中考作文復(fù)習(xí)指導(dǎo)

1、認(rèn)真認(rèn)真審題審題，找出文章要表，找出文章要表達(dá)的中心。達(dá)的中心。寫作第一步審審travelstay at homevisit friends or parentsworktravelstay at homevisit friends or parentswork 健康很重要。在學(xué)習(xí)和工作的壓健康很重要。在學(xué)習(xí)和工作的壓力日趨增大的今天，會休息的人才力日趨增大的今天，會休息的人才會有健康的身體。人們是如何度過會有健康的身體。人們是如何度過假期的呢？國際健康組織對此作了假期的呢？國際健康組織對此作了一次調(diào)查，上圖是他們此次的調(diào)查一次調(diào)查，上圖是他們此次的調(diào)查結(jié)果。根據(jù)你所得的信息，請為國結(jié)果。根據(jù)

2、你所得的信息，請為國際健康組織寫一篇完整的調(diào)查報告際健康組織寫一篇完整的調(diào)查報告, ,并提倡大家進(jìn)行假日休閑。并提倡大家進(jìn)行假日休閑。審審用簡單的句子或短語用簡單的句子或短語列出列出文章要點(diǎn)。文章要點(diǎn)。列列寫作第二步 根據(jù)以下關(guān)鍵詞及圖表用簡根據(jù)以下關(guān)鍵詞及圖表用簡單的句子列出文章的要點(diǎn)單的句子列出文章的要點(diǎn) 如何度假如何度假 調(diào)查報告調(diào)查報告 倡議假日休閑倡議假日休閑stay at homeworkvisit friends or parentstravel A lot of people travel . Some people stay at home. Some other peopl

3、e visit friends or parents. A few people work. Enjoy your vacation.列列A lot of people travel . A lot of people travel . Some people stay at Some people stay at home. home. Some other people visit Some other people visit friends or parents. friends or parents. A few people work.A few people work.How d

4、o people spend How do people spend their vacation? We their vacation? We made a survey and made a survey and here is our survey here is our survey reportreport. .Come and enjoy Come and enjoy your vacation. your vacation. People who relax People who relax well work well.well work well.a nice heada n

5、ice taila nice body加加加首尾加首尾，使結(jié)構(gòu)完整。 可以采取總分總結(jié)構(gòu)或者總分結(jié)構(gòu)，開頭或結(jié)尾的句子注意簡潔，漂亮。寫作第三步：1. Second , we should keep quiet in the library.2. First , we have to wear our uniforms to go to school, though most of us dont like them at all.3. Every school has its own rules for students. We have many school rules to follo

6、w in our daily life.4. Whats more, we ought to return books on time.5. Our school rules are good for us, I will try me best to follow them.6. Third , we must do lots of homework.3 2 1 4 6 5 TailHead How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our survey report. A lot of people t

7、ravel . Some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the internet. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work. Come and enjoy your vacation. The people who relax well work well.連連恰當(dāng)運(yùn)用關(guān)聯(lián)詞句，使得文章層次清晰，各個部分銜接自然。寫作第四步：_ I am tired, I keep on working till midnight.He didnt go to movie

8、s, he went to the concert _.We like doing kinds of sports _ swimming, running and hiking._, he stood up. Then he got out. _, he went back. _, he smiled. How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our survey report. According to it, most people travel. And some people stay at ho

9、me. Also some other people visit friends or parents. However, a few people work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.連連 According to it, most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays . Then some people like to stay at home, watching TV or

10、surfing the Internet to have a good rest. And visiting friends or parents also makes them relaxed. However, a few people have to work. 美美美美選好詞句，美化美化文章。在有把握的情況下展示自己的語言功底。寫作第五步：Skill One Make your sentences correct Good good study, day day up. We should do sports a week once. Save the environment is o

11、ur duty. There is going to have a meeting today. I hope I can come true my dream.once a weekSavingbeachieve The teenagers like the computers. The teenagers are fond of the computers. Our parents really wish us to work hard. Our parents really wish us to put our heart into study.Skill Two Express in

