2023屆上海市培佳雙語學(xué)校高考沖刺押題（最后一卷）英語試卷含解析

2023高考英語模擬試卷注意事項(xiàng):1．答題前，考生先將自己的姓名、準(zhǔn)考證號碼填寫清楚，將條形碼準(zhǔn)確粘貼在條形碼區(qū)域內(nèi)。2．答題時請按要求用筆。3．請按照題號順序在答題卡各題目的答題區(qū)域內(nèi)作答，超出答題區(qū)域書寫的答案無效；在草稿紙、試卷上答題無效。4．作圖可先使用鉛筆畫出，確定后必須用黑色字跡的簽字筆描黑。5．保持卡面清潔，不要折暴、不要弄破、弄皺，不準(zhǔn)使用涂改液、修正帶、刮紙刀。第一部分（共20小題，每小題1.5分，滿分30分）1．Thedifferencesthechildren’sachievementscannotbecompletelyexplained________theirsocialbackgrounds.A．infrontof B．incaseofC．inneedof D．inchargeof2．Herdoctorindicatedthatevenaddinga(n)_____amountofdailyexercisewoulddramaticallyimproveherhealth.A．modestB．equalC．considerableD．exact3．Theteacherspokesofastthatitwashardforthestudentsto______whathewassaying.A．takein B．takeoff C．takeon D．takeafter4．Ifoundmycomputerfunctioningmuchbetter,________anewoperatingsystem.A．toinstall B．installingC．havinginstalled D．installed5．TheladystandingovertheremaybefromtheUSA,_____Iguesshaslostherway.A．whom B．whoC．which D．where6．I_________tohelpyoutodohomeworkbutIcouldn'tspareanytime.I________acompositionlastnightandI'llfinishittomorrow.A．wanted；wrote B．hadwanted；waswritingC．hadwanted；wrote D．wanted；havebeenwriting7．Webelieve________youhavebeendevotedto________naturallyofgreatnecessity.A．that;being B．a(chǎn)llthat;beC．thatall;are D．what;is8．Thetwobrotherslooksomuchalikethatitisdifficultto______.A．tellthemfrom B．tellfromthemC．tellapartthem D．tellthemapart9．Competedin1891,in________wasknownasTheGildedAge,thefive-storymansionisnowownedbyafamousactorwhodecidestostageaspecialproductionofShakespeare'sHamlet.A．that B．what C．which D．it10．Isitheoryou________inchargeofthejobandsupposedtocompleteitpunctually?A．whois B．thatisC．whoare D．whomare11．ThankstoChinesepeople’shardworkandwisdom,Chinahas_____intothesecondlargesteconomy.A．evolved B．slipped C．extended D．shaped12．Evenasmallpersonalcomputerstorevastamountsofinformation.A．might B．canC．oughtto D．hasto13．InthelibraryyoucanuseyourowncomputertoconnecttoWi-Fispecially_____forreaders.A．preparing B．toprepareC．prepared D．prepare14．________yourblog,Iwouldhavewrittenbacktwodaysago.A．IfIread B．ShouldIreadC．HadIread D．IfIcouldhaveread15．Mr.Zhanggavealltextbookstoallthepupils,except____________whohadalreadytakenthem.A．theseB．onesC．thoseD．theothers16．Someanalystssuspectedthattherebellionwas_______andfinancedbyawesterncountry.A．launchedB．backedC．evaluatedD．crushed17．--Theweatheristoocold___Marchthisyear.--Itwasstill___whenIcamehereyearsago.A．for;colder B．in;coldC．in;hot D．for;hotter18．—Steve,thevacationiscomingsoon．Haveyoufoundasummerjobyet？—IsupposeIcanworkattheboy’scamp_____Iworkedlastsummer．A．that B．where C．which D．what19．Duringthe2008financialcrisis，theFrenchpresidentNicolasSarkozyagreedtoprovidemillionsofemergencyfundaidtohelpunemployment．A．release B．resemble C．relieve D．recommend20．Janeestablishedaprogram,____youngpeopletotakepartinactivities____promotegreaterconcernfortheenvironment．A．toencourage;where B．havingencouraged;whereC．encouraging;that D．encouraged;which第二部分閱讀理解（滿分40分）閱讀下列短文，從每題所給的A、B、C、D四個選項(xiàng)中，選出最佳選項(xiàng)。21．（6分）Yasudais95yearsold.LookingforeasierwaystosearchtheWebandsendemail,heboughtApple’siPad.Thecompanyhassold3.27millioniPadssincetheyenteredthemarketinApril.Althoughit’simpossibletoknowwithcertaintyhowmanyseniors(老年人)arebuyingthem,evidencesuggeststhatit’sahitwithseniors.TheiPad’sintuitiveinterface(直觀界面)makesitattractivetoseniorsaroundtheworld,saysTakahiroMiura,aresearcherattheUniversityofTokyou.