高考真題短文改錯15篇

1、知識就是力量，學習提升競爭力競爭力1對1 英語學科個性化教學輔導教案 學生年級上課地點第 次授課授課時間年 月 日 星期 學科老師學顧老師教學課題教學目標教學重、難點高考短文改錯真題15篇一、Correction 1(2014課標全國)假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤,每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加:在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(),并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(劃掉。修改:在錯的詞下畫一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意:1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞;2.只允許修改10處,多者(從

2、第11處起)不計分。Nearly five years before, and with the help by our father, my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes(圣女果)in our back garden. Since thenfor all these yearwe had been allowing tomatoes to self-seed where they please. As result, the plants are growing somewhere. The fruits are small in siz

3、e, but juicy and taste. There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors. Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost!二、Correction 2(2014課標全國)假定英語課上

4、老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤,每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加:在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(),并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(劃掉。修改:在錯的詞下畫一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意:1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞;2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計分。My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m. They are three lessons in the morning and two in the aft

5、ernoon. We didnt need to do so many homework. Therefore, we have more time with after-school activities. For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sports for one hour every day.My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the class

6、room buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, or sat by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends.三、Correction 3(2014浙江)下面短文中有10處語言錯誤。請在有錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞。增加:在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(),并在其下面寫上該加的詞。刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(劃掉。修改:在錯的詞下畫一橫線,并在該詞

7、下面寫上修改后的詞。注意:1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞;2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計分。I was taking a train to Londons Victoria Station. I had noticed that the carriage was noise and filled with people.Before long, a train inspector comes to check our tickets. A passenger realized he couldnt find his ticket but became quite upset.

8、Then everyone in the carriage began searching the ticket, which was eventually found under a seat several rows from his owner. The person who found a ticket smiled with pleasure at his success.No one in the carriage had previous spoken to or even noticed the ticket-owner before. Yet they had so quic

9、kly offered the strangers their help. If we could show concern to others on need, the world would be a better place to live in.四、Correction 4(2014遼寧)假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤,每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加:在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(),并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除:把多余的詞用斜線()劃掉。修改:在錯的詞下畫一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意

10、:1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞;2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計分。Dear Jeremy and Alice,Although weve been delighted to have you as neighbors, were hoping to settle something that bothers to us. In a word, your dogCleo.Weve called several time about Cleos early morning barking. It is difficult to understanding why she bark

11、s every minute shes outside. The early morning barking have been disturbing us as we are often up all night with the baby. Beside, Cleo tends to bark a average of six hours a day. This morning she starts barking even before 5 oclock. That is too much for us, considering how closely the houses are.We

12、 appreciate our apologies and goodwill, but we hope that you can figure a good way of settling the matter.Sincerely,Jack and Rose五、Correction 5(2014四川)下面短文中有10處語言錯誤。請在有錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞。增加:在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(),并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(劃掉。修改:在錯的詞下畫一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意:1.每句不超過兩個錯誤;2.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞;3.只允許修改10處,多

13、者(從第11處起)不計分。Hello, boys and girls! Today, I am going to talk with what you should do when a fire alarm go off. If you hear the alarm, stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside. Stay close to your teacher and classmate. Dont panic or get out of line, and trying to remain qu

14、iet and calmly. Soon the firefighters will come and put out a fire. If its a false alarm and there is no fire, your teacher will lead us back to the classroom. If you notice that when someone is missing and hurt, tell your teacher immediately.六、Correction(2013·新課標II)短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）假定英語課

15、上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。 增加：把缺詞處加一個漏符號（），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。The book Im reading of talks about afternoon tea in Britain. It is said to have started in the early 1800s. Ha

16、ve tea in the late afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner, that might not be served until 8 oclock at night. This custom soon becomes another meal of day. Interesting, it had a connection by the British porcelain(瓷器) industry. Tea in China was traditionally drank from cups without hand

17、les. When tea got popular in Britain, there was a crying need for good cup with handles to suit British habits. This made for the grow in the porcelain industry.七、Correction【2013·陜西卷】短文改錯（共10小題，每小題1.5分，滿分15分）假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文，文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處，錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。 增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞

18、符號（/）,并在該句下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。My grandfather and I enjoy fishing.One Sunday morning we go fishing at a lake. We took ours fishing poles and headed for the lake. As soon as we arrived, so we dropped the lines into the water. Be

19、fore waiting for about half an hour, I was beginning to get impatiently. I wanted to give up, and my grandfather told me to wait a little longer. Finally, there were a sudden pull at the pole and fish was caught . Within the next few minute, my grandfather also caught a fish. Felt hungry, we built a

20、 fire by the lake and barbecued the fish. It was delicious.八、Correction【2013·四川卷】短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1.5分，滿分15分）下面短文中有10處語言錯誤。請在有錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1. 每句不超過兩個錯誤；2. 每處錯誤及其修改均公限一詞；3. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。Today we had a chemistr

21、y test. I found the test difficulty, but I tried hardly to do it. Suddenly Mary, my best friend, asking me to let her to copy my answers. After think for some time, I let her copy my answers. But after the test, all of us were called to the teachers office. The teacher was angry because we had same

22、answers in the tests. We were warned not to cheat again so she would need to see our parents. I was very upset. I didnt cheat. I was just helping a friend. Why does she punish me?九、Correction （2013遼寧卷)下面短文中有10處語言錯誤。請在有錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞。增加:在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(),并在其下面寫上該加的詞。刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(劃掉。修改:在錯的詞下畫一橫線,并在該詞下面寫

23、上修改后的詞。注意:1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞;2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計分。Mr. Johnson is a hardworking teacher. Every day, he spends too much time with his work. With little sleep and hardly any break, so he works from morning till night. Hard work have made him very ill. He has ruined his healthy. We are worried about hi

24、m. That is which other teachers say.Yesterday afternoon. I paid visit to Mr. Johnson. I was eager to see him, but outside her room I stopped. I had to calm myself down. Quietly I step into the room. I saw him lying in bed, looking at some of the picture we had taken together. I understood that he mi

25、ssed us just as many as we missed him.十、Correction （2011浙江卷)下面短文中有10處語言錯誤。請在有錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞。增加:在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(),并在其下面寫上該加的詞。刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(劃掉。修改:在錯的詞下畫一橫線,并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞。注意:1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞;2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計分。I was playing at my cousin house. Since his family was rich than mine, he had more toys th

26、an I did. There was one on particular Id always wanted. I put into my pocket when he wasnt looking. I guessed, even at that age, I would never be able to enjoy to playing with the toy or faced my cousin again; I would always know Id done something wrong. Late on, my aunt drove me home. When she drop

27、ped me off, I pulled out the toy slow and gave it back. She knows what had happened, but she thanked me and ever mentioned it again.十一、Correction （2009.全國卷I）下面短文中有10處語言錯誤。請在有錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞。增加:在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(),并在其下面寫上該加的詞。刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(劃掉。修改:在錯的詞下畫一橫線,并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞。注意:1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞;2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11

28、處起)不計分。After five years away in my hometown, I find that the neighborhood which I used to living in has changed a lot. The Sichuan Restaurant and the older fish shop across the street from our middle school were gone. There exist now a park that has a small river run through. The factory at the come

29、r of Friendship Street and Zhongshan Road has been moved out of the city, and sports center has been built in their place. The market at the corner of Friendship Street and Xinhua Road has been given way to a supermarket. Besides the bookstore next to our middle school is still there. 十二、Correction（

30、2009.全國卷II）下面短文中有10處語言錯誤。請在有錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞。增加:在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(),并在其下面寫上該加的詞。刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(劃掉。修改:在錯的詞下畫一橫線,并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞。注意:1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞;2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計分。Hi, Susan.Im sorry that I wasnt able to return to your bike on time yesterday. I mean to give it back to you before four in the afternoon，a

31、nd I was hold up on my way back. Just before I turned corner of park street. I happened see an accident. A little girl was hurt and her mother needed help. So I helped them going to the nearest hospital. I stayed here for one and a half hour and made sure that the girl was all hope you understand.Th

