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SummaryWriting（一）WhenyouthinkoftheArctic(北極),youimagineanicylandofpurewhitesnow.OthersimagineitasthelastreallycleanplaceleftonEarth.Wehavepollutedthedeepestoceanswithplastictrash,andnow,CNNsays,“It’stheArctic’sturn.”Germanscientistshaverecentlyfoundmicroplastics(微塑料)inArcticsnow,theAssociatedPressreported.Microplasticsarepiecesofplasticsmallerthan5millimeters.Sadly,thescientistsfound1,800piecesofmicroplasticperliterofsnow.HowisplasticpollutionreachingtheArctic?Accordingtoscientists,顯“It’sreadilyappa然的)thatthemajorityofthemicroplasticsinthesnowcomesfromtheair.”Theyfalloffofplasticobjectsandaremovedbythewind,justlikedust.Theymixwithiceintheairandfalltothegroundassnow.FindingtheseplasticsinArcticsnowmeansthatwemaybreathethemin.Anevenhigheramountofmicroplasticwasfoundinthesnowaroundcities.Thehighconcentrations(濃度)foundinsnowsamples(樣本)suggestmicroplastics,whichcontainrubberorchemicalsusedinsyntheticfabrics(合成纖維),maycausesignificantairpollution.HealthOrganization.Wedoknowthatourbodiescannottakein“l(fā)arge”piecesofmicroplasticsHowever,iftheplasticsaresmallenough,theycanfindwaysintoourbodiesandstaythereforalongtime,whichcanbebadforourhealth.Whatr’studiesmore,haveearlieshownthatmicroplasticsmaycontributetolungcancerrisk,heighteningtheneedtofurtherassess(評估)therisksoftakingthemin,thestudysaid.Microplasticshavealsobeenfoundinriversandoceansaroundtheworld.Previousresearchhasfoundthattheyflowoverlongdistancesandintoouroceans,damagingecosystems(生態(tài)系wastewaterthenflowsintoriversandouttosea,wheretheyareeatenbyseaanimals.Ifpeopletheneattheseanimals,itmeansthatwe’reeatingtheplasticaswell.Summarywriting綱領(lǐng)寫作：Pleasewriteasummaryofthearticleinabout60words.【文章分析】該篇文章表達了科學(xué)家在北極的雪中發(fā)現(xiàn)了微塑料，并講解了北極微塑料從何而來，以及可能造成的影響?！緦懽鹘ㄗh】這篇文章是一篇科普類說明文。第一以一項最新的研究發(fā)現(xiàn)引入，表示北極被“微塑料雪”污染，由此作者分析了微塑料從何而來，并點明它對空氣、大海河流以及人類健康的可能影響。寫綱領(lǐng)以前要認(rèn)真分析段落之間的關(guān)系，看清全文的主線，列出文章的邏輯構(gòu)造。同時要注意詳略合適，突出重點。比方微塑料的成分、詳細(xì)怎樣形成可省略不寫。參照答案：MicroplasticshavebeenfoundinArcticsnowbyGermanscientists.Themajorityofthemcomefromtheair.Buttheirhigherconcentrationsarefoundinsnowaroundcities,whichmayleadtoairpollution.Inaddition,iftheplasticsaresmallenough,theycanbetakenintoourbodies,whichmayincreasetheriskoflungcancer.Previousstudiesalsofoundthatmicroplasticsinriversandoceansdamageecosystems,meaningwemaybeeatingtheplasticwhenweeatseaanimals..(二)WhenyouthinkoftheArctic(北極),youimagineanicylandofpurewhitesnow.OthersimagineitasthelastreallycleanplaceleftonEarth.Wehavepollutedthedeepestoceanswithplastictrash,andnow,CNNsays,“It’stheArctic’sturn.”Germanscientistshaverecentlyfoundmicroplastics(微塑料)inArcticsnow,theAssociatedPressreported.Microplasticsarepiecesofplasticsmallerthan5millimeters.Sadly,thescientistsfound1,800piecesofmicroplasticperliterofsnow.HowisplasticpollutionreachingtheArctic?Accordingtoscientists,顯然“It’sreadilyapparen的)thatthemajorityofthemicroplasticsinthesnowcomesfromtheair.”Theyfalloffofplasticobjectsandaremovedbythewind,justlikedust.Theymixwithiceintheairandfalltothegroundassnow.FindingtheseplasticsinArcticsnowmeansthatwemaybreathethemin.Anevenhigheramountofmicroplasticwasfoundinthesnowaroundcities.Thehighconcentrations(濃度)foundinsnowsamples(樣本)suggestmicroplastics,whichcontainrubberorchemicalsusedinsyntheticfabrics(合成纖維),maycausesignificantairpollution.HealthOrganization.Wedoknowthatourbodiescannottakein“l(fā)arge”piecesofmicroplasticsHowever,iftheplasticsaresmallenough,theycanfindwaysintoourbodiesandstaythereforalongtime,whichcanbebadforourhealth.What’smore,earlierstudieshaveshownthatmicroplasticsmaycontributetolungcancerrisk,heighteningtheneedtofurtherassess(評估)therisksoftakingthemin,thestudysaid.Microplasticshavealsobeenfoundinriversandoceansaroundtheworld.Previousresearchhasfoundthattheyflowoverlongdistancesandintoouroceans,damagingecosystems(生態(tài)系統(tǒng))alongtheway.Theystartinourwastewaterwhenwewashclotheswithplasticfibers.Thewastewaterthenflowsintoriversandouttosea,wheretheyareeatenbyseaanimals.Ifpeopletheneattheseanimals,itmeansthatwe’reeatingtheplasticaswell.Summarywriting綱領(lǐng)寫作Pleasewriteasummaryofthearticleinabout60words.（三）MysonLeon’spassionforsurfingbeganattheageof13.Beforeandafterschooleachday,heputonhiswetsuit,pickeduphiscompanion,swamoutbeyondthesurflineandwaitedtobechallengedbyhisthree-tosix-footfriends.Oneafternoon,thelifeguard(救生員)reportedoverthephonetomyhusbandWilsonthatLeon’seyewasbadlyinjuredbyhisboard.Wilsonrushedhimtotheemergencyroom.Hereceived26stitches(縫針)fromthecornerofhiseyetothebridgeofhisnose.Iwasonanairplaneflyinghomefromaspeakingengagement(

