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1、考研作文魔塊12010年12007年22006年42005年72004年92002年102001年112000年13考研作文魔塊2010年Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should1) describe the drawing briefly,2) explain its intended meaning, and then3) give your comments.This is an interesting/vivid picture full of in

2、struction/profound implications and it tells us how prosperous the flower of culture is, whereas the way of culture integration is roughly simple. Obviously, we could tell from the above picture that floating in the air is the delicious odour of the culture integration, with various schools of civil

3、ization stirring up in the hot pot. It is a perfect example of the shortage of multi-culturism. Nowadays fast-food culture is invading our world, where pseudo-experts demonstrate their muscles recklessly in public. While I am looking at this cartoon, I cant help losing in further thought and searchi

4、ng for answers to this phenomenon. To my sadness, I have found that not many people around me have the patient for further and profound self-cultivation. The first and foremost goes to the society where quick efficiency and result is the only benchmark to evaluate the successes of projects or schola

5、rs. Naturally, fast-food culture is extremely popular among us, since it meets our need of quick updating of our education regardless of how shallow and pretentious it is. Whats more, with the rapid social development, people are facing great pressure and they are short of time for a profound base o

6、f self-cultivation. They have a greedy hunger for successes or promotion. We are so lucky to live in such a period with civilized policy and rapid social development. With more and more people giving great attention to the restoration of multi-culturism and the ways of culture integration and with t

7、he increasing efforts and care coming from the central government and our society to help younger generation strive for a rich and fulfilled life, I am so confident that more and more young people will lead a magnificent life peacefully, enjoying the beauty of culture kaleidoscope.2007年Write an essa

8、y of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should1) describe the drawing briefly,2) explain its intended meaning, and then3) support your view with an example/examples.我的總體分析：這是一篇意義分析型作文，我采取的寫作段落安排是：第一段描繪圖片，引出主旨：自信。第二段，分析自信在生活中的積極意義。第三段是寫怎樣才能在活中實(shí)現(xiàn)它。(學(xué)生習(xí)作)This is an interes

9、ting picture full of instruction and it tells us the message: as long as there is enough self-confidence, we will achieve success. Obviously, we could tell from the above picture that the two unconfident men, who are playing football, image their opponent very powerful but regard themselves as the w

10、eak. It is a perfect example of people becoming the victim of the shortage of self-confidence.Materially and spiritually, we can easily recognize the significance of confidence in terms of achieving success. On the one hand, confidence is the key to success. Take the disabled athletes as an example.

11、 They were not conquered by the misfortunes but were full of self-confidence to conquer them. On the other hand, if people lose self-confidence, they are bound to fail in the end. Therefore, this picture reminds us positively how crucial confidence is in our daily life.Considering all the points dis

12、cussed above, it is advisable that we highly value self-confidence and apply it in our study and work. Life is fair and every one enjoys equal opportunities in their life. Therefore, we should turn every possible opportunity into reality and strive for better life.(對文章的語法錯(cuò)誤已進(jìn)行了修改)點(diǎn)評: 對圖的理解是對的，這是寫自信對

13、人生的影響的問題的，要如何正確對待世界和身邊的優(yōu)秀的人?？傮w評價(jià)：作文寫得不錯(cuò)， 語法錯(cuò)誤少，表達(dá)比較清晰準(zhǔn)確。 (修改后附講評)This is an interesting/vivid picture full of instruction/profound implications and it tells us how important confidence is in our life.(圖片反映的是正確的人生觀或者世界觀缺失的問題,要學(xué)會(huì)提煉抽象出主題詞). Obviously, we could tell from the above picture that the

14、goal-keeper believes that the goal is too big for defense while the striker simply thinks that the goal-keeper is comparably too big for the relatively small goal!(為了突出效果,可以選用一些表達(dá)相對大小的字眼) It is a perfect example of the shortage of confidence bringing people unexpected results and sometimes even fail

15、ure./第二段是分析出現(xiàn)這樣現(xiàn)象的原因，主要是激烈的競爭和不可預(yù)知的未來所導(dǎo)致的結(jié)果。 While I am looking at this cartoon, I cant help losing in further thought and searching for answers to this phenomenon. To my sadness, I have found that not many people around me have confidence in themselves. The first and foremost goes to the influence

16、of social competition and pressure upon us. We are forced to compete with talented people and strive for limited social resource such as jobs, opportunities and promotions. Whats more, people are not born wise or learnt and life is like sailing in a stormy sea. No one knows what will wait for us in

17、the future and we have to struggle for better solutions to our questions or problems. No wonder more and more people are driven mad and become less confident about their life and even themselves. /第三段，寫”展望未來” 或者“解決方案”都可以，這也與第三點(diǎn)要求：give you comment.相符，同時(shí)也與第二段相呼應(yīng)，給人以希望。展望未來的應(yīng)該寫一些重大政策及其意義，這樣可以隨便提一下解決方案。

