高三英語寫作教學(xué)新聞評論概要寫作(公開課課件)

1、Summary writingWhat is a summary?A summary is a short statement that gives only the main points of sth, not the details.How do you usually do summary writing?Steps:2. Read for structure3. Read for main points4. Rewrite in our own words1.Read for writing style Step1. Read quickly for writing styleNew

2、s commentary（新聞評論）News(background)Comments(suggestions)Ending Para1-2 Para3-4 Para5-6 para7NewsCommentsSuggestionsEndingStep2. Read quickly for structurePara1-2 NewsPara3-4 CommentsPara5-6 SuggestionsPara7 EndingParas.Main points1News23Comments45Suggestions67EndingStep3.Read carefully for main point

3、sa man was killed/the tiger/get into the zoo in Ningbo/without paying for a ticket/the tiger was shot deadblame / cold-hearted/ wrongtired of forgivingthe park was not well preparedraise peoples awareness / visitors to observe rules no more such tragediesStep4. Rewrite in your own wordsTip1: use wor

4、ds or phrases of similar meaningOriginal expressionsrewriteget intowithout paying for a ticketwas shot deadcold-heartedthose in the wrongenterwithout payingwas killedcold-bloodedrule-breakersStep4. Rewrite in your own wordsTip2. change clauses or sentences1.Some said this was a sign that people are

5、becoming more cold-hearted. But they are wrong. 1.Some said that people become cold-hearted,which is wrong.2.The tigers death shows the park was not well prepared for such emergencies. 2.The park should make better preparations.Step4. Rewrite in your own wordsTip3.use proper connectionsThe majority

6、of voices online blamed the dead manfor the animals death. Some said that people become cold-hearted, which is wrong. People are just tired of forgiving those in the wrong. People blamed the man not because they are cold-hearted, but because they are tired of forgiving rule-breakers. Write a summary

7、 in groups of four. Get ready to share the summary in class.1. Is the length proper? (4080words)2. Is there any sentence exactly from the article? 3. Does it include all the main points? one possible version： A man who entered a zoo in Ningbo without paying was killed by a tiger which was consequent

8、ly killed. Many people blamed the rule-breaker for the death of the tiger not because they are cold-blooded but because sympathy shouldnt be abused. To avoid such tragedies, the park should take more emergency precautions and the public should raise their awareness of obeying rules. (62 words)Use yo

9、ur own wordsRulesRewrite the article with about 60 wordsDont miss any main pointsMake the summary coherent(連貫的)Correct spelling, proper punctuation marks and good handwritingRead for main pointsSkillsRead for structureRead for writing style Organize your languageHomeworkFinish your own summary and s

10、wap it with your partner and make some change so that it can be a better one.Wish you good luck in the coming exam!(1)Use words of similar meanings同義替換法I didnt catch any fish owing to the fact that I was not patient.I didnt catch any fish_ I was not patient.becauseHow to rewrite(2)Adopt the opposite

11、 way when saying a sentence正話反說法You will fail.You will _. not succeed(3)Change the part of speech詞性轉(zhuǎn)換法Patience is very important.Patience is _.of great importance(4)Change the structure of a sentence句式變化法語態(tài)變換：Parents should give children more praise.Children should_more praise.be given簡單句變復(fù)合句：Childr

12、en should be encouraged more. This will help them learn faster.Children should be encouraged more, _ will help them learn faster.Children are given more praise. They will achieve more success.When _, children will achieve more success.whichgiven more praise(5)Use the shortest possible transitions連詞銜

13、接法 注意使用一些短而精的連詞，如but, and, so, while, however, then, thus, yet, for, therefore, including, instead of 等。 We should encourage children. We should not scold them.We should encourage children_ scolding them.instead of(6) Change the order of the words. 詞序改變法The secret of success was patience._ was _.Pat

14、iencethe secret of success(7) Omit the details細(xì)節(jié)省略法Dont always scold and give lots of praise instead. Dont scold and give praise instead.(8) Make use of the meaning of a sentence句意理解法Shopping on the Internet is becoming increasingly popular._More and more people prefer Internet shopping.Step3.Read f

15、or Main PointsPara.3 As news of the incident spread, the majority of voices online blamed the dead man for the animals death. Some said this was a sign that people are becoming more cold-hearted. But they are wrong. People have been displaying increasingly more enthusiasm for helping those in need a

16、nd participating in charity work. In 2016, the China Charity Federation received donations of 18.8 billion yuan ($2.7 billion) in total, 46 percent more than the donations received in 2015, and they sent helping hands to one tragedy after another. Para.3 As news of the incident spread, the majority

17、of voices online blamed the dead man for the animals death. Some said this was a sign that people are becoming more cold-hearted. But they are wrong. People have been displaying increasingly more enthusiasm for helping those in need and participating in charity work. In 2016, the China Charity Feder

18、ation received donations of 18.8 billion yuan ($2.7 billion) in total, 46 percent more than the donations received in 2015, and they sent helping hands to one tragedy after another. opinionsupporting detailsPara. 4 People are just tired of forgiving those in the wrong. While sympathy is right, it has been abused too much. When somebody commits a c