“TheiPadisagoodtoolforseniorsbecauseit’sveryeasytouse,”hesays.UnlikethePC,itdoesn’trequireformerknowledge.”JamesCordwell,aresearcherinLondon,saystheiPad’spopularitywithseniorsishelpingApplereachbeyonditstraditionalbaseofyoungcustomers.“Theworld’spopulation,especiallyindevelopedmarkets,isgettingolder.It’sprobablyamarketwhereApplehasleastentered,”Cordwellsays.Seniorusersareakeysourceofgrowthfortheminthefuture.Seniorsmake.upabout22percentofthepopulationinJapan.TheymayprovethatseniorsarewillingtoaccepttheiPad.Besidesthecustomergroupunder30,theyspendmorethananyothergroupinthecountry,accordingtoareport.MotooKitamura,78,aformergassalesman,boughtaniPadtohelphimcommunicatewithhis2-year-oldgrandsonandpreventhimfromexperiencingsomeofthementalproblemsthatsometimescomewithgettingolder.“Tryingnewthingslikethatisgoodmentalexercise,”hesays.1、Theunderlinedpart“ahit”inParagraph1probablymeans.A．a(chǎn)suddenattackB．a(chǎn)heavyburdenC．veryfamiliarD．quitepopular2、WhichofthefollowingisNOTanadvantageoftheiPad?A．Ithasintuitiveinterface.B．Itiseasytooperate.C．Peoplecanuseitasawaytodomentalexercise.D．Beginnerscanuseitwithoutsimilarexperiences.3、Whatcanwelearnfromthetext?A．ThetraditionalcustomersofApplesproductsareusuallytheyoung.B．PeopleabovethirtyareAppleslargestcustomergroupinJapan.C．SeniorswillsoongrowintoAppleslargestcustomergroup.D．SeniorsinJapanarefondofbuyinglatesthi-techproducts.4、Whatisthetextmainlyabout?A．iPadinfluencingthecustomergroup.B．iPadleadingAppletoseniors.C．iPad’sarrivalcausingJapanesetothink.D．iPadbeatingthetraditionalPC．22．（8分）SupposeyouworkinabigfirmandfindEnglishveryimportantforyourjobbecauseyouoftendealwithforeignbusinessmen.NowyouarelookingforaplacewhereyoucanimproveyourEnglish,especiallyyourspokenEnglish.HerearesomeadvertisementsaboutEnglishlanguagetrainingfromnewspaper.Youmayfindtheinformationyouneed.GlobalEnglishCenter﹡GeneralEnglishinallfourskills:listening,speaking,reading,andwriting.﹡3-month(700yuan),6-month(1,200yuan)andone-year(2,000yuan)courses.﹡Choicesofmorningoreveningclasses,3hoursperday,Mon－Fri.﹡ExperiencedcollegeEnglishteachers.﹡Closetocitycenterandbusstops.Tel:67705272Add:105AhongshanRoad,2082ModernLanguageSchool﹡SpecialcoursesinEnglishforbusiness,travel,banking,hotelmanagementandofficeskills.﹡Smallclasses(12-16students)onSat.&Sun.from2:00－5:00p.m.﹡NativeEnglishteachersfromCanadaandtheUSA．﹡Languagelabandcomputerssupplied.﹡3-monthcourse:1,050yuan;6-monthcourse:1,850yuan.Writeorphone:ModernLanguageSchool,675ParkRoad.2056Tel:67353019The21stCenturyEnglishTrainingCentre﹡Wespecializeineffectiveteachingatalllevels.﹡Weoffermorningorafternoonclass,boththreemonthsandahalfatacostof800yuan.﹡Wealsohaveasix-weekTOEFLpreparationclassduringwinterandsummerholidays.﹡Entranceexams:June.1andDec.1﹡Only15-minutewalkfromcitycentre.Call67801642formoreinformationTheInternationalHouseofEnglish﹡Three/Six-monthEnglishcoursesforstudentsofalllevelsataverylowcost:60yuanfor12hoursperweek:convenientclasshours:9:00－12:00a.m.and2:00－5:00p.m.﹡A4-montheveningprogrammespeciallyfordevelopingspeakingskills(samecostasdayclasses).