應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作歡迎辭課件-高三英語(yǔ)二輪復(fù)習(xí)

WelcomeSpeech——2021浙江省首考1.本題總分為15分，按5個(gè)檔次給分。2.評(píng)分時(shí)，先根據(jù)文章的內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言初步確定其所屬檔次，然后以

該檔次的要求來(lái)衡量、確定或調(diào)整檔次，最后給分。3.詞數(shù)少于60和多余100的，從總分中減去2分。4.評(píng)分時(shí)，應(yīng)注意的主要內(nèi)容為：內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)、應(yīng)用詞匯和語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)

的豐富性和準(zhǔn)確性及上下文的連貫性。5.拼寫(xiě)與標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)是語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確性的一個(gè)方面，評(píng)分時(shí)，應(yīng)視其對(duì)交

際的影響程度予以考慮。英、美拼寫(xiě)及詞匯用法均可接受。6.如書(shū)寫(xiě)較差，以致影響交際，將分?jǐn)?shù)降低一個(gè)檔次。Criteria假定你是李華，下周有新西蘭學(xué)生訪問(wèn)你校，你將作為學(xué)生代表致歡迎辭。請(qǐng)為此寫(xiě)一篇發(fā)言稿，內(nèi)容包括：1.表示歡迎；2.介紹活動(dòng)安排；3.表達(dá)祝愿。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。type?awelcomespeechAwelcomespeechisaspeechgivenbythehostatthebeginningofaceremonyoraneventtoshowwarmthandgratitudetowardsthepeoplewhohavetakenpainstomarktheirpresence.Itmarksthebeginningofanevent.Thespeakershouldgreettheaudienceandgiveanoverviewoftheevent.Whatisawelcomespeech?歡迎辭的結(jié)構(gòu)、語(yǔ)言特點(diǎn)（以英國(guó)女王歡迎習(xí)近平主席晚宴致辭為例）Mr.President,PrincePhilipandI

aredelightedtowelcomeyouandMadamePengtoBuckinghamPalacethisevening.YourvisittotheUnitedKingdommarksamilestoneinthisunprecedentedyearofco-operationandfriendshipbetweentheUnitedKingdomandChina,aswecelebratethetiesbetweenourtwocountriesandpreparetotakethemtoambitiousnewheights.TheUnitedKingdomandChinahaveawarmandlongstandingfriendship.PrincePhilipandIrecallwithgreatfondnessourvisittoChinaalmostthirtyyearsago,wherewewereprivilegedtoexperienceyourcountry’srichhistoryandculture,includingtheGreatWall,theForbiddenCityandtheTerracottaWarriors:allunforgettablememoriesofChina’sancientcivilisation.……Mr.President,yourvisitisadefiningmomentinthisveryspecialyearforourbilateralrelationship.Iamconfidentthatitwillservetohighlightthesincerityandwarmthofourfriendshipandtostrengthenrelationsbetweenourcountriesformanyyearstocome.LadiesandGentlemen,IaskyoutoriseanddrinkatoasttothePresidentandMadamePengandtothepeopleofChina.語(yǔ)言：熱情友好、通俗易懂、含禮節(jié)性語(yǔ)言表示歡迎正文再次歡迎+祝福假定你是李華，下周有新西蘭學(xué)生訪問(wèn)你校，你將作為學(xué)生代表致歡迎辭。請(qǐng)為此寫(xiě)一篇發(fā)言稿，內(nèi)容包括：1.表示歡迎；2.介紹活動(dòng)安排；3.表達(dá)祝愿。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。keypointspurposetonestense新西蘭學(xué)生；訪問(wèn)；表示歡迎；介紹活動(dòng)安排；表達(dá)祝愿toshowwarmthandgratitudetowardsthestudentsfromNewZealandsimple,formalandsincerethefuturetense01020304【評(píng)價(jià)】請(qǐng)參考表格中的考查要求，對(duì)下列習(xí)作進(jìn)行評(píng)價(jià)。書(shū)面表達(dá)基本要求第一稿是否準(zhǔn)確審題？（格式、人稱(chēng)、時(shí)態(tài)等）2.結(jié)構(gòu)是否清晰？分段是否合理？

