第9,10講agree題型模塊選擇類綜合寫作-bodynew論據(jù)支持

Body論據(jù)支！四個(gè)高頻思路中心句CS1讓Tobeginwith,IhavetoadmitTobeginwith,itisundisputableInitially,IhavetoconcedethatX,atsome/certaindegree,is/can…制級(jí)讓步—避免喧賓奪…,tosome/certain…,atsome/certain…,onsome/specific…,inparticular/certaincases, …,theoretically…,inshort-…is/can…is/canCS2.分析—復(fù)雜任務(wù)/現(xiàn)象被簡(jiǎn)單#Nevertheless,theoversimplificationtheclaimpresentedinthistopicsuffersfromlargelyunderminestherationality//#Nevertheless,theoversimplificationinheriteddegradestheclaimthat…asgroundless/untrustworthy./#Nevertheless,theoversimplificationthatthifeaturesmakesitvulnerabletoanyquestionorchallenge./#Nonetheless,therationalityofthisoversimplificationitsuffersfrom.CS3.against2—分析：觀點(diǎn)并非總正確Whatismoretheviewpresentedinthistopicisnotinvulnerable/isimperfect./Whatismore,theclaimthat…failstotakethedifferentialsamongcasesintoaccount/consideration./Whatismore,theclaimthat…showsnorespecttothedifferentialsamong/Whatismore,thevalidationoftheviewthat…isnotuniversallyself-evident./afallacyofhastygeneralization.CS4.against3—推理：很嚴(yán)重/危害巨#effect Negativeinfluence—destructiveconsequencesAtlast,theconsequences/misleadingof…wouldbenegative/destructive/pernicious./Atlast,theconsequences/misleadingthat…isexpectedtobringaboutwouldturnouttobedestructive.!七個(gè)備選思路中心Option1:這樣做不可feasible=--Itisnot*thefeasibilityof…isopento--Itisnot*theviabilityof…isopentoThefeasibility/viabilityof…isvulnerabletoanyquestionorchallenge.Option2效果欠Itcannotsolvethis/Itfailstooffersolutionstothis/*Xisawkwardinservingasakey B重要forA>B話題BisalsoveryBisofgreatsignificanceforGreatsignificancefor…iscloselyattachedto X并非最ThereisnopointtoclaimthatXservesasthebest/ultimate/themostapprovedsolution/Option5:因果關(guān)系不合AandBThisuffersfromafallacyofcausalThisassumption/assertionfailstoestablishacausalrelationbetweenAandB.Optional6：合—（A>B時(shí)）AB不可割裂@AandBarenotcompleyseparated@AandBarenot2mutuallyexclusiveOptional7：分--（當(dāng)題設(shè)AandB好/不/應(yīng)該/不該@theclaimconfuseAwith*論點(diǎn)+論據(jù)梳第一段：讓@結(jié)CS1Initially,Ihavetoconcedethat…,atsome/certaindegree,is/can…+Foronething,…FortheOnonehand,…Ontheotherhand,Ononerespect,…Onthe/

,ontheground,forthereason,forthesakeTobeginwith,Ihavetoconcedethatngsomewriting,atcertaindegree,issomeoccasions,contributetopromotingwritingskills.Fortheother,writingissomewhateffectiveinsharpeningthemind.Doyouagreeordisagreethefollowingstatement:Successfulpeopletakenewthingsandtakerisksratherthanthethingthatthey'vedonewell.Initially,Ihavetoconcederisk-takingandtryingsomethingfresh,atsuchtendency,undersomecircumstances,servesasacatalystthatcontributestoexploringthepotentialtotheutmost.Fortheother,takingrisksorsomethingnew,inparticularcases,isacknowledgedasasymbolforcourageandstrength.tip:讓步段的組織架構(gòu)：1CS（論點(diǎn)Tobeginwith,IhavetoconcedethatX,oncertainoccasions,isbeneficial.+Support（論據(jù)ForonethingXservesas是什么，whichcontributesto…1+Support（論據(jù)FortheotherXisalsoeffectivein…效果22Initially,IhavetoconcedethatX,oncertainoccasions,isbeneficial.+OnepointisthatX,undercertaincircumstances,contributesto…1+Theotherpointisthatitisalsosomewhateffectivein…2方案3—單論CS（論點(diǎn)Initially,IhavetoconcedethatX,oncertainoccasions,isbeneficial，+Support（論據(jù)，onthegroundthatXservesas是什throughwhich作用/效第二段#Nevertheless,thetheclaimpresentedinthistopicsuffersfromlargelyunderminestherationality//#Nevertheless,theoversimplificationinheriteddegradestheclaimthat…asgroundless/untrustworthy./#Nevertheless,theoversimplificationthatthifeaturesmakesitvulnerabletoanyquestionorchallenge./#Nonetheless,therationalityofthisoversimplificationitsuffersfrom.