大學英語四級寫作輔導課件

大學英語四級寫作輔導大學英語四級寫作輔導1重溫四級寫作評分中的幾個關鍵點

（參見《710分》第一頁）1、內(nèi)容：緊扣提綱、不能偏題2、結構：布局合理、詳略得當3、語言：語句通順、語義連貫備注項:1、字數(shù)不足,酌情扣分2、只寫一段者0-4分，只寫兩段者0-9分。(總分按照15分計算)重溫四級寫作評分中的幾個關鍵點

（參見《710分》第一頁）12四級寫作的文體

說明文

議論文非應用文記敘文描寫文文體書信體應用文非書信體四級寫作的文體3寫作的流程：

以96年1月大學英語四級寫作為例Directions:Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteacompositiononthetopicTheTwo-dayWeekend.Youshouldwriteatleast100wordsandyoushouldbaseyourcompositionon

theoutline

(giveninChinese)below:1.雙休日給大學生帶來的好處。2.雙休日可能給大學生帶來的問題。3.我應當怎樣過好雙休日。寫作的流程：

以96年1月大學英語四級寫作為例Di4寫作的流程一看（看清標題和字數(shù)）二圈（在提綱中圈出關鍵詞，即寫作重點）三標（在要詳寫的提綱的關鍵詞旁標注1、2、3，表示這個關鍵點至少從3個方面闡述。如果該點略寫，則不標123）四想（進行構思（全文分幾個段？詳略如何分布?段落間如何銜接，段落內(nèi)部如何銜接？），意在筆先）五寫（語言組織，想好后下筆，下筆后不改）寫作的流程一看（看清標題和字數(shù)）5審題練習一98年1月大學英語四級作文題目Directions:Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteacompositiononthetopicHarmfulnessofFakeCommodities.Youshouldwriteatleast100wordsandyoushouldbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below:1.目前社會上有不少假冒偽劣商品(fakecommodities)。2.為什么會有這種現(xiàn)象?（1廠家追逐利益，2政府缺少監(jiān)管，3群眾難以識別）3.舉例說明假冒偽劣商品對消費者個人、社會等的危害。審題練習一98年1月大學英語四級作文題目6課堂練習一：審題練習參見《710分》P20，對如下作文4,5,9進行快速審題練習。課堂練習一：審題練習參見《710分》P20，對如下作文4,57如何寫提綱根據(jù)題目和中文提綱利用2-3分鐘時間列出寫作要點，理清要點間的邏輯關系，組織并列出寫作素材，列出關鍵詞，在頭腦中形成一個整體的思路。如何寫提綱8

以“IHaveaDream”為例

outline:1what’syourdream

2howtorealizeyourdreamP1:Mydreamistobeateacher.(astory,asaying,directopening)P2:1)readmorebooksonteaching

2)domorephysicalexercisesinpursuitofgoodhealth

3)workasapart-timetutor/teacheronweekendsorvacationP3:conclusion

以“IHaveaDream”為例

outlin9請你寫提綱HowShouldParentsHelpChildrentobeIndependent?(2010年12月真題）目前不少父母為孩子包辦一切為了讓孩子獨立，父母應該......（提示：只有兩點的提綱，結構應該怎樣：二段還是三段？請你寫提綱HowShouldParentsHelpC10

HowShouldParentsHelpChildrentobeIndependent?P1:Parentsarewillingtodoeverythingforchildren(somedamages，reasons）P2:Tohelpchildrenbecomeindepent,parentsshould

1guidechildrentofigureouthowtosolveproblemsontheirown

2.teachchildrenhowtodosomehouseholdsinsteadofdoingitforthemP3:(conclusion)Bydoingso,childrenwillbeabletolearnhowtoadoptthemselvestothecomplicatedsociety.

HowShouldParentsHelpChild11范文賞析TheInternet—ATwo-EdgedSword(Topicsentence)Thereisagoodsideandabadsidetoeverything—andthatincludestheInternet.Asthelatestproductofthe“technologicalrevolution,”theInternethasusheredinaneweraofglobalinformation.Nevertheless,alongwithconveniences,ithasbroughtmankindnewproblemstosolve.(Topicsentence)Internetbenefitsusinmanyrespects.