18、（結(jié)束方案一）We are so lucky to live in such a period with civilized policy and rapid social development. With more and more people giving great attention to the mental health of young people and with the increasing efforts and care coming from the central government and our society to help younger genera

19、tion strive for a rich and colorful life, I am so confident that more and more young people will enjoy a magnificent life confidently in the way that is unique to themselves. Remember we are born uniquely different and valuable.（一定要給人希望，在提及政策時(shí)，可以對政策的目的作說明，這樣就可以提一下解決方案了）/上面一段采用的是展望未來，下面一段是用解決方案的方法寫的。

20、（結(jié)束方案二）Considering all the points discussed above, it is sensible that we take effective and efficient measures to resolve this problem. To begin with, the government is supposed to strengthen education helping younger generation build up their self-confidence and restore their healthy mental world.

21、 Furthermore, it is advisable that media and society enhance the public awareness of the importance of self-confidence. As far as we are concerned, we should take a positive outlook to understand the world. Only by such doings can we make our lives more meaningful.2006年有兩幅圖片，圖1 把崇拜寫在臉上；圖2 花300元做“小貝頭

22、”注：Beckham是英國足球明星有兩張照片，一張照片上有一位男士臉上寫著足球明星的名字，另一張照片上有一個(gè)男子在理發(fā)，他要求理發(fā)師為他設(shè)計(jì)一個(gè)小貝克漢姆的發(fā)型。Study the following photos carefully and write an essay in which you should1. describe the photos briefly,2. interpret the social phenomenon reflected by them, and3. give your point of view.(學(xué)生習(xí)作)This is an interesting/

23、vivid picture full of instruction/profound implication and it tells us how serious the attitudes of what to pursue in life are. Obviously, we could tell from the above picture that one person signed the name of Beckham on his left face, while another spent as much as 300 Yuan for a hair style o

24、f Beckhan. It is a perfect example of people disregarding the values we must pursue./第二段是分析出現(xiàn)這樣現(xiàn)象的原因 While I am looking at this cartoon, I cant help losing in further thought and searching for answers to this phenomenon. To my sadness, not many people around me have an advisable outlook of pursuit.

25、The first and foremost goes to the influence of foreign culture in our country in recent years. Young fellows are tracing fashion. Whats more, with the rapid development of society, peoples economic needs have largely been fulfilled and they dont know where they should go next. /第三段，我認(rèn)為圖片的應(yīng)該是讓我們提出一個(gè)

26、解決這樣現(xiàn)象的方案，寫”展望未來”還不如寫”解決方案”好，這也與第三點(diǎn)要求：give you comment.相符，同時(shí)與第二段相呼應(yīng)，展望未來的應(yīng)該寫在一些重大意義的地方比較好，比如說可持續(xù)發(fā)展、捐贈(zèng)等。下面的內(nèi)容兩種方式都寫了，呵呵，我水平還很差，恐怕寫的不怎么好。 We are so lucky to live in such a period with civilized policy and rapid social development. With more and more people giving great attention to the values of pursu

27、it, with increasing efforts and help coming from the central government and our society, I am so confident that people will enjoy a magnificent life because they are running for something with true meaning./上面一段采用的是展望未來，下面一段是用解決方案的方法寫的。Considering all the points discussed above, it is sensible that

28、we take effective and efficient measures to resolve this problem. To begin with, the government is supposed to strengthen education helping build up the correct outlook toward the world. Furthermore, it is advisable that media and society enhance the public awareness of spiritual pursuit. On our par

29、t, we should take a rational attitude toward the world. Only by enforcing these measures, can we make our lives full of meaning.(對文章的語法錯(cuò)誤已進(jìn)行了修改)點(diǎn)評: 對圖的理解是對的，這是寫人生觀及世界觀的問題的，要如何正確對待世界和身邊的事物,在抽象出主題詞時(shí),要注意簡便捷用詞 ?？傮w評價(jià)：作文寫得不錯(cuò)， 語法錯(cuò)誤少，表達(dá)比較清晰準(zhǔn)確。(修改后附講評)This is an interesting/vivid picture full of instruc

30、tion/profound implications and it tells us how seriously our younger generation is suffering from the shortage of a proper world view.(圖片反映的是正確的人生觀或者世界觀缺失的問題,要學(xué)會(huì)提煉抽象出主題詞). Obviously, we could tell from the above picture that one man “polishes” his left face by having the characters of Beckham, a wel

