英語作文提分技巧

1、范文賞析范文賞析 Today, more and more students go to school with mobile phones. Students attitudes towards this vary from person to person. Those who support this say it helps students to keep in touch with their parents and friends. Moreover, using mobile phones can be fun. However, other students hold the

2、 opposite opinion. They think that using mobile phones can cause problems.Firstly, students with mobile phones at school do not concentrate on studying during class, but play games or send text messages instead. Besides, it costs a lot to use a mobile phone. As for me, there is no denying that using

3、 mobile phones has its advantages, but Id still prefer students to use them at home because study should come first. 書面表達(dá)系列講練書面表達(dá)系列講練 之之 贏取高分策略贏取高分策略 1、先根據(jù)文章的、先根據(jù)文章的內(nèi)容內(nèi)容,語言和整語言和整體感體感覺初步覺初步確定檔次確定檔次。第五檔第五檔. 2125分分第四檔第四檔. 1620分分第三檔第三檔. 1115分分第二檔第二檔. 610分分 第一檔第一檔. 15分分 0分分語言地道，語言地道，規(guī)范規(guī)范覆蓋所有內(nèi)覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)容要點(diǎn)2

4、、主要內(nèi)容：、主要內(nèi)容： 內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)；內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)； 詞匯和語法的數(shù)量和準(zhǔn)確性；詞匯和語法的數(shù)量和準(zhǔn)確性； 上下文的連貫；上下文的連貫； 語言的得體性語言的得體性應(yīng)用了較多應(yīng)用了較多的語法結(jié)構(gòu)的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯和詞匯有效地使有效地使用了語句用了語句間的連接間的連接成分成分3、拼寫和標(biāo)點(diǎn)拼寫和標(biāo)點(diǎn)是語言是語言準(zhǔn)確性的一個(gè)方面，準(zhǔn)確性的一個(gè)方面，評分時(shí)，應(yīng)視其對交評分時(shí)，應(yīng)視其對交際的影響程度予以考際的影響程度予以考慮。慮。4、詞數(shù)、詞數(shù)少于少于80和和多于多于120的，從總分中減去的，從總分中減去2分。分。5、如、如書寫較差書寫較差，以至影，以至影響交際，將分?jǐn)?shù)降低一響交際，將分?jǐn)?shù)降低一個(gè)檔次。個(gè)檔次。

5、 技技 巧巧1. 使用較高級的詞匯使用較高級的詞匯3. 使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞詞匯反映你知識貯存量的詞匯反映你知識貯存量的多少，也是衡量英語水平多少，也是衡量英語水平的一個(gè)重要標(biāo)志。的一個(gè)重要標(biāo)志。運(yùn)用得當(dāng)?shù)木渥咏Y(jié)構(gòu)可以運(yùn)用得當(dāng)?shù)木渥咏Y(jié)構(gòu)可以給文章增色不少，從而使給文章增色不少，從而使整篇文章因此而生輝整篇文章因此而生輝 。使用恰當(dāng)連接詞，對寫一使用恰當(dāng)連接詞，對寫一篇有篇有“英語味英語味”的文章很的文章很重要，能使文章上下銜接重要，能使文章上下銜接自然、緊湊。自然、緊湊。2. 使用較豐富的句式使用較豐富的句式1. Because the weather was good, our

6、journey was comfortable.2.We all think he is a great man.3.Suddenly I thought out a good idea.4.The students there neednt pay for their books. 5. As a result the plan was a failure.The plan turned out to be a failure.Thanks to the good weather, our journey was comfortable.一、怎樣使用較高級的詞匯一、怎樣使用較高級的詞匯We

7、all think highly of him .A good idea occurred to me. / A good idea suddenly struck me.Books are free for the students there.二二 豐富的句式：豐富的句式：( (常用到的句型結(jié)構(gòu)）常用到的句型結(jié)構(gòu)） 利用不同的句型來表達(dá)同一個(gè)意思， 能增加文章的文采。1. 感嘆句 e.g. How happy I was when I received your letter! What a kind boy he is! How disappointed he was !2. 強(qiáng)調(diào)句 e

8、.g. It was this young boy that helped the old granny. I do hope you can come if possible.3、 倒裝句 e.g. Only in this way can you solve this problem. There comes the police car. Hardly had they got to the station when they met the young man.4、 省略句 e.g. They read while walking or riding on a bus. Come to

9、 me if necessary.5、 with短語 e.g. I saw a young lady walking slowly in the street with a handbag in her hand.6、 定語從句 e.g. In my opinion, cyber cafes should be a place where we can find much useful information. Lets come to the main teaching building, at the back of which stands the school library.7、 各

10、種名詞性從句 e.g. Thats what I should do. We should do a favour to whoever needs help at present.8、 各種狀語從句 e.g. Time passed quickly before we knew it. The moment we reached the farm, we got down to harvesting. So long as we work harder at our lessons, well catch up sooner or later. Do call me before hand

