歷屆上海高考英語(yǔ)作文1

歷屆上海高考英語(yǔ)作文[1]歷屆上海高考英語(yǔ)作文[1]12/12歷屆上海高考英語(yǔ)作文[1]2013高考上海卷英語(yǔ)作文談?wù)揑I.GuidedWritingDirections:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgiveninChinese.上海博物館擬舉辦一次名畫展，現(xiàn)就展出場(chǎng)所（博物館還是社區(qū)圖書館）收集公眾建議，假設(shè)你是王敏，給上海博物館寫一封信表達(dá)你的想法。你的信必定滿足以下要求：簡(jiǎn)述你寫信的目的及你對(duì)場(chǎng)所的選擇；說明你的原因（從便利性，專業(yè)性等方面對(duì)這兩個(gè)場(chǎng)所進(jìn)行比較）DearSir/Madam,I’vejustlearnedthatShanghaiMuseumistoholdafamouspaintingexhibitionandyou’recollectingpublicsuggestionsaboutwhichlocationtoholdit.I’mwritingthislettertosharewithyoumyopinions.AsfarasI’mconcerned,itismorereasonabletoholdthepaintingexhibitioninShanghaiMuseumthanincommunitylibraries.Myreasonsareasfollows.Ontheonehand,itismoreconvenientforpeopletoreachShanghaiMuseum,locatedinthecenterofthecity.Visitorscangotherebysubwayandbusandsoon.What’smore,ShanghaiMuseumismuchmoreextensivethancommunitylibraries,providingvisitorswithamorecomfortableenvironmenttoappreciatethefamouspaintings.Ontheotherhand,ShanghaiMuseum,awell-knownanddistinguishedmuseumathomeandabroad,ismoreprofessionalinholdingpaintingexhibitions.What’sofgreatsignificanceisthatnotonlydoesitprovideadvancedfacilitiesandhigh-techmonitorsbutalsooffersprofessionalsecurityguardstoprotectthosefamouspaintingsfrombeingdamagedorstolenintheprocessofexhibition.Consequently,IstronglyproposethatthepaintingexhibitionistobeheldintheShanghaiMuseum.Yours,WangMin賞析：今年上海市的高考英語(yǔ)作文話題貼近學(xué)生的生活實(shí)質(zhì)，用書信的載體表現(xiàn)，讓考生對(duì)畫展感覺到有話可以說，但是想要達(dá)到A類作文，不僅要要有扎實(shí)語(yǔ)言功底，還需要對(duì)博物館和社區(qū)圖書館及畫展等生活類的語(yǔ)言應(yīng)用嫻熟，更需要學(xué)生從專業(yè)一點(diǎn)的角度，深入剖析其選擇的原因，這個(gè)層面很多學(xué)生很難用專業(yè)的語(yǔ)言區(qū)描述，學(xué)一世常學(xué)習(xí)時(shí)間緊張，沒有時(shí)間到社會(huì)上參加一些社會(huì)活動(dòng)，而且在緊張的時(shí)間里，更別提用一些復(fù)雜的語(yǔ)言結(jié)構(gòu)區(qū)顯現(xiàn)自己的原因，所以學(xué)生寫到高分不是很簡(jiǎn)單，大部分學(xué)生獲得15/16分是沒有問題的。采用這樣的命題思路對(duì)英語(yǔ)授課有較好的反響作用，學(xué)校和家庭不可以是督促學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)更要供應(yīng)時(shí)機(jī)讓孩子走出課堂，走向社會(huì)，培養(yǎng)學(xué)生創(chuàng)立性和責(zé)備性思想。提示：生活類詞匯:museumlibrarypaintingexhibitionadvancedfacilityhigh-techmonitorsecurityguard分詞的應(yīng)用：locatedprovidingdistinguished句型：主語(yǔ)從句口號(hào)從句倒裝等2012年上海高考英語(yǔ)作文Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.上周一，你在一所小學(xué)觀摩了小女孩Amy所在班級(jí)的兩堂繪畫課（以以以下圖），回家后你用英語(yǔ)寫了一篇日記，內(nèi)容包括：●對(duì)兩堂繪畫課的詳盡描述；●你從中獲得的啟示。2012ShanghaiEnglishTestwritingsample3(forreferenceonly)TodayIhadanunusualexperience,whichrefreshedmymind.WithpupilsIspenttwoperiodsoftimeinaprimaryschool,watchingthemlearnhowtopaint.AlittlegirlnamedAmy,onestudentoftheclass,leftmeadeepimpressionwithheruniquepainting.Inthefirstlessontheteacherrequiredthepupilstopaintfreely.Namely,inanywaytheycoulddrawwhateverthey’dliketo.Amywasthefirstonetohavetry.Iasawherthinkforalittlewhile,takeoffhershoes,thendipherfeetslightlyintothepaint/ink.Muchtomysurprise,inaflashshemanagedtomakeanicedesignonabroadpieceofwhitepaper/blanketwithbothofherfeet.Whathappenednext,variousoftypesofworkspaintedbyotherchildrenappearingbeforemyeyesonebyone,keptmelaughingwithjoyandamusement.Followingabreak,thesecondclassbegan.smiling,theteachermadeabriefcomment,whichwasfullofpraiseaswellasappreciation.Afterthat,shegavethestudentssomeguidanceaboutthetraditionalwayofpainting.Withherteacherswords’inmind,Amypracticedagain.Painting-brushinhand,shesatadeskproperly/straight,payingfullattentiontoherwork.Thistime，witheaseandexcitementshedrewsomebirdsflyinghighinthesky/sun.Lookingbackatthetwowaysofgivingaclass,Ihavetoadmittheteacherwaswellworthfollowinginmattersofcultivating“flowers”inthespiritGivenoforiginalitythatchildren.areofgreatimaginationandelasticityintheirgrowth,theyaresupposedtobegivenasmanychancesandopportunitiesaspossibleinthecourseofbeingeducatedsoastodeveloptheirpotentialtothefull.Weretheyoungalwaysconfinedtotheestablishedwaysofdoingthingswithoutafreeworld,onethatisalsolongedforbytheambitiousbirdsdrawnbyAmy,howcanweexpectthenextgenerationourcivilizednationwouldbemoreinnovativeandcreative?2012ShanghaiEnglishTestwritingsample4(forreferenceonly)TodayIhadanunusualexperience,whichrefreshedmymind.WithpupilsIspenttwoperiodsoftimeinaprimaryschool,watchingthemlearnhowtopaint.AlittlegirlnamedAmy,onestudentoftheclass,leftmeadeepimpressionwithheruniquepainting.Inthefirstlessontheteacherrequiredthepupilstopaintfreely.Namely,inanywaytheycoulddrawwhateverthey’dliketo.Amywasthefirstonetohaveatry.Isawthinkherforalittlewhile,takeoffhershoes,thendipherfeetslightlyintothepaint/ink.Muchtomysurprise,inaflashshemanagedtomakeanicedesignonabroadpieceofwhitepaper/blanketwithbothofherfeet.Whathappenednext,variousoftypesofworkspaintedbyotherchildrenappearingbeforemyeyesonebyone,keptmelaughingwithjoyandamusement.Followingabreak,thesecondclassbegan.Withasmile,theteachermadeabriefcomment,whichwasfullofpraiseaswellasappreciation.Afterthat,shegavethestudentssomeguidanceaboutthetraditionalwayofpainting.Withherteacherswords’inmind,Amypracticedagain.Painting-brushinhand,shesatadeskproperly/straight,payingfullattentiontoherwork.Thistime，witheaseandexcitementshedrewsomebirdsflyinghighinthesky/sun.Simpleandamusingasitseemed,thetwowaysofpaintingarethought-provoking.Asisgenerallyaccepted,students,especially,childrenhavegreatpotentialintheirgrowthanddevelopment.Asamatteroffact,whethertheirtalentscanbedevelopedtothefull,toagreatdegree,dependsonhowchildrenareeducated.Whilesomevaluabletraditionsarewellworthcherishing,thinkinginanoriginalwayshouldbeencouragedandemphasizedamongchildrenwhenitcomestoteachingoreducation,whoaresupposedtobecharacterizedbycreation”.Onlyinthisway,cantheykeepinpacewiththe-fastdevelopingmodernworld.2011年上海卷高考英語(yǔ)作文范話題：向一個(gè)基金會(huì)申請(qǐng)2000元做個(gè)項(xiàng)目來支持貧困學(xué)生，需要包括以下的一些要點(diǎn)1.介紹自己2.