﹡Freesightseeingandsocialactivities﹡VeryclosetotheCentralPark.Forfurtherinformationcall674323081、Youworkfrom9:00a.m.to4:30p.m.everyday.Whichschoolwillyouchoose?A．GlobalEnglishCenterandModernLanguageSchool.B．GlobalEnglishCenterandtheInternationalHouse.C．ModernLanguageSchoolandthe21stCentury.D．The21stCenturyandtheInternationalHouse.2、The21stCenturyisdifferentfromtheotherthreeschoolsinthat______.A．itsteachingqualityisbetter B．itisnearesttothecitycentreC．itscoursesaremoreadvanced D．itrequiresanentranceexamination3、YouwillprobablyprefertogototheInternationalHousebecauseit_________.A．offersfreesightseeingandsocialactivitiesB．hasaspecialcourseinspokenEnglishC．costslessthantheotherschoolsD．hasnativeEnglishteachers4、IfyoutaketheeveningprogrammeattheInternationalHouse,youwillpayabout_______.A．60yuan B．240yuan C．720yuan D．960yuan23．（8分）Saturday，22April,2017Wearecurrentlyonacamp-sitenearCalais,onourwaytotheUK,anditispouringwithrain.AsifgodswanttoprepareusfortheUKatallcosts.Asifwedon'tknowwhatrainis...Ourferrytothegreenisleswillleavetomorrowat10.30anddespitetherain,Iamreallylookingforwardtoit.Ithastakenusawhiletogethere,aswealreadyleftElChorroon4April.AfterrushingthroughSpainintwodays,however,wecametoaninevitableslow-downwhenweenteredFrance.Inevitable,asFrancehassimplytoomuchtoofferforus.SoassoonaswecrossedthePyrenees,ourdrivingsequencebecamesomethinglikedrivingafewkilometres,visitingacastle,drivingafewkilometres,takingpicturesofanicechurch,drivingafewkilometres,havingaquickpeekatafleasmarket,drivingafewkilometres,visitingamuseumetc.WhenweenteredBrittanytherealsightseeingstarted,inVannes,inLorient,inBrestandthenontoNormandy:LeMontStMichel,Bayeuxandfinally,finallytheD-Daybeaches.Ialwayswantedtovisitthese,forobviousreasonsIwouldsay,butmyfather,realisticashewas,calculatedthechancesthatitwouldrainaconsiderableamountofdaysofathree-weekholidayandalwaysdecidedagainstit.ButafewdaysagoIfinallysteppedontoGoldBeach(wheretheBritslanded)andIwasgreetedbytheNormansun.Abeautifulday.1、Itwas_____whenthewriterwasonhiswaytotheUK.A．pouringB．foggyC．snowyD．sunny2、Accordingtothepassage,thePyreneesmustbeaplacein_____.A．SpainB．FranceC．NetherlandD．Normandy3、WhichofthefollowingstatementisNOTtrue?A．Theyspent2daysinSpaintraveling.B．ThewriterthoughtFrancehasalotofplacestovisit.C．ThewriterthoughttherealsightseeingwasinE1Chorro,andinBrest.D．Thewriter’sfatherwasarealisticperson.4、Thepassageprobablycomesfrom_______.A．a(chǎn)traveljournalB．a(chǎn)sciencefictionC．a(chǎn)newsreportD．a(chǎn)filmreview24．（8分）TheKids’FarmWhilekidsvisitvegetableplotsandanimalcontactareas,theywilllearnthatmostofthefoodweeateverydaycomesfromfarms,andthattakingcareofanimalstakestime,commitmentandknowledge.Kidscanseeourcows,donkeys,goats,alpacas,pigs,etc.andlearnallaboutlookingafterfarmanimals.AttheCaringCorral,theywillhaveachancetotouchcowsanddonkeys,understaffmembers’supervision.PleaseNote:●Anytimeyoutouchananimal,thereisariskofspreadinggerms(細(xì)菌).VisitorstotheKids’Farmshouldwashtheirhandsaftertouchingtheanimals.●TheCaringCorralisopenonlywhenthestaffareavailable;hoursarelimited.●TheKids’Farmusespizzatoteachkidshowmanykindsoffoodgrow.Hands-onexhibitsshowhowpizzaingredientsgofromthefarmtothepizza.ThePizzaGardenhasslice-shapedplotsofgrowingingredients,includingtomatoes,wheatandherbs.