31、l-known football star painted, while another man spends as much as 300 Yuan in cloning the hair style of Beckhams.(為了突出效果,可以選用一些帶有諷刺的字眼) It is a perfect example of our young generations puzzle in constructing their life value, virtues and proper world views. (peoples crying to restore the traditiona

32、l Chinese values, virtues and proper world views.)/第二段是分析出現(xiàn)這樣現(xiàn)象的原因，主要是主流媒體報(bào)導(dǎo)的影響和個(gè)人終生教育的影響。 While I am looking at this cartoon, I cant help losing in further thought and searching for answers to this phenomenon. To my sadness, I have found that not many people around me have a positive outlook of wha

33、t to pursue in the future. The first and foremost goes to the influence of the sweeping media reports of the gossips of celebrities marital affairs. Ironically, the front-page news are dominated by sensational scandals instead of those which can move people to tears or inspire their imaginations. Co

34、ming to our eyes are the stories of one-night-great-fortune for the fewest lucky dogs. People are lost in these social values. Whats more, with the rapid social development, peoples personal education is greatly overlooked and their material needs become the only thing they care about. No wonder tim

35、e has witnessed that more and more people are crazy about cloning their idols life styles and attitudes. /第三段，寫”展望未來” 或者“解決方案”都可以，這也與第三點(diǎn)要求：give you comment.相符，同時(shí)也與第二段相呼應(yīng)，給人以希望。展望未來的應(yīng)該寫一些重大政策及其意義，這樣可以隨便提一下解決方案。（結(jié)束方案一）We are so lucky to live in such a period with civilized policy and rapid social deve

36、lopment. With more and more people giving great attention to the restoration of traditional Chinese values, virtues and world views and with the increasing efforts and care coming from the central government and our society to help younger generation strive for a rich and colorful life, I am so conf

37、ident that more and more young people will enjoy a magnificent life confidently in the way that is unique to themselves. Remember we are born uniquely different and valuable.（一定要給人希望，在提及政策時(shí)，可以對政策的目的作說明，這樣就可以提一下解決方案了）/上面一段采用的是展望未來，下面一段是用解決方案的方法寫的。（結(jié)束方案二）Considering all the points discussed above, it

38、is sensible that we take effective and efficient measures to resolve this problem. To begin with, the government is supposed to strengthen education helping restore the proper world views among younger generation. Furthermore, it is advisable that media and society enhance the public awareness of th

39、e importance of correct life attitudes. As far as we are concerned, we should take a positive outlook to understand the world. Only by such doings can we make our lives more meaningful.2005年Directions:1. describe the drawing 2. interpret its meaning 3. give your comment on it.現(xiàn)在的作文要求基本上都是上面三點(diǎn)。(學(xué)生習(xí)作)

40、This is an interesting picture full of instructing meaning and it tells us the importance of financially supporting old and helpless parents. (全篇主旨，不知概括準(zhǔn)不準(zhǔn)確) Obviously, we could tell from the above picture that four children ,who are very good goal-keeper, are playing a “football match”, while the f

41、ootball is the father. It is a perfect example of taking care of parents and making their later year enjoyable and happy.( 寫what 。呵呵，我在這里想提一下問，如果與主旨相呼應(yīng)的話，應(yīng)寫贍養(yǎng)父母的屬性，贍養(yǎng)父母的屬性肯定是正面的，而圖畫是畫的孩子虐待父母，不知會(huì)不會(huì)離題。)While I am looking at this picture, I cant help losing in further thought and searching for answers

42、to this phenomenon. To my sadness, as the picture show, I find that many people shirk the duty of financially supporting the old. The first and foremost reason goes to the decline of tradition moral values. Some elderly people are often ill-treated by their own children when they become old and help

43、less. Another reason goes to interests. Some children refuse to afford the expenditure.（我這里寫的是分析不尊敬父母的原因，不知算不算解釋圖畫的意思，即滿足題目中的第二點(diǎn)要求。） We are so lucky to live in such a critical period with civilized policy and rapid social development. Relevant laws and regulations to protect parents have been made.

44、With more other efforts coming from our central government and our society, I am so confident that parents will enjoy a peaceful life in their later years very soon. (展望未來)（204words）（題目要求的是give my own comment.現(xiàn)在已采取的政策，是否還需補(bǔ)充）。點(diǎn)評: 對圖的理解是對的，不過有些局限，這是寫老有所養(yǎng)的問題的，要如何對待老年人，而不僅僅是自己的老父母。是寫老年人的福利問題的，不能只是說老父母（

