新教材高中英語Unit3OnthemovePeriodⅣWriting教學案外研版必修第二冊

1、新教材高中英語Unit30nthemovePer iodIVWr it ing教學案外研版必修第二冊Period IV Writing |概要寫作運動故事1技法指導本單元的寫作項目是概要寫作，主題為運動故事。作為高中生的大家，運動和學習其實 一樣重要。只有好的身體，才能讓我們有活力、有信心的好好學習文化知識。寫作時要注意以下幾點：1 .細讀原文，把握大意。首先要仔細閱讀原文，然后對其進行整體分析，掌握原文大意和結構，明確全文的主題 和各段的段落大意。運用其特有的活力特征，整體文章應體現(xiàn)積極、健康。2 .提煉要點，轉(zhuǎn)述觀點。分析原文的內(nèi)容和結構，將各要點分項簡明扼要地表述，注意在結構上的順序。3

2、 .草擬提綱，寫出初稿。將挑選出來的要點作為框架草擬詳細的提綱，以所列的提綱作為依據(jù)寫出概要的初稿， 并注意專有運動名詞的拼寫。;經(jīng)典句式1 .開頭常用句式All students are encouraged to take part in a sport.鼓勵所有的學生都要參加一項體育運動。You have to have a strong will to compete in individual sports.你必須意志堅強才能參加個人體育項目的競爭。A lot of schools have their own sports teams.許多學校有自己的運動隊。She excels

3、at sports.她在體育運動方而很優(yōu)秀。2 .主體段落常用句式My ambition was to play sport at the highest level.我的志向就是成為最高水平的運動員。©Football is the most popular spectator sport.足球是人們最愛看的運動。Kasparov became world champion.卡斯帕羅夫成了世界冠軍。After he won the amateur championship he turned professional.他獲得業(yè)余賽冠軍后就轉(zhuǎn)為了職業(yè)運動員。3 .結尾常用句式Try

4、to fit some regular exercise into your daily routine.盡量在日常生活中安排一些經(jīng)常性的鍛煉。Gentle exercise can be beneficial for older people.運動量不大的鍛煉對年長者有益。You can do exercises to strengthen your stomach muscles.你可以通過鍛煉來增強腹部肌肉。Taking regular exercise is the best way to improve your overall health.經(jīng)常鍛煉是改善整體健康狀況的最佳方法。:

5、典例演練：閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫一篇60詞左右的內(nèi)容概要。Who says you have to stay inside your home when it is cold outside? There's an unusual sport practiced in the northern United States, and the season only starts when winds start blowing and the temperature drops below zero.The sport is called ice boating. Clement C

6、hua, who comes from a much warmer climate, is learning all about ice boating. Chua signed up for an ice boating class because he wanted to do something he couldn，t do at home.One experienced ice boater calls the sport uephemeralM . In other words, the conditions for ice boating do not happen very of

7、ten. And when the conditions are right, they are not right for very long.“You can go for weeks in the winter when you can't go ice boating, '' says 81-year-old Lloyd Roberts. Roberts has been ice boating for 40 years. He says dedicated ice boaters make the sport a major event in their li

8、ves, just after funerals and weddings. The capital of ice boating in the United States is now the northeastern state of Maine. It once was New Jersey. But the capital moved north because Maine has colder winters than before, and New Jersey, s winters are sometimes too warm for good ice to form.Chua

9、says ice boats are like small sailboats, but they have sharp blades designed for skimming over the ice. The boats catch the wind and move fast on clear and smooth ice. Roberts says there are only about six good days for ice boating each winter. Jim Thieler is a serious ice boater. He says there is a

10、lways a concern about getting wet, because sometimes the ice is not strong enough to support the weight of both the boat and the boater. That is why ice boaters always go out in groups, and wear special equipment. You need to wear cleats to avoid slipping on the ice. You also need warm clothes, beca

11、use sometimes the wind will stop blowing, and boaters can stay in the cold for a long period of time before they make it back to the land.精彩范文Ice boating in winter in the northern United States becomes popular with people. （要點 1） Ice boating is a unique activity, which requires special weather condi

12、tions, skills and courage.（要點 2） Now the capital has moved from New Jersey to Maine, which mainly results from the temperature.（要點 3） For those who are interested in the sport, some protective measures are essential in case of danger.（要點 4）總評 本篇范文將原文整理為四個要點，第一個要點是對文章的總體概括；接著，按照 原文的順序，在不曲解文章大意的基礎上，進行

13、了同義句轉(zhuǎn)換，用詞精準、句式高級。亮點呈現(xiàn)（1） Ice boating is a unique activity, which requires 使用 了定語從句，使表 達更加清晰準確。（2） in case of使用固定短語，傳達句意清楚又不失精煉。跟蹤演練閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫一篇60詞左右的內(nèi)容概要。Group exercise is one of the most useful ways to improve physical health and maintain a healthy lifestyle. Group exercise is challenging but fu

14、n! Of course everyone knows that exercise is good for the body. However, studies have shown that when exercise is done in groups, it is great for improving not only physical health but also mental health. It is a chance to be social and improve your strength. Also, group exercise creates a community

15、 （團體）feel and the shared common goal makes participants work hard.Another beneficial aspect of group exercise is the informational support participants receive from the instructor. If you fear the gym because you feel lost and don't want to embarrass yourself, then group training is a better cho

16、ice for you. It is an awesome chance to learn more about health through the clear instruction and supervision （監(jiān),督）of a fitness instructor. If you are tired of wandering around the gym wasting time and becoming bored, you can attend an optimistic group exercise class that will keep your exercise in

17、the right direction.If you are serious about wanting to live a healthy lifestyle, it is very important to surround yourself with people who will provide you with the proper emotional support. I wouldn* t speak angrily to anyone for deciding to party on the weekends, and in turn I wouldn't expect

18、 anyone to scold me for focusing on my health. Surround yourself with people who encourage and understand you! Plan to go for a jog with a friend, and then try a fun healthy restaurant or fresh juice bar! Surrounding yourself with people who will provide you with support can be very beneficial while

19、 working towards reaching health goals. First, decide to do it for yourself and work towards maintaining a positive mind. Then make sure the people you surround yourself with are supportive. Don, t let negativity （消極性）ruin your motivation （積極性）.寫前導讀：本文是一篇說明文。想運動卻又不能堅持，不如試試團體運動!精彩范文-1-Group exercise

20、can help you to improve physical health and keep a healthy lifestyle.（?？?1） Another advantage of group exercise is that you can receive informational support from the instructor.（更正 2） However, if you want to live a healthy lifestyle, you should surround yourself with those who can support, encourag

21、e and understand you.（要五 3） Also, you should maintain a positive mind.（要互4）課外拓展閱讀一一中國優(yōu)秀傳統(tǒng)文化專題練閱讀下面材料，在空白處填入適當?shù)膬?nèi)容（1個單詞）或括號內(nèi)單詞的正確形式。First built in 495 AD, Shaolin Temple is famous the coexistence （共存）of Chan School （禪學）and martial arts. It became famous in the Sui and Tang Dynasties. In the early Tang

22、 Dynasty, the 13 monks 2 （give） titles for helping the army of the Tang Dynasty. Soon the Shaolin martial art developed into its own system and became famous as the unique Shaolin School among Chinese martial circles.During the Yuan and Ming dynasties, Shaolin Temple 3 （house） many monks and became a large Buddhist temple 4 （know） at home and abroad. Today it has become 立 attractive tourist destination i