32、ank you!Li Ling十三、Correction（2009.陜西卷）下面短文中有10處語言錯誤。請在有錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞。增加:在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(),并在其下面寫上該加的詞。刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(劃掉。修改:在錯的詞下畫一橫線,并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞。注意:1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞;2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計分。My classmate, Joseph, is at present in hospital with a breaking leg. He was walking to school the other day when

33、 he let a bicycle ran right into him. He never watches where he is going, so he often gets into the trouble. But he is having a nice time here. He has a comfortable room, patiently nurses, and a great deal of time to read. Some friends of his go to see him every day, they take him lots of good book

34、and fresh fruit. He is not losing any time from school because he is busy study what he has missed in classes. The doctor says he is recovering fast than expected and will be out of hospital a few weeks. 十四、Correction（2009.遼寧卷）下面短文中有10處語言錯誤。請在有錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞。增加:在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(),并在其下面寫上該加的詞。刪除:把多余的詞用

35、斜線(劃掉。修改:在錯的詞下畫一橫線,并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞。注意:1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞;2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計分。When I was in high school, most of my friend had bicycles. I hoped I could also have it. One day I saw a second-hand bicycle, that was only one hundred yuan. I asked my father the money. But he said he could only give me ha

36、lf of the money. He should find the other half myself. So I went to sell newspapers after the school. My father was pleased if I showed him the money a month after. He gives me the other fifty. You can imagine how much happy I am when I rode to school on my own bicycle. 十五、Correction（2009.浙江卷）下面短文中有

37、10處語言錯誤。請在有錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞。增加:在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(),并在其下面寫上該加的詞。刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(劃掉。修改:在錯的詞下畫一橫線,并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞。注意:1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞;2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計分。One rainy day while I was walking home with one of my friend, a truck came to a stop besides us. The driver put the window down and offered us a umbrella be

38、cause he found we were wet through. I stood there and couldnt believe in that a complete stranger is so thoughtful. The man insisted, so I grateful accepted the offer, thanked him and watched the truck disappear down the road. This man might need the umbrella himself, and he preferred to giveit to e

39、veryone else. It was a lesson to us that it was possible give without expect anything in return. 一、答案第一句:beforeago此處講述的是過去發(fā)生的事情,和一般過去時連用的應是ago,before常和完成時連用。第一句:byofwith the help of.在的幫助下,為固定短語。第二句:yearyears句中year是可數(shù)名詞,前面的these應修飾復數(shù)形式的名詞。第二句:hadhave時間狀語since then 通常和現(xiàn)在完成時連用,而不是過去完成時。第三句:在result前加aas

40、 a result 結果,為固定短語。第三句:somewhereeverywhere根據(jù)句意可知是“到處都有”,所以用everywhere。第四句:tastetasty本句中small,juicy和tasty是并列的表語,所以要用形容詞。第五句:muchmany根據(jù)前面的be動詞are和后面的them可知應是代替可數(shù)名詞復數(shù)的many。第六句:刪掉but/butyet引導讓步狀語從句的although不能和連詞but連用,但是可以和副詞yet連用。所以可以刪掉but,也可以把but改為yet。第七句:wonderfullywonderful修飾名詞時應用形容詞。二、答案語篇解讀本文為記敘文,題

41、材是學校生活類。作者描述了自己心目中理想的校園。第二句:TheyThere表示“上午有三節(jié)課,下午有兩節(jié)課”應使用there be句型。第三句:didntdont全文時態(tài)是以一般現(xiàn)在時為主,故應將didnt改為dont。第三句:manymuchhomework是不可數(shù)名詞,故應用much修飾。第四句:withfor表示時間、金錢、空間等足夠/足以(用于)時,應使用介詞for。第五句:第一個hourhours“一個半小時”要說one and a half hours。第六句:looklooks主語My dream school(我夢想中的學校)是單數(shù),其謂語動詞也應使用第三人稱單數(shù)形式。第七句:

42、刪掉第一個theall kinds of(各種各樣的)后直接加可數(shù)名詞復數(shù)或不可數(shù)名詞,不用再加冠詞。第八句:satsitWe can lie.,or (can) sit.第八句:listening后加tolisten是不及物動詞,接賓語時要加介詞to。第九句:helpfullyhelpfuland連接兩個形容詞作表語,故應將副詞helpfully改為形容詞helpful。三、答案1.第二句:刪掉had。此處指過去發(fā)生的事情,應用一般過去時。2.第二句:noisenoisy。此處作表語,應該是形容詞。3.第三句:comescame。此處是過去發(fā)生的事情,應用一般過去時。4.第四句:butand

