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1、主題主題: 用英語(yǔ)簡(jiǎn)介李敏同學(xué)用英語(yǔ)簡(jiǎn)介李敏同學(xué) 姓名職務(wù)與特點(diǎn)姓名職務(wù)與特點(diǎn) Li Min, monitor of Class 1 Grade 2 (同位語(yǔ)同位語(yǔ)), is healthy and lively. 成績(jī)與愛(ài)好成績(jī)與愛(ài)好 She does well in all her subjects, and she is fond of sports, singing and dancing. 事跡事跡 When she came to school, she had much difficulty with English, but through hard work she made

2、 great progress. In 2006 she took part in the National Physics Olympic Competition and won the first prize. Li Min is very strict with herself in her work and daily life, and is always ready to help others.一、寫作內(nèi)容一、寫作內(nèi)容1. age, sex, birth-place, background (概況概況)2. appearance, character (外表、性格外表、性格)3.

3、 Education (教育背景教育背景)4. big events in his or her life (in order of time) (經(jīng)歷、生平經(jīng)歷、生平)5. evaluation (評(píng)價(jià)評(píng)價(jià))1. 職位頭銜：職位頭銜： 用同位語(yǔ)用同位語(yǔ), 年齡性別與家境年齡性別與家境也可用同位語(yǔ)。也可用同位語(yǔ)。如：如： Sun Shuwei, a world champion in diving (一位跳水的世界冠軍一位跳水的世界冠軍), is a boy of 14 from Guangdong.(同位語(yǔ)同位語(yǔ)) Im Li Hui, a girl of seventeen(一個(gè)一個(gè)17歲

4、的女孩子歲的女孩子).二、句式模板二、句式模板 Abraham Lincoln， the son of a poor family (一個(gè)貧苦家庭的兒子一個(gè)貧苦家庭的兒子), was born in Kentucky on February 12, 1809. 亞伯拉汗亞伯拉汗林肯林肯, 于于1809年年2月月12日出生于肯塔基州。日出生于肯塔基州。2. 介紹出生介紹出生: 介紹出生的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)和家介紹出生的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)和家境用分詞結(jié)構(gòu)境用分詞結(jié)構(gòu), 使文章更簡(jiǎn)潔。使文章更簡(jiǎn)潔。如：如： Yao Ming, born in Shanghai in 1980 (1980年出生于上海年出生于上海),

5、 is a world famous basketball player. Born of a poor clerk s family(出生出生在一個(gè)貧困的小職員家庭中在一個(gè)貧困的小職員家庭中), Charles Dickens had little schooling.3. 描寫外貌描寫外貌: 巧用巧用with短語(yǔ)。短語(yǔ)。如：如： My English teacher is a beautiful lady, with long hair and big eyes (她她長(zhǎng)著兩只大眼睛長(zhǎng)著兩只大眼睛, 留著長(zhǎng)發(fā)留著長(zhǎng)發(fā)).4. 生平事跡：生平事跡： 盡量用復(fù)合句、并列盡量用復(fù)合句、并列句、非

6、謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)和倒裝等高級(jí)語(yǔ)句、非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)和倒裝等高級(jí)語(yǔ)句。句。如：如： In his life, he got many honours， one of which is the 2005 CCTV Moving China Award (其中包括獲得其中包括獲得“2005感動(dòng)中國(guó)年度人物感動(dòng)中國(guó)年度人物”的稱的稱號(hào)號(hào)).(定語(yǔ)從句定語(yǔ)從句) In 2006, having broken the world record and got the gold medal(在他在他打破世界紀(jì)錄并獲得金牌之后打破世界紀(jì)錄并獲得金牌之后), he became the idol of the you