+For建議類話題：復(fù)雜任務(wù)簡(jiǎn)單@Asisoftenthecase,Undermanycircumstances,/Asamatteroffact,待解決之問題/達(dá)成之目標(biāo)isacknowledgedasacomplicatedtask/project/causewhosesolutioninvolves/requiresacombinationeffortsonboththeinternalandexternallayersandcannotpossiblybetackled/plishedby/For結(jié)論類話題:復(fù)雜現(xiàn)象簡(jiǎn)單概括化@Asisoftenthecase,某事物isacknowledgedasacomplicatedandcontroversialtopic/phenomenon/concept/existencewhosedefinitioninvolves/requires/concernsacombinationofelements/factors/indicatorsonboththesubjectiveandobjectivelayersandcannotpossiblybedefinedbyX.加強(qiáng)版論據(jù)支持建議類話題-復(fù)雜任務(wù)簡(jiǎn)單@Asamatteroffact,待解決之問題/達(dá)成之目標(biāo)isacknowledgedasacomplicatedtaskthatinvolvesacombinationofeffortsrangingfromABCtoDandthesolutionadopted/employedalsodiffersamongpeoplevaryinginalitiesaswellasvalues,eventhefactorsonobjectivelayersalsobearthepossibilitiesofdrivingtheresultstootherpaths/alsomakethedifference.Inthissense,itisakindofabsurditytocountsimplyonXasanapproach/itwouldbecounterproductivetocountsolelyon（具體文章應(yīng)用文論證—sourcesofnews文檔）加強(qiáng)版論據(jù)支持結(jié)論類話題-復(fù)雜現(xiàn)象簡(jiǎn)單概Asisoftenthecase，某事物isacknowledgedascomplicated(controversial)existence(phenomenon/concept)whosedefinitioninvolvesacombinationofelementsanddiffersamongpeoplevaryinginalitiesaswellasbackgrounds(values).EventhefactorsonobjectivelayerssuchasABCandDalsobearthepossibilitiesofdrivingtheconclusiontootherpaths.Inthissense,Itisakindofabsurditytodefine…byhighlighting…./…failstoberepresentative/…bemisrepresentative.+ Figures/example X%ofthepeoplethink數(shù)據(jù)方案Astatisticalfiguresuggests/indicatesthat,whichmakesitevident/clearthat…好/不好數(shù)據(jù)方案Accordinginaccordancewithreferencefor !WithreferenceforasurveybyInternational…,88.888%ofthepeople/respondentsbetween15and65inEuropeancountries/E.U.claimedthat… respondentsrespondentsbetween12and89inclaimedthat…isthelast respondentsbetween12and89inE.Uhadagloomyviewovertheprospect/theeffectivenessofX,forexample,/,for實(shí)事—*Thecaseconcerning…servesasanexample/evidence/anevidentexamplewhichcan,tolargeextent,support/solidify/justify/reinforce/bolster/consolidatemyclaimthat…+…alal servesasanevidentexamplewhichlargelyconsolidatemyclaim+（案例素材詳見example素材文檔第三CS3.against2—分析：觀點(diǎn)并非總正確Whatismoretheviewpresentedinthistopicisnotinvulnerable/isimperfect./Whatismore,theclaimthat…failstotakethedifferentialsamongcasesintoaccount/consideration./Whatismore,theclaimthat…showsnorespecttothedifferentialsamong/Whatismore,thevalidationoftheviewthat…isnotuniversallyself-evident./afallacyofhastygeneralization./Theotherflawisthattheviewpresentedinthistopicisnotchallenge-free.+論ForonethingXinevitablysuffersfromseveraldefectslike…題目觀點(diǎn)/建議之瑕+Fortheother,onoccasion(s)that…,/onconditionsthat…,the(utmost)significanceissupposedtobeattachedtoX/Xisentitledtobejustified/encouraged,whereaswhenthisprerequisite/theconditionremoves,theemphasis/focuswouldalsobeswitched/thingswouldbeotherwise/itwouldbeanotherstory.：同意或不同意在白天期的時(shí)候開車應(yīng)該 ：…Atlargedegree,however,Iamontheoppositesideofthisassumption.Initially,Ihavetonodinagreementwiththeclaimthatpayingfordrivinginrushhours,atcertaindegree,isnecessary.+Foronething,itcontributestocertaindegreeofreductioninthenumberofvehiclesonroadsbyincreasingthecostofdrivingatbusymoments.+Fortheother,thismeasureisrelativelyeffectiveingeneratingrevenuethatcanbeusedtofinancetheprojectsforoptimizingandstreamliningthetraffic.2Nevertheless,theoversimplificationconcerningtheapproachemployedlargelyunderminestheclaim.