43、。此處是順承關系。5.第五句:在searching后加for。搜尋某個東西應該用search for。6.第五句:hisits/the。此處指票的主人。7.第六句:athe。此處特指丟了的票。8.第七句:previouspreviously。此處應該用副詞形式。9.第八句:strangersstranger。此處指的是票的主人,只有一個人,所以用單數(shù)。10.第九句:onin。此處是固定詞組in need。四、答案1.第一段:去掉bothers后的tobother sb.打擾某人。2.第二段第一句:timetimes考查名詞復數(shù)。several times好幾次。3.第二段第二句:underst

44、andingunderstand根據(jù)its difficult to do sth.句型可知。4.第二段第三句:havehas考查主謂一致。the early morning barking為單數(shù),所以謂語動詞也應為單數(shù)形式。5.第二段第四句:BesideBesides此處應為副詞besides而不是介詞beside。6.第二段第四句:average前的aan考查冠詞。average為以元音音素開頭的單詞,所以應用冠詞an。7.第二段第五句:startsstarted考查時態(tài)。因為是今天早晨發(fā)生的事情,所以用一般過去時。8.第二段第六句:closelyclose考查形容詞。形容詞close作表

45、語。9.第三段:ouryour考查物主代詞。10.第三段:在figure后加out根據(jù)動詞短語figure out(想出)可知答案。五、答案1.第二句:withabouttalk with sb.和某人交談;talk about sth.談論某事。2.第二句:gogoes主語是a fire alarm,謂語動詞要用單數(shù)形式。3.第三句:在wait后面加forwait for sb.to do sth.等待某人做某事。4.第四句:classmateclassmatesclassmate是可數(shù)名詞,根據(jù)語境可知不止有一個同學,所以要用復數(shù)形式。5.第五句:tryingtryand連接的是并列的兩個

46、祈使句,前面是表示否定的祈使句,后面應是肯定的祈使句,所以要用動詞原形。6.第五句:calmlycalm此處作系動詞remain的表語,所以應用形容詞,和quiet并列。7.第六句:athe此處應該是特指上文提到的火災。8.第七句:usyou人稱代詞錯誤。前文用的是人稱代詞you,所以此處也應該是you。9.第八句:刪掉when引導詞使用重復,that已經(jīng)引導賓語從句,所以when多余,而且不符合語境。10.第八句:andor此處應該是選擇關系而不是并列關系。六1.【答案】of-去掉2. 【答案】havehaving3. 【答案】thatwhich4. 【答案】becomesbecame5.

47、【答案】在day前加the6. 【答案】interesting-interestingly7. 【答案】by-with/to8. 【答案】drank-drunk9. 【答案】cupcups10. 【答案】grow-growth七1. （第二段）第一句gowent。2. 第二句oursour。3. 第三句so去掉。4. 第四句BeforeAfter。5. 第四句impatientlyimpatient。6. 第五句中andbut。7. 第六句werewas。8. 第六句中and fish-a。9. 第七句minuteminutes。10. 第八句FeltFeeling。八61. 【答案】diff

48、iculty- difficult62. 【答案】hardly- hard。63. 【答案】asking- asked.64. 【答案】第二個to去掉。65. 【答案】think- thinking.66. 【答案】all-both.67. 【答案】same前加the.68. 【答案】tests- test.69. 【答案】so-or.70. 【答案】does-did.九答案：1.withon 2.so去掉 3.havehas 4.healthyhealth 5.which-what6.visit前加a 7.her-his 8.stepstepped 9.picture-pictures 10.manymuch十1.cousin cousins 2. rich richer 3.on - in 4.put -put it/that 5. enjoy to - enjoy6.faced - face 7. Late - Later 8.slow - slowly 9. knows - knew 10. ever - never十一答案1. infrom。句意是我離開家鄉(xiāng)五年，away from屬于固定搭配。2. liv