7、th.(分詞短分詞短語(yǔ)語(yǔ)) Not only does he show interest in science(他不但對(duì)科學(xué)極有興趣他不但對(duì)科學(xué)極有興趣), but also he has a gift for music.(倒裝句式倒裝句式) 寫成長(zhǎng)經(jīng)歷請(qǐng)按時(shí)間順寫成長(zhǎng)經(jīng)歷請(qǐng)按時(shí)間順序。如序。如when he was a small boy， at (the age of) five， in 2006， a year later等。等。5. 評(píng)價(jià)評(píng)價(jià): 盡量運(yùn)用短語(yǔ)。盡量運(yùn)用短語(yǔ)。如：如： Lei Feng set a good example to us (給給我們樹立了一個(gè)良好的榜樣我們

8、樹立了一個(gè)良好的榜樣), so all the people show great respect to him (很很敬重他敬重他).此外此外, 以下短語(yǔ)很有用以下短語(yǔ)很有用, 請(qǐng)熟讀背誦：請(qǐng)熟讀背誦： be admitted into a key university 考上重點(diǎn)大學(xué)考上重點(diǎn)大學(xué) major in law主修法律主修法律 get a masters degree 獲得碩士學(xué)獲得碩士學(xué)位位 graduate from Harvard University畢業(yè)于哈佛大學(xué)畢業(yè)于哈佛大學(xué) win the first prize獲得一等獎(jiǎng)獲得一等獎(jiǎng) win a gold medal贏得

9、一枚金牌贏得一枚金牌 win the Nobel Prize 獲得諾貝爾獎(jiǎng)獲得諾貝爾獎(jiǎng) become a world champion 成為世界成為世界冠軍冠軍 set a good example to us 給我們樹立給我們樹立了良好的榜樣了良好的榜樣(10) be highly thought of受到好評(píng)受到好評(píng)(11) be awarded a medal for因因而獲得獎(jiǎng)?wù)露@得獎(jiǎng)?wù)?12) be awarded the title of獲得獲得稱號(hào)稱號(hào)(13) devote .to . 把把專用于專用于/奉奉獻(xiàn)給獻(xiàn)給三、超級(jí)仿寫三、超級(jí)仿寫 (2010(2010浙江浙江) )最

10、近最近, ,李越被評(píng)為你們班的李越被評(píng)為你們班的“每周之星每周之星”。 寫作要點(diǎn)寫作要點(diǎn) 請(qǐng)你根據(jù)她的事跡，用英語(yǔ)請(qǐng)你根據(jù)她的事跡，用英語(yǔ)為班級(jí)板報(bào)寫一篇短文為班級(jí)板報(bào)寫一篇短文, ,內(nèi)容包括：內(nèi)容包括： 1.1.事跡事跡: :上周六下午上周六下午, ,天氣炎熱天氣炎熱, ,在別人休在別人休閑之時(shí)閑之時(shí), ,她卻不辭勞苦為班級(jí)選購(gòu)歌詠比她卻不辭勞苦為班級(jí)選購(gòu)歌詠比賽服裝；賽服裝；2.2.結(jié)果結(jié)果: :被李越的事跡感動(dòng)被李越的事跡感動(dòng), ,我們竭盡全我們竭盡全力贏得了一等獎(jiǎng)；力贏得了一等獎(jiǎng)；3.3.評(píng)論評(píng)論: :她關(guān)心班集體她關(guān)心班集體, ,常利用業(yè)余時(shí)間常利用業(yè)余時(shí)間幫助別人幫助別人; ;為我

11、們樹立了良好榜樣。為我們樹立了良好榜樣。參考詞匯參考詞匯: singing contest 歌詠比賽歌詠比賽 costume 服裝服裝Star Student of the Week Li Yue has been awarded the title of “Star Student of the Week” for what she did for our class. On the afternoon of last Saturday, Li Yue went downtown and walked from one store to another, looking for the co

12、stumes we would wear in the singing contest regardless of the hot weather. While the rest of us were enjoying our leisure time in cool and comfortable rooms, she took great pains to search, select and managed to find the right clothes. Deeply moved by her efforts， we tried our best and won the first prize in the contest. Apart from being