●The22-foot-wideGiantPizzagiveskidsaplacetoplaywithoversizedtoppingsandeachother.●Duringthebusierseason(beginninginJune),afreeshuttlepicksupvisitorsinneedofaliftattheKids’FarmanddropsthemoffatthePandaPlaza/theBusLotfrom11a.m.to6p.m.1、WhatdovisitorsneedtodobeforevisitingtheCaringCorral?A．Washtheirhands. B．Makeareservation.C．Checkonitsopeningtime. D．Readtheinstructionsonsafety.2、Wherecankidsplaywithoversizedtoppingsandeachother?A．AtthePandaPlaza. B．AttheBusLot.C．AtthePizzaGarden. D．AttheGiantPizza.3、Whydoestheauthorwritethispassage?A．ToprovideinformationaboutvisitingtheKids’Farm.B．Toshowkidshowpizzaandfarmsareconnected.C．Toencouragekidstoprotectplantsandanimals.D．ToseeksponsorsfortheKids’Farm.25．（10分）WelcometoReadingMuseum’sHands–onLearningserviceReadingMuseumhasbeenofferinglearningopportunitiestoschoolsforover100years,andwithyoursupportwehopetocontinuethistraditionforthenext100years.SESSIONSATREADINGMUSEUMVictorianSchoolroomThesessiontakesplaceinasuperbreconstructionofaschoolroominalatenineteenthcenturyBoardSchool.ThechildrenwillexperiencearangeofVictorianstylelessonsanduseslateboardsanddippens.ThesessionleaderplaystheroleofaVictorianteacherbutwillcomeoutoftheroleduringthesessionthereassurethechildren.Wesupplycostumeforallchildren.VictorianToysOurVictoriannannydeliversthisinterestingsession.Thenannywillhelpchildrentoexplorethedifferencesbetweenrichandpoorchildren’stoysfromthepast.Duringthesessionthechildrenhavetheopportunitytomakeatoytotakehome.VictorianChristmasInaspeciallydecoratedroomthechildrenwillfindouthowtheVictoriansintroducedmanyofourChristmascustoms.Theywillmakeasimplecardorpresenttotakehomeandtakepartinaminipantomime.HOWTOBOOKANEDUCATIONALVISITForuptodatepricesandsessiondetails,pleasevisitourwebsite.uk/schools/sessions/Forallsessionbookingspleasephoneuson01189373400.Weaskthatyoubookatleast4weeksinadvance.Pleasebereadytotelluswhenyouwishtocome,thesession(s)youwishtobookandtheyeargroupofpupils.Oursessionstakeplacebetween10:00and12:00or12:30and14:30.Themaximumgroupsizeis35pupils.Werecommendthatyoubring5adultsforeachgroup.1、WhowillgivetheVictorianstylelessons?A．Thechildren.B．Thesessionleader.C．TheVictoriannanny.D．Thevisitors.2、Youcantakehomethethingsmadebyyourselffrom________.A．VictorianSchoolroom&VictorianChristmasB．VictorianSchoolroom&VictorianToysC．VictorianToys&VictorianChristmasD．Alloftheabove3、Ifyouwanttobookaneducationalvisit,youneedto________..A．gothereinpersonB．callat01189373400C．booktwoweeksinadvanceD．visit.uk/schools/sessions/4、Whichofthefollowingistrue?A．ReadingMuseumhasprovidedlearningservicesfor200years.B．Atleast5adultsarerequiredtoaccompanyeachgroup.C．Theminimumgroupsizeis35pupils.D．Allthesessionslastfor2hours.第三部分語言知識運(yùn)用（共兩節(jié)）第一節(jié)（每小題1.5分，滿分30分）閱讀下面短文，從短文后各題所給的A、B、C和D四個選項(xiàng)中，選出可以填入空白處的最佳選項(xiàng)．26．