ThereisnodenyingthattheInternetcanvastlyimprovetheefficiencyofscientificresearch;itallowsscientistsswiftaccesstoallthedataandresearchfindingsintheirfieldsavailableworldwide.Moreover,asinformationisasvaluableasanymaterialresource,anyonewhohasaccesstotheInternethasacompetitiveadvantageinbusinessoverthosewhodon’t.Lastbutnotleast,theInternethasmadepersonalcommunicationbothmoreconvenientandmorerapid.范文賞析TheInternet—ATwo-EdgedS12

TheInternet—ATwo-EdgedSword

(Topicsentence)WhilethereisagreatdealofenthusiasmnowadaysovertheadvantagesoftheInternet,itsdrawbacksshouldnotbeneglected.

Foronething,longtimesurfingontheInternetdoesalotofharmstoourbody.Foranother,notalltheinformationavailableontheInternetisusefulorharmless.(Topicsentence)But,allinall,Iwouldsaythattheprosoutweighthecons

Astheworldeconomybecomesmoreandmorecloselyintegrated,anycountrywhichfallsbehindinthe“informationrace”willbecomeeconomicallybackward.TheInternet,ifproperlymanaged,holdsthekeytosuccessinthe21stcentury.

TheInternet—ATwo-EdgedSwor13議論文的過度句Theadvantagefaroutweighthedisadvantages.Evidently,ithasbothnegativeandpositiveeffects.Forallthedisadvantages,ithasitscompensatingadvantages.Likeanythingelse,ithasitsfaults.Everycoinhastwosides.Weshouldseetheothersideofacoin.議論文的過度句Theadvantagefaroutwe14議論文寫作模板模板一：

觀點對立型第一段(引入話題）：Nowadays,thereisanincreasinginterestin某一話題.Therefore,ahotdebatearisesover該話題.第二段（觀點A及其原因分析）：Somepeopleareinfavoroftheideaof觀點A.Theirreasonsareasfollowing:inthefirstplace,原因一;inthesecondplace,原因二;inthethirdplace,原因三.第三段（觀點B及其原因分析）：However,otherpeopleholdanoppositeviewpoint.Theyconsiderthat觀點B.Theyholdthisviewbecause原因一.Besides,原因二.What’smore,

原因三.第四段（我的看法）：Thereissometruthinbotharguments.ButIthinktheadvantagesof該話題outweighthedisadvantages.Inmyopinion,進一步闡明我的看法及其原因.議論文寫作模板模板一：觀點對立型15議論文模板模板二：觀點對立型第一段：Nowadays,whereveryougo,youwillhearpeopletalkabout某一話題.Whetheryoulikeitornot,ithasbecomeapartofourlife.第二段：Somepeoplemaintainthat觀點A.Intheirview,原因一.Theyalsoarguethat原因二.Finally,原因三.第三段：Somepeople,however,takeadifferentattitude.Theyconsiderthat觀點B.Therearetworeasonsforthis.Foronething,原因一.Foranother,原因二.第四段：AsfarasIamconcerned,我的看法.Therefore,結論.

議論文模板模板二：觀點對立型16議論文模板模板三：觀點對立型第一段：Whenitcomesto某一話題,differentpeoplehavedifferentideas.第二段：Somepeopleholdthat觀點A.Theybelievethat原因一.Theyalsoclaimthat原因二.Moreover,原因三.第三段：Butotherpeopletakeanoppositeside.Theyfirmlybelievethat觀點B.Firstly,原因一.Secondly,原因二.Thirdly,原因三.第四段：Thereissometruthinbotharguments.ButIfavor（/support/backup）theformer（/latter）side.Afterall,補充原因.議論文模板模板三：觀點對立型17范文賞析(說明文）HowtoSucceedinaJobInterview?Nowadays,studentsmustseekjobsbythemselves.Jobinterviewistheonlywaytohaveaccesstothedoomoftheemployers.

So

succeedinginajobinterviewisveryimportant.