（每段開(kāi)頭是否空四個(gè)字母的間距）3.內(nèi)容是否切題、完整？4.要點(diǎn)是否詳略得當(dāng)？5.細(xì)節(jié)拓展是否恰當(dāng)？（交際性、邏輯性、內(nèi)容合理性）6.語(yǔ)言表達(dá)水平如何？（準(zhǔn)確性、得體性和豐富性）豐富的表達(dá)有哪些？不準(zhǔn)確的表達(dá)有哪些？7.上下文連貫性如何？8.書(shū)寫(xiě)&字?jǐn)?shù)（是否超8行？）格式不規(guī)范，語(yǔ)言不得體銜接生硬；不夠熱情活動(dòng)介紹流水賬，看不出周到、用心的安排優(yōu)：卷面整潔！有意識(shí)地用了倒裝句；最后一段成功達(dá)到交際目的表達(dá)不夠準(zhǔn)確、豐富假定你是李華，下周有新西蘭學(xué)生訪問(wèn)你校，你將作為學(xué)生代表致歡迎辭。請(qǐng)為此寫(xiě)一篇發(fā)言稿，內(nèi)容包括：1.表示歡迎；2.介紹活動(dòng)安排；3.表達(dá)祝愿。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。Para.1layoutPara.2Para.3greeting&welcomearrangementswishestimeplaceactivitiesbenefits由于新西蘭學(xué)生來(lái)我校參觀，故在構(gòu)思活動(dòng)安排可從以下方面著手：以校園文化為主；從跨文化交際角度，可結(jié)合中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化進(jìn)行活動(dòng)安排；從讀者意識(shí)角度，可安排一些與新西蘭文化相關(guān)的活動(dòng)Usefulsentencepatternsonbehalfof…,Ifeelgreatlyhonoredtoextendmyheartfeltwelcometosb.Pleaseallowmetotakethispreciousopportunity,onbehalfof...,toexpressourwarmestwelcometoallofyou.Wefeelgreatlyhonoredto

haveachancetobewith...Thankyouforyouracceptingourinvitationtocometo...Firstofall,let’sgiveourwarmwelcomeandgraciousgreetingsto...Itisreallyagreathonorandpleasureforusto…...Para.1greeting&welcomeUsefulsentencepatternsIsincerelywishyouapleasanttimewithus.Maythefriendshipbetween...befurtherdeveloped!Wishyourstayhereenjoyableandworthwhile.Wishyouapleasantjourneyhomeandgoodhealth...Wishyouapleasantstay/agoodtime/anenjoyabletripinourschool.Wishyourexperiencememorableandrewarding!Sincerelyhopethatyourstaywillbeenjoyableandworthwhile/atreasuredmemory!...Para.3wishesPossibleactivitiesBenefitsPara.2arrangementspromotefriendship/mutualunderstandingexperience/haveabetterunderstandingofChineseculturebringyougreatpleasure...showyouaroundtheschoolexperiencesports/artcoursesinourschooljoininschoolactivities(talentshow/voiceofxx/charitybazaar)visitplacesofinterest...1.計(jì)劃做2.按計(jì)劃3.舉行/參加各種各樣的活動(dòng)4.聽(tīng)關(guān)于…的講座/課程5.參觀校園6.參觀校史館7.品嘗中國(guó)美食8.欣賞中國(guó)書(shū)法9.體驗(yàn)中華文化10.有更深的了解begoingto/planto/bescheduledtoasplanned/asscheduled

3.hold/organize/takepartin/participatein/getinvolvedinawiderange/varietyofactivities4.attendalecture/courseon/concerning/relevantto…showyouaroundtheschoolvisittheschoolhistorymuseumenjoy/takeabiteof/haveatasteofChinesecuisineappreciatetheartofChinesecalligraphyenjoy/experience/explore/takeabiteof/haveatasteofChineseculturehaveabetterunderstandingof/gainadeeperinsightintoPara.2arrangementsUsefulsentencepatternsWearehaving.../...isscheduledtobeheld/...willstart/begin+place+timeAsscheduled,wewill......Theseactivitiesareaimedat...To/Inorderto/Aimedat...,wehavemadeavarietyofarrangements.Notonlycanyou...,butalsoyoucan...Notonlywillitbe...,butalsoyoucan...,whichisofgreatbenefits.I'msure/convincedthat......Para.2arrangementsBesides,Inaddition,Additionally,Furthermore,Moreover,Also,What’smore,Lastbutnotleast,CohesionandCoherenceCohesionandCoherenceDearfriendsfromNewZealand, Goodafternoon.Ifeelgreatlyhonored,onbehalfofallthestudents,toexpressourwarmestwelcometoallofyou. Wehavemadevariousarrangements.Asscheduled,wewillshowyouaroundtheschoolafterthisceremony.Laterat7pm,acharitybazaarwillbeheldintheplayground,whereyoucanappreciatewonderfulperformancesandexperienceChineseculture.Besides,wearehavingaseriesofactivitiesforbettermutualunderstanding,suchasmakingtraditionalChinesefoodandjoininginoursportsclasses. Wishyourstayhereenjoyableandworthwhile.Thankyou.

下水作文下水作文Dearfriends,I’mLiHua.Onbehalfofourschool,I’mdelightedtoextendwarmwelcometoyou.Yourvisitbearsgreatsignificance.Towelcomeyou,avarietyofactivitieshavebeenarranged.Whatcomesfirstistovisittheschoolhistorymuseum,whereyoucangainadeeperinsightintoourschool’sdistinctivedevelopment.Additionally,asscheduled,we’llpayavisittotheSongCity,athemeparkinwhichyoucanhaveatasteofarangeofancientChinesecultures.Mydearfriends,yourvisitsurelywillpromoteourfriendship.Sincerelywishyourexperiencememorableandrewarding!Thankyou.小結(jié)：歡迎辭思維框架段落功能參考Para1(Introduction)+greetingOnbehalfofourschool,I’mdelightedtoextend