（2022年）江西省南昌市大學(xué)英語(yǔ)6級(jí)大學(xué)英語(yǔ)六級(jí)模擬考試(含答案)

（2022年）江西省南昌市大學(xué)英語(yǔ)6級(jí)大學(xué)英語(yǔ)六級(jí)模擬考試(含答案)學(xué)校:________班級(jí):________姓名:________考號(hào):________

一、1.Writing(10題)1.Directions:Thefollowingtablegivesstatisticsshowingtheaspectsofqualityoflifeinfivecountries.Writeacompositiondescribingtheinformationinthetablebelow.Youshouldwriteatleast150words.

2.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledFoodSafety.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.

1.食品安全事故屢有發(fā)生

2．人們對(duì)食品的安全越來(lái)越擔(dān)心

3．怎樣才能解決好食品的安全問(wèn)題

3.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledScientificBreakthroughsinChina.Youshouldwriteatleast150words

followingtheoutlinegivenbelow:

ThenumberofscientificbreakthroughsoverthepastyearsinChina(Estimated)

1.上圖所示為中國(guó)近幾年的科學(xué)創(chuàng)新情況，請(qǐng)描述其變化

2.請(qǐng)說(shuō)明發(fā)生這變化的原因

3.對(duì)此進(jìn)行預(yù)測(cè)

ScientificBreakthroughsinChina

4.Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayonthetopicofLow-CarbonLifestyle.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.

1．目前低碳生活成為一種流行

2．低碳生活指的是……

3．作為大學(xué)生我應(yīng)該怎么做

Low-CarbonLifestyle

5.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledLeft-behindChildrenintheCountryside.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.

1.留守兒童的現(xiàn)象在農(nóng)村非常普遍

2.這種現(xiàn)象帶來(lái)的弊端

3.我診斷該如何時(shí)處理這些問(wèn)題

6.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowedtowriteashortessayentitledCollegeStudents'MakingMoney.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.

1.大學(xué)生兼職工作的現(xiàn)象

2．大學(xué)生兼職工作的原因

3．我的觀點(diǎn)

7.1.老一輩常說(shuō)，能力比相貌重要

2.如今很多人卻認(rèn)為相貌比有力重要

3.你的看法

AbilityandGoodLooks

8.Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopic:IdleYoung,NeedyOld.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:

1．解釋諺語(yǔ)

2．結(jié)合現(xiàn)實(shí)舉例論證

3．珍惜時(shí)光，從現(xiàn)在做起

IdleYoung,NeedyOld

9.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledHowtoWriteanEnglishResume?Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:

1.中英文簡(jiǎn)歷有所不同，英語(yǔ)簡(jiǎn)歷不是漢語(yǔ)簡(jiǎn)歷的直接翻譯；

2．寫(xiě)英語(yǔ)簡(jiǎn)歷要注意：不要簡(jiǎn)單羅列，要突出重點(diǎn)；內(nèi)容安排要合理；用詞準(zhǔn)確，認(rèn)真檢查等等。

HowtoWriteanEnglishResume?

10.Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicCollegeStudents'PressureinFindingJobs.Youshouldwriteatleast150words,andbaseyourcompositionontheoutlinegiveninChinesebelow:

1．07年應(yīng)屆大學(xué)畢業(yè)生人數(shù)達(dá)近幾年來(lái)最高峰，就業(yè)形勢(shì)依然嚴(yán)峻

2．如何解釋其中原因

3．對(duì)該問(wèn)題的出路提出看法

CollegeStudents'PressureinFindingJobs

二、2.ReadingComprehension(SkimmingandScanning)(10題)11.

Czerwinskifoundthatnootherchangetoacomputersystemcouldmoresignificantlyimproveauser'sproductivitythan______.

12.

Becauseoftheeffectsofanelectromagneticfieldongrowingcells,______aretheoneswhoeasilyfallvictimtoitseffects.

13.

Adrawbacktolowheadhydroelectricpowerstationsisthattheydependon______.

A.thesolaractivity

B.seasonalwaterflow

C.seasonalwinddirection

D.theearth'sselfrotation

14.Kellyhasallthelatest______aboutthejobhuntingmarket.

A.marketdataonsalariesandtrendstohand

B.dataonquestionsthattheemployeraskduringinterviews

C.dataonthesuccessfulexampleswiththehelpofKelly

D.recordsofthecompaniesnewlysetup

15.

theUnitedStatesforever.

16.AccordingtoRubin,theeffectofAuto-Tuneonsingersmaybe______.

A.positiveB.negativeC.exaggeratedD.underestimated

17.

Glossy,"glam"photosarenotrecommendedtobepostedontheonlinedatingsitebecausetheyarenotexactly______.

18.

WeModernpeople'sbodiesreacttostressindifferentwaysfromourancestors'bodiesdid.