Buthowcanonesucceedinajobinterview?

Firstly,youshouldbeverywellprepared.Bringalongasmuchinformationaboutyourselfaspossible:yourdiplomacertification,yourcreditrecords,certificationaboutyourawards,yourpublications,andthemostimportantofall,anexcellently-designedresume,inbothChineseandEnglish.

Secondly,youmustpaymuchattentiontoyourappearance.Inordertoproveyourselfawell-educatedperson,youmustfirstofallbedressedproperly.Whiletalkingwiththeinterviewer,youshouldlookattheoneyouaretalkingtowithunderstandingeyes.Whilestanding,youshouldstandfirm,nevermakingbiggestures.Whilesitting,youshouldneversitcross-legged.Alwaysremembertolistenattentivelytothepersontalking.Aslightnodofyourheadisalwaystimelytoshowyourwillingnesstocommunicate.

Thirdly,youmustbeconfidentaboutyourself.Neverbenervous.Letyoursmilingfaceshowfriendlinessfirst.Whiletalkingaboutyourstrongpoints,behonest,neverbeastoreventellalie.Areyousureyouarewellprepared?Youcangonow,andyouwillsucceed,withoutdoubt.范文賞析(說明文）HowtoSucceedinaJ18說明文寫作：怎樣定模板？模板一：現(xiàn)象描述段落模板1、Nowadays,withthedevelopmentofsociety(economy/education/internet…),某個現(xiàn)象hasarousedmuchconcerninChina.描述現(xiàn)象2、Nowadays,withthereformof現(xiàn)象的背景,描述現(xiàn)象.Thisphenomenonhasbeenbroughtintopublicfocusandcalledforfurtherconcern.3、Inrecentyears,描述現(xiàn)象.Thisissuehasarousedthegreatestconcern.4、Currently,alongwiththeadvanceofthesociety,animportantissuethat描述現(xiàn)象isbroughttoourattention.Forexample,舉例描述各種具體現(xiàn)象.說明文寫作：怎樣定模板？模板一：現(xiàn)象描述段落模板19說明文寫作：怎樣定模板？模板二：原因分析段落模板1、Justaswhathashappenedtoanythingintheworld,manyfactorsleadtothisphenomenon.Foronething,原因一.Foranother,原因二.Ourlistofcontributorscouldgoon,buttheforegoingonesarealreadyenoughtogiveusadeepinsightintothephenomenon．【此模板適合于兩個原因的段落】2、Anumberoffactorscouldaccountforthephenomenon,butthefollowingarethemostcriticalones.Firstofall,原因一.Inaddition,原因二.What’smore,原因三【此模板適合于三個原因的段落】3、Forthisphenomenon,thereareplentyofcontributingcausesamongwhich,thefollowingonesareparticularlyworthmentioning.First,原因一.Second,原因二.Andfinally,原因三備注：【為了增加文章字數(shù)，也可以在每一種原因后進一步論述該原因】說明文寫作：怎樣定模板？模板二：原因分析段落模板20說明文寫作：怎樣定模板？模板三：影響（問題或者危害）分析段落模板1、Obviously,therearesomeproblemsexistingin某事物或現(xiàn)象.(Thereissomeinfluence/therearesomeharms/damagesfollowing某事物或現(xiàn)象.)Forinstance,列舉影響一/問題一/危害一.進一步說明該影響、問題或危害.Inaddition/Besides,影響二/問題二/危害二.What’smore/Moreover,影響三/問題三/危害三.2、Objectivelyspeaking，thisphenomenonwillbringaboutbothpositiveandnegativeeffect.Ontheonehand,描述正面影響.Ontheotherhand,描述負面影響【影響多時，可以加銜接詞分幾點闡述】3、Thisissuemayleadtoanumberofunfavorableconsequences,withthefollowingtwothemostserious.Foronething,后果一.Foranother,后果二.【如果是三種后果呢？怎么變化句型？】說明文寫作：怎樣定模板？模板三：影響（問題或者危害）分析段落21說明文寫作：怎樣定模板？模板四：解決方案段落模板1、Therearemanysteps(measures/ways)whichcanbetakentosolvethisproblem.Firstofall,解決方法一.Inaddition,解決方法二.What’smore,解決方法三.2、Manywayscancontributetosolvingthisseriousproblem,butthefollowingonesmaybethemosteffective.Firstofall,解決方法一.Anotherwaytosolvetheproblemis解決方法二.Finally,解決方法三.3、Asisknowntoall,manymeasurescanbetakentoundothisproblem.Firstofall,解決方法一.Furthermore,解決方法二,Lastbutnottheleast,解決方法三備注：【如果要增補文章的字數(shù)，在每一種方案之后，可以用一個句子寫這種方案的好處?！空f明文寫作：怎樣定模板？模板四：解決方案段落模板22說明文寫作：怎樣定模板？模板五：意義描寫段落模板1、某一話題等isofgreatsignificance.Inthefirstplace,意義一.Inthesecondplace,意義二.Inthethirdplace,意義三.2、Itisimportantforustodosth/tohavesth.