安排)whileLeon

’seyewasbeingstitched.WilsondrovedirectlytotheairportaftertheyleftthedoctormeatthegateandtoldmeLeonwaswaitinginthecar.

’soffice.He“Leon?”Iquestioned.Irememberthinkingthewavesmusthavebeenbadthatday.“He’sbeeninanaccident,buthe’sgoingtobefine.”Atravelingworkingmother’sworstnightmare噩夢)had(cometrue.Irantothecarsofastthattheheelofmyshoebrokeoff.Iswungopenthedoortoseethatmyyoungestsonhadapatch(眼罩)overhiseyeandwasleaning(傾斜)towardmecrying,“Oh,Ma,I’msogladyou’rehome.IcriedinhisarmstellinghimhowawfulIfeltaboutnotbeingtherewhenthelifeguardcalled.“It’sokay,Mom,”hecomfortedme.“Youdon’tknowhowtosurfanyway.”

”“What?”Iasked,confusedbyhislogic.“I’llbefine.ThedoctorsaysIcangobackinthewaterineightdays.”Iwantedtotellhimhewasn’tallowedtogonearwateragainuntilhewas35,butIbitinstead,mytongueandhopedhewouldforgetaboutsurfing.Forthenextsevendays,hekeptpressingmetolethimsurfagain.OnedayafterIhadrepeated“No”tohimforthe100thtime,hebeatmeatmyowngame.“Mom,youtaughtusnevertogiveupwhatwelove.”Igavein.Backthen,Leonwasjustaboywithapassionforsurfing.Now,he’samanwitharesponsibility.Heranksamongthetop25professionalsurfersintheworld.Passionatepeopleembracewhattheyloveandnevergiveup.Summarywriting綱領(lǐng)寫作Pleasewriteasummaryofthearticleinabout60words.參照答案：MysonLeonlovedsurfingfrom13andwouldsurfeveryday.Onedayhewasbadlyinjuredbyhisboard.ButhestillheldontohispassionandpersuadedmebypointingoutthatIhadtaughthimnottogiveuponwhatwelove.Nowheisagreatsurfer.Passionatepeoplenevergiveuponwhattheylove.(四)IspentoneSundayafternoonhelpingmyfriendputtogethertheicehockey(冰球)nethe’djustboughtforhiskids.Done,westoodbackandadmiredtheprecision(精巧度)design.AlthoughmychildhoodfriendsandIwould’velovedsuchanet,thereisalottobesaidforthewaywehadtoimprovise(臨時改動)ourhockeygames.Improvisinggoalnetswithwhatwecouldfindmadeusinventive,taughtusleadershipandteamworkandwasfunandjoyful.Mostoftenweusedboots(靴子).Eachgoalwasmarkedbytwobootsspacedasequallyapartaswecouldmanage.Thetroublewasthattheyoftenwentslidingwhenthepuck(冰球運動用球)hitthemhardenough.Thosemomentswereexciting,asthegoalie(守門員)hadtochaseabootthathadmoved,andresetitquickly,orrisksomeonetakingadvantageandscoringagoal.Andwealsohadtokeepoureyespeeledfortheoccasionaldishonestgoaliewhomightmovethebootsclosertogether.Thissituationledtodiscussionsandargumentsoverwhatmightormightnothavebeenagoal,butweimprovedourdebatingskillsinthesenegotiations,andlearnedtostanduptokidswhowantedtodominate(控制)everyoneelse.Inevitably(不可以防范地),thenumberofcompetitorswouldthinoutasmomscalledthemhomeforsupper.Thiswasthebesttime.Afterthehoursofplay,weweresweaty,red-faced,wetanddirty.Playershadtobetradedtokeeptheteamseven,butwemanagedtheadjustmentswell.Notimetowastenow,sincesoonitwouldbedark.Wejoinedournewteamnoquestionsasked,justtakingthepositionontheicethecaptainpointedusto.Enemiesbecamefriends.Anotherv