+Asamatteroffact,theimprovementoftrafficisacknowledgedasacomplicatedtaskwhosesolutioninvolvesacombinationofeffortsonboththesubjectiveandobjectivelayersandcannotpossiblybesimplifiedbyimposingfeesondrivers.+AccordingtoasurveybyInternationalTraffic,…3Whatismore,thevalidationoftheviewthatdriversaresupposedtopayfordrivinginrushhoursisnotuniversallyself-evident.Onconditionsthatthenotionofrushhourandthecrowdednessonroadsarecloselyrelated,thechargeofmoneyhasbeenprovedtobeeffectiveinoptimizingandstreamliningthetraffic,orthatthisproposalisthebestapproachwhichcanruleoutanyothersolutions,thesignificanceissupposedtobeattachedtothismeasure.Whereaswhentheseprerequisitesremove,therewouldbejustificationforcarryingoutsuchpolicyasbuyingpassageinbusyhours/thingswouldbeotherwise.negativeconsequencesComingsoon…Insum,thereisnopointtoimposefeesondriversforpassageinrushhours.Whatismore,itisessentialforustohaveacomprehensiveconsiderationbeforeanycriticaldecision-makings.Agreeordisagree做富有性的工作比作簡(jiǎn)單 …Tolargeextent,Iwouldcastdoubtonofall,Ihavetoconcedethat…Nevertheless,theoversimplificationinheritedlargelydegradestheassumptionthatitisundertakingthechallengingwork,ratherthantheeasyone,thatmakespeoplesensemorehappinessasirrationalandgroundless.+Do—undertake/beengagedAsamatteroffact,the asacomplicatedprojectthatinvolvesacombinationofeffortsonboththeinternalandexternallayersandcannotpossiblybe plishedbysimplyundertakingchallengingwork.Moreover,thediscussionovertheinfluenceofundertakingchallengingworkoftenleadstocontroversialanswersamongpeoplevaryinginalitiesaswellasvalues,evensomefactorsonobjectivelayersalsobearthepossibilitiesofdrivingtheconclusiontootherpaths.Inthissense,itisakindofabsurditytorelatengchallengingworkto+WithreferenceforasurveybyUniversalChallenge(vol.250),82.36%oftherespondentsbetween20and70inE.U.claimedthattheyarealsouneasyandupsetinfacingchallengesand92.7%ofwhombelievedthatngchallengingworkservesasasignificantreasonthatpoisonshappiness.3Whatismore,thevalidationoftheclaimpresentedinthistopicisnotuniversally+Onconditionsthatthengchallengingworkisunexceptionallyeducationalandrewarding,thesafetyaswellassecurityisabsoluyguaranteed,engaginginchallengingworkhasbeenprovedtobeeffectiveinleadingtoahappylife,orthatitistheonlyapproachtohappinessthatcanruleoutanyotherpossibilities,greatsignificanceissupposedtobeattachedtoundertakingworkthatisfullofchallenge,whereaswhensuchprerequisitesremove,thingswouldbe… Doyouagreewiththefollowingstatementthattheonlywayernmentcandotoenergyconservationistoincreasethepriceofgasolineandelectricity…Tolargeextent,Iwouldcastdoubtonthisassertion.Nevertheless,itisinevitablethattheoverestimationabouttheeffectivenessofraisingthepricefasolineandsuffersfromthefallacyofoversimplification,whiakestheclaimsignificancefailtoberepresentative/opentoquestion.+Asisoftenthecase,thepreservationofenergyisacknowledgedasacomplicatedtaskwhosesolutioninvolvesacombinationofeffortsandcannotpossiblybetackledbyhighlightingthestrategylikethepriceforbasic+AccordingtoasurveybyInternationalGasoline(vol.250),87.36%oftherespondentsbetween20and50inE.U.haveagloomyviewovertheeffectivenessinincreasingthecostforenergysaving,and92.6%ofwhomclaimedthaternmentalpolicyisthelastmeasureemployedforenergyconservation.3Theotherflawisthatthevalidationoftheviewpresentedinthistopicisnotuniversallyselfevident，Onoccasionsthatthewasteofgasolineandelectricityareseriousatsuchadegreethatitisdramaticallyexhaustingtheresourcesandthatmanyothermeasureshavebeenprovedasineffective,theutmostsignificanceissupposedtobeattachedtoraisingthepricebyernmentalpolicies,whereaswhensuchprerequisitesremove,theemphasis/focuswouldalsobeswitchedtootherapproaches.XhasbeenprovedtobeeffectiveAnyotherefforts/possibilitieshavebeenprovedtobevainattemptsXcanruleoutanyotherXenjoysthewidestXhaswonoverthewidestrangeof#很嚴(yán)重Tip:body末段：CSFinally,…AtAtCSFinally,OnoneOntheAnotherflaw/pointthatisworthofmentioningisthat…Besides,Theadditionaldefectthatisnotsupposedtobeoverlookedisthat…EvenAtlast,theconsequences/influenceof…isnegative/destructive/pernicious./Atlast,theconsequencesthatXisexpectedtobringaboutwouldturnouttobedestructive.+ mentioningisthat…mistakenlyimplant/peopleanideathat…,whichwouldturnouttobecounterproductive/misleading.@Theotherflawthatisnotsupposedtobeoverlookedisthat…fertilizesanunhealthyattitude/behaviorthat…,whichrunstheriskofmakingthingsworseoff,ratherthanbringing@Besides,…h(huán)aserectedafalsemodelwhichmistakenlyencouragepeopletofollowsuit.@Thenextforeseeableproblem/risk/troubleisthatpeoplewouldinevitablybetrappedinaviciouscircleinwhich….is子論影響方方面面+--小到（individual--大到整（societysystem/industryOnepointthatisworthofmentioning/ overlookedisthat… /@ThenegativeinfluenceofXwouldresultinaseriesofchainreaction./@ThenegativeinfluenceofXwouldgiverisetoDominoEffect/ButterflyEffect/theRippleEffect.+#itcaninevitablyendanger/jeopardize/poisonboththeindividual…andthewholesociety/industry/system.合并后*ThenegativeinfluenceofXwouldbe individual…andthewhole…子論--弊大于Tocarrytheideafurther,Otherthanthat,In@ =theadvantagesareoutweighedbythethedisadvantagesovershadowthe=theadvantagesareovershadowedtheForTheexpected/theforeseeablebenefitsandopportunities/solutions…canofferForconclusionTheexpectedreferenceandguidancecanFor--thepotentialrisksanduncertaintiescanincurForconclusion --thepotentialconfusionsandmisleading…canincur*Disadv>--thepotentialrisksanduncertainties…incursfaroutweightheexpectedbenefitsandopportunitiesitcan/--thepotentialconfusionsandmisleading…incurscanruleoutanyreferenceandguidanceitcanoffer.+具體化發(fā)展(選配tradingAforBTip:tradeAforA<B不好tradelong-term…forshorttrade…inthelongrunfor…attradethepossibilityofsustainabledevelopmentfortherealityofpresenttradethe*unique…fortradethecherished…forcommon/ordinary…tradetheinvaluable…forthevaluelesstradeeverythingfor子論--影響且深Even@Itrunstheriskofdriving…toadead/@Thisproposal/conclusionisacknowledgedasanillogicalandirrationalassumption/assertionwhichindicates/reveals/mirrorsaset*misplacedvaluesthatruntheriskofdriving…toadeadend.=thewell-beingofour=thehealthygrowth/developmentof=thesustainabledevelopment=the=the+Agreeordisagree格的老師比隨和的老Atlast,theconsequencesofrelatingtheefficiencyinteachingtothestrictnessofteacherswouldturnouttobe+Onepointthatiswrothofmentioningisthatthenegativeinfluencewillbeinfectious,whichcaninevitablyendanger/poisonboththehealthygrowthofindividualstudentsandthesustainabledevelopmentofthewholeeducation.+Inaddition,thepotentialrisksandtroublessuchstrictteachingmethodincursfaroutweightheexpectedbenefitsandopportunitiesitoffers,whichis,tobeexact,tantamounttotheactoftradingtheinnovationoutoffreedomfortheefficiencyoutofobedience.+Evenworse,theassumptioninwhichthestrictnessofteachersisoveremphasizedisacknowledgedasanillogicalandirrationalassumptionwhichindicatesasetofmisplacedvaluesthatruntheriskofdrivingthewell-beingofsocietytoadead課外補(bǔ)充部分*其他備用思路Option1--可行性欠Whatismore,thefeasibilityofXisvulnerabletoanyquestionorchallenge.