高一英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫微技能之細(xì)節(jié)描寫-(共14張)課件

1、Continuation WritingMicro Skills1212“To show”細(xì)節(jié)描寫(1)22“To show”細(xì)節(jié)描寫(1)22A Slogan“Show Dont Tell”必殺技32022/10/2A Slogan“Show必殺技32022/9/28VSTo tellTo show概括描寫細(xì)節(jié)描寫To show: to write with more sensory(感官的) details, allowing your readers to hear, see, taste, touch and smell the same things your characters

2、are experiencing.42022/10/2VSTo tellTo show概括描寫細(xì)節(jié)描寫To shoexample1To tell:To show:My mother was hopeful.My mothers eyes were sparkling with hope.sparkle: v. reflect brightly 發(fā)光；閃光寫作建議： 心理描寫要抓住眼睛， 嘴， 手， 腳等身體部位具體描述，會(huì)更加傳神。52022/10/2example1To tell:To show:My motexample2To tell:To show:Mira is lovely and

3、 beautiful. To Miravery gently,she walked near,with breeze kissing her hair,I saw a figure like a lily,lovely and fair,with fragrance filling the air.亮點(diǎn)：1.詞匯： v; adj 及 adv. 運(yùn)用Life is like chocolate. You never know what youre gonna get-Forrest Gump寫作建議： 外貌描寫要抓住人物主要特征如眼神；頭發(fā)；走路姿態(tài)等詳細(xì)刻畫，運(yùn)用動(dòng)詞，形容詞和副詞及高級(jí)句式，

4、采用擬人，比喻，夸張等修辭，會(huì)更加立體。2.語(yǔ)言結(jié)構(gòu)：with+ n.+-ing3.修辭運(yùn)用：personification(擬人)比喻（Simile明喻和Metaphor 暗喻）62022/10/2example2To tell:To show:Mira iexample3To tell:To show:It was raining hard.Thunders roaring and icy biting rain violently beating against the windows, I could barely hear any voice.Christopher was nowh

5、ere to be found. roar: v/n. 咆哮；轟隆 the roar of the trafficbiting: a. 刺骨的the biting wind72022/10/2example3To tell:To show:It was高級(jí)寫作句式(2)advanced sentence pattens82高級(jí)寫作句式(2)82To tell:To show:He felt very tiredTomfall asleephave a deep sleepsleep soundlyin Mothers armshead on the shoulderwith in a few

6、secondsharpen your eyes92022/10/2To tell:To show:He felt very tsharpen your eyesTom _(get) tired, _(lie) in Mothers arms and_(fall) asleep.gotlie v. 撒謊 lied; lied v. 躺著 lay; lainlayfall- fell- fallenfellTom 感到很累（exhausted）, 就在媽媽懷里睡著了，小腦袋靠在媽媽的肩膀上。Tom felt exhausted and slept in Mothers arms,with his

7、head on her shoulder.1.寫作高級(jí)句式：連續(xù)動(dòng)做描寫寫作建議： 動(dòng)作描寫可以表現(xiàn)人物性格特征， 反應(yīng)其心理活動(dòng)，推動(dòng)故事情節(jié)。要選擇特定的場(chǎng)景，抓住人物特定的動(dòng)作反應(yīng)，采用活躍具體動(dòng)詞搭配高級(jí)句式，細(xì)致描寫更具畫面感。102022/10/2sharpen your eyesTom _(sharpen your eyesTom felt sothatTom felt so exhausted that he lay in his mothers arms, sleeping soundly.so exhausted did Tom feel that he lay in Mo

8、thers arms, sleeping soundly.2.寫作高級(jí)句式： so+adj./adv.+ be動(dòng)詞or 助動(dòng)詞+主語(yǔ)+that112022/10/2sharpen your eyesTom felt sotTo show:3.寫作高級(jí)句式：非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞作狀語(yǔ)“-ing/-ed/to do”Feeling hungry and exhausted (感到又餓又累)，Tom lay in his mothers arms and fell asleep.4.寫作高級(jí)句式：雙形容詞作狀語(yǔ) safe and sound; cold and wet; depressed and worri

9、ed ; delighted and shockedHungry and exhausted ，Tom threw himself into Mothers arms and fell into a deep sleep in a few seconds.122022/10/2To show:3.寫作高級(jí)句式：非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞作狀語(yǔ)“-ingsummary1. 三連動(dòng)（verb1+verb2+ and +verb3）2. 主句+ with 復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)3. so +adj/adv.+倒裝句4.非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞ing/-ed/to do 做狀語(yǔ)132022/10/2summary1. 三連動(dòng)（verb1+verb2+ and“淅瀝瀝，淅瀝瀝”又是綿綿細(xì)雨的一天。雨就像一個(gè)頑皮