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1、 人教版高中英語(yǔ)Book7 Unit5 Writing WritingHow to improve your compositionGuessing game She is from China. She looks smart . She has a talent for singing. She is good at English .Although she was born in post 1980,We all like her.She is our English teacher.She gets on well with students.Miss is an English t

2、eacher ,who looks smart.Not only does she have a talent for singing, but also she is good at English.She gets on with students so well that we all like her. Such( )A good writingstructureseveral partstopic sentencecontentall points coveredlanguage wordsphrasessentencesvariationStrategies for improvi

3、ng writing For variation of words and phrases(2 tips) 人教英語(yǔ)選修7Unit5rWriting精品課件人教英語(yǔ)選修7Unit5rWriting精品課件Tip1Fresh and not overused words1.With the College Entrance Examinations coming, the senior three students are focusing much more on studying. It is more and more difficult to find jobs in China now

4、adays.approachingincreasingly人教英語(yǔ)選修7Unit5rWriting精品課件人教英語(yǔ)選修7Unit5rWriting精品課件Tip2. Phrases come first.Firstly the quietness in the night will bring better effectiveness.(1)I have _ to study English better this term.(同義詞decided)(2)We will _ the matter _ (同義詞consider)made up my mindtake into account /

5、considerationresult in人教英語(yǔ)選修7Unit5rWriting精品課件人教英語(yǔ)選修7Unit5rWriting精品課件 For variation of sentences(3 tips)人教英語(yǔ)選修7Unit5rWriting精品課件人教英語(yǔ)選修7Unit5rWriting精品課件the senior three students are focusing on much more on studying. (1)With the College Entrance Examinations approaching,Tip1Use phrases to replace s

6、entences(absolute construction) (2)The College Entrance Examinations approaching, (prepositional phrase) the approach of the College Entrance Examinations, (non-verbal verb)As the College Entrance Examinations approach,(3)Facing 人教英語(yǔ)選修7Unit5rWriting精品課件人教英語(yǔ)選修7Unit5rWriting精品課件It is known to us. Stay

7、ing up late will naturally affect the next days performance in class.As is known to us , staying up late will naturally affect the next days performance in class.Tip2 Use compound and complex sentences(1)It is known to us that(2)What is known to us is that人教英語(yǔ)選修7Unit5rWriting精品課件人教英語(yǔ)選修7Unit5rWriting

8、精品課件1).A heated discussion was held to argue about the advantages and disadvantages of it.2) So its high time they made good use of every minute. 3)Only by doing so can we really make progress.tip2_ Tip3.Eye-catching structures(passive voice)(subjunctive mood)_(inversion)人教英語(yǔ)選修7Unit5rWriting精品課件人教英語(yǔ)

9、選修7Unit5rWriting精品課件非謂語(yǔ)各種從句with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)倒裝It 結(jié)構(gòu)虛擬.強(qiáng)調(diào)句型人教英語(yǔ)選修7Unit5rWriting精品課件人教英語(yǔ)選修7Unit5rWriting精品課件Some transitional words先后順序： to begin with,first, firstly,then, later, in the end, eventually,the last but not the least ,since then, afterwards遞進(jìn)關(guān)系：in addition, furthermore, still less, moreover,whats m

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11、課件人教英語(yǔ)選修7Unit5rWriting精品課件 上網(wǎng)是中學(xué)生最熱門的話題之一。對(duì)此，有的同學(xué)說(shuō)好，有的同學(xué)則持反對(duì)意見(jiàn)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面所提供的信息寫一篇短文并發(fā)表自己的意見(jiàn)。優(yōu)點(diǎn)缺點(diǎn)1、對(duì)學(xué)生幫助大1、大部分同學(xué)上網(wǎng)聊天玩游戲，甚至上不良網(wǎng)站.2、可查閱有關(guān)課程信息，上因特網(wǎng)學(xué)習(xí)2、 影響學(xué)生正常的學(xué)習(xí)3、了解最新信息，開闊眼界，擴(kuò)大知識(shí)面3、對(duì)學(xué)生身心都造成傷害人教英語(yǔ)選修7Unit5rWriting精品課件人教英語(yǔ)選修7Unit5rWriting精品課件 Nowadays, going online is one of the most popular topics of the stu

12、dents. The Internet is helpful to students. We can look for information and study on it. We also get the latest news from it. It helps us see more and learn more. The Internet has a bad influence on our study. Some students chat and play games on it. And someone even visits bad websites. These hurt

13、both our body and heart. So we should make full use of the Internet to improve us. And we should also avoid the bad influences of the Internet.A Students Version人教英語(yǔ)選修7Unit5rWriting精品課件人教英語(yǔ)選修7Unit5rWriting精品課件A possible version Nowadays there is an increasing tendency that more and more middle schoo

14、l students are craze about surfing the Internet, about/on which opinions are divided.人教英語(yǔ)選修7Unit5rWriting精品課件人教英語(yǔ)選修7Unit5rWriting精品課件 Students who are in favor of it hold the view that the Internet is of great benefit to them. On one hand, not only can they consult the Internetfor the information ab

15、out a specific subject butalso they can study on the Internet. On theother hand, they can be informed of the latestInformation. Moreover, they can broaden theirhorizons and enlarge their knowledge.人教英語(yǔ)選修7Unit5rWriting精品課件人教英語(yǔ)選修7Unit5rWriting精品課件 Meanwhile, there are some students disapproving of it.

16、 As far as they are concerned, the majority of the students who surf the Internet merely waste their time in chatting, playing games or even visiting some bad websites, which has a bad effect on their regular study. To make matters worse,it might do great harm to their physical andmental health.人教英語(yǔ)

17、選修7Unit5rWriting精品課件人教英語(yǔ)選修7Unit5rWriting精品課件 For my part, no one can deny the fact that the Internet is playing an essential role in our daily life. Nevertheless, its of vital importance that students should weigh the advantages and disadvantages of the Internet. Only in this way can they make prope

18、r use of it. 人教英語(yǔ)選修7Unit5rWriting精品課件人教英語(yǔ)選修7Unit5rWriting精品課件抄閱讀文章中的句子; 不知所云.得分為0分人教英語(yǔ)選修7Unit5rWriting精品課件人教英語(yǔ)選修7Unit5rWriting精品課件Bad sample卷面不整潔; 涂改較多;語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤多;層次不清;得7分人教英語(yǔ)選修7Unit5rWriting精品課件人教英語(yǔ)選修7Unit5rWriting精品課件語(yǔ)言不地道;中文式思維;詞匯錯(cuò)誤;卷面有涂改;但基本句子正確,得14分.人教英語(yǔ)選修7Unit5rWriting精品課件人教英語(yǔ)選修7Unit5rWriting精品課件有少

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