項(xiàng)目詳盡推行方案3.2000元如何利用Dearfoundationorganizers,MynameisJerryLu,astudentcurrentlystudyingatShanghaiXXHighschool.Iamwriting,onbehalfofmyclassmates,toapplyforthe2000yuanworthoffundinabidtoinitiateaprogramaimedathelpingthosestudentswhoarefinanciallydisadvantaged.Beingraisedinfamiliesthatdon’thavetoworryaboutputtingfoodonthetableneednotmeanobliviontoourlessfortunatepeers.Onthisaccount,wewouldappreciateitifyoucouldsponsorourpoverty-reliefendeavor.Thefollowingishowwewouldgoaboutusingthemoney.Wewouldspend1500yuanpurchasingsomestationeryfortheneedystudentsatourschool.Itisworthnotingthatwewouldinformthemtopickuptheschoolsuppliesthemselvesinsteadofus“dolingout”thesuppliessothatwewouldn’tembarrassthosewhowewanttohelp.Theremainderofthefundwouldbeusedtoinviteamotivationalspeakerwhowastotalkabouthowtoliftoneselfoutofpovertybymakingrightacademicandprofessionaldecisions.

“innovationModestasoureffortsmaysound,webelievetheywillwarmsomehearts.Muchobligedifyoucouldreplyatyourearliestconvenience.YoursSincerely,JerryLu2010年上海高考作文及模范以以下圖是小學(xué)再生的課堂一腳，比較你當(dāng)時(shí)的上課情況，作出比較并談?wù)勀愕母杏X。你的作文必定包括：●描述圖片里學(xué)生上課的場(chǎng)景●比較你同時(shí)期的上課情況●簡(jiǎn)單談?wù)勀愕母杏XAsisdescribedinthepicture,agroupofforeignstudentsareraisingtheirhandstogiveanswerstothequestioninajoyfulandactiveway.Thepurposeofthepictureistoshowushowactivetheclassperformanceisintheforeigncountry.Westernstudentsaremorelikelytobeopen-mindedandwillingtoexpresstheiruniqueideasinclass.Justasthepictureshows:Whentheteacherisaskingaquestion,everychildraisestheirhandsandiseagertoanswerthequestion.Theydonotfeargivingthein-classperformancewhileothersarewatching.ThissceneremindsmeofmyownclasssituationwhenIwasatelementaryschool.AsChinesechildrenaremoreoftenthannotveryconservativeandmodest,therefore,myteachersusuallycalledastudent'snameifnobodydaredtoanswerthequestions.Thentheappointedchildbehavedawkwardlyandwasreluctanttosayjustafewwords.Thisrecollectionmakesmefeelratherdisappointed.Infact,weshouldatleastgiveatry,whethertheanswerisperfectornot.It'sachanceoflearning,morespecifically,ifwearewell-done,wewillgainconfidence;ifnot,wewillgetinformedofabettersolution,whichwillprovideusexperienceinthelatersituation.Allinall,it'smoresensibletobeactiveinclass.圖畫式談?wù)撐奶攸c(diǎn)：是經(jīng)過觀察和剖析單幅或一組畫，把圖畫內(nèi)容轉(zhuǎn)變?yōu)槲淖中畔?。注意點(diǎn)：(1).要認(rèn)真審圖(2).需從整體上掌握?qǐng)D畫所表現(xiàn)的主要內(nèi)容，辦理好人物與時(shí)空的關(guān)系及局部與整體的關(guān)系，找出文章的線索或主題。(3).“豐滿的想象+變化的表達(dá)”結(jié)構(gòu)：第一段描述圖畫，一般不高出三分之一篇幅第二段揭露畫旨（一般一言即可）第三段宣告感想、談?wù)摶蛱岢鼋ㄗh（占主要篇幅）第四段簡(jiǎn)單談?wù)勛约旱母杏X注意：二三兩段可合成一段2009年上海高考作文及模范gardening），烹飪（cooking）,某外國(guó)學(xué)校舉辦英語(yǔ)夏令營(yíng)，開設(shè)了以下課程：園藝（防身術(shù)（self-defence），護(hù)理（nursing）。若是你是王躍華（不可以用自己的真實(shí)姓名），寫一封申請(qǐng)信，報(bào)名參加其中一門課程的學(xué)習(xí)。