新高考英語(yǔ)應(yīng)用文升格講義：勞動(dòng)主題作文優(yōu)化

新高考英語(yǔ)應(yīng)用文升格講義：勞動(dòng)主題作文優(yōu)化導(dǎo)覽高級(jí)句型有關(guān)勞動(dòng)的高頻詞匯怎么布局謀篇最流暢，最討老師歡心?！绢}目】上周你校舉辦了“家務(wù)勞動(dòng)周”活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你為學(xué)校網(wǎng)站英文專(zhuān)欄寫(xiě)一篇短文，介紹你的活動(dòng)情況，內(nèi)容包括：積極響應(yīng)；活動(dòng)內(nèi)容；你的感受。注意：寫(xiě)作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。MyHouseworkWeek分析這一篇看完題目要求，比較像新聞報(bào)道，要求你完整敘述一件事情的起因，經(jīng)過(guò)，結(jié)果和評(píng)價(jià)，但不過(guò)是套了個(gè)勞動(dòng)的殼子，以一篇相似的范文，作優(yōu)化升格的精讀精改例子。LastweekourschoolcarriedoutaLaborWeekactivity,aimingtoraisethestudents'awarenessofthesignificanceoflaborandarouseourpassionforlabor.Theactivitylastedforoneweek.Firstly,ourschoolorganizedusstudentstoworkinthenearbyfarm.Thetaskinvolvedplantingtreesweeding,andwateringvegetable.What'smorewewereaskedtoparticipateinsomevoluntaryworkafterclass,suchashelpingtheelderdothecleaning.Besides,wesharedhouseworkwithourparents,relievingtheirburden.Throughthisactivity,wehavenotonlyrealizedthevalueoflaborbutalsolearnedtorespectalllaborers.Meanwhile,ourphysicalhealthhasbeenstrengthened.下水實(shí)戰(zhàn)優(yōu)化：LastweekourschoolcarriedoutaLaborWeekactivity,aimingtoraisethestudents'awarenessofthesignificanceoflaborandarouseourpassionforlabor.優(yōu)化：LastweekwitnessedasuccessfulLaborWeekactivity,whichsparkedthestudents'awarenessofthesignificanceoflaborandarouseourpassionforlabor.上周，勞務(wù)周活動(dòng)圓滿(mǎn)成功，激發(fā)了同學(xué)們對(duì)勞動(dòng)意義的認(rèn)識(shí)，激發(fā)了我們對(duì)勞動(dòng)的熱情。Theactivitylastedforoneweek.Firstly,ourschoolorganizedusstudentstoworkinthenearbyfarm.Thetaskinvolvedplantingtreesweeding,andwateringvegetable.What'smorewewereaskedtoparticipateinsomevoluntaryworkafterclass,suchashelpingtheelderdothecleaning.Besides,wesharedhouseworkwithourparents,relievingtheirburden.優(yōu)化：Theparticipants,mainlyconsistingofstudentsfromdifferentgrades,gotvigorouslyinvolvedindoinghousework.Variousactivitieswerearranged,rangingfrommowingthelawnstocleaningthedishes.Beadsofsweatdrippingdowndropbydrop,wewereimmersedinfinishingthechoresfromdawntodusk,attainingparentsandteachers’applause.參與者主要由來(lái)自不同年級(jí)的學(xué)生組成，他們積極地參與家務(wù)勞動(dòng)。安排了各種活動(dòng)，從修剪草坪到清洗碗碟。汗珠一滴一滴地滴落下來(lái)，我們沉浸在從黎明到黃昏的家務(wù)中，贏得了父母和老師的掌聲。Throughthisactivity,wehavenotonlyrealizedthevalueoflaborbutalsolearnedtorespectalllaborers.Meanwhile,ourphysicalhealthhasbeenstrengthened.優(yōu)化：Downdeepinmyheart,whatimpressedmemostthroughthisactivitywasthatweareobligedtoreliefparents’burdenwhodevotedthemselveswithoutcomplaint.在我內(nèi)心深處，通過(guò)這次活動(dòng)給我留下最深刻印象的是，我們有義務(wù)減輕父母的負(fù)擔(dān)，他們無(wú)怨無(wú)悔地奉獻(xiàn)自己。優(yōu)化作文完整版：LastweekwitnessedasuccessfulLaborWeekactivity,whichsparkedthestudents'awarenessofthesignificanceoflaborandarouseourpassionforlabor.Theparticipants,mainlyconsistingofstudentsfromdifferentgrades,gotvigorouslyinvolvedindoinghousework.Variousactivitieswerearranged,rangingfrommowingthelawnstocleaningthedishes.Beadsofsweatdrippingdowndropbydrop,wewereimmersedinfinishingthechoresfromdawntodusk,attainingparentsandteachers’applause.Downdeepinmyheart,whatimpressedmemostthroughthisactivitywasthatweareobligedtoreliefparents’burdenwhodevotedthemselveswithoutcomplaint.簡(jiǎn)單擴(kuò)展關(guān)于勞動(dòng)的詞匯和句子：Laborisoftenthefatherofpleasure.Laboristhemostglorious.manual/physicallabor體力勞動(dòng)intellectual/skilledlabor腦力勞動(dòng)workingclass勞動(dòng)人民fruitsofyourlabor勞動(dòng)果實(shí)working/laborcapacity勞動(dòng)能力家務(wù)活makethebed整理床鋪pullupthesheets/comforter鋪好被單/被子changethesheets換床單beattherug抖地毯dustthefurniture掃除家具上的灰塵duster（雞毛）撣子fold/hanguptheclothes折疊/掛衣服setthetable擺桌wipedownthecounter擦廚房臺(tái)面dothedishes洗碗cleanthestove/sink清理爐灶/水槽steelwool鋼絲球sponge刷鍋海綿dothelaundry洗衣服hangouttheclothes.晾曬衣服dotheironing熨燙衣服clea