寫作錯誤與分析

1、寫作錯誤與分析一 不一致（disagreements） 所謂不一致不光指主謂不一致，它還包括了數(shù)的不一致,時態(tài)不一致及代詞不一致等例 When one have money, he can do what he want to.After many years negotiation, the two government agreed on the trade issue.45% of people would go on with study after work, 60% of which are under the age of 35.Most people like to watch

2、 TV, reading the books or newspapers, listening to the radio. 1二 修飾語錯位（misplaced modifiers） 英語與漢語不同，同一個修飾語從語法的角度講，可以出現(xiàn)在句子的不同的位置，但語義常常限定某些修飾詞的位置。 如：I believe I can do it well and I will better know the world outside the campus. Today young people have a different idea towards what old people think ab

3、out fashion show. 2三 句子不完整（sentence fragments） 在口語中，交際雙方可借助手勢語氣上下文等，不完整的句子完全可以被理解可是書面語就不同了，句子結(jié)構(gòu)不完整會令意思表達(dá)不清，這種情況常常發(fā)生在主句寫完以后，筆者又想加些補(bǔ)充說明時發(fā)生例:There are many ways to know the society. For example by TV, radio, newspaper and so on.He cant be watching TV. Because he has a lot of homework to do.3四 懸垂修飾語（dan

4、gling modifiers） 所謂懸垂修飾語是指句首的短語與后面句子的邏輯關(guān)系混亂不清例如：At the age of ten, my grandfather died. To do well in college, good grades are essential.On arriving at the airport, the plane has already taken off.4五 詞性誤用(misuse of parts of speech) “詞性誤用”常表現(xiàn)為：介詞當(dāng)動詞用; 形容詞當(dāng)副詞用; 名詞當(dāng)動詞用等例None can negative the importance

5、 of money.After many years of negotiate, the two governments agreed on the issue of the trade.Although the life condition is worse than imaged, Doc. Yang is contented with the research facilities we supplied.5六 指代不清(ambiguous reference of pronouns)指代不清主要講的是代詞與被指代的人或物關(guān)系不清，或者先后所用的代詞不一致。例：Mary was frie

6、ndly to my sister because she wanted her to be her bridesmaid. And we can also know the society by serving it yourself.6七 不間斷句子(run-on sentences) 什么叫run-on sentence? 例:There are many ways we get to know the outside world. He is not likely watching TV since he has a lot of homework to do.7八 措詞毛病(trou

7、bles in diction) Diction 是指在特定的句子中如何適當(dāng)?shù)剡x用詞語的問題。例：The increasing use of chemical obstacles in agriculture also makes pollution. (fertilizer)The spare activities of the young people are varied. After many years conference, the two governments agreed on the trade problem.8九 累贅(redundancy) 言以簡潔為貴。寫句子沒有一

8、個多余的詞；寫段落沒有一個無必要的句子。能用單詞的不用詞組；能用詞組的不用從句或句子。如：In spite of the fact that he is lazy, I like him. For the people who are diligent and kind, money is just the thing to be used to buy the thing they need. In conclusion, from the above, we can see that young people have enjoyed all kinds of activities.9十 不連貫(incoherence) 不連貫是指一個句子前言不對后語，或是結(jié)構(gòu)上不暢通。 The fresh water, it is the most important things of the earth. Today, money to everybody is very