信的內(nèi)容必定包括：1、你感興趣的課程2、你希望從這門課程中學(xué)到什么3、為什么想學(xué)這些內(nèi)容Itissaidthatasummercampistobeheldbyyourschoolandafewcoursesareavailabletochoosefrom.Iaminterestedingardening,inthatIbelieveitfeaturesmycharacterandpersonalbenefits.Duringthelearningperiod,Iexpecttogainsomeunexpectedknowledge.AradicaltechniqueI’dliketoobtainistoknowhowtotelldifferentspeciesofplantsandflowersapart.Thishelpsmetohaveaclearoutlookofthoseinmygarden.Furthermore,thepropercuttingtimeandfrequencytowateraresomeotherskillsIwanttolearn.Alittleknowledgeconcerningchoosingsuitablesoilorthereasonableplantingpositionswillalsobeagoodchoice.ThemanireasonwhyIchoosegardeningisthatIwanttohelpmyparentswiththeirworkinthedomesticgarden.Inaddition,Ifindthatwestudentsgenerallylacktheknolwdgeofgardening,missingachancetohaveawordwithnature,sothatknowingthesurroundingsisimperitave.Lastbutnotleast,byattendingthecourse,Iwillhaveameaningfulsummervacation,anddrowningmyselfbewteenplantswillbyallmeansaddabrillianttouchtomylife.2008年上海高考作文及模范你班將組隊(duì)參加學(xué)校組織的集體舞比賽（groupdancingcooipetition)，班長(zhǎng)希望大家積極參加。對(duì)此談?wù)勀愕目捶?。你的文章必定包括以下?nèi)容：·你可否會(huì)參加比賽·你做出該決定的詳盡原因Version1:Agroupdancingcompetitionwillbeheldinourschoolandthemonitorcallsoneverybodytotakeanactivepartinit.Whilemostofmyclassmatesarestillhesitatingwhethertoparticipate,Ihavesaidyestoourmonitorwithgreatpleasure.Generallyspeaking,therearetworeasonsformydecision.First,itisagoodopportunityformetorelaxmyself,whichwillenablemetostudymoreefficiently.AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy,sogoesthesaying,whichclearlyshowsustheimportanceofrelaxation.Besides,IthinkIamagooddancerafterlearningdanceformorethanfiveyears.Participatinginthecontestwillbeagoldenchanceformetoshowmydancingskillsandmakesomecontributionstotheclass.Forthetworeasonsmentionedabove,itisnosurprisethatIhavesuchastrongenthusiasmonthegroupdancingcompetition.Version2:Todaythemonitorcallsoneverybodytotakeanactivepartinthegroupdancingcompetitionwhichwillbeheldinacoupleofdaysinourschool.Butaftersomecarefulconsideration,Ihavedecidednottoparticipate.Thereareanumberofreasonsformydecision.Firstandforemost,astheCollegeEntranceExamisjustaroundthecorner,studyisthetoppriorityforme.Participatinginthegroupdancingcompetitionhastogivewaybecauseitmighttakemetoomuchtime.What’smore,withoutanyexperienceofdancing,Idon’tthinkIcanbeagooddancingpartner.Iamafraidmypoordancingskillswillprobablyspoiltheperformanceofthewholeclass.Inthiscase,it’sbetterforspectatorcheeringformyclassmates.Forthesereasons,itseemsmoreappropriateformetowatchthecompetitionthantodancemyself.2007年上海高考作文及模范以“禮物”為主題寫一篇作文。該文章必定包括以下內(nèi)容：你送禮物的對(duì)象及所送的禮物；該禮物對(duì)他（她）可能產(chǎn)生的影響或帶來的變化。APresentforFather’sDayTheFather’sDaywillcomesoon.andIwanttogivemyDadapresent.ThatisaVIPcardofahealthclub.WhenIwasalittleboy,Dadworkedhardasateacher.Duringterm,MotherandIsometimesaccompaniedDadinhisofficetillalatehour.Fromthenon,IunderstoodthatDadworkedwithgreateffort.TherearestilltoomanypreciousmemorieswhichI’llcherishinmyheart.AndIwanttogivethispresenttoexpressmythankstohim.TimefliesandI’m18now.AsIgrowup,Fatherisgettingolder.Heisnowstilldivingintopilesofbooks.Withthehealthclubmembership,Ihopethathewillmaketimetodomoreexercises.Ithinkthathewillrelaxinthehealthclubandmakemorefriends.2006年上海高考作文及模范下表供應(yīng)了你所心儀的南、況說明原因。

