2020年福建英語中考作文指導(dǎo)話題9-天氣;旅游與交通

1、2020年福建英語中考作文指導(dǎo)話題9-天氣;旅游與交通2020年福建英語中考作文指導(dǎo)話題9-天氣;旅游與交通話題思維導(dǎo)圖話題思維導(dǎo)圖話題思維導(dǎo)圖話題思維導(dǎo)圖命題探索分析福建近7年中考書面表達(dá)可知，未考查與“天氣；旅游與交通”相關(guān)的書面表達(dá)。再結(jié)合全國近年真題可知，該話題通常有以下命題角度：介紹某次旅行；談?wù)撀眯械母惺?；對某次旅行的看法及建議。命題探索分析福建近7年中考書面表達(dá)可知，未考查與“天氣；旅典例剖析 (2019婁底改編)“讀萬卷書，行萬里路”，研學(xué)旅行現(xiàn)在受到教育主管部門和學(xué)校的高度重視，也深受學(xué)生和家長的歡迎。假如你們學(xué)校的英文網(wǎng)站就研學(xué)旅行中需要注意的事項發(fā)帖，征集建議。請你根據(jù)以

2、下要點寫一篇英語短文，進(jìn)行跟帖回復(fù)。詞數(shù)80左右。 一階 審好題二階寫好句三階練語段&成篇章審主題：研學(xué)旅行的注意事項審時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時審文體：說明文審人稱：第一人稱典例剖析 (2019婁底改編)“讀萬卷書，行萬里路”，內(nèi)容要點：1. 健康飲食；2. 安全出行；3. 遇險報警。參考詞匯：報警 call the police注意事項：1. 跟帖回復(fù)時可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；2. 意思清楚，表達(dá)通順，行文連貫，書寫規(guī)范；3. 請勿在文中使用真實的姓名、校名及地名。一階 審好題二階寫好句三階練語段&成篇章內(nèi)容要點：一二 Now study trips are becoming more

3、 and more popular with parents and students. What should we pay attention to when were having a study trip? Heres my advice._一階 審好題二階寫好句三階練語段&成篇章 Now study trips are becomi1角度介紹某次旅行句式擴(kuò)寫范例 1. The weather here is cool and cloudy.The weather here is cool and cloudy, just right for walking.2. Today I we

4、nt on a school trip.Today I went on a school trip. We visited the Science Museum and it was really interesting.一階 審好題二階寫好句三階練語段&成篇章1角度介紹某次旅行句式擴(kuò)寫范例 1. The weath句 子 擴(kuò) 寫 1. I camped in the mountains with some friends.(擴(kuò)寫具體活動)_2. We took the train to the museum. (擴(kuò)寫感受)_I camped in the mountains with som

5、e friends. We put up a tent and cooked outside.We took the train to the museum. It was so hot on the slow train.一階 審好題二階寫好句三階練語段&成篇章句 子 擴(kuò) 寫 1. I camped in th3. There were too many people in the park.(擴(kuò)寫結(jié)果)_There were too many people in the park. I couldnt really see or hear the guide.一階 審好題二階寫好句三階練語

6、段&成篇章3. There were too many people 2角度旅行的感受好句范例3. I think todays school trip was exciting. I really like it very much.4. My school trip was great! We had so much fun! 5. Its really interesting, isnt it? Its a great way to spend a Saturday afternoon. 6. All in all, it was an exciting day. I will neve

7、r forget that day. 一階 審好題二階寫好句三階練語段&成篇章2角度旅行的感受好句范例3. I think todays句 子 仿 寫 4. 我覺得這個地方值得再次來參觀，因為我們從中學(xué)到了很多。_5. 我們在這次旅行中獲得了太多的樂趣。_I think the place is worth visiting again because we have learnt a lot from it.We got so much fun in this trip.一階 審好題二階寫好句三階練語段&成篇章句 子 仿 寫 4. 我覺得這個地方值得再次來參觀6. 總之，這次旅行對我來說很難

8、忘。讓我懂得了如何與他人友好相處。_All in all, this trip is unforgettable for me. It taught me how to get along well with others.一階 審好題二階寫好句三階練語段&成篇章6. 總之，這次旅行對我來說很難忘。讓我懂得了如何與他人友好3角度對某種旅行的看法及建議好句范例7. In my opinion/In my view/As far as I am concerned/As for me, it is good for students.8. To begin with/Firstly/First,