（30分）Itwasahotsummerday.ThesunwasshiningbrightlyandallIcouldthinkofwas1downwithascoopofmyfavoriteicecream.Idecidedtomakeaquick2tothenewlyopenedicecreamparlor(冰淇淋店)closebyforamid-day3.Iorderedmyicecreaminafancyconeandaskedtheserverto4twotubsofchocolateicecreamforfolksathome.5Iknewit,Iwashalfway6myicytreatandwasenjoyingtheviewofthetwocolorfullypreparedicecreamflavors,sittingprettyonenexttothe7.Nowthatmyto-goorderwas8,Iheadedtothepaymentcountertosettlethebill.9,thecashier(收銀員)hadforgottentobillmyicecream,10onlyforthetwotubs.Thenextfew11passedbyasIdebatedbetweendoingwhatwas12—clearingthebillandmovingout,anddoingwhatwasright—13theerror.IknewifIdidn’tbringtheerrorinthebilltohis14,myicecreamwouldbechargedagainsthis15.Thatmoment,mydecisionwasmadeandIwentandtoldhim16hehadmissed.Helookedatmein17andthankedmeprofuselyfortellingtheerror.Haditnotbeenformy18tellingtheerror,hewouldhavebeenfined.Thesmileofreliefonhisfacemademesmile,too.Icameoutoftheicecreamparlorfeelingreally19aboutmyself.Iknewthatdayhowwonderfulitfeelstodowhatisright20whatiseasy.1、A．calming B．breaking C．cooling D．setting2、A．choice B．trip C．decision D．promise3、A．meal B．work C．treat D．cure4、A．sell B．take C．make D．pack5、A．While B．Although C．Unless D．Before6、A．through B．up C．over D．a(chǎn)cross7、A．a(chǎn)nother B．other C．one D．others8、A．ready B．slow C．late D．over9、A．Satisfyingly B．Disappointingly C．Annoyingly D．Surprisingly10、A．taking B．spending C．charging D．buying11、A．days B．weeks C．hours D．seconds12、A．easy B．ridiculous C．interesting D．right13、A．referringto B．pointingout C．findingout D．lookinginto14、A．mind B．face C．notice D．note15、A．expenses B．salary C．taxes D．fine16、A．why B．where C．that D．what17、A．need B．relief C．disbelief D．a(chǎn)nxiety18、A．honestly B．obviously C．secretly D．incredibly19、A．good B．fresh C．a(chǎn)wesome D．well20、A．otherthan B．ratherthan C．regardlessof D．a(chǎn)partfrom第二節(jié)（每小題1.5分，滿分15分）閱讀下面材料，在空白處填入1個適當(dāng)?shù)膯卧~或括號內(nèi)單詞的正確形式。27．（15分）Chinese-AmericancommunitygroupsarepreparingtoholdtheirsecondannualInternationalConfuciusCulturalFestival（孔子文化節(jié)）onSept,4inFlushingQueens,NewYorkCity'seasternmostborough.Theeventservesnotonly1．a(chǎn)spectacularceremonytomemorizetheworld-famousChinesephilosopher,butachance2．(celebrate)Chineseculturetogetherwithotherlocalcommunities,saidWangLizhi,presidentofAmericaEastShandongAssociation(AESA).Co-sponsoredbyAESA,AmericaEastShandongChamberofCommerceandConfuciusEducationFoundationInc,thefestival3．(feature)recitationofthe“DiZiGui，”literallytranslatedas"StandardsforbeingaGoodPupilandChild,"abook4．(write)basedonConfucius'teachingsthatemphasizethe5．(base)necessitiesforbeingagoodpersonandguidelinesfor6．(live)inharmonywithothers,aswellasChinesetraditionaldances,Shan-dongfolkmusicandphotoexhibitions.Thegroupshostedthe7．(one)InternationalConfuciusCulturalFestivalinflushingonSept.4Lastyeartocelebratethe2,568thanniversaryofthebirthofConfucius(551BC-479BC).Confuciuswas8．extraordinaryeducatorandphilosopher,andfoundedConfucianism.Itwashe9．firstsetupprivateschoolsandreceivedstudentsfromeverywalkoflifewithout10．(consider)oftheirsocialstatus.第四部分寫作（共兩節(jié)）第一節(jié)短文改錯（滿分10分）28．（10分）假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加:在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。修改:在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1、每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2、只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。Inrecentyearsgreatchangeshavebeentakenplaceinmyhometown、Tenyearsbefore,thesmallandlowhousesthatlieonthenorthofthelakeproducedmuchwaste、Astheresult,thelakewasseriouslypolluted、Tothewestwasasandyfield,whatwasthesourceofdust、Evenworst,abrickyardonthesouthwestofthelakeusedagreatdealgoodsoil、Nowthepoorhouseshavebeenreplacedbygreentreesbutthebrickyardbytallbuildings、Thesandyfieldthevillagersusedtodugandturnoveriscoveredwithfruittrees、Touristsfromnearbytownsoftenspendtheweekendboatandfishingonthelake、第二節(jié)書面表達(dá)（滿分25分）29．（25分）請閱讀下面短文，并按照要求用英語寫一篇150詞左右的文章。Yesterday,thePeoplesCourtofQiCountyinHenanProvincehadaspecialplaintiff,aneleven-year-oldboyinthefifthgrade.Heaccusedhisparentsofpeepingathisdiary,whichviolatedhisprivacy.Afterlookingintothecase,thejudgefoundoutwhathadhappenedtotheboyandhisparents.Liusedtobeanexcellentstudent,butrecently,hecouldn’tfocusonhisstudies.Hisparentswerebusywiththeirbusiness,sotheycaredlittleabouthim.However,afterlearningabouttheirson’schange,theymanagedtopeepathisdiary.Fromthediary,theylearnedthattheirsonhadaloveaffairwithagirlinthesameclass.Thentheygotveryangryandscoldedhimseverely.Asaresult,theboychargedhisparentswithviolatinghisprivacy.Facingthespecialcase,thejudgesaid,＂Liisnotagrown-up,buthehasprivacyprotectedbylaw.Butinthiscase,whathisparentsdidwastotrytounderstandhisthoughtinordertohelphimgrowuphealthily,whichcouldn’tbedefinedasaninvasion.＂Later,thejudgetoldtheparentsitwasunwisetopeepatthechild’sdiary.Instead,theyshouldtrytotalktohim.Withthehelpofthejudge,theboypromisedtoconcentrateonhisstudies.1.以約30個詞概括閱讀材料的主要內(nèi)容；2.以約120個詞談?wù)勀銓Γ⒏改竿悼醋优沼洠⒌目捶?，包括以下要點(diǎn):看完新聞你有何感受？如果你是文中主人公，你會如何做？你認(rèn)為子女和父母應(yīng)該如何更好地相處。1.作文中可以使用自己親身的經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；2.作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

參考答案第一部分（共20小題，每小題1.5分，滿分30分）1、A2、A3、A4、C5、B6、B7、D8、D9、B10、C11、A12、B13、C14、C15、C16、B17、A18、B19、C20、C第二部分閱讀理解（滿分40分）閱讀下列短文，從每題所給的A、B、C、D四個選項(xiàng)中，選出最佳選項(xiàng)。21、1、D2、C3、A4、B22、1、B2、D3、B4、D23、Manyscholarshipsrequirethatyouwriteanessayinordertobeconsideredfortheprizemoney.However,ifyouarethesortofpersonthathasaheadachewheneveryouhavetocompleteawritingassignment,thismaynotbethebestnews.Luckilyforyou,thereisnoreasontofearthescholarshipessay.Thefollowingtipscouldhelpyouconquerthisnot-so-easyaspectofthescholarshipapplicationprocess.Youshouldalwaysoutlineyouressays.Thisdoesnotjustapplytothescholarshipessays,either.Anoutlinehelpslendfocustoyourthoughtsandhelpsyoucreateapictureofthe“whole”thattheessaywillbecome.Judgescannottostandwhenyourwritingisloose,lackscoherence(連貫性)orwhenyoufailtoconnectyourmainpointstogether.Theywanttoseethatyoucansupportyourargumentwellwithclearandbriefexamplesandthattheseexamplesdo,infact,relatetothetopicathand.Ifyouhaveachoiceinthetopicyougettowriteabout,alwaystrytoselectsomethingyouarepersonallyinterestedin.Don'twritewhatyouthinkthejudgeswanttohear.Thiswillonlyamountinanessaythatreadslikesomeoneelse’s,whichisnotagreatwaytomakeyourselfstandout.Ifyoufeelboredwiththetopic,thenyouressaywillbeboringaswell.Makesureyourideafollowaclearandalogicalpath.Thismeanstheyareconnectedwellandthetransitions(過渡)easilyflowfromoneideatothenext.Likewise,trytostayawayfromtheobviousorthesadstory.Yes,collegewillbealife-changingexperience,butcanyouthinkofaninterestingreasonwhythisisso?Andyes,itisterriblethatyoulostafamilymemberatayoungage,butwhatdoesithaveto