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加20分VersionAOfthetwouniversitieslistedabove,Iprefertheoneinthenorth.Themainreasonisthatthetuitionisonly5,000RMBfortheuniversityayear,comparedwith8,000RMBfortheuniversityinthesouth.Thismakesabigdifferenceforafamilylikeamine,becausemyfatherispeasantandtheonlybreadwinnerinthefamily.Studyingatthenorthernuniversitycansavemyfatherbigmoney.AnotherreasonItakeintoconsiderationisthepreferencepolicythenorthernuniversityoffers.Anycandidatewhochoosestostudytheremaygainanextra20points,whichgreatlyraisesthepossibilityofmybeingadmittedtothisuniversity.Ofcourse,itdoesn'tmeanthatitwillbequiteeasytopasstheentranceexambecausethisuniversityhaslimitedthenumberofqualifiedcandidatesto10only.However,Ihavebeendoingquitewellinschool,soIbelieveIcanpasstheentranceexamwithflyingcolors.VersionBComparedwiththenorthernuniversity,thesouthernoneismoretomyliking.Itistruethatintermsoftuitiontheformeris3,000RMBcheaperthanthelatter.However,that'snotaproblemtomebecauseIcanworkmywaythroughcollegeonceIgetadmitted.Whatcountsisthereputationithas.OnceIenterthisschool,myfuturecareerisguaranteed.Also,theuniversityinthesouthrecruits20newstudentsinsteadof10,whichmeansthatIwillstandabetterchanceofgettingadmitted.Thecompetitionisverykeen,though,asyoucanseebecausethisuniversitydoesn'tgivecandidatesanyextrapoints.SoallIcandonowisstudyhard,passthetoughentranceexam,andqualifyasastudentoftheuniversityofmychoice.2005年上海高考作文及模范祖先云：“天生我材必適用”請(qǐng)你描述你生活中的一件事，說明人均分秋景，無論才能大小都能成為適用的人。Manypeople,especiallythosewhothinktheyarenotastalentedasothers,tendtogiveupintheirundertakingsandthuscomplainaboutlife.Suchpeoplewillcertainlyendupgettingnowhere.Noticethatmostsuccessfulpeoplearenotunlikeus.Whatmakesthemstandoutistheirdevotednesstothejobtheyaredoing,whichistypicalofthestoryofLiDahua,aneighborofmine.Dahuawasbroughtupinapoorfamily.Sincehedidn'tdowellinschool,hejoinedhisfatherincollectinggarbageforalivingsoonafterhegraduatedfromelementaryschool.Hisneighborsshooktheirheadswhenevertheysawhim,thinkingthatthisboywouldbynomeanscarveoutabrightfuture.Yearspassedby,andDahuakeptcollectinggarbage,buthetookonestepfurther.Throughbooksheknewhowtosortoutthewastehehadcollectedandhaveitrecycled.Youknowwhat?Hehassetuparecyclingfactoryandbecometherichestmanintown!HissuccessprovestheancientChinesesaying:"Theremustbeauseformytalent."2004年上海高考作文及模范老師要求你負(fù)責(zé)班級(jí)墻報(bào)(wallnewspaper)工作并征采你的建議。在日記中表述你的決定并談?wù)勏敕?。MyDiaryThursday,March11Thismorningmyheadmasterhadachatwithme.Hetoldmethathedecidedtochoosemetobeinchargeoftheclasswallnewspaper.HewantstokinowifIamwillingtoacceptthetaskandwhatIplantodoforit.Firstofall,IwouldliketosayIwouldalwayssetahighvalueondoingaservicefortheclass.SoI’monlytoowillingtobeinchargeofthewallnewspaper.Asastudent,todomybitforourclassisagoodwaytoputmyabilitytogooduse.Tohelprunthewallnewspapercangivefulplaytomytalent.Weallknowoursocietyneedspeoplefullofcreativityanfcreativitydoesn’tcomefrombooksbutfrompractice.Thewallnewspaperprovidedsmewithachancetopractise