人教版中考英語作文指導與復習-話題2-優(yōu)秀品質課件

1、話題2 優(yōu)秀品質1命題探索2教材鏈接3佳句儲備4三階攻關5寫作練兵話題2 優(yōu)秀品質1命題探索2教材鏈接3佳句儲備4三階攻關5命題探索 分析河北近10年中考真題的書面表達可知，針對“優(yōu)秀品質”這一話題，考查角度有：感恩：2019年以“什么時候說感謝”為題分別談談在家和在學校什么時候說感謝；個人行為規(guī)范：2018年以圖片中男孩和女士的對話談談當看到別人隨地扔垃圾時，自己該怎么做。 全國關于這個話題相關的命題角度還有：自律、誠信、獨立等。命題探索 分析河北近10年中考真題的書面表達可知，針教材鏈接人教教材中涉及“優(yōu)秀品質”這個話題的單元具體如下（可參考對應教材單元記背優(yōu)秀文段）：教材鏈接人教教材中涉

2、及“優(yōu)秀品質”這個話題的單元具體如下（佳句儲備1角度感恩(Gratitude)【好句范例】1. Thank you very much for giving me life and bringing me up.2. Its very kind of you to give me a hand on my homework. 3. Whenever I have difficulties, you always cheer me up.佳句儲備1角度感恩(Gratitude)【好句范例】【句子仿寫】1. 非常感謝你在我處于困境的時候幫助我。_2. 你給了我這么多有用的建議，你真是太善良了。 _

3、3. 不論什么時候我需要支持，你總是站在我身后。 _Thank you very much for helping me when I was in trouble.Its very kind of you to give me so much useful advice.Whenever I need support, you always stand behind me.【句子仿寫】Thank you very much for 2角度行為規(guī)范(Code of conduct)【好句范例】4. Dont be late for class. You must be on time. 人教七

4、(下)Unit 4 P195. Remember not to throw rubbish here and there.6. Such bad manners like wasting food should be removed from our school.2角度行為規(guī)范(Code of conduct)【好句范例】【句子仿寫】4. 不要對別人撒謊。你必須做一個誠實的人。_5. 記住不要在公共場合大聲喧嘩。 _6.像抽煙、打架這些壞行為是堅決不允許做的。_Dont lie to others. You must be an honest person.Remember not to s

5、peak loudly in public places.Such bad manners like smoking and fighting mustnt be allowed to do.【句子仿寫】Dont lie to others. You3角度自律(Selfdiscipline)【句子升格范例】 7. Selfdiscipline is very important in our life. Selfdiscipline plays an important role in our life. 8. I developed the habit of going to bed ear

6、ly and getting up early. My family helped me a lot. With the help of my family, I developed the habit of going to bed early and getting up early.3角度自律(Selfdiscipline)【句子升格范例】9. Selfdiscipline brings you a healthier life. Selfdiscipline brings you a happier life.Selfdiscipline brings you not only a h

7、ealthier life, but also a happier life.9. Selfdiscipline brings you 【句子升格】7. Managing my free time well is very important in my life. (用play an important role升格)_8. I became selfdisciplined a lot. My friend helped me a lot. (用 with the help of升格) _9.Doing exercise helps me to be energetic. Doing exe

8、rcise helps me to be confident. (用not only.but also.升格)_Managing my free time well plays an important role in my life.With the help of my friend, I became selfdisciplined a lot.Doing exercise helps me not only be energetic, but also be confident.【句子升格】Managing my free time we4角度誠信(Honesty)【好句范例】10.

9、Being honest can help you make more friends.11. No matter what happens, you are supposed to be an honest man.12. Its important to be honest in the exam as students.13. As for students, honesty is the basic rule that should be followed.4角度誠信(Honesty)【好句范例】【句子仿寫】10. 誠實能夠幫你贏得他人的信任。_11. 任何時候你都應該遵守你的承諾。

10、_12.告訴老師實情是很有必要的。_Being honest/Honesty can help you win the trust of others.You are supposed to keep your promise at any time. Its necessary to tell the truth to the teacher.【句子仿寫】Being honest/Honesty can5角度獨立(Independence)【好句范例】14. I want you to get into the habit of doing your homework as soon as

