高中英語必修二unit2writing

1、會(huì)計(jì)學(xué)1高中英語必修二高中英語必修二unit2writing第1頁/共38頁第2頁/共38頁Enjoy some pictures. Do you know these athletes? What sport are they good at?第3頁/共38頁basketballJordan第4頁/共38頁football/soccerMessi第5頁/共38頁tennisLi Na第6頁/共38頁table tennis/ping-pongZhang Yining第7頁/共38頁badmintonLin Dan第8頁/共38頁gymnasticsLi Xiaopeng第9頁/共38頁swi

2、mmingSun Yang第10頁/共38頁runningLiu Xiang第11頁/共38頁1.Whats your favorite sport? 2.When&why do you like this sport?3. What do you do to improve your skill?4. Who is your favorite athlete? 5. Whats your hope or dream?第12頁/共38頁A. Whats your favorite sport? B: I like_best.A: When & why do you like t

3、his sport? B:I became interested in_ when I was_ I like_ because_A:What do you do to improve your skill? B: I often practice it_A:Who is your favorite athlete? B: My favorite athlete is_ I like _because_ A: Whats your hope or dream? B: I hope in the future I can_第13頁/共38頁單元寫作單元寫作- My Favorite Sport

4、如何描寫最喜歡的一項(xiàng)運(yùn)動(dòng)如何描寫最喜歡的一項(xiàng)運(yùn)動(dòng) (說明文說明文,可穿插記敘和討論可穿插記敘和討論)第14頁/共38頁第15頁/共38頁 My Favorite Sport Of all sports, I like badminton best. I became interested in it when I was a kid. I am fond of playing badminton because it can not only build our bodies, but also train our brains. Therefore, I join the Badminton

5、 Club in our school. To improve my skill, I often practice it whenever Im free. Besides, I play games with my friends after school. My favorite athlete is Lin Dan, who is a world champion. I admire him because he is so skillful with the ball. Although I am not good enough now, I really hope I will b

6、e a good player like him in the future. 第16頁/共38頁第17頁/共38頁第一步第一步：第18頁/共38頁 My Favorite Sport Of all sports, I like badminton best. I became interested in it when I was a kid. I am fond of playing badminton because it can not only build our bodies, but also train our brains. Para1 what, when and why第

7、19頁/共38頁 Therefore, I join the Badminton Club in our school. To improve my skill, I often practice it whenever Im free. Besides, I play games with my friends after school.Para2 how to improve第20頁/共38頁 My favorite athlete is Lin Dan, who is a world champion. I admire him because he is so skillful wit

8、h the ball. Although I am not good enough now, I really hope I will be a good player like him in the future.Para3 favorite athlete & dream第21頁/共38頁第二步第二步：第22頁/共38頁1. Of all the sports, I like . best.2.I became interested in . when I was . At the age of ., I showed great interest in .3. I like/am

9、 fond of/fall in love with . because . The reason why I like . is that .4. I often practice it . Whenever I have time/I am free, .5. My favorite athlete is . I like because .6. I hope I can . in the future . I really want to be a(n) . when I grow up.最喜歡的運(yùn)動(dòng)最喜歡的運(yùn)動(dòng)喜歡該運(yùn)動(dòng)的時(shí)間喜歡該運(yùn)動(dòng)的時(shí)間喜歡該運(yùn)動(dòng)的原因喜歡該運(yùn)動(dòng)的原因現(xiàn)怎么從事現(xiàn)

10、怎么從事/提高該運(yùn)動(dòng)提高該運(yùn)動(dòng)最喜歡的運(yùn)動(dòng)員最喜歡的運(yùn)動(dòng)員夢(mèng)想夢(mèng)想第23頁/共38頁第三步第三步：第24頁/共38頁遞進(jìn)遞進(jìn)besides, whats more, in addition not onlybut also對(duì)等對(duì)等on one hand, on the other hand, 讓步讓步although, even though/if, whenever因果因果so, thus, therefore 轉(zhuǎn)折轉(zhuǎn)折however, but 列舉列舉such as, for example并列并列also, as well總結(jié)總結(jié)altogether, all in all, in a

11、word.第25頁/共38頁e.g.“喜歡喜歡” like, love, be fond of, fall in love with, have a fancy for, be crazy about when引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語從句引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語從句I became interested in when I was同位語、表語從句同位語、表語從句The reason why I like .(同位語)is that .第26頁/共38頁P(yáng)ay attention to： spelling mistakes(拼寫錯(cuò)誤) logical and grammatical mistakes(邏輯、語法錯(cuò)誤)第

12、四步第四步：查漏補(bǔ)缺查漏補(bǔ)缺(check the mistakes)第27頁/共38頁題目：My Favorite Sport要求：字?jǐn)?shù)100左右 限時(shí)15分鐘 第28頁/共38頁 自評(píng)自評(píng)+互評(píng)互評(píng) 15 Main points(要點(diǎn)齊全語句通順要點(diǎn)齊全語句通順) 5 Structures(結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊過渡自然結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊過渡自然) 3 Words &Sentences (高級(jí)詞匯句式多樣高級(jí)詞匯句式多樣) 3 Handwriting (書寫工整美觀書寫工整美觀) 1 Paragraphs (分段分段) 鏈接鏈接:高考英語作文評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)高考英語作文評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)25第29頁/共38頁檔次檔次語法結(jié)構(gòu)

13、、詞語法結(jié)構(gòu)、詞匯匯復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)、高復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)、高級(jí)詞匯級(jí)詞匯連接成分與結(jié)構(gòu)連接成分與結(jié)構(gòu)寫作目的完成情寫作目的完成情況況第五檔第五檔（2125分）分）應(yīng)用較多應(yīng)用較多語法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯語法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯有些許錯(cuò)誤有些許錯(cuò)誤有效使用連接全文有效使用連接全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊完全達(dá)到完全達(dá)到第四檔第四檔（1620分）分）滿足要求滿足要求語法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯語法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面基本準(zhǔn)確方面基本準(zhǔn)確簡單使用連接全文簡單使用連接全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊達(dá)到達(dá)到第三檔第三檔（1115分）分）滿足要求滿足要求語法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯語法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面的錯(cuò)誤有一方面的錯(cuò)誤有一些，但不影響理些，但不影響理解解簡單使用連接全文簡單使用連接全文內(nèi)容連

14、貫內(nèi)容連貫基本達(dá)到基本達(dá)到第二檔第二檔（610分）分）語法單調(diào)，詞匯語法單調(diào)，詞匯有限有限語法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯語法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面的錯(cuò)誤有一方面的錯(cuò)誤有一些，影響對(duì)寫作些，影響對(duì)寫作內(nèi)容的理解內(nèi)容的理解較少使用連接成分，較少使用連接成分，內(nèi)容缺少連貫內(nèi)容缺少連貫信息未能清楚地傳信息未能清楚地傳達(dá)給讀者達(dá)給讀者第一檔第一檔（15分）分）語法單調(diào)，詞匯語法單調(diào)，詞匯有限有限語法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯語法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面的錯(cuò)誤較多，方面的錯(cuò)誤較多，影響對(duì)寫作內(nèi)容影響對(duì)寫作內(nèi)容的理解的理解缺乏連接成分，內(nèi)缺乏連接成分，內(nèi)容不連貫容不連貫信息未能傳達(dá)給讀信息未能傳達(dá)給讀者者第30頁/共38頁What have you learnt today?第31頁/共38頁Correct and finish your writing -My Favorite Sport.第32頁/共38頁第33頁/共38頁basketballJordan第34頁/共38頁table tennis/ping-pongZhang Yini