Module 11 外研版英語九（上）模塊主題寫作詳解與訓(xùn)練

1、外研版英語九（上）Module 11模塊主題寫作詳解與訓(xùn)練模塊主題寫作整體感知 話題分析本模塊以“photos”為話題，通過介紹攝影比賽的作品，讓學(xué)生學(xué)會如何對某一張照片進(jìn)行描述。攝影是我們?nèi)粘Ｉ钪谐Ｕ務(wù)摰脑掝}。本模塊常見的命題形式：描述某張照片，如它的來源、照片上的人物、關(guān)于這張照片的故事等。當(dāng)然，也可和“看圖作文”結(jié)合起來考查。通過本模塊的學(xué)習(xí)，學(xué)生應(yīng)能就某一張照片用簡單的who，which或that引導(dǎo)的定語從句進(jìn)行描述，包括照片上的人物、該照片背后的故事等。 常用表達(dá)1. Its subject is. 它的主題是2. How nice the photo is! 多么精彩的照片?。?/p>

2、3. Compared with other photos, this one is more interesting. 和其他照片相比，這張更有趣。4. The photo shows the different colours on the hill. 這張照片展示了山的不同顏色。5. The photo shows a person who is. 這張照片展示了一個的人。6. The photo was taken by. 這張照片是由所拍。7. The photo was taken in 2016. 這張照片拍攝于2016年。8. I like the photo because.

3、 我喜歡這張照片是因為9. Though., I like it very much. 盡管，我仍然非常喜歡它。實例分析 典型例題假設(shè)你去年到長白山旅游時，拍到了許多照片，其中就有一張是你最喜歡的相片。請以“My favourite photo”為題，寫一篇90詞左右的英語短文。參考詞匯：天池Heavenly Lake；展覽exhibition。 思路點撥1. 體裁：記述文；2. 人稱：第一人稱；3. 時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時+一般過去時。寫作模板交代背景Last summer I went to.點明內(nèi)容The photo which I like best shows說明理由I like it b

4、ecause 連句成篇My favourite photoLast summer I went to Changbai Mountain which is famous in the whole world. I went there with my parents. I took many photos there. The photo I like best shows the water of Heavenly Lake. I like it because the water in it looks very clean. You can even see some stones cl

5、early in the water. I had never seen such clean water before. The scenery in the photo is very beautiful. The photo makes me remember the trip forever. From the photo, I know how great our country is. Im proud of my country. What a nice photograph it is!范文欣賞（一）艾米金（Amy Kim）是當(dāng)今世界上最出名的中國攝影師之一，她的一些作品將于近

6、日在麗都畫廊（Lido Gallery）展出。假如你是學(xué)英語的小記者，請你根據(jù)下面的提示就這次攝影展寫一段評論報道。詞數(shù)：80左右。提示：1. 這次將展出她的部分最受歡迎的攝影作品；2. 有許多優(yōu)秀的人物照和鄉(xiāng)村照；3. 每個人都能從中找到自己喜歡的攝影作品；4. 艾米金的少數(shù)城市題材攝影作品，人們不是非常感興趣；5. 這是世界級別的攝影大師的一次展出。There will be an exhibition at the Lido Gallery. Be sure to see it. Amy Kim is one of the best known Chinese photographers

7、 in the world today, and some of her most famous photographs are on display in this exhibition. She really has something for everyone. There are many great photos of people and of the countryside. The few city photographs are less successful and they dont interest visitors as much. But this is a gre

8、at show from a world-class photographer. Whatever you do, dont miss this exhibition.（二）假設(shè)你們學(xué)校將在12月21日舉行一次學(xué)生攝影比賽，你是此次比賽的策劃人。請根據(jù)以下要點提示寫一份通知，告知學(xué)生們比賽的具體情況。80詞左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。要點提示：1. 作品主題：我們的美麗校園(campus)；2. 作品要求：每位學(xué)生最多(at most)提交兩張尺寸為9cm×13cm的原創(chuàng)照片；3. 作品投稿截止日期：12月1日；4. 獎項設(shè)置：一等獎2名，二等獎3名，三等獎5名，所有獲獎作

9、品(prizewinning works)將會在12 月25日展示出來。Dear boys and girls,Our school has decided to hold a students' photo competition on 21st December. Here is some information about the competition. First, the photos should show our beautiful campus. Second, every one of you can hand in at most two photos that

10、should be taken by yourselves, and the size of the photos should be 9cm×13cm. Third, the last date that you should send your photos on is 1st December. Finally, we will choose two photos as first prize, three as second prize and five as third prize. All the prize winning works will be on show o

11、n 25th December.Were looking forward to your great works?。ㄈ┘僭O(shè)你在學(xué)校舉辦的攝影比賽中獲得了最佳攝影獎，并將在頒獎典禮上發(fā)言。請根據(jù)下列提示寫一篇80詞左右的英文發(fā)言稿，內(nèi)容可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)。提示：1. 你對這次獲獎感到非常幸運；2. 你想感謝你的老師們，他們鼓勵你參賽并教給你許多拍照技巧；3. 你想感謝你的叔叔，他在你13歲生日時送給你一臺照相機(jī)。Ladies and gentlemen,Good afternoon! I am lucky to have won the photo competit

12、ion in our school. First, Id like to thank my teachers. They encouraged me to enter the competition and also taught me many skills in taking photos. Then, Id like to thank my uncle. At the age of 12, I became interested in taking photos. When I was 13, he gave me a camera as my birthday present. Sin

13、ce then, I have become more and more interested in taking photos. Thanks!自我展示現(xiàn)在的學(xué)生大部分都喜歡旅游拍照。假設(shè)你去年暑假去了杭州西湖旅游，拍了許多美麗的風(fēng)景照，請以“My Favourite Photo”為題，詳細(xì)描述其中最喜歡的一張照片。詞數(shù)80左右。內(nèi)容包括：1. 照片拍攝的日期、地點、人物；2. 詳細(xì)描述照片內(nèi)容；3. 表明自己是否喜歡攝影，并說明理由。 外研版英語九（上）Module 11模塊主題寫作自我展示答案Last summer holiday, I paid a visit to the West

14、Lake which is very famous in China. I stayed there for four days and took a lot of beautiful photos.The subject of the photo that I like best is about nature. It shows the water is very clean and the sky is quite blue and nice. There is a lovely girl who is sitting on the stone bench and smiling happily.The photo is so beautiful that it makes me think of the travel there. The West Lake in Hangzhou, Zhejiang Province, is one of the most beautiful sights in China, and Hang