【根據(jù)提綱要求靈活替換】。First,重要性一/或者重要的原因一.Second,重要性二/或者重要的原因二.Third,重要性三/或者重要的原因三.備注：【如果要增補文章的字數(shù)，在每一種意義之后，可以用一個句子舉例說明該意義?！空f明文寫作：怎樣定模板？模板五：意義描寫段落模板23課后作業(yè)背誦模板，并默寫。課后作業(yè)背誦模板，并默寫。24Writingassignment(nolessthan150words)

Title:TheAdvantagesandDisadvantagesoftheInternet(oranyotherthingssuchascell-phone,TV,Car,longholidayetc.)1)大學生使用英特網(wǎng)的好處2）使用英特網(wǎng)的問題有3）結論(要求每段以主題句開頭，模仿范文中好的句子）Writingassignment(nolessth25大學英語四級寫作輔導大學英語四級寫作輔導26重溫四級寫作評分中的幾個關鍵點

（參見《710分》第一頁）1、內(nèi)容：緊扣提綱、不能偏題2、結構：布局合理、詳略得當3、語言：語句通順、語義連貫備注項:1、字數(shù)不足,酌情扣分2、只寫一段者0-4分，只寫兩段者0-9分。(總分按照15分計算)重溫四級寫作評分中的幾個關鍵點

（參見《710分》第一頁）127四級寫作的文體

說明文

議論文非應用文記敘文描寫文文體書信體應用文非書信體四級寫作的文體28寫作的流程：

以96年1月大學英語四級寫作為例Directions:Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteacompositiononthetopicTheTwo-dayWeekend.Youshouldwriteatleast100wordsandyoushouldbaseyourcompositionon

theoutline

(giveninChinese)below:1.雙休日給大學生帶來的好處。2.雙休日可能給大學生帶來的問題。3.我應當怎樣過好雙休日。寫作的流程：

以96年1月大學英語四級寫作為例Di29寫作的流程一看（看清標題和字數(shù)）二圈（在提綱中圈出關鍵詞，即寫作重點）三標（在要詳寫的提綱的關鍵詞旁標注1、2、3，表示這個關鍵點至少從3個方面闡述。如果該點略寫，則不標123）四想（進行構思（全文分幾個段？詳略如何分布?段落間如何銜接，段落內(nèi)部如何銜接？），意在筆先）五寫（語言組織，想好后下筆，下筆后不改）寫作的流程一看（看清標題和字數(shù)）30審題練習一98年1月大學英語四級作文題目Directions:Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteacompositiononthetopicHarmfulnessofFakeCommodities.Youshouldwriteatleast100wordsandyoushouldbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below:1.目前社會上有不少假冒偽劣商品(fakecommodities)。2.為什么會有這種現(xiàn)象?（1廠家追逐利益，2政府缺少監(jiān)管，3群眾難以識別）3.舉例說明假冒偽劣商品對消費者個人、社會等的危害。審題練習一98年1月大學英語四級作文題目31課堂練習一：審題練習參見《710分》P20，對如下作文4,5,9進行快速審題練習。課堂練習一：審題練習參見《710分》P20，對如下作文4,532如何寫提綱根據(jù)題目和中文提綱利用2-3分鐘時間列出寫作要點，理清要點間的邏輯關系，組織并列出寫作素材，列出關鍵詞，在頭腦中形成一個整體的思路。如何寫提綱33

