2020年高考英語(yǔ)復(fù)習(xí) 書(shū)面表達(dá)專項(xiàng)復(fù)習(xí) 如何寫申請(qǐng)信和答案

書(shū)面表達(dá)項(xiàng)復(fù)習(xí)

如何寫申信寫作指導(dǎo)申請(qǐng)信一般包括以下容：介紹信息來(lái)源有時(shí)可省略）；表明申請(qǐng)心意即寫信的目的；介紹個(gè)人簡(jiǎn)歷表明自己的優(yōu)勢(shì)；表達(dá)愿望并請(qǐng)答復(fù)。真題再現(xiàn)假定你是李華，在校英語(yǔ)專欄看到了學(xué)校“英語(yǔ)文化節(jié)”的一則招募啟事。請(qǐng)讀啟事，并根據(jù)寫作要點(diǎn)和寫作要求寫一封應(yīng)征郵件。whichwillheldon15-17,isnowforstudentprovideserviceTalentDebate.Ifyouinterested,anapplicationemailatyourtoat寫作要點(diǎn)表達(dá)寫信意圖陳述應(yīng)征目的；說(shuō)明應(yīng)征條件（性格能力等）。寫作要求郵件詞數(shù)不少于100開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾部分已寫，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；3.根情況增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫不能使用真實(shí)名和學(xué)校名稱。DearI'mLiafrom__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________yourYoursLiHua審題定調(diào)本寫作任務(wù)要求根據(jù)出的招募啟事寫一封申請(qǐng)信，并給出了三條寫作要點(diǎn)稱以一人稱為主態(tài)主要用現(xiàn)在時(shí)。參考范文DearI'mLiHua,fromClass2,3.I'mwritingapplyfortheasvolunteer.Ireallythispreciousbecause,byofferingIwilltoability,wellasmyconfidenceininpublic.Asanoutgoinggirl,Iwellwithmyclassmates.Besides,IhavesuchgoodcommandIelectedassistanttoIhavehelpedhersuccessfullyinmyclass'sactivities,whichbybothandIsurethatIliveupperfectly.Iifcouldgiveyourkindconsideration.forwardreply.Yourstruly,Li范文點(diǎn)評(píng)本文完全完成了試題定的任務(wù)。第一段表達(dá)寫作意圖，第二段陳述應(yīng)征目的，三段說(shuō)明應(yīng)征條件，覆蓋了所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。最后一段還禮地表達(dá)了自己的愿望。文中用到的高級(jí)詞匯有organisational,aswellacommandof,appreciate,perfectly,liveone'sexpectations等；用到的復(fù)雜語(yǔ)法構(gòu)有非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)、such引的結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句、非限制性定從句、賓語(yǔ)從句、條件狀語(yǔ)從句。學(xué)生習(xí)作DearI'mLiHua,fromClass2,3.I'mwritingapplyfortheasvolunteer.arereasonswhyIinforposition.ToIenablemyselfgainsomelifewellasworkIfriendswithvolunteerthing.Besides,withgoodopportunitycontributeourschoolandbarrierssoIself-confidencethroughIthinkI'mfortheI'malwayshelpIgoodcharacter,beinginismyfavoritesubjectseveralincontests,willmakechoice.I'dappreciateitifgiveopportunityprovemyself.forwardreply.Yourstruly,Li學(xué)生習(xí)作評(píng)該習(xí)作完成了試題規(guī)的任務(wù)覆蓋了所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)應(yīng)用了較多的復(fù)雜語(yǔ)法結(jié)語(yǔ)句語(yǔ)從句狀從句非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞等和高級(jí)詞匯(putinfor,by等有效地使用語(yǔ)句間的連接成(tobeginwith,secondly,besides,問(wèn)題主要有：部分表達(dá)不夠精煉(如Imyselfto)語(yǔ)義重復(fù)(如第三段第二和第三句)；部分內(nèi)容缺乏邏輯性(如第二段末句中的downbarriersIself-confidenceit)三、部分內(nèi)容表義不(whichwillhelpmakeyour。此外，雖然本題寫作求中有關(guān)詞數(shù)的部分只有下限沒(méi)有上限，但也不宜寫太多容(本文詞)。否則一方會(huì)占用過(guò)多的考試時(shí)間，另方面也會(huì)增加出錯(cuò)的機(jī)率。改后稿DearI'mLiHua,fromClass2,3.I'mwritingapplyfortheasvolunteer.arereasonswhyIinforposition.ToIcansomelifeaswellasworkskills.Secondly,Ithinkfriendspeopleasbething.withaopportunitycontributeourself-confidence.IthinkI'mfortheI'mreadyhelpothers.more,ismyfavoritesubjectprizesincontests,willofferaI'dappreciateitifgiveopportunityprovemyself.forwardreply.Yourstruly,Li實(shí)際練習(xí)下面是另一位同學(xué)的作，請(qǐng)根據(jù)點(diǎn)評(píng)中指出的問(wèn)題對(duì)它進(jìn)行修改。DearI'mLifromClass3.I'veintheIreallyparticipatethisactivity.I'dlikevolunteerforFestival.Withthisopportunity,Icanworkoutmyselfandimprovemycommunicationskills.ItellaboutI'mandobeymyactiveIwellwithmyAllI'dtodoworkwell.I'matEnglish.I'lltrybesttothisworkwell.givethistoyourYoursLiHua實(shí)際練習(xí)評(píng)該習(xí)作基本完成了試規(guī)定的任務(wù)。存在的問(wèn)題有：一、沒(méi)有安排好內(nèi)容主次，比如寫信目的著墨過(guò)多而應(yīng)征目的則一筆帶過(guò)；語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)單調(diào)，高級(jí)匯有限；文中有一些詞匯和語(yǔ)方面的錯(cuò)誤，如participateactivity,workobeywords,youngperson,givethistoexperience參考答案DearI'mLifromClass3.I'veannouncementintheliketobecomevolunteerfortheWithopportunity,Icommunicationincreasemyconfidenceandmakefriends.Itellaboutmyself.I'maandmyword.Bei