11、so that I can meet you at the airport. They had to wait because the rain was getting more and more heavily. 三三 高考大綱中常用的高考大綱中常用的連接詞連接詞1. 表示遞進(jìn)表示遞進(jìn); 另外，還有：what is more; besides; also; moreover; in addition2. 表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系 但是， 然而， 相反：but; however; yet; instead; on the other hand; on the contrary.3. 表示因果關(guān)

12、系表示因果關(guān)系 因?yàn)?，因此，所? since; as; because (of ); so; thus; therefore; as a result; 4. 表示條件關(guān)系表示條件關(guān)系 如果，只要: if ;on condition ( that ); as long as 除非: unless 否則: or else 5. 表示時(shí)間關(guān)系表示時(shí)間關(guān)系 當(dāng)當(dāng) 的時(shí)候的時(shí)候 : when ; while 在在之后之后: after 在在之前之前: before 直到直到: until 一一就就 : as soon as 后來，后來， 然后然后: later; afterwards 不久不久: s

13、oon 近來近來: lately; recently 自從自從 :since 從那時(shí)起從那時(shí)起: from then on 常見的對稱關(guān)系的過渡詞語常見的對稱關(guān)系的過渡詞語1. For one thing, for another thing, 2. On one hand, on the other hand, 6. 表示特定的順序關(guān)系表示特定的順序關(guān)系 首先， 最主要的: above all 其次: secondly 然后: then; next 最后: finally; in the end；last but not least7. 換一種方法表述換一種方法表述 換句話說: in oth

14、er words; that is to say; 8. 進(jìn)行舉例說明進(jìn)行舉例說明 例如，比如: for instance; for example; like; such as9. 用于陳述事實(shí)用于陳述事實(shí) 實(shí)際上: in fact; actually; as a matter of fact 跟你說實(shí)話 : to tell you the truth10. 對一個(gè)話題進(jìn)行總結(jié)對一個(gè)話題進(jìn)行總結(jié) 總而言之，總的來說: on the whole; in short; all in all; in general; in a word；in conclusion; ;. To sum up ;

15、in brief11. 其它常用到的表達(dá)其它常用到的表達(dá) 1.in terms of 就而言2.as far as be concerned 3. in my opinion/ view 4. As far as I know 5. As for sb,假設(shè)你是星光中學(xué)的李華，將參加主題為“Lets Ride Bicycles”的英語演講比賽。 請撰寫一份演講稿，主要內(nèi)容包括： 1汽車雖然便利但帶來的空氣污染和交通堵塞等問題； 2騎自行車的益處，如節(jié)能環(huán)保、 有利健康等。 參考詞匯：低碳生活 lowcarbon life節(jié)能 energy saving 注意： 1. 詞數(shù)： 120詞左右； 2

16、演講稿開頭和結(jié)尾已給出， 且該部分不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Good morning, everyone, I am Li Hua from Xingguang Middle School.The topic of my speech is “Lets Ride Bicycles” _ _ _Dear classmates, Im very glad to have this chance to talk to you. The topic of my speech is Lets ride a bicycle. As is known to all, with the improvement of pe

17、oples living standards, cars have become a popular means of transport, bringing great convenience to our life. However, they have also caused some problems such as air pollution and traffic jams. How can we solve these problems then? As far as Im concerned, riding bicycles is a good solution. For on

18、e thing, bicycles dont need any petrol and they are energy-saving. For another, bicycles are environmentally friendly because they wont give off waste gas. Whats more, riding bicycles is a good way for us to exercise and it is good for our health. Therefore, lets take the responsibility to build up

19、a low-carbon city by riding bicycles. Come on and join us! Thank you for listening!20012001年春季高考作文年春季高考作文給澳大利亞的朋友寫一封信，談?wù)劀p負(fù)給學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)和生活帶來的變化。 I will tell you the changes of my life. Before, we had many classes every day. I had to do a lot of homework after school. I went to bed at 11:30 in the evening.

20、I had no time to play. I was very tired. Now I can visit museums. I can learn computer and drawing. In the evening, I can read books and newspapers and watch TV. I go to bed at 10:00 now.1717分分高考滿分作文 Im very pleased to tell you the changes in my life since our homework has reduced. Before that, lear

21、ning during the day was very simple. Having class and doing homework was the only thing we should do. In the evening, we also had a lot of homework to do. We could not go to bed until 11:30. Nevertheless, since reducing the learning load, my life has become much more interesting. I often visit museu

22、ms and computer rooms and draw pictures in my spare time. In the evening, I also have time to watch TV and read newspapers. I no longer stay up late; on the contrary, I go to bed at about 10 pm. In short, I am quite satisfied with my life now.書面表達(dá)常用語句書面表達(dá)常用語句1.1.書信書信 Thanks for your last letter. I a

23、m writing just to inform you In reply to your last letter, I am writing to explain the two questions as follows: 開 頭 Looking forward to your reply/hearing from you! Thanks for your consideration. Do remember me to your parents! 結(jié) 尾2. 2. 敘事敘事 It is quite obvious/clear that ( 很顯然) There is no doubt that (毫無疑問