Smith, together with his wife, are to arrive on the evening flightareis7. Would you please meet my uncle at the airport because this is the first time

3、visitto the US?去掉time8. I have many collect ions of stamps, some of them are my favorite.some前加and或themwhich【要點(diǎn)精折求正解】一、考場(chǎng)作文常見(jiàn)的3類錯(cuò)誤考場(chǎng)寫(xiě)作常見(jiàn)錯(cuò)誤主要分為三類：詞匯類錯(cuò)誤、語(yǔ)法類錯(cuò)誤和漢語(yǔ)式英語(yǔ)。（一）詞匯類錯(cuò)誤考試時(shí)，考生很容易出現(xiàn)詞形變化錯(cuò)誤，而詞性不清和詞匯運(yùn)用方面的錯(cuò)誤 主要還是受漢語(yǔ)的影響。其應(yīng)對(duì)措施是在備考時(shí)多注意容易拼錯(cuò)或容易出現(xiàn)詞形 變化錯(cuò)誤的單詞，真正用心去體會(huì)英語(yǔ)詞匯的詞性和運(yùn)用，對(duì)一些固定習(xí)語(yǔ)更不要想當(dāng)然地改動(dòng)。1.詞形變化錯(cuò)誤誤：The ca

4、rhitted the old man anddrived away.正:The car hit the old man an ddrove away.2.詞性不清錯(cuò)誤誤：Doi ng a part-time job always effectsstudy.正：Doing a part-time job always affectsstudy.3詞匯運(yùn)用錯(cuò)誤誤：He openedthe light after he entered the room.正：He turned on the light after he entered the room.4擅自改動(dòng)習(xí)語(yǔ)誤：We lost the g

5、ame, but we didntlose our heart.正：We lost the game, but we didntlose heart.（二）語(yǔ)法類錯(cuò)誤 一個(gè)正確的句子除了用詞得當(dāng)外，語(yǔ)法也應(yīng)該準(zhǔn)確無(wú)誤。如果語(yǔ)法不正確， 再好的構(gòu)思也難以正確地加以表達(dá)，語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤的多少會(huì)直接影響作文得分檔次。 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作中語(yǔ)法類錯(cuò)誤主要表現(xiàn)在如下幾個(gè)方面：1時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤誤：In the morning, we had bicycledin the suburbs to plant trees.正：In the morning, we bicycledin the suburbs to plant tre

6、es.2語(yǔ)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤誤：Children who raise in poor families can generally deal with problems moreeffectively in their adult years.正：Children who are raised in poor families can generally deal with problems moreeffectively in their adult years.3非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞使用錯(cuò)誤誤：Comparing with other countries, the country pays little att

7、ention to thepollution.正：Compared with other countries, the country pays little attention to thepollution.4主謂一致錯(cuò)誤誤：My hobby is widespread, which include drawing, collecting stamps and soon.正：My hobby is widespread, which includesdrawing, collecting stamps and soon.5比較級(jí)使用錯(cuò)誤誤：With the development of t

8、ransportation, the world seems to be gettingmore andmore smaller.正：With the development of transportation, the world seems to be getting smallerand smaller.（三）漢語(yǔ)式英語(yǔ)一般來(lái)說(shuō)， 英漢兩種語(yǔ)言既有許多相似之處， 又有許多不同之處。 在寫(xiě)作時(shí) 如果想當(dāng)然地去寫(xiě)，會(huì)出現(xiàn)許多漢語(yǔ)式英語(yǔ)，其中主要包括如下幾個(gè)方面：1純漢語(yǔ)式思維和漢語(yǔ)式語(yǔ)序誤：At this school study in g, I really very happy.正：St

9、udyingat this school, I am really very happy.2句子成分殘缺誤：There are many students dont support the project.正：There are many studentswho dont support the project.3句子粘連誤：On the other hand, dogs are our best friends, bring us a lot of fun.正：On the other hand, dogs are our best f ri e n d sw, hich/and bring

10、 us a lot of fun.4搭配不當(dāng)誤：Under the help ofthe teacher, I have made great progress in my English.正：With the help of the teacher, I have made great progress in my English.二、防范出現(xiàn)錯(cuò)誤的2個(gè)措施（一）確定主語(yǔ)英語(yǔ)句子無(wú)論多長(zhǎng)都有自己的主語(yǔ)（祈使句省略了主語(yǔ)you）。動(dòng)手寫(xiě)句子首 先要確定主語(yǔ)，其次要特別注意漢語(yǔ)與英語(yǔ)的區(qū)別。例如：1北京八月多雨。誤：Beijing rains much in August.正：It rains

11、much in Beijing in August.2寫(xiě)得很匆忙，我們發(fā)現(xiàn)書(shū)中滿是錯(cuò)誤。誤：Written in a hurry, we found the book full of mistakes.正：Written in a hurry, the book was found full of mistakes（by us）（二）確定謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞英文中沒(méi)有動(dòng)詞就構(gòu)不成句子，但英語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞千變?nèi)f化，稍不注意就會(huì)寫(xiě)錯(cuò)句 子。在寫(xiě)句子時(shí)應(yīng)特別注意以下幾個(gè)方面：1.注意及物與不及物動(dòng)詞的正確運(yùn)用。誤：The livi ng sta ndard of the peoplehas raised in the

12、past twenty years.正:The living standard of the people has risen/has been raised in the past twentyyears.2.注意延續(xù)性與非延續(xù)性動(dòng)詞的正確運(yùn)用。誤：He has left his hometown for twenty years.正:He has been awayfrom his hometown for twenty years.3.注意一些不可用作被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)的動(dòng)詞。誤：Many stars are appeared in the sky at ni ght.正：Many stars a

13、ppear in the sky at ni ght.I語(yǔ)篇演練提考能】下面的考生作文中有8處錯(cuò)誤，請(qǐng)改正。Dear Arthur,It is three weeks since you have come to hospital. How are you feeli ng now? Hopeyou will recover soon because all of our classmates very miss you.As you may know it, we have just finished our mid- term exam. I am very happy to saytha

14、t I made a great progress this time. I really thank your encouragement. Besides, ourschools sports meeting will be holded next Friday and Saturday. Our class did really goodlast year and I believe we would get more prizes this year if you were to join us.We are look ing forward to your come back.You

15、rs,Li Hua【答案】Dear Arthur,It is three weeks since youhave comecameto hospital. How are you feeli ng now?very miss youHopeyouW|11recover soon because aH of our dassmatess you very muchAs you may know it , we have just finished our mid-term exam. I am verytha nkhappy to say that I made a great progress this time. I really appreciate yourholdedenc