中考英語寫作課件

1、2015中考作文輔導(dǎo) basic rules(寫作考試規(guī)則) search（審）list（列）add(加: 開頭和結(jié)尾) connect(連)beautiful(美：諺語/例子) 如何度假調(diào)查報(bào)告倡議假日休閑stay at homeworkvisit friends or parentstravel審(search)根據(jù)以下關(guān)鍵詞及圖表用簡(jiǎn)單的句子列出文章的要點(diǎn)。How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report. （the beginning）A lot of people travel. S

2、ome people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the internet. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well. （the ending）加(add)加首尾，使結(jié)構(gòu)完整。可以采取總分總結(jié)構(gòu)，開頭或結(jié)尾的句子應(yīng)注意簡(jiǎn)潔、漂亮。How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and h

3、ere is our report.According to it, a lot of people travel. And some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the Internet. Also some other people visit friends or parents. However, a few people work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.連(connect)Writing skills（“寫”的技巧）方法一:

4、善用詞匯 甚至善用高級(jí)詞匯Which is better? 他們?cè)诤┥下犚魳贰?A They listened to the music on the beach.B They enjoyed the music on the beach.Which is better? 他們很早就到了。A They arrived early.B They arrived as early as they could.A I think learning English is interesting.B I find it really fun to learn English . 我認(rèn)為學(xué)英語很有趣。

5、我們應(yīng)該保護(hù)環(huán)境。A We should protect the environment.B Its our duty to protect the environment. 她還小，搬不動(dòng)這么重的箱子。A She is very young. She cant carry the heavy box.B She is too young to carry the heavy box.C She is so young that she cant carry the D She is not old enough to carry the 方法三:妙用關(guān)聯(lián)詞Writing skills（“寫”

6、的技巧）1.表示并列或遞進(jìn): and, as well as, bothand, whats more not onlybut also, neithernor2.表示選擇: or, eitheror3.表示轉(zhuǎn)折: but,however,althoughthough,after all,anyway4.表示因果: because, so, therefore,since,for,as a result5.表示條件: if , unless6.表示對(duì)比: instead, notbut, while, in the same way, on the one handon the other h

7、and7.表示解釋: for example, for instance, such as, that is to say, in other words,to tell the truth8.表示順序: to begin with, firstly, first (of all), second(ly), next, later, since then, from then on, finally, in the end9.表示強(qiáng)調(diào): also, besides, especially, actually, in fact10.表示結(jié)論: all in all, altogether, in

8、 a word, generally speaking, in short關(guān)聯(lián)詞(connection words)Lets try_ I am tired, I keep on working till midnight.He didnt go to movies, he went to the concert _.We like doing kinds of sports _ swimming, running and hiking._, he stood up. Then he got out. _, he went back. _, he smiled.ThoughAlthoughin

9、steadlikeFirstNextFinallyAt lastHow do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report.According to it, a lot of people travel. And some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the Internet. Also some other people visit friends or parents. However, a few people work. Come and

10、 enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.連(connect)美(beautify) According to it, most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays. Then some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. However, a few people have to

11、 work. As the saying goes, “All work and no play makesJack a dull boy.” Come and enjoy your vacation. Peoplewho relax well work well.美(beautify) And to visit friends or parents also makes them relaxed. Proverb（諺語）/saying加諺語(Proverb/saying)可用于”beginning”和”ending”，多用后者。鍛煉對(duì)學(xué)生有好處 It is good for us stude

12、nts to take exerciseAs the saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” It is good for us students to take exercise.加入英語俱樂部是學(xué)習(xí)英語的好方法Joining the English club is a good way to learn English.As the saying goes, “Practice makes perfect.” So joining the English club is a good way to learn E

13、nglish.加諺語(Proverb/saying)可用于開頭和結(jié)尾，多是結(jié)尾。加諺語(Proverb/saying)可用于”beginning”和”ending”，多用后者。Enjoy some proverbs1.Practice makes perfect.2.Think twice before you do. 4.Do as the Romans do. 三思而后行。熟能生巧。有志者事竟成。入鄉(xiāng)隨俗。早起的鳥兒有蟲吃。失敗是成功之母。5.The early bird catches the worm.3.Where there is a will, there is a way.6.

