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1、第一章 寫作對(duì)策：1.內(nèi)容能否緊扣主題，涵蓋要點(diǎn)2.作文構(gòu)造層次能否明晰3.言語(yǔ)表達(dá)能否流暢，無(wú)艱苦語(yǔ)病，有無(wú)邏輯錯(cuò)誤4.能否能恰當(dāng)?shù)倪\(yùn)用過渡性的詞語(yǔ)5.作文字?jǐn)?shù)能否到達(dá)要求6.卷面能否整潔，書寫能否美麗第二章 高分作文捷徑 第一節(jié) 黃金模板的學(xué)習(xí) 模板作文可分為三個(gè)階段。 第一階段：了解 第二階段：模擬 第三階段：活用二.高分作文秘訣 作文要想拿高分，就必需有“閃光點(diǎn)，也就是文章最出彩的地方。那么“閃光點(diǎn)終究究竟包括拿些方面呢？第一，構(gòu)造 明晰的構(gòu)造是最大的“閃光點(diǎn)。第二，詞和詞組 對(duì)于一樣的意思，我們掌握的詞或詞組越多越好，這樣可以根據(jù)不同的情況靈敏運(yùn)用。比如某人某人持怎樣樣的觀念，不僅可

2、以用think,還可以用hold,argue,maintain,take it for granted等詞表達(dá)。論證觀念不要只用first，second和third.假設(shè)是兩點(diǎn)，可以用on the one hand,on the other hand或for one thing,for another.假設(shè)是三點(diǎn)，可以運(yùn)用的詞非常多，如to begin with,moreover,whats the most important或in the first place,in the second place,last but not least第三，句型 我們應(yīng)對(duì)英語(yǔ)中的句子有正確的認(rèn)識(shí)，防止出

3、現(xiàn)破句、斷句、連寫句等明顯錯(cuò)誤；加大并列句和復(fù)合句的比例，應(yīng)為延續(xù)運(yùn)用多個(gè)斷句的效果非常不好。第四，例子 舉例最常見的句型構(gòu)造是takefor example或lets takeas an example第五，諺語(yǔ)與名言 用諺語(yǔ)時(shí)常用的句型是as the famous saying goes第六，修辭 這里所指的僅是一些修辭手法，如比喻、擬人和排比等。第七，插入語(yǔ) 插入語(yǔ)看似用不經(jīng)意的手段，卻能直接顯出作者的功底，所以為閱卷教師所青睞。如however,in my mind,有時(shí)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句可以作為插入語(yǔ)第八，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào) 標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)是協(xié)助文字正確記錄言語(yǔ)的一套符號(hào)，是書面言語(yǔ)不可短少的組成部分

4、。三、寫作常用關(guān)鍵詞文章不只是提供信息、陳說觀念，而且還要感染他人，那么如此短的文章中一定要多處運(yùn)用極強(qiáng)語(yǔ)氣的詞，以引起閱卷教師的留意?，F(xiàn)舉例如下：1.Most和more than most可用在描畫詞前面加強(qiáng)語(yǔ)氣，表示“非常，比very的語(yǔ)氣要強(qiáng)的多2.Undoubtedly，unquestionably，undeniably和Beyond doubt，out of question這一組詞和詞組語(yǔ)氣非常斬釘截鐵，非常果斷。3.To some extend、generally和on the whole這一類調(diào)理觀念的詞使得文章在說理中顯得客觀、適度，防止過于偏激四、寫作常用關(guān)鍵句型好句為他的

5、作文錦上添花1.由while引導(dǎo)的狀語(yǔ)從句2.Those who句型3.倒裝句4.條件狀語(yǔ)從句5.強(qiáng)調(diào)句6.反問句7.結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句8.退讓狀語(yǔ)從句9.notuntil10.包含never的否認(rèn)句11.平行構(gòu)造高分作文黃金模版批駁類模版1.批駁做法 Today more and more people.they argue this practice has several advantages.first，.second，.for example，.分兩點(diǎn)舉例闡明某些人的做法、想法。 I am afraid Icannot agree with their opinion.to begin w

6、ith,although you may feel，it doesnt mean.in the second place,.Finally,as to,.我的不同觀念和第三理由；第一句批駁 From the above analysis，we may arrive at the conclusion that is not wise choice.下結(jié)論下結(jié)論My view on putting work My view on putting work until the last minuteuntil the last minute1.1.如今有些人主張將其任務(wù)留到最后來做如今有些人主張將

7、其任務(wù)留到最后來做2.2.我不贊同他們的觀念，理由是我不贊同他們的觀念，理由是 Today more and more people put their work until the last minute.they argue this practice has several advantages .First,the impending dealing gives them a last-minute drive，which can help them finish the job quickly.Second,if they have a lot of time to finish t

8、he job，they cannot concentrate on they project quickly because they are not pressed by me .For example，some children have some homework for his winter vacation，but they always do it in the last week. I am afraid I cannot agree with their opinion .To begin with ，although you may feel anxious to finis

