6,月浙江英語續(xù)寫PPT教學課件

本文格式為Word版，下載可任意編輯——6,月浙江英語續(xù)寫PPT教學課件20226月續(xù)寫浙江蘭溪蘭蔭中學李華1其次節(jié)讀后續(xù)寫總分值25分閱讀下面短文根據所給情節(jié)舉行續(xù)寫使之構成一個完整的故事ItwassummerandmydadwantedtotreatmetoavacationlikeneverbeforeHedecidedtotakemeonatriptotheWildWestWetookaplanetoAlbuquerqueabigcityinthestateofNewMexicoWereachedAlbuquerqueinthelateafternoonUnclePaulmydadsfriendpickedusupfromtheairportanddroveusuptohisfarminPecos2HiswifeTinacookedusadeliciousdinnerandwegottoknowhissonsRyanandKyleMydadandIspentthenightintheguestroomofthefarmhouselisteningtothefrogsandwaterrollingdowntherivernearbyVeryearlyinthemorningUnclePaulwokeusuptohavebreakfastThedaystartsatdawnonmyfarmhesaidAfterbreakfastIwenttohelpAuntTinafeedthechickenswhilemydadwentwithUnclePaultotakethesheepouttograze吃草IwasimpressedtoseemydadandUnclePaulridinghorsesTheylookedreallycool3IntheafternoonIaskedUnclePaulifIcouldtakeahorserideandhesaidyesaslongasmydadwentwithmeIwasntgoingtotakeahorseridebymyselfanywaySomydadandIputonournewcowboyhatsgotonourhorsesandheadedslowlytowardsthemountainsDontbelateforsupperUnclePaulcriedandkeeptothetracksothatyoudontgetlostOKmydadcriedbackAfterawhileUnclePaulandhisfarmhousewereoutofsightItwassopeacefulandquietandthecolorsofthebrownrocksthedeepgreenpinetreesandthelateafternoonsunmixedtocreateamagicsceneItlookedlikeabeautifulwoven編織的blanketspreadoutuponthegroundjustforus4Paragraph1SuddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorseParagraph2Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark5BasicinationDadWriterAvocationlikeneverbeforeAtriptotheWildWestLateafternoonnightMorningAfternoon6Settings1listeningtothefrogsandwaterrollingdowntherivernearby3Itwassopeacefulandquietandthecolorsofthebrownrocksthedeepgreenpinetreesandthelateafternoonsunmixedtocreateamagicscene4Itlookedlikeabeautifulwovenblanketspreadoutuponthegroundjustforus2headedslowlytowardsthemountains789DescriptionoftherabbitThelittleRabbithasacoatofwhitebrownhairThetwoearsarelongandprickuponitsheadItisfurrysoftandwhitebrownwithtworedeyesglaringabovethechinItseyesarelikeapairofsmallredbulbsExposedtosunlighttheybecomelittlepiecesofredthreadItsearsarestraightandlongandtheycanturnandmoveslightlyHowcuteitis小白兔全身蓋一層乳白的毛兩只耳朵很長直立在頭上它長著一身柔嫩的毛瞪著一雙紅眼睛眼睛像一對紅色的小燈泡見到陽光時就微微瞇起耳朵長而直豎有時還會微微轉動它多心愛啊10agile動作靈巧的生動的abletomovequicklyandeasilyAt20yearsoldhewasnotasagileasheisnow20歲時他并不如現在這般強壯11scurryVERB尤指受驚嚇時急奔亂竄WhenpeopleorsmallanimalsscurrysomewheretheymovetherequicklyandhurriedlyespeciallybecausetheyarefrightenedTheattackbegansendingresidentsscurryingforcover伏擊發(fā)動后居民們紛紛奔逃躲避Bushytailedsquirrelsscurrytofindacornsandnutstohide大尾巴的松鼠忙著搜尋和貯藏橡果和松子12gallopn飛馳飛奔v奔馳急速舉行whinnyn馬嘶聲嘶聲v嘶以嘶聲表示用作名詞nThehorsewentoffatagallopacrossthefield那匹馬飛馳起來跑過田野Allthehorsesbrokeintoagallop全體的馬突然飛奔起來用作動詞vTwopeoplegallopwhipandspurdonotcomeinthecityalittlewhile兩人快馬加鞭奔馳不一會兒就來到城里WhenrunningfreetheAfghanHoundmovesatagallopshowinggreatelasticityandspringinhissmoothpowerfulstride自由奔跑時阿富汗獵犬是奔馳的它平穩(wěn)有力的步幅顯示出極大的彈力和騰躍力用作動詞vThehorsewhinniedwithpleasure那匹馬安逸的嘶叫著Itisanillhorsecanneitherwhinnynorwaghistail這匹馬病了它不會嘶鳴也不會擺尾13ProblemsandsolutionsplotWritingpurposecharactersfeelings14Writingpurpose共享年輕時的和父親的一次冒險行動以及從父親那學到了一些東西Feelings從興奮開心到畏縮驚詫再到放松開心的過程Characters文章沒有明顯的顯示出來但父親理應是很有閱歷的樣子15Problemsandresolutions第一段是problem的產生其次段是resolution的過程16Paragraph1SuddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorseItwasverycuteWetriedtohuntforitwalkingthroughforestsandhillswithoutanyrestWefinallygotintothedeepofaforest17Paragraph2WehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdarkWegotlostThroughsomedifficultieswegotbacksafewithourefforts18Paragraph1SuddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorseItwasfurrywithacoatofgorgeousbrownhairAfterlookingupatmewithitspairofredbulbsitbegantoscurryaheadWhynotcatchitandbringitbacktoUnclePaulTheymustbeveryhappyWiththisthoughtIrodehardtohuntforitDadsawitandhadtofollowmeTherabbitwasveryagilesoonenteringamountainforestWehadtogetdownthehorsescontinuingthechaseandtotallyforgettingthetrackbackEventhoughwetrieddesperatelytherabbitwasoutofsightintheendThenwerealizedwewereinthedeeppartofanforest19Paragraph2WehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdarkAnddarkcloudsseemedtobegatheringintheskyTakingoutthecellphonewesoonfoundsomethingwaswrongnosignalAndnocompassFrightenedIstaredatDadtryingtoseekasolutionforthetroublefromhimMaybewhatyouhavelearnedingeographyclassworkshesaidpointingtothestarsintheskyIknewhemeanttheNorthStarSoonwefoundtherightdirectionWehurriedbackfindingthehorsesAndtheriverwasinsightagainThefamilywasworriedandabouttocallthepoliceAtthesightofustheywererelievedandhuggedustightlyTherewasnothingmorememorablethanthisrabbithuntinginmylife20第一篇Cherie老師Paragraph1Suddenlyalittlerabbitj