14、Failure is the mother of success.方法四:妙用引文和例子（多用于“the body”）Writing skills（“寫”的技巧）青少年應(yīng)盡我們所能保護(hù)環(huán)境拯救地球。We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth. For example, we can use recyclable bags instead of plastic bags, stop using napkins, plant more trees and save water an

15、d energy.加例子加例子在家里，我經(jīng)常幫助父母親干家務(wù)活。I often help my parents do housework, such as washing dishes, folding the clothes, taking out the trash and so on.Lets Do it now ! / Dont do it again!As students, we should start from ourselves. Dont wait. Join us now!Start to join us now!Dont put it off! Become a vol

16、unteer today!How amazing! I cant wait!Save animals! Save Ourselves! Save our planet!Dont hesitate(猶豫). It will be great fun! Dear Mary, I heard you didnt do well in English. Here is some advice for you. Yours _, I think reading English every day and listening to the teacher carefully in class are th

17、e most important._, you can join the English club to practice English. You know, “Practice makes perfect.” _, it is necessary for you to listen to the English radio every morning. It can improve your listening skill._, English is not difficult to learn and I hope what I have said is helpful for you.

18、To begin withOf courseIn factThenYour turn to go for it!（check）123Who is the most important in our life?（一）內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：1Jack的想法(3分)2個(gè)人的想法（至少三個(gè)想法）。(3分)（二）各檔次的給分范圍和要求：第五檔（很好）：（1513分）完全完成試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。 信息全。語言可讀性強(qiáng)，試題結(jié)構(gòu)基本正確，有少量錯(cuò)誤。第四檔（好）：（1210分）完全完成試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。 有主要信息。語言基本正確，有一些錯(cuò)誤。第三檔（還好）：（97分）基本完成試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。 有主要信息。語言尚可讀，有一些錯(cuò)

19、誤，但尚能達(dá)意。第二檔（較差）：（64分）未能恰當(dāng)完成試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。 信息不全。只有個(gè)別句子可讀，語言錯(cuò)誤較多，且不能達(dá)意。第一檔（差）：（31分）未能完成試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。能表達(dá)有關(guān)信息。只有幾個(gè)有關(guān)單詞，語言錯(cuò)誤很多，不能達(dá)意。問題1. 時(shí)態(tài)2. people/person3. 三單4. 連詞：but，because，for5. 中文式的表達(dá)：give me life, I cant leave my mother, My mother cooks breakfast and dinner everyday. 6. 介詞：about Jacl7. can takes8. Its help

20、me a lot9. face the difficult10. 正能量 girlfriend?11. My classmate Jack, his ideas: 12. 代詞；介詞 took he to parks on he free times, him takes Jack to parks and play chess together13. Thats make Jack happy.14. Sometimes in difficult. His grandfather teachs he to make his own 15. 詞性。When I after school16.

21、結(jié)尾畫蛇添足：We have own people who is the most important and we love them forever.Thats allThats why he thinks that.17. But I think my father is the most important for me. Although my grandfather is kind for me.18. Finally, he can play many thinks with me. So I very love he.19. It is no doubt that mom gi

22、ve birth to me.20. When I am success and happy21. that的用法：His grandfather loves Jack very much that often takes Jack to parks.She always cheers me up and encourages that helped me learn and get over difficulties.22. May be most people will think of their parents, but our Jacks idea is his grandfathe

23、r23. I know he only wants me the best.24. I hope he can alive until 100-year-old.Who is the most important in our life?Recently we have a discussion about who is the most important in our life. Jack thinks his grandfather is the most important in his life. His grandfather takes him to the park on we

24、ekends. He thinks it is good for the kid to be close to the nature. Playing chess is Jacks favorite sport. His grandfather always plays chess with him. When Jack is not sure what to do next, his grandfather would tell him to do what he thinks is right. His grandfather teaches him to make decisions f

25、or himself. It helps Jack a lot in his life. In my opinion, my father is the most important in my life. My father doesnt tell me what I should do and what I shouldnt do. He just does what he thinks he should do. From him, I know I should be on time. Its better to get somewhere earlier and not to let

26、 others wait for you. Secondly, be kind to others, think for others and dont bother others. Whats more, Id better do things seriously and carefully. What my father does influences me a lot. I really thank him.How to keep school safer?內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：有關(guān)安全課堂、體育課安全常和教室內(nèi)安全的描述：老師用簡(jiǎn)單易懂的方式傳授安全知識(shí)；學(xué)生要認(rèn)真學(xué)習(xí)逃生知識(shí)；體育課上要先熱身，