45、不能就事論事，要上升到一定的高度），這樣寫會(huì)主題不突出的。再者，對模板的運(yùn)用不夠靈活，在概括中心時(shí)，不一定就只是用importance一類的詞，也可以用從句或者短語，可以突出什么性質(zhì)的問題，其的嚴(yán)重性如何，這也是提出問題的一種常見方式。What也指是什么性質(zhì)的問題，嚴(yán)重性如何，后果怎樣。不要有理解上的局限?？傮w評價(jià)：作文寫得不錯(cuò)， 語法錯(cuò)誤少，表達(dá)比較清晰準(zhǔn)確。(修改后附講評)This is an interesting picture full of instruction and it tells us how serious the problem of old peoples

46、 welfare is and how urgently our society should figure out a proper way to financially support the helpless old people out of their trouble. (對于全篇主旨，可以用各種形式表達(dá),但關(guān)鍵是要與隨后的行文相適應(yīng),最關(guān)鍵的是要使文章更容易控制, 這一句是寫要求二:interpret its meaning ) Obviously, we could tell from the above picture that four children, who shoul

47、d repay their parents selfless love at their old age, are playing “football” of kicking their old father around without mercy. Left in sky might be their old mans helpless cry for survival. (我只是想使描寫生動(dòng)一些,這樣可以減少在第二段對當(dāng)前社會(huì)現(xiàn)象的描述, 這一句是寫要求一: describe the drawing) It is a perfect example of our overlooking

48、of old peoples welfare mentally and physically. (第一段是要提出問題,寫明問題的是什么，程度如何，是何性質(zhì)等。)While I am looking at this picture, I cant help losing in further thought and searching for answers to this phenomenon. To my sadness, as the picture show, I find that many people shirk the duty of financially supporting

49、 the old. The first and foremost reason goes to the decline of tradition moral values and the losing of moral education. Young people tend to be more and more self-centered and enjoy their small world happily. As a result, their old parents are in their way, stopping them from happiness. Unfortunate

50、ly, ill-treatment by their own children would be unavoidable when they become old and helpless. Another reason goes to society itself. Young people are now facing increasing social pressure and some of them are struggling to make ends meet. Therefore it is not easy for them to help their old parents

51、 financially. For these young people, it is not a matter of willingness but that of financial competence.（這里應(yīng)該寫不尊敬父母的原因，不過寫作的目的是給人希望，讓人對社會(huì)充滿信心，所以應(yīng)該一分為二的看待不尊敬父母的現(xiàn)象，有的是不愿意，而有的是根本沒有能力。只有在該段寫明白原因后，最后一段才能略寫。注意對問題的分析也可以視為是滿足要求三：give your comment on it.） We are so lucky to live in such a critical period wi

52、th civilized policy and rapid social development. With more and more people giving great attention to the welfare of old people, with relevant laws and regulations to protect old people from ill-treatment and with the increasing efforts and help coming from the central government and our society, I

53、am so confident that old people will enjoy a peaceful life in their later years with their children and grandchildren. (展望未來，這一段的黑體字，都可以背下來做為模板的一部分，這一段也是滿足要求三：give your comment on it.只不過是從解決問題的角度來寫的)我加強(qiáng)了最后一段的內(nèi)容，對原因的描述也加深了一些，將文章加長只為了給出一個(gè)內(nèi)容豐富的范文，你可以好好對比看，并背誦。最好是將所有我改過或?qū)戇^的文章好好對比記憶。2004年This is an inter

54、esting picture full of instructing meaning and it tells us the importance of modesty. Obviously, we could tell from the above picture that the moment when a runner arrives at the destination is the moment he finds that a new beginning is just ahead of him. It is a perfect example of how to make cont

55、inuous progress. While I am looking at this picture, I cant help losing in further thought and searching for answers to this phenomenon. To my sadness, I find that not many people around me make continuous progress, though they made achievements in their lives. One most important reason is that they

56、 become over-proud after their successes, and wouldnt listen to others advice attentively as before. However, life is like sailing in a stormy sea, and they are bound to run into failure in the end. Therefore, this picture reminds us positively that continuous progress relies on modesty since modest

57、y makes us clear of who we are. And we can use others strong points to enhance and improve our own. Take me as an example. I was once a victim of being too proud. I got full mark in math exam in high school, and I strongly believed that I was much cleverer than others. I gave little time for prepara

58、tion and going-over. And it would not be long for me to see a big failure in math exam. This event gave me a good lesson. We are so lucky to live in such a critical period with civilized policy and rapid social development. With more efforts coming from our central government and our society, we are

59、 happy to see a sound social environment with many opportunities for success. With such good conditions, I am so confident that more and more people would make continuous progress because we are learning to be modest. (310)寫作要點(diǎn)：要一分為二地看問題。 從負(fù)面：成敗之原因、教訓(xùn)。 從正面：寓意、經(jīng)驗(yàn)、意義。2002年This is an interesting picture full of instructing