以“IHaveaDream”為例

outline:1what’syourdream

2howtorealizeyourdreamP1:Mydreamistobeateacher.(astory,asaying,directopening)P2:1)readmorebooksonteaching

2)domorephysicalexercisesinpursuitofgoodhealth

3)workasapart-timetutor/teacheronweekendsorvacationP3:conclusion

以“IHaveaDream”為例

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HowShouldParentsHelpChildrentobeIndependent?P1:Parentsarewillingtodoeverythingforchildren(somedamages，reasons）P2:Tohelpchildrenbecomeindepent,parentsshould

1guidechildrentofigureouthowtosolveproblemsontheirown

2.teachchildrenhowtodosomehouseholdsinsteadofdoingitforthemP3:(conclusion)Bydoingso,childrenwillbeabletolearnhowtoadoptthemselvestothecomplicatedsociety.

HowShouldParentsHelpChild36范文賞析TheInternet—ATwo-EdgedSword(Topicsentence)Thereisagoodsideandabadsidetoeverything—andthatincludestheInternet.Asthelatestproductofthe“technologicalrevolution,”theInternethasusheredinaneweraofglobalinformation.Nevertheless,alongwithconveniences,ithasbroughtmankindnewproblemstosolve.(Topicsentence)Internetbenefitsusinmanyrespects.

ThereisnodenyingthattheInternetcanvastlyimprovetheefficiencyofscientificresearch;itallowsscientistsswiftaccesstoallthedataandresearchfindingsintheirfieldsavailableworldwide.Moreover,asinformationisasvaluableasanymaterialresource,anyonewhohasaccesstotheInternethasacompetitiveadvantageinbusinessoverthosewhodon’t.Lastbutnotleast,theInternethasmadepersonalcommunicationbothmoreconvenientandmorerapid.范文賞析TheInternet—ATwo-EdgedS37

TheInternet—ATwo-EdgedSword

(Topicsentence)WhilethereisagreatdealofenthusiasmnowadaysovertheadvantagesoftheInternet,itsdrawbacksshouldnotbeneglected.

Foronething,longtimesurfingontheInternetdoesalotofharmstoourbody.Foranother,notalltheinformationavailableontheInternetisusefulorharmless.(Topicsentence)But,allinall,Iwouldsaythattheprosoutweighthecons

Astheworldeconomybecomesmoreandmorecloselyintegrated,anycountrywhichfallsbehindinthe“informationrace”willbecomeeconomicallybackward.TheInternet,ifproperlymanaged,holdsthekeytosuccessinthe21stcentury.

TheInternet—ATwo-EdgedSwor38議論文的過度句Theadvantagefaroutweighthedisadvantages.Evidently,ithasbothnegativeandpositiveeffects.Forallthedisadvantages,ithasitscompensatingadvantages.Likeanythingelse,ithasitsfaults.Everycoinhastwosides.Weshouldseetheothersideofacoin.議論文的過度句Theadvantagefaroutwe39議論文寫作模板模板一：

觀點對立型第一段(引入話題）：Nowadays,thereisanincreasinginterestin某一話題.Therefore,ahotdebatearisesover該話題.第二段（觀點A及其原因分析）：Somepeopleareinfavoroftheideaof觀點A.Theirreasonsareasfollowing:inthefirstplace,原因一;inthesecondplace,原因二;inthethirdplace,原因三.第三段（觀點B及其原因分析）：However,otherpeopleholdanoppositeviewpoint.Theyconsiderthat觀點B.Theyholdthisviewbecause原因一.Besides,原因二.What’smore,

原因三.第四段（我的看法）：Thereissometruthinbotharguments.ButIthinktheadvantagesof該話題outweighthedisadvantages.Inmyopinion,進一步闡明我的看法及其原因.議論文寫作模板模板一：觀點對立型40議論文模板模板二：觀點對立型第一段：Nowadays,whereveryougo,youwillhearpeopletalkabout某一話題.Whetheryoulikeitornot,ithasbecomeapartofourlife.第二段：Somepeoplemaintainthat觀點A.Intheirview,原因一.Theyalsoarguethat原因二.Finally,原因三.第三段：Somepeople,however,takeadifferentattitude.Theyconsiderthat觀點B.Therearetworeasonsforthis.Foronething,原因一.Foranother,原因二.第四段：AsfarasIamconcerned,我的看法.Therefore,結論.