9、travelling can make us relax.9. Last but not least, we can know more custom and culture.10. We should pay attention to the safety.11. To be honest, school trips give us a good chance that we can get along well with our classmates.一階 審好題二階寫好句三階練語段&成篇章3角度對某種旅行的看法及建議好句范例7. In my opi句 子 仿 寫 7. 在我看來，參加研學(xué)

10、旅行是一種很好的教育活動。_8. 首先，多鍛煉、充足的睡眠可以使我們旅行愉快。_In my opinion, taking part in study trips is a kind of very good education activity.To begin with, taking more exercise and getting enough sleep can make the trip pleasant.一階 審好題二階寫好句三階練語段&成篇章句 子 仿 寫 7. 在我看來，參加研學(xué)旅行是一種9. 最后，但同樣重要的是我們可以找老師或者朋友們尋求幫助。_10. 說實話，你可以乘

11、高鐵去北京而不是坐大巴車。_Last but not least, we can ask teachers or friends for help.To be honest, you can take a highspeed train to Beijing instead of taking a bus.一階 審好題二階寫好句三階練語段&成篇章9. 最后，但同樣重要的是我們可以找老師或者朋友們尋求幫助。一階 審好題三階練語段&成篇章二階寫好句練語段語 段 練 習(xí) 1介紹某次旅行 We will organize a trip to _(目的地). Im really very happy b

12、ecause _(理由). In the morning, we will _(活動1). In the afternoon, we will _(活動2). Im sure we will _(感受)the nearby villagethis is my first time to go therefeed animalslearn to cook mealshave a good time一二練語段語 段 練 習(xí) 1介紹某次旅行 We 一階 審好題三階練語段&成篇章二階寫好句語 段 練 習(xí) 2旅行的感受 Last week, our class organized a trip to t

13、he Science Museum. We saw _(經(jīng)歷1) there. The guide also told us _(經(jīng)歷2). We all _(感受1). All in all, we thought the trip was _(感受2)great inventionsthe development of some inventionsfelt excited when we saw those great inventionsan unforgettable experience一二語 段 練 習(xí) 2旅行的感受 Last we一階 審好題三階練語段&成篇章二階寫好句語 段

14、練 習(xí) 3對某種旅行的看法及建議 First, we should _(建議). Drink clean hot water. _(原因). Second, we should pay attention to the safety. We should _(具體做法1). At last, when we have some trouble in life or our study, we can _(具體做法2)take more exercise and get enough sleepIt is good for our healthtake the safe taxi or car

15、when we go outask our teachers or friends for help一二語 段 練 習(xí) 3對某種旅行的看法及建議 F一階 審好題三階練語段&成篇章二階寫好句成篇章（針對“典例剖析”的優(yōu)秀范文） Now study trips are becoming more and more popular with parents and students. What should we pay attention to when were having a study trip? Heres my advice. First, we should take more ex

16、ercise and get enough sleep. Drink clean hot water. It is good for our health. Second, we should pay attention to the safety. We should take the safe taxi or car when we 一二成篇章（針對“典例剖析”的優(yōu)秀范文） Now st一階 審好題三階練語段&成篇章二階寫好句go out. When we meet something strange or find someone in danger, please call the p

17、olice at once. At last, when we have some trouble in life or our study, we can ask our teachers or friends for help. I hope we will have a wonderful trip.一二go out. When we meet somethi寫作練兵寫作練兵 假如你是李華，是一名九年級的學(xué)生。你的一個美國筆友Tom七月底要來你所在的城市游學(xué)，需要你提供一些相關(guān)信息。請你根據(jù)圖表提示，用英語給他寫一封電子郵件。詞數(shù)80左右。寫作練兵寫作練兵 假如你是李華，是一名九年級的學(xué)生。你寫作練兵寫作練兵注意事項：1. 必須包含所提示的信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；2. 意思清楚，表達(dá)通順，行文連貫，書寫規(guī)范；3. 請勿在文中使用真實的姓名、校名及提示信息以外的地名；寫作練兵寫作練兵注意事項：寫作練兵寫作練兵 Im glad that I can help you with some information. The temperature will be around 30. It will be totally sunny at the end of July, and