12、different ways. We shouldnt eat junk food. We should keep away from the junk food. We should learn English grammar. Its important to learn English grammar.Skill Two Express in different ways.Skill Two Express in different ways. If you use English often, you will learn it better. The more you use Eng

13、lish, the better you will learn it.中考作文評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)中考作文評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)第四檔第四檔(1215分）覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。準(zhǔn)確使用豐富的詞匯和語分）覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。準(zhǔn)確使用豐富的詞匯和語言結(jié)構(gòu)。全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，有效地使用了語句間的連接成份，符合言結(jié)構(gòu)。全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，有效地使用了語句間的連接成份，符合英語交際習(xí)慣；具備較強(qiáng)的語言運(yùn)用能力。英語交際習(xí)慣；具備較強(qiáng)的語言運(yùn)用能力。第三檔第三檔(811分）覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。恰當(dāng)使用較豐富的詞匯和語分）覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。恰當(dāng)使用較豐富的詞匯和語言結(jié)構(gòu)。適當(dāng)運(yùn)用了語句間的連接成份，較好地達(dá)到了交際的目言結(jié)構(gòu)。適當(dāng)運(yùn)用了語句間的連接成

14、份，較好地達(dá)到了交際的目的。的。第二檔第二檔(47分）沒能覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。詞匯和語言結(jié)構(gòu)不能完分）沒能覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。詞匯和語言結(jié)構(gòu)不能完全滿足寫作任務(wù)的要求。文章不夠連貫，影響對寫作內(nèi)容的理解。全滿足寫作任務(wù)的要求。文章不夠連貫，影響對寫作內(nèi)容的理解。第一檔第一檔(03分）漏掉較多內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)或?qū)懙膬?nèi)容與規(guī)定任務(wù)無關(guān)。分）漏掉較多內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)或?qū)懙膬?nèi)容與規(guī)定任務(wù)無關(guān)。詞匯和語言結(jié)構(gòu)錯誤較多。內(nèi)容不連貫，無法傳達(dá)有效信息。詞匯和語言結(jié)構(gòu)錯誤較多。內(nèi)容不連貫，無法傳達(dá)有效信息。 上周三初三年上周三初三年級組的同學(xué)進(jìn)級組的同學(xué)進(jìn)行了一次體檢，行了一次體檢，結(jié)果期發(fā)現(xiàn)同結(jié)果期發(fā)現(xiàn)同學(xué)們的視力下學(xué)們的視力

15、下降了。請你用降了。請你用英語向全班同英語向全班同學(xué)報告原因?qū)W報告原因（如圖所示），（如圖所示），并提出倡議：并提出倡議：愛護(hù)我們的眼愛護(hù)我們的眼睛。睛。2311214眼睛疲勞眼睛疲勞看電視看電視玩電腦玩電腦眼睛近視眼睛近視躺著看書躺著看書走路看書走路看書眼睛疼痛眼睛疼痛強(qiáng)光下看書強(qiáng)光下看書弱光下看書弱光下看書 Most of us paid little attention to protecting our eyes, so with the time goes by, the eyesight becomes poor and poorer. Two thirds of students

16、 eyes always get tired because they watch TV or play computer games for long. And a quarter of students always lie in the bed or walking while reading books, so they have become short-sighted. The others always read in strong sunlight or poor light so they have sore eyes often. Its important for us

17、to form a good reading habit to take good care of our eyes. So lets do everything we can to improve our eyes. Passage One Boys and girls, as we know, our life is better than before. There are TV sets, computers and many modern machines. But, our modern life is harmful to our eyes too. Because two th

18、irds of students feel their eyes tired, because of watching TV or playing computer games for a long time. And a quarter of students walk and lie in the bed while they reading. So, they become short-sighted. One twelfth of students have sore eyes. Because they read in strong light or in poor light. When I saw the numbers, I was very surprise at it. So, I hope everyone must keep a good habit to protect our eyes. We can do it!Passage TwoPassage Three Boys and girls, Today we have a classmeet. This classmeet is dissincion a problem with our eyes. Two third