27、后飲水；教室內(nèi)不要做淘氣的事，以免引起麻煩和危險(xiǎn)；和同學(xué)相處融洽。（分）自己的建議和理由（分）How to keep school safer?How to keep school safer? There are many activities that we can do. In safety classes, teachers can teach safety in an easy way and students should learn carefully to stay away form danger, such as fire, earthquake etc.When we h

28、ave PE classes, we should always do warming-up activities before sports and drink some water after playing sports. And we arent supposed to do anything naughty to get yourself into trouble. Its important to get well with each other.I think schools should provide us with more emergency practice . May

29、be someday we can use the skills that we learn to save our lives.內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：1、Tina去北京，參觀長城和其他的風(fēng)景，感覺怎樣？ 2、Jim在緊張的學(xué)習(xí)過后，感覺很累，想呆在家里，做些什么事情？3、自己在假期的安排，決定去干什么，原因是什么？4、注意自己的觀點(diǎn)不能與提示的重復(fù)。Recently our class had a discussion about what they would do in the coming summer vacation. Here is the result: Tina is going to

30、Beijing with her friends. She thinks its the capital of China. She wants to see the Great Wall and she often its very wonderful. She also wants to visit many beautiful sights, like the Summer Palace and the Palace Museum. She thinks they will have fun in Beijing. Jim plans to stay at home. After a p

31、eriod of nervous study, it is really tired for him. He plans to have a good rest and help his parents with the housework. He thinks it makes them happy. In my opinions, I plans to make my holiday happy and meaningful. First of all, I am going to read a lot of books and make a good balance between st

32、udy and rest. Secondly, it is necessary to visit my grandparents during my holiday. Besides, I am willing to do some volunteer work in the Old Peoples house. I cant wait now. 英語寫作中流行的十句作文法是由專家總結(jié)一種高分作文方法，考生在經(jīng)過短期訓(xùn)練之后便可較大程度地提高作文成績(jī)。需要指出的是：所謂十句作文并非一定是10句，很多考生的高分作文（80字以下）的句子數(shù)量都在8至10句之間（以句子長短和結(jié)構(gòu)不同而變化）。如按每個(gè)

33、句子平均812個(gè)單詞計(jì)算，用710個(gè)句子便能完成一篇要求在80詞左右的作文。其基本模式為：十句作文法 第二段（正文）主題句擴(kuò)展句（要視內(nèi)容而決定擴(kuò) 展句 的多少）擴(kuò)展句擴(kuò)展句擴(kuò)展句擴(kuò)展句擴(kuò)展句第三段（結(jié)尾）第一段（開頭）主題句擴(kuò)展句 結(jié)尾句 第一段為開頭，包括兩句。第一句為主題句，提出問題并通過問題點(diǎn)明全文主體；第二句為擴(kuò)展句，進(jìn)一步說明和支持主題句。另外，也可將兩句順序倒過來，由第一句說明情況，第二句提出問題。 第二段為正文，共七句。第一句為主題句，提出本段的主體，它應(yīng)與第一段的主體相一致。第二句至第七句為擴(kuò)展句，說明和支持本段的主體。句與句之間要注意運(yùn)用好過渡詞，以使行文流暢。 第三段為結(jié)

34、尾，簡(jiǎn)化為一句，是對(duì)全文的總結(jié)，并說明作者自己的觀點(diǎn)。 三段之間的銜接要靈活運(yùn)用“啟、承、轉(zhuǎn)、合”的過渡手段。根據(jù)下面表格所提供的信息，寫一則通知，告訴你的同學(xué)關(guān)于你們郊游的計(jì)劃。時(shí)間星期日（月日）地點(diǎn)人民公園交通工具坐公共汽車前往出發(fā)時(shí)間早上：到達(dá)公園時(shí)間早上：活動(dòng)安排上午：劃船；游泳；在飯館吃午餐下午：英語角活動(dòng)（English corner activities）；照相返回時(shí)間下午：要求：、詞數(shù)：個(gè)詞左右；題目及文章的 開頭已給出，但不算在詞數(shù)內(nèi)。、表格中所列內(nèi)容必須都用上，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫。 、不要使用真實(shí)姓名及所在學(xué)校名稱， 否則答案作廢。Notice Good morni

35、ng, everyone! Ill tell you a piece of good news. We are planning an outing. _ Good morning, everyone! Now Ill tell you a piece of good news.(主題句) We are planning an outing. (主題句) We are going to the Peoples Park by bus on July 10th, Sunday. (擴(kuò)展句) Well leave at 7:00 a.m. at the school gate and arrive

36、 there at 8:30 a.m. in the morning. (擴(kuò)展句) Then you can go boating and swimming. (擴(kuò)展句) Lets have lunch in a restaurant and join the English corner in the afternoon. (擴(kuò)展句) If you would like to take photos, youd better take a camera. (擴(kuò)展句) The time to return is 4:30 p.m. (擴(kuò)展句) Please get ready for the

37、outing. (擴(kuò)展句) Wish all of us have a good time. (結(jié)尾句) 你叫林海（英文名叫Joe），你的朋友John發(fā)給你的電子郵件中提到了關(guān)于學(xué)校準(zhǔn)備開辦英語學(xué)習(xí)班的消息，你對(duì)此事很感興趣，請(qǐng)給John回一封郵件，詢問有關(guān)英語學(xué)習(xí)班的詳情。郵件的要點(diǎn)如下：1對(duì)英語學(xué)習(xí)班很感興趣。2希望可以練習(xí)英語，結(jié)識(shí)朋友。3問英語學(xué)習(xí)班的上課時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、內(nèi)容以及費(fèi)用。注意：1郵件要通順、連貫。2詞數(shù)80左右，郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，但不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)。3不能在答卷上透露個(gè)人的任何信息（例如具體的學(xué)校和姓名等），否則答案作廢。 Dear John, Thanks very

38、much for the information about the English evening class.(主題句) It sounds very interesting to me. (擴(kuò)展句) You know I want to practise my English and make some new friends. (擴(kuò)展句) I think this English evening class will be helpful to me. (擴(kuò)展句) Could you please tell me a little more about the class? (擴(kuò)展句)

39、 When does it begin and how much does it cost? (擴(kuò)展句) Where will the class be held? (擴(kuò)展句) Also, do you have any more information about what we will do in class? (擴(kuò)展句) Im looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible. (結(jié)尾句) Yours Joe句式1. 關(guān)于人們有不同的觀點(diǎn)。一些人認(rèn)為There are different opinions among peo

40、ple as to _ .Some people suggest that _.2. 現(xiàn)在，它們給我們的日常生活帶來了許多危害。首先，；其次，。更為糟糕的是。Today, _, which have brought a lot of harms in our daily life. First, _ Second,_. What makes things worse is that_.3. 現(xiàn)在，很普遍，許多人喜歡，因?yàn)?，另外（而且）。Nowadays，it is common to _. Many people like _ because _. Besides，_. 4. 任何事物都是有兩

41、面性，也不例外。它既有有利的一面，也有不利的一面。Everything has two sides and _ is not an exception，it has both advantages and disadvantages. 5. 關(guān)于人們的觀點(diǎn)各不相同，一些人認(rèn)為（說），在他們看來， Peoples opinions about _ vary from person to person. Some people say that _.To them,_.6. 根據(jù)圖表/數(shù)字/統(tǒng)計(jì)數(shù)字/表格中的百分比/圖表/條形圖/成形圖可以看出。很顯然，但是為什么呢？According to th

42、e figure/number/statistics/percentages in the /chart/bar graph/line/graph，it can be seen that() while. Obviously，()，but why?7. 過去，人們習(xí)慣.但,今天的情況有很大的不同。 People used to .however , things are quite different today .8.一些人認(rèn)為.另一些人持相反意見。也許雙方的觀點(diǎn)都有一定道理。但是我們必須認(rèn)識(shí)到.Some people think that .Others believe that the

43、opposite is true . There is probably some truth in both sidesBut we must realize that .重點(diǎn)句型1). Its adj for sb to do 做對(duì)某人來說2). so that 如此 以至于 too to do 太 而不能such that 如此 以至于3). notuntil 直到才4).The reason why + 句子 is that + 句子 的原因是5). That is why + 句子 那是的原因6). That is because + 句子 那是因?yàn)?). It is said th

44、at + 句子 據(jù)說It is reported that + 句子 據(jù)報(bào)道8). There is no doubt that + 句子 毫無疑問9). It goes without saying that + 句子 不言而喻，毫無疑問10). There is no need to do沒必要做11). There is no point in doing 做某事毫無意義表示喜歡和感興趣like / love doingenjoy doingbe fond of doing 喜歡做be keen on n/doing 喜歡做prefer to do A rather than do B

45、寧愿做A也不愿做Bbe interested in doing = show/ take great interest in n / doing 感興趣努力做try to do努力做strive to do 努力做try ones best to do= do ones best to do 竭盡全力做make efforts to do = make every effort to do 盡力做do what sb can (do ) to do 盡力做spare no effort to do 不遺余力的做do what / everything sb. can to do 盡某人全力做打

46、算做 / 計(jì)劃做intend / plan to do 打算做be going to do 打算/計(jì)劃做decide to do 決定做determine to do決定做be determined to do決定做make up ones mind to do下定決心做表示想/希望want to do = would like to do 想做hope to do 希望做expect to do 期待著做wish to do 希望做consider doing 考慮做就我的看法；我認(rèn)為In my opinion, = To my mind, .= As far as I am concern

47、ed, = I am of the opinion that .重要性是必要的 It is necessary (for sb.) to do / that 是重要的 It is important/essential (for sb.) to do / that 是適當(dāng)?shù)?It is proper (for sb.) to do / that 是緊急的 It is urgent (for sb.) to do / that 只加doing 作賓語的動(dòng)詞finish 完成/ practice 練習(xí) / suggest建議 / consider 考慮 / mind 介意 / enjoy 喜歡do

48、inglook forward to doing 盼望做keep on doing 堅(jiān)持做dream of doing 夢(mèng)想做cant help doing 情不自禁地做keep / stop / prevent sb. from doing 阻止某人做be busy (in ) doing be busy with + 名詞 忙于做spend time / money (in )doing spend time / money on + 名詞 花費(fèi)時(shí)間做have fun / have a good time / enjoy oneself doing 玩得開心have trouble / h

49、ave problem / have difficulty (in) doing 或 with + 名詞 做有困難 Should parents stop pushing their children from activity to activity?Nowadays some parents stop pushing their children from activity to activity, but some dont. They think it can strengthen what is learnt in class. And they believe it can hel

50、p them learn more, which is good for their future. After all, knowledge is life.However, I dont think so. On the one hand, we students need organized activities. On the other hand, we are under too much pressure, so we need time and freedom to relax ourselves. Also, we need time to do things by ours

51、elves.So, I think parents should give us a bit more time to ourselvesNowadays some parents stop pushing their children from activity to activity, but some dont. Parents consider after-school classes as good ways to improve exam scores for kids. First of all, they think activities can strength what i

52、s learnt in class.Students can have a better understanding of knowledge through that way. Whats more, activities are good for childrens future. Besides, activities have an influence on our study. We can learn a lot from that. It makes us have more chances and opportunity to learn more knowledge.Howe

53、ver, I have ideas different from parents. In my opinion, going to activities also have a side-effect. First of all, it costs a lot of money and time. It takes up most of our spare time. Activities also make me feel stressed out. We already have big pressure from school, Its harmful for us to have mo

54、re classes. The most important side-effect s that I have less time do things I like. We should relax ourselves so that we can have more energy for better studying. Were supposed to take up our own hobbies and have fun from it. I think a happy childhood is more important that scores.Nowadays some par

55、ents stop pushing their children from activity to activity, but some dont.Most of the parents think its important for children to strength what is learnt in class. Others think its good for their future, because if you enter a good university, then you will find a good job. Learning a lot can help c

56、hildren, as well. The more you learn, the more knowledgable you will be.In my opinion, being free is the one of the important things for children, and they shouldnt be pushed too much pressure. We are supposed to make our own decisions, were not children any more. As the saying goes, hobby is the be

57、st teacher. Let the children do the everything they want to do may be a right thing.Nowadays some parents stop pushing their children from activity to activity, but some dont. They think it can help children strength what is learnt in class. Also children listen in class unclearly, the after-school

58、class will help them learn what they lost. Parents think activity to activity can help their kids learn a lot, and it is good for their kids future.Here is my opinions. Students dont have to have after-school class to strength what their learned. If they can take notes in class or liten more clearly

59、 in class, they can also learn well. Haveing after-school class is wasting their time. but after-school class can let students learn a lot new knowledge.After-school class doesnt have too much text. and students can learn fun in there.Writing for Model Test 11We have grown up and its time for us to

60、do something for our family and society. At home we can help parents do housework, let our parents have a rest. And we should talk with them more， such as sharing happy things or problem. It helps us be closer with our parents.In the society, we shouldnt throw rubbish everywhere. It makes environmen