應(yīng)用文寫作海洋保護(hù)倡議書 講義-高三英語(yǔ)二輪復(fù)習(xí)寫作專項(xiàng)

真題回顧（2022年全國(guó)甲卷）你校將以六月八日世界海洋日為主題，舉辦英語(yǔ)征文比賽，請(qǐng)你寫一篇短文投稿，內(nèi)容包括：1.海洋的重要性；2.

保護(hù)海洋的倡議。注意：1.

詞數(shù)100左右；2.短文的題目和首句已為你寫好。OurOceans,OurResponsibilityJune8thwasofficiallynamedbytheUNin2009asWorldOceansDay._________________________________________________________________

_________________________________________________________________解題分析小貼士：本話題隸屬于《普通高中英語(yǔ)課程標(biāo)準(zhǔn)》（2017年版2020年修訂）中的“人與自然”主題語(yǔ)境下的“環(huán)境保護(hù)”主題群，要求學(xué)生關(guān)注全球海洋環(huán)境問(wèn)題，提升環(huán)保意識(shí)。題目?jī)?nèi)容要點(diǎn)開(kāi)放，引導(dǎo)學(xué)生認(rèn)識(shí)人類生存、發(fā)展與環(huán)境的關(guān)系，樹(shù)立人類命運(yùn)共同體意識(shí)。文體：應(yīng)用文——倡議書人稱：第一人稱為主，第三人稱為輔時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)語(yǔ)言風(fēng)格：正式，簡(jiǎn)潔而有力寫作思路：1.開(kāi)篇：簡(jiǎn)單介紹世界海洋日的目的2.主體段落：海洋的重要性及保護(hù)海洋的具體倡議（兩個(gè)要點(diǎn)）3.結(jié)尾：呼吁讀者共同努力寫作語(yǔ)料I.首段切入主題1.It’sadaytothinkabouttheimportantrolethattheoceanplaysinourlives,thedangersthattheoceanisfacingandtheactionwecantaketoprotectit.2.Theideaofthisdayistoraiseawarenessoftheimportanceofouroceansthroughvariousactivities.3.Itremindseveryoneofthemajorroletheoceanshaveineverydaylife.II.要點(diǎn)一：海洋的重要性主旨句：1.Oceansarethelungsofourplanet,amajorsourceoffoodandmedicineandacriticalpartofthebiosphere.2.Oceansarecloselyrelatedtothesurvivalanddevelopmentofmankind.3.Theoceanisofgreatimportance/significancetoushumans.Itinfluencesalmosteverythingwecareabout.4.Asisknowntousall,theoceanplaysanimportantroleinourdailylife.Thefateofhumanbeingsisdirectlyconnectedtothehealthofthesea.5.Itisknowntousallthattheoceanisessentialtohumanlife.具體內(nèi)容：1.TheoceanishometothemajorityofplantsandanimalsonEarth.Marineplantsprovideuswithatleast50percentoftheoxygenwebreathe.2.Itcoversabout70percentofEarth’ssurface.Webreathefreshairthankstotheoceanwhichproducesabouthalfoftheworld’soxygen.3.Coveringabout70percentofEarth’ssurface,theoceanishometoawidevarietyofmarinelife,andisthemainsourceofproteinformorethanabillionpeoplearoundtheworld.4.Theoceannotonlyprovidesuswithabundantseafood,butalsoplaysavitalpartinmaintainingthebalanceofourecosystem.5.Theoceanalsoregulatestheglobalclimate;theymediatetemperatureanddrivetheweather,determiningrainfall,droughts,andfloods.6.Nomatterwhereyouliveontheplanet,andnomatterhowfaryouarefromthesea,yourlifeisdependentontheocean.III.要點(diǎn)二：保護(hù)海洋的倡議保護(hù)海洋的必要性：1.Inrecentyears,overfishingandpollutionhaveputtheworld’soceansingreatdanger.It’shightimethatwetookmeasurestoprotectthem.2.With90percentofbigfishpopulationsdepleted,and50percentofcoralreefsdestroyed,wearetakingmorefromtheoceanthancanbereplenished.3.Themosturgentproblemthattheoceanfacescurrentlyisplasticpollution.Tonsofplasticbagsandplasticbottlesarebeingthrownintotheoceanseachyear,killingwildlifeandevenendingupintheseafoodthatweeat.4.Theoceanholdstheblueprintforhumankind’sfuture.Itisterrifyingtothinkthatsomethingthispreciouscouldbethreatened.保護(hù)海洋的倡議：1.Weshouldspendmoretimetryingtounderstandtheoceanandprotectit.2.Weshouldtakesomeeffectivemeasures/tryourbesttoprotectthemarineenvironment.3.Weshouldmakeeveryeffort/doourutmosttorestoreahealthymarineecosystem．4.Decisiveactionisneededtohelpmakeadifference.Itstartswithus,inourdailylife.5.Itisourresponsibilitytoshowconcernfor/paycloseattentiontotheurgentmarineecologicalproblems.保護(hù)海洋的具體措施：1.Firstofall,weshouldlimitouruseofplasticbags,whichcandoharmtomarinelife.Reusablebagsaregoodalternatives.2.Also,weshouldalwaysavoidthrowinggarbageintotheocean.3.Inaddition,wecanjoin/takeanactivepartin/participateinlocalenvironmentalprotectionactivities,suchashelpingcleanuptrashbeforeitgetsintotheocean.4.Itisnecessaryforusstudentstolearn/acquiremoreknowledgeabouthowtoprotecttheoceanandputitintopractice.5.Forexample,wecanalsohandout/distributeleafletsinneighboringcommunitiestoraisethepublicawarenessofmarineenvironmentalproblemsandcallonmorepeopletoprotecttheocean.IV.結(jié)尾呼吁1.Pleasejoinusinprotectingtheocean.2.Letusworktogether/joinhands/makejointeffortstofightagainstmarinepollutionandcreateabettermarineenvironment.3.Whynotjoinintoremindpeopleabouttheimportanceofouroceansandtomakeadifference?4.Don’tforgetthateventhoughwhatyoudotohelpmightbeminor,“smallfishcanmakeawhaleofadifference”.重點(diǎn)表達(dá)一覽表showconcernfor/beconcernedabout

關(guān)注，關(guān)心paycloseattentionto

密切關(guān)注raisethepublicawarenessof

提升公眾的……意識(shí)becloselyrelatedtosb/sth

與……密切相關(guān)bedirectlyconnectedtosb/sth

與……直接關(guān)聯(lián)beofgreatimportance/significancetosb/sth……來(lái)說(shuō)非常重要berichinnaturalresources

自然資源豐富playakey/vital/crucialrolein

起重要作用maintainthebalanceofecology

維持生態(tài)平衡reusablebags

環(huán)保袋takeeffectivemeasures

采取有效措