.I’msureIcanbenefitalotfromit.Secondly,Iregardthewallnewspaperasawindowofourclass.Itservesasabridgebetweentheteachersandthestudents.WiththeactiveparticipationofthewholeclassIcanhaveitpublishedeverytwoweeks.Throughthewallnewspaperwecanexchangeourwaysoflearning,freelycommunicateourviewsonschoollife,voiceourconcernsoverhealthcaresandevenmakeproposalsontheteachingmethodandthetestingsystem.Someofmyclassmatesaregoodatdrawing.Theycanhelptoaddcolourtothewallnewspaper.Ihopemyideasforthewallnewspaperwillmeetwiththeteacher’sfavourableconsideration.2003年上海高考作文及模范你的好友因家境一般買不起名牌而悶悶不樂。給他寫封信，談?wù)勀愕目捶ê徒ㄗh。收信人：徐海青寄信人：黃平（不可以用自己的真實(shí)姓名）寫信日期：2003年6月8日J(rèn)une8,2003DearXuHaiqing,Yousaidinyourletterthatmanyofyourclassmateswerewearingfashionableclothes,butyoucouldn’taffordtobuythebestbrands.Soyoufletverydepressed.Therearedifferentviewsonpeople’swear.Thefollowingaremyideasaboutit.Firstly,youshouldn’tputtoomuchemphasisonphysicalappearance.Youmustalwaysrememberthemostimportanttaskforyoutodayistoconcentrateyourattentiononyourstudies.Nomatterwhatyouwear,youwillreallylookyourbestwhenyoucomeoutfirstinyourexaminations.Asafamoussayinggoes,“Grugality(節(jié)儉)isthemotherofvirtue.”So,secondly,youmustunderstandthatitisafinevirtuetolearntoliveinfrugalitywillbenefityoualotinyourlaterlife.IhopeyouunderstandwhatImean.Iamsureyouwilltakeapositiveattitudetowardslifeandwillbehappyagainwhenyoureadmyletter.BetRegards,HuangPing2002年上海高考作文及模范2002秋季高考II.GuidedWritingDirections:WriteanEnglishcompositioninover120wordsbasedonthepictureandtheinstructionsgivenbelow.簡(jiǎn)要描述圖片內(nèi)容，結(jié)合生活實(shí)質(zhì)，就圖片的主題談?wù)勛约旱母邢?。Duetotheone-childpolicyinChina,mostfamilieshaveonlyonechildandthereforethischildisregardedasthetreasureofthewholefamily.Boththeparentsandgrandparentsusuallyspoilthechildtoomuch.Asisdepictedinthepicture,whenachildislearningtorideabicycle,herparentsandgrandparentaresweating,runningalongsidethebikeandtryingtheirbesttoprotectthechildforfearthatsheshouldfallandgethurt.Weallknowthegreatestgloryconsistsnotinneverfalling,butinrisingeverytimewefall.SoIthink,fortheparents,theyshouldbeawareofthenegativeeffecttoomuchspoilinghasontheirchild.Undertheparentsprotection,’thechildknowsonlycomfortandease.Iftheydon’tlearnhowtoliveindependently,howcantheycopewiththehardshipsandtrialswhichtheywillmeetinthefuture?Forthechildren,theyshouldlettheirparentsknowthattheyhaveconfidenceinthemselvesandareabletoexistinthecompetitivecommunitywithouttheconstantwatchfuleyeofaneagerparent.Thepathtosuccessisfilledwithvariouskindsofdifficultiesandobstacles.Onlywhenwehavelearnedtostandonourownfeet,canwesurvivethechallengingworld.(219words)2002年春季高考依照所給圖表，簡(jiǎn)要描述某城市近來幾年每百人手機(jī)（mobilephone）用戶增添情況，并試剖析其增添原因。某城市近來幾年每百人中手機(jī)用戶增添表示圖605040人數(shù)3020100Moreandmorepeoplehavemobilephonesinrecentyears,shownastheabovediagram.In1995,onlyonepersoninahundredhadamobilephoneinsomecity.10peopleinahundredhadmobilephones.Thenumberofthepeoplewhohadmobilephoneswastentimesasmanyasin1995.In1999,therewere20peopleinahundredwhohadmobilephones.In2001,ahalfofthepeopleinahundredhadmobilephones.Thereareseveralreasonsfortheincreaseofthenumberofpeoplehavingmobilephones.Firstly,mobilephonesareusefulinpeople’lifes.Wecancommunicatewithothersveryconveniently.WecantakephotosandevensurftheNetwiththelatestmodel.Secondly,people’sincomehasbeenincreasingquickly,andthemobilephonesarecheaperthanbefore.Inthiscase,peoplecanaffordamobilephone.Forthetworeasonsmentionedabove,itisnosurprisethatsomanypeoplehaveboughtcellphonesandthistrendwillnotstopinthenearfuture.表式作文的幾種形式:一是以表格形式,將的數(shù)據(jù)或被明的事物直接用表格形式體出來二是以形形式

,即表。A表示數(shù)據(jù)化的曲;B表示數(shù)據(jù)的大小或數(shù)量之的差異的柱狀;C表示體內(nèi)部構(gòu)化的扇形。表式作文寫作分三步:第一步：開山地點(diǎn)明本表所反響的主。常使用的有:table,chart,figure,graph,describe//tell,show,represent常用句型：

等1.Thegraph/chart/tableaboveshows?2.Fromtheabovegraph/chart,itcanbe

seenthat...3.Asisshowninthegraph,...4.Thechart/tableshowsthedifferencesbetween

?第二步：剖析數(shù)據(jù)的主要差異及，今后描述（在描述數(shù)據(jù)化及特點(diǎn)，可采用分式或比式以支持主，并明必要的原因）。注意次。即factsandreasons常用折，比及比的：While,but,onthecontrary,however,comparewith,incontrastto,as?as,thesameas,besimilarto,bedifferencebetween,among,morethan,lessthan常用描述化的：Increase,rise,goup,reduce,drop,godown,fall,reach,remain,by/to,slowly,slightly,gradually,sharply,rapidly,thenumberof?,from?to及比，倍數(shù)句型等。常用句型：Facts:1.Therewasagreat/slightincrease/risein?2.Therehasbeenasudden/slow/rapidfall/dropin?3.Itis20%lower/higherthan?4.Thenumber/ratehasnearlydoubled,asagainstthatoflastyear.5.Thenumberis?timesasmuchasthatof?.6.Itincreases/rises/decreases/reducesby?/?%/twothirds.7.Bycomparisonwith?,itdecreased/increased/fellfrom?to?Reasons:1.Thereasonfor?isthat?2.Onemaythinkofthechangeasaresultof?3.Thechangein?largelyresultsfromthefactthat?4.Thereareseveralcausesforthissignificantgrowthin?.First,?.Second,?5.Thisbringsouttheimportantfactthat?Thefollowingreasonsareresponsiblefor?第三步：或表。常用：1.inaword,/inshort,/generallyspeaking2.It’sclearfromthechartthat?3.Insummary,itisimportant?4.Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wecandrawtheconclusionthat5.Obviously,ifwewantto?,itisnecessary?6.Thereisnodoubtthatattentionmustbepaid?

?第四步：若是要求感覺AsfarasIamconcerned,?2001年上海高考作文及模范你大量入家庭后，家庭、境和可能生的影響。Nowadaysthenumberofpeoplewhoownprivatecarsisontherise.Likeeverythingelse,privatecarshavebothfavorableandunfavorableaspects.Generally,thefavorableaspectscanbelistedasfollows.First,privatecarscanbringconvenienceandmobilitytoowners.Acarallowsapersontomovecomfortablyandsafelyaswellasquicklyandfreely.Becausemyfamilyownsacar,weareabletomakeextensivejourneyseveryyear.Therefore,IbelievethetouristindustryinChinawilldevelopmorequicklywiththeincreaseinthenumberofprivatecars.Secondly,ifmorepeoplebuycars,theautomobilesindustrywilldevelopdramatically.Whatgrowthof’smore,thetheautomobileindustrycantriggertheboomofotherimportantandrelatedindustriessuchasironandsteelproduction,energyandtechnologicalapplication.E