11、you come home from school. 外研九(全)Module 6 P4215. Only by trying to solve problems by ourselves can we become independent people.16. The earlier children learn to be independent, the better it is for their future.5角度獨立(Independence)【好句范例】【句子仿寫】13. 我想讓你養(yǎng)成自己做決定的習慣。_14. 只有你自己第一次獨立完成一項任務，你才會有成就感。 _15.你越獨

12、立，你的選擇就會越多。_I want you to get into the habit of making decisions by yourself.Only by finishing a task by yourself for the first time can you have a sense of achievement.The more independent you are, the more choices you will have.【句子仿寫】I want you to get into t三階攻關一階 審好題 定方向(2019河北)文明禮貌從我做起，從現(xiàn)在做起，從點滴

13、小事做起。請根據下面的提示和要求，以“When to Say Thank You”為題，寫一篇短文。定主題：標題為“什么時候說感謝”定文體：說明文三階攻關一階 審好題 定方向(2019河北)文明禮貌從我提示： (1)When should we say “thank you” at home? (2)When are we supposed to say “thank you” at school? (3).定要點1：在家什么時候說感謝定人稱：第一人稱定時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時定要點2：在學校什么時候說感謝定人稱：第一人稱定時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時定要點3：補充要點(參考角度：在圖書館、在操場等)定人稱：第一

14、人稱定時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時提示： (1)When should we say “tha要求： (1)短文須包括提示中的兩個要點和一個補充要點， 可適當發(fā)揮。 (2)短文中不要出現(xiàn)真實的地名、校名和人名。 (3)詞數80個左右。(開頭已給出，不計入總詞數)參考詞匯： wash, encourage, open要求： (1)短文須包括提示中的兩個要點和一個補充要點， When to Say Thank YouIts polite to say “thank you” when others help us or say something kind to us._ When to Say Thank

15、You開篇：引出話題(已給出)正文：分別陳述在家、在學校以及其他需要說感謝的情況說謝謝的原因 ( polite)列框架列要點要點擴句(注意時態(tài))句子提升Its polite to say “thank you” when others help us or say something kind to us.1. 在家什么情況下應該說謝謝(at home）Mom or Dad washes the clothes. We should say “thank you” to them.We should say “thank you” to them when Mom or Dad washes

16、the clothes, cleans the room, cooks for us.我來寫：_ 二階 謀布局 寫好句開篇：引出話題(已給出)正文：分別陳述在家、在學校以及其他需正文：分別陳述在家、在學校以及其他需要說感謝的情況2. 在學校什么情況下應該說謝謝 (at school)When someone lends us a pen, please say “thank you” to him.When someone lends us a pen or hands us something, its nice to say “thank you”我來寫：_ We should say “

17、thank you” to our teacher. If a teacher says “well done” to encourage us, we are supposed to say “thank you”.我來寫：_ 列框架列要點要點擴句(注意時態(tài))句子提升正文：分別陳述在家、在學校以及其他需要說感謝的情況2. 在學正文：分別陳述在家、在學校以及其他需要說感謝的情況3.其他說感謝的情況Say “thank you” if someone holds the door open for us.Whenever someone holds the door open for us, w

18、e should say “thank you” to express our thanks.我來寫：_ 記得說感謝（thank you）We need to be polite and remember to say “thank you”Be polite and always remember to say “thank you”我來寫：_ 結尾：重申主題列框架列要點要點擴句(注意時態(tài))句子提升正文：分別陳述在家、在學校以及其他需要說感謝的情況3.其他說三階 巧銜接 成篇章【高分范文】 三階 巧銜接 成篇章【高分范文】 寫作練兵萬唯原創(chuàng) 隨著年齡的增長，我們都想成為獨立的、負責任的青少年

19、。請根據下面的提示和要求，以“Being an Independent Teenager”為題寫一篇英語短文。提示：(1)Why do you need to be an independent teenager? (2)How to be an independent teenager? (3)What are the influences of being an independent teenager?寫作練兵萬唯原創(chuàng) 隨著年齡的增長，我們都想成為獨立的、負責要求：(1)短文須包括所有提示內容，可適當發(fā)揮。 (2)短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的地名、校名和人名。 (3)詞數：80個左右。(開頭已給出，不計入總詞數)參考詞匯：responsible(負責任的)要求：(1)短文須包括所有提示內容，可適當發(fā)揮。Being an Independent TeenagerIts nec