議論文模板模板二：觀點對立型41議論文模板模板三：觀點對立型第一段：Whenitcomesto某一話題,differentpeoplehavedifferentideas.第二段：Somepeopleholdthat觀點A.Theybelievethat原因一.Theyalsoclaimthat原因二.Moreover,原因三.第三段：Butotherpeopletakeanoppositeside.Theyfirmlybelievethat觀點B.Firstly,原因一.Secondly,原因二.Thirdly,原因三.第四段：Thereissometruthinbotharguments.ButIfavor（/support/backup）theformer（/latter）side.Afterall,補充原因.議論文模板模板三：觀點對立型42范文賞析(說明文）HowtoSucceedinaJobInterview?Nowadays,studentsmustseekjobsbythemselves.Jobinterviewistheonlywaytohaveaccesstothedoomoftheemployers.

So

succeedinginajobinterviewisveryimportant.

Buthowcanonesucceedinajobinterview?

Firstly,youshouldbeverywellprepared.Bringalongasmuchinformationaboutyourselfaspossible:yourdiplomacertification,yourcreditrecords,certificationaboutyourawards,yourpublications,andthemostimportantofall,anexcellently-designedresume,inbothChineseandEnglish.

Secondly,youmustpaymuchattentiontoyourappearance.Inordertoproveyourselfawell-educatedperson,youmustfirstofallbedressedproperly.Whiletalkingwiththeinterviewer,youshouldlookattheoneyouaretalkingtowithunderstandingeyes.Whilestanding,youshouldstandfirm,nevermakingbiggestures.Whilesitting,youshouldneversitcross-legged.Alwaysremembertolistenattentivelytothepersontalking.Aslightnodofyourheadisalwaystimelytoshowyourwillingnesstocommunicate.

Thirdly,youmustbeconfidentaboutyourself.Neverbenervous.Letyoursmilingfaceshowfriendlinessfirst.Whiletalkingaboutyourstrongpoints,behonest,neverbeastoreventellalie.Areyousureyouarewellprepared?Youcangonow,andyouwillsucceed,withoutdoubt.范文賞析(說明文）HowtoSucceedinaJ43說明文寫作：怎樣定模板？模板一：現(xiàn)象描述段落模板1、Nowadays,withthedevelopmentofsociety(economy/education/internet…),某個現(xiàn)象hasarousedmuchconcerninChina.描述現(xiàn)象2、Nowadays,withthereformof現(xiàn)象的背景,描述現(xiàn)象.Thisphenomenonhasbeenbroughtintopublicfocusandcalledforfurtherconcern.3、Inrecentyears,描述現(xiàn)象.Thisissuehasarousedthegreatestconcern.4、Currently,alongwiththeadvanceofthesociety,animportantissuethat描述現(xiàn)象isbroughttoourattention.Forexample,舉例描述各種具體現(xiàn)象.說明文寫作：怎樣定模板？模板一：現(xiàn)象描述段落模板44說明文寫作：怎樣定模板？模板二：原因分析段落模板1、Justaswhathashappenedtoanythingintheworld,manyfactorsleadtothisphenomenon.Foronething,原因一.Foranother,原因二.Ourlistofcontributorscouldgoon,buttheforegoingonesarealreadyenoughtogiveusadeepinsightintothephenomenon．【此模板適合于兩個原因的段落】2、Anumberoffactorscouldaccountforthephenomenon,butthefollowingarethemostcriticalones.Firstofall,原因一.Inaddition,原因二.What’smore,原因三【此模板適合于三個原因的段落】3、Forthi