9、h the work when the deadline is drowning near，it does not mean you can finish your job with high quality。In the second place ，a wise man will not always leave his task until the last minute . If a person wants to be highly efficient，he should learn to divide his tasks into several small parts ，and s

10、et deadlines for each of them. Finally，as to the children finishing assignments ，I believe that they cannot enjoy themselves with their assignments unfinished. From the above analysis ，we may arrive at the conclusion that putting work until the last minute is not a wise choice.批駁類模板 批駁觀念 Recently it

11、 seems that . Many people，especially the parents，think it will certainly do good to their children because . Moreover, . 某種做法與支持這種做法的觀念。 After careful consideration ,I have to say the above view is more than biased. On the one hand, .on the other hand , . 從兩方面進(jìn)展批駁；第一句批駁。 We can see clearly that alth

12、oughmay bring favorable results，there are still a lot to worry about .It seems necessary for young students to make a careful investgation before . 下結(jié)論。My view on teenagers studying abroad1.如今有很多青少年出國(guó)留學(xué)2.有些人以為這種做法是有益的3.我以為這種做法是不對(duì)的 Recently it seems that among the students who choose to study abroad

13、，there are more and more teenagers who study in high school or even elementary schools .Many people ，especially the parents，think it will certainly do good to their children because the independent life will make them learn confidence and perseverance.moreover ，the quality of overseas education is o

14、ften higher ，thus the child stands a better chance of entering a better university and getting a better job in the future。 After careful consideration ，I have to say the above view is more than biased . On the other hand , early independent life is not necessarily good ，if the child cannot receive p

15、roper guidance and tender care from both teachers and parents. On the other hand , the educational quality is also a question too many foreign universities aim at earning money . When the children come back ， who can guarantee that they adapt to the fierce competition here？ We can see clearly that a

16、lthough teenagers studying abroad may bring favorable results，there are still a lot to worry about .It seems necessary for young students to make a careful investgation before going abroad .批駁類模板混合類：觀念批駁+方法 Nawdays there is a commonly held belief that .actually,it is not the real case . 第一句提出觀念；第二句立

17、刻批駁。 On the one hand , .on the other hand , . Most important of all , . 從三方面來闡明。 We need to carry out several measures to promote .First , we should . Second ，we should . 提出兩個(gè)方面的方法。Blood donationBlood donation1.1.有人以為獻(xiàn)血有害安康有人以為獻(xiàn)血有害安康2.2.實(shí)踐情況并非如此實(shí)踐情況并非如此3.3.應(yīng)采取措施促進(jìn)獻(xiàn)血應(yīng)采取措施促進(jìn)獻(xiàn)血 Nawdays there is a commo

18、nly held belief that donating blood will do harm to a persons health . Actually,it is not the real case . On the one hand , the small amount of blood donated in a short time. on the other hand , with the development of medical science ，it is much safer and more convenient now for people to donate bl

19、ood . Most important of all ,donating blood can help save the lives of dying patients ， which is significant to the hole society. 熟讀唐詩(shī)三百首，不會(huì)作詩(shī)也會(huì)吟！ We need to carry out several measures We need to carry out several measures to promote blood donation .First , we to promote blood donation .First , we s

20、hould impart medical knowledge to common should impart medical knowledge to common citizens citizens ，convincing them that blood convincing them that blood donation is not dangerous at all . Second donation is not dangerous at all . Second ，we should help people realize that helping we should help p

21、eople realize that helping others is equal to helping ourselves others is equal to helping ourselves ，not not only because it is a virtue to be ready to only because it is a virtue to be ready to help others ,but also because one day we help others ,but also because one day we will be those in need

22、of help .will be those in need of help .批駁類模板復(fù)合批駁It become a common tendency these days for people to many people are opposed to this practice because they think . They also argue that . 第一句闡明某些人的做法；第二句寫有些人的反對(duì)；第三句補(bǔ)充闡明。In my mind , however , I cannot agree with these people on this occasion , . At th

23、e same time , . In addition , . 第一句說我不贊同這些人的看法；分三點(diǎn)闡明。In conclusion , . 下結(jié)論。My view on bank loan My view on bank loan 1.1.如今許多人向銀行貸款如今許多人向銀行貸款2.2.有些人反對(duì)這種做法有些人反對(duì)這種做法3.3.我不贊同這些人的反對(duì)意見我不贊同這些人的反對(duì)意見 It becomes a common tendency these days for people to ask for bank loans to buy a house or a private car. Ma

24、ny people are opposed to this practise because they think bank loan is equal to debt ,and they will always feel burden on their back in the coming years . They also argue that they will not buy anything before they are capable of paying it in case. In my mind , however, I cannot agree with these people on this occasion .It takes many years for common citizens to earn enough money to buy a house or a car, and a