A.YB.NC.NG

19.WhenGeorginaUresti-Mandanadofeltill,shedidn'tgotoseethedoctorimmediatelybecause______.

A.Shewasnotcoveredbyhealthinsurance

B.Shewantedtowaituntilthewinterbreak

C.Shethoughthergrandmacouldcureher

D.Shewasgoingtovisitherfamilysoon

20.

Oftenstudentsarequite______thattheyaremovingtheirheadswhilereading.

三、3.ListeningComprehension(10題)21.【B2】

22.

【B4】

23.(35)

A.Bothconveythesamemeaning.

B.Bothshowcertainaspectsoftheworld.

C.Thelatterismoremeaningful.

D.Theformerismoremeaningful.

24.

【B2】

25.(38)

26.(44)

27.聽(tīng)力原文：M:Mary,(19)youwanttotalkaboutyoursecondessay,right?

W:Yes,Dr.Richardson.IjustneedyourcommentsonwhatI'mplanningtodo.(19)I'mdoingtheessayonthedifferencesbetweenTVnewsprogramsatdifferenthoursoftheday.

M:Howmanytimesslotsareyouplanningtoconsider?

W:Well,IthinkI'dlookatallofthem.That'dbefiveslots.Thebreakfastnews,midmorningnews.middaynews.mid-afternoonnewsandeveningnews.

M:That'sratheralot.Andyou'dhavetoomuchtoconsider.(20)Whydon'tyoujustdotwo.Saythemidmorningandtheneveningnews.Thatshouldgiveyoutwocontrastingapproacheswithtwomainaudiencecompositions.

W:OK,justtwothen.

M:Yes,Ithinkthatwouldbemuchbetter.Nowhowmanyactualprogramsdoyouplantoworkwith?

W:Whatdoyouthinkofanalyzingawholeweek'snewsprograms?

M:Well,thatdependsonhowmuchofeachprogram,ifyouconcentrateononeparticulartypeofnewsitem,saythesportsnewsorlocalitems,itmightbealright.

W:Yes.thatwouldbeagoodidea.(21)Iwon'tmakeadecisionbeforeIcollectasampleofprogramsoverawholeweek.I'lllookatthemandseewhatitemsappearthroughouttheweek.

M:Yes,that'sasoundapproach.(22)Nowwe’regettingclosetothedeadline.Canyoufinishitintime?

W:Yes,Ithinkso.I'vecompletedthereadingandIknowwhatmybasicapproachis,soit'sreallyjustamatterofpullingitalltogethernow.

M:Fine,Mary.I'lllookforwardtoreadingit.

(23)

A.Todiscussthesecondessay.

B.TogetthecommentsonTVnews.

C.ToplantojoinTVnewsprograms.

D.TotellthedifferenceofTVnews.

28.(31)

A.Theneedtoexercisethememory.

B.Howthebraindiffersfromotherbodytissues.

C.Theunconsciouslearningofaphysicalactivity.

D.Hownervescontrolbodymovement.

29.(32)

A.Theearlydinosaurremains.

B.Ancientpicturesofdinosaurs.

C.Thebodybonesofsauropods.

D.Asauropodskulldiscovered.

30.

【B6】

四、4.ReadingComprehension(ReadinginDepth)(3題)31.Emotionalmaturitymeansknowingthatanotherpersoncannotfilluptheholeinyourheart.Thatisyourresponsibility.Youneedtoloveandaffirmyourselfday-by-day,moment-by-moment.Thatisthespiritualchallengeofyourlifeandeverybody'slife.Withoutyourloveforyourself,nothingworks.Noamountoflovefromyourpartnerisenough.Thesearchforlovefromotherpeopleislikethealcoholic'ssearchforhappinessinabottle.Themorehedrinks,thelesssatisfiedhefeelsandthemorehewantstodrink.

Wearealladdictedtofallinginlove.Butafterwe've"fallen"afewtimesandbrokenouremotionalhones,wehopefullywiseupabit.Weknowthatthehighoffallinginloveisnotgoingtolast.Weknowthatsoonerorlaterwewillhavetogetrealwitheachother.Thatisthedifferencebetweenromanceandpartnership.Romanceisanattempttokeeptheaddictiongoing.Ithasaveryshorthalf-life.Partnershipisthedanceoftwoordinarypeoplelearningtolivetogetherdaybyday.Itisaverychallengingschoolthatweenrollin.Itissometimesalotmoreworkthanplay.Anditcertainlyrequiresalotmorepsychologicaladjustmentthanyearsoftherapy!Wedon'tjustgraduatefromthisschoolinayearortwo.Ittakesmanyyears,perhapsevenalifetime,forustomasterthecurriculum.

Yourpartnersareimperfecthumanbeings,justlikeyou.Theywerenotthe"wrong"partnersanymorethanyouwere.Probably,theyreflectedyourownlevelofrealismandemotionalmaturity.That'susuallythewayitworks.Sodon'twasteyourtimethinkingyousimplymadesomebadchoices.Theonlybadchoiceyoumadewasforgettingwhohasthefulltimejoblovingyou.Iknowthatyouknowwhothisis!

Wekeeprememberingthattheyarenotperfect,norweare.Loveisnotagameofperfection.Itisagameofoverwhelmingimperfection.Theamazingthingisthatlovesurvivesallofourmistakenattemptstocontrolourpartnersandourrelationships.

Wecanconcludefromthepassagethat______.

A.wewon'tforgetwhohasthefulltimelovingus

B.loveisaddictive

C.lovefromyourpartnerisnotenough

D.loveliesinthematurityofemotionwhichisessentialtoapartnershiporrelationship

32.SectionA

Directions:Inthissection,thereisashortpassagewith5questionsorincompletestatements.Readthepassagecarefully.Thenanswerthequestionsorcompletethestatementsinthefewestpossiblewords.

Inthe1950s,thepioneersofartificialintelligence(Al)predictedthat,bytheendofthiscentury,computerswouldbeconversingwithusatworkandrobotswouldbeperformingourhousework.Butasusefulascomputersare,they'renowhereclosetoachievinganythingremotelyresemblingtheseearlyaspirationsforhumanlikebehavior.Nevermindsomethingascomplexasconversation:themostpowerfulcomputersstruggletoreliablyrecognizetheshapeofanobject,themostelementaryoftasksforaten-month-oldkid.

AgrowinggroupofAlresearchersthinktheyknowwherethefieldwentwrong.Theproblem,thescientistssay,isthatAlhasbeentryingtoseparatethehighest,mostabstractlevelsofthought,likelanguageandmathematics,andtoduplicatethemwithlogical,step-by-stepprograms.AnewmovementinAl,ontheotherhand,takesacloserlookatthemoreroundaboutwayinwhichnaturecameupwithintelligence.Manyoftheseresearchersstudyevolutionandnaturaladaptationinsteadofformallogicandconventionalcomputerprograms.Ratherthandigitalcomputersandtransistors,somewanttoworkwithbraincallsandproteins.Theresultsoftheseearlyeffortsareaspromisingastheyarepeculiar,andthenewnature-basedAlmovementisslowlybutsurelymovingtotheforefrontofthefield.

Imitatingthebrain'sneural(神經(jīng)的)networkisahugestepintherightdirection,sayscomputerscientistandbiophysicistMichaelConrad,butitstillmissesanimportantaspectofnaturalintelligence."Peopletendtotreatthebrainasifitweremadeupofcolor-codedtransistors,"heexplains,"butit'snotsimplyaclevernetworkofswitches.Therearelotsofimportantthingsgoingoninsidethebraincellsthemselves."Specifically,Conradbelievesthatmanyofthebrain'scapabilitiesstemfromthepatternrecognitionproficiencyoftheindividualmoleculesthatmakeupeachbraincell.Thebestwaytobuildanartificiallyintelligentdevice,heclaims,wouldbetobuilditaroundthesamesortofmolecularskills.

Rightnow,theoptionthatconventionalcomputersandsoftwarearefundamentallyincapableofmatchingtheprocessesthattakeplaceinthebrainremainscontroversial.Butifitprovestrue,thentheeffortsofConradandhisfellowAlrebelscouldturnouttobetheonlygameintown.

"Butasusefulascomputersare,they'renowhereclosetoachievinganythingremotelyresemblingtheseearlyaspirationsforhumanlikebehavior."(Lines3-4,Para.1)meansscientistshaveachieved______inrealizingtheiraspirations.

33.

ThemultinationaltrainingprogramismostlyconcernedwiththerelationbetweenAmericansand______.

A.theJapaneseB.ArabsC.BraziliansD.Orientals

五、5.ErrorCorrection(3題)34.【S7】

35.Aswehaveenteredthenewcentury,human

societyisbeginningitsmovefromtheindustrial

economyintotheknowledge-basedeconomy.In

morespecificterm,theapplicationofinformation【S1】______

totheeconomyisbestusedinthenetworkingof

communication,andtheso-calledNeteconomy.【S2】______

Thisetreferstothecomputernetworkofsatellites,

opticfibers,andtelephonelinesthatconnectthe

wholeworld.Fortheclickofamouse,information【S3】______

fromtheotherendoftheglobewilltransportto【S4】______

yourcomputerscreenattheextremelyfastspeed

ofseven-and-a-halftimesaroundtheearthper

second.Generally,therearetwoaspectsoftheNet.

Oneisthenetworkingbetweenbusinessesandtheir

customers.Anotheristhenetworkingbetween【S5】______

individualbusinesses,