+Theoreticallysounded/acceptablethoughXis,thefrustrations/obstaclesemergedinpracticalworldmakeit+AmultitudeAhosttoencounterlikeA,B,CandDareacknowledgedassignificantfactorsthatplaydecisiverolesinminimizingthe+…+Inthissense,itisalmostamissionimpossibleto…!重要因素表達(dá)—用于論點(diǎn)+論據(jù)…servesasasignificantfactorthatplaysdecisiverolein….…servesasanindispensableelementisnotsupposedtobeThefeasibilityofassigningwritingtasksdaybydayisvulnerabletoanyquestionorchallenge,+Theoreticallysounded/acceptablethoughimposingdailywritingonstudentsis,thefrustrations/obstaclesemergedinpracticalworldmakeitunconstructive. Someimpedimentssuchas/likethelimitedtimeandenergyofstudents,thehardnessofthetopicsandtheinsufficienthoursofteachersareacknowledgedassignificantfactorsthatplaydecisiverolesinminimizingtheviability.Inthissense,itisalmostamissionimpossibleforteacherstomakestudentsdowritingeveryday.water)willsoonreplacefossilfuelssuchasgases,oil,andcoal.Doyouagreeortake taketheplaceThefeasibilityoftakingtheplaceoffossilfuelsbyrenewableresourcesisvulnerabletoanyquestionorchallenge.+Someimpedimentssuchasthehighcostsforsucharevolution,theunreliabilityofnewenergyandtheconsuminghabitsareacknowledgedassignificantfactorsthatplaydecisiverolesinminimizingtheviability.+Inthissense,itisalmostaimpossibletoreplacefossilfuelswithrenewableenergyrightaway. Thefeasibilityofdrivers’payingfortheuseofroadsinbusyhoursisvulnerabletoanyquestionorchallenge.+Someimpedimentssuchasthedifficultiesindecidingtherateforcharge,thelackinlegalityandtheunsatisfactoryvoicefromthepublicaresignificantfactorsthatplaydecisiverolesinminimizingtheviability.+Inthissense,itisalmostamissionrushhours.Tip**不可--(shownorespect)thelegal--(overlook)thebasiclawsof--(violate)theethicalbottom--theunsatisfactoryvoicesfromthe--limitedbudgetsorfinancial#Option2--即使有結(jié)果，也很難達(dá)到目的(個(gè) --牽強(qiáng)的聯(lián)For建*Thisproposal/solution/approach/Xisawkwardinservingasakeyto…. For*Thisdefinition/conclusion/Xisawkwardinservingasaconvincing/crediblereferencefor...Payingteachersinaccordancetheirperformanceisawkwardinservingasakeytoenhancing/improving/promoting/upgradingthe*Thisproposal/solution/approach/Xisawkwardinservingasakeyto…. +切斷聯(lián)ForAsamatteroffact/Ineffect,A/*exclusiveprerequisiteforB/the+沖淡聯(lián)1原因多Undermanycircumstances,ahostofsolutions/possibilitiessuchasA1,A2,A3andA4arealsoindispensable/significantapproachesthatarenotsupposedtobeoverlooked.#...isasignificantfactorthatplaysadecisiverolein…#…isalsoanindispensablethatisnotsupposedtobe +沖淡聯(lián)2結(jié)果無(wú)效Ontheotherhand,suchstrategywouldbedoomed/deemedas+eg.…+階段性結(jié)Inthissense,thereexistsnodirect(causal)relationbetweenAandB(theresultandtheproposal).For*Thisdefinition/conclusion/Xisawkwardinservingasaconvincing/crediblereferencefor...+切斷聯(lián)For結(jié)AdoesnotserveasanexclusiveprerequisiteforgainingabetterunderstandingaboutB+沖淡聯(lián)1可能性多Undercertaincircumstances,BcanbeconcludedasA1,whereasunderothers,thedefinition/conclusionlikeA2,A3,A4arealsosensible/acceptable/rational.+沖淡聯(lián)系2定義/概括無(wú)效 +階段性結(jié)Inthissense,thereexistsnodirectrelationbetweentheconclusion/definitionandthephenomenon.Inthissense,Acan ljustpartofthe Insteadofspendingmoneyexplorationexplorationofouter shouldspendmoneyonWhatWhatisernmentinvestmentenvironmentalprotectionisawkwardinservingasakeytoimproving+,onthegroundthattheformerdoes+Undermanycircumstances,ahostofpossibilitiesincludingtheintroductionofnotsupposedtobeoverlooked.Ontheotherhand,suchover Inthissense,thereexistsnodirectrelationbetweenahealthy