高考英語復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)課件（鄰里關(guān)系-慶祝鄰居喬遷之喜特制“歡迎餅干”）

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)鄰里關(guān)系——慶祝鄰居喬遷之喜，特制“歡迎餅干”1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文WhenmyfriendOllieandIsawamovingtruckpullupinfrontofthebluehouseonthecorner,wehopedthere'dbeanewkidtoplaywith.ThewindowinOllie'skitchengaveustheperfectviewforwatchingthemoverswhilewewereeatingourlunch.“Thatlookslikeacouch(長(zhǎng)沙發(fā)),”Isaidasthemoversstruggledtogetitthroughthedoor.“Lookatallthoseboxes!”saidOllie.“Therewon'tbeanyroomleftforpeopleinthehouse.”Butwestilldidn'tseeanykids.“Everythingisstillinboxes,”O(jiān)lliepointedout.“We'dneedX-rayvisiontoknowiftherearekidsinside.”Justthen,amanandawomancameoutofthehouse.TheygreetedAbuela,Ollie'sgrandmother,whowasoutsidewateringherflowers.Beforelong,theywerealltalkingandlaughing.“Itoldyou.Nokids!”Isaid.Olliepointedatagirlridinguptousonabikeandsaid,“Thenwho'sthat?”IclappedandOlliejumpedup.“Let'ssayhi,”O(jiān)lliesaid.“Aren'tyousupposedtobringatreatwhenyouwelcomepeopletotheneighborhood?”Isaid.4續(xù)寫原文Justthen,Abuelawalkedintothehouse.Shesaidthefamilywasverynice,andthatthegirlwasaboutourage.OlliesuggestedwemakesomecookiesandAbuelagaveusacookbook.“Dowereallyneedtofollowarecipe?”saidOllie.“Yes!”AbuelaandIsaidloudly!Ollieisfamousforgettingcreativewithrecipesandturningdelicioustreatsintodisasters.Youknowhowsomepeoplearenaturallygoodatbakinganddon'tneedarecipetomakesomethingtastefantastic?Well,Ollieisnotoneofthosepeople!“Whatagreatjobyoutwodid,”Abuelasaid,pullingourcookiesoutoftheoven.Assoonastheywerecoolenoughtoputinacontainer,OllieandIranoutthedoor.5段首句Para1：Wefoundthenewgirlridingaroundonherbike.Para2：OllieandIeachtookacookieandhadabite.6Part2題目分析7續(xù)寫原文分析8本文以人物為線索。講述了Ollie和我每一次看到有人新搬來時(shí)，就很期待有新孩子和我們一起玩。這一次新搬來的家里有一個(gè)叫做Gabriella的小女孩，因此Ollie和我打算用她祖母的食譜給新搬來的Gabriella做“歡迎餅干”。Ollie是一個(gè)有著新奇想法的人，因此她在餅干里加了辣椒粉，讓餅干吃起來感覺味道怪怪的。即使如此，Gabriella還是很喜歡我們?yōu)樗龅娘灨?，她媽媽還是邀請(qǐng)我們?nèi)ニ依锍粤闶?。因此我們一起度過了愉快的一天。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)9續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：Wefoundthenewgirlridingaroundonherbike.由第一段首句內(nèi)容“我們看到新搬來的小女孩在騎自行車玩”可知，本段可以寫Ollie和我將餅干送給Gabriella，她嘗了一口，發(fā)現(xiàn)味道很奇怪并詢問我們?cè)陲灨衫锛恿耸裁?。結(jié)果發(fā)現(xiàn)原來是Ollie為了讓餅干吃起來更有味兒，在餅干里加了辣椒粉。10續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：OllieandIeachtookacookieandhadabite.由第二段首句內(nèi)容“Ollie和我都拿起了一塊餅干，咬了一口”可知，本段可以寫Ollie和我吃完餅干的反應(yīng)，以及Gabriella覺得雖然餅干味道很怪，但是她還是很喜歡并且感謝我們，她的媽媽還邀請(qǐng)我們一起去她家吃零食。11續(xù)寫思路分析續(xù)寫線索看到小女孩騎車玩→送上自己做的餅干→Gabriella覺得味道很奇怪→原來Ollie是加了辣椒粉在餅干里→Gabriella感謝我們的友好→Gabriella的媽媽邀請(qǐng)我們?nèi)ニ页粤闶场覀兺娴煤荛_心。12續(xù)寫素材可用詞匯：行為類挑選：choose/select放入：putsth.in/addsth.to發(fā)現(xiàn)：find/discover/realize情緒類尷尬的：embarrassed/awkward奇怪的：strange/odd13續(xù)寫素材可用句型：Afteralittlewhile,Abuelacameoutsidetoseehowweweredoing,andGabriella'smominvitedusallintotheirhouseforasnack.（使用了how引導(dǎo)賓語從句）“That'ssosweet!”thegirlsaid,choosingacookieandtakingabite.（使用了現(xiàn)在分詞做伴隨狀語）14Part3范文呈現(xiàn)15范文呈現(xiàn)Wefoundthenewgirlridingaroundonherbike.“Welcome,neighbor!”Isaid.IintroducedOllieandmyselftoher.“Hopeyouandyourfamilylikechocolate-chipcookies.Wemadetheseforyou,”saidOllie.“That'ssosweet!”thegirlsaid,choosingacookieandtakingabite.“I'mGabriella.”Thenshestoppedchewingandmadeafunnyface.“Whatdidyouputinthecookiesexceptchocolate?”sheasked.“Regularcookiesareboring,”O(jiān)lliesaid.“IwantedthemtotastelikeAbuela'shotchocolate,soIusedalittlechilipowder.”“Oh,brother,”Isighed.16范文呈現(xiàn)OllieandIeachtookacookieandhadabite.Olliefoundhehadputintoomuchchilipowderandfeltveryembarrassed.However,Gabriellasaidnomatterhowstrangethesetasted,theywerethebest“welcometotheneighborhood”cookiesshehadeverhad.Thethreeofuslaughed.Afteralittlewhile,Abuelacameoutsidetoseehowweweredoing,andGabriella'smominvitedusallintotheirhouseforasnack.Wehadagoodtimethatday.17范文譯文我們發(fā)現(xiàn)新來的女孩騎著自行車到處跑?！皻g迎你，鄰居！”我說。我把奧利和我自己介紹給她。奧利說：“希望你和你的家人喜歡巧克力餅干。我們?yōu)槟阕龅??！??！疤鹆?！”女孩說，選了一塊餅干咬了一口?！拔沂荊abriella?！比缓笏Ｖ沽司捉?，做出了一個(gè)滑稽的表情?！俺饲煽肆Γ阍陲灨衫锓帕耸裁?？”她問道?！捌胀ǖ娘灨珊軣o聊，”奧利說。“我想讓它們嘗起來像阿布拉的熱巧克力，所以我用了一點(diǎn)辣椒粉?！薄芭?，兄弟，”我嘆了口氣。18范文譯文奧利和我每人拿了一塊餅干吃了一口。奧利發(fā)現(xiàn)他放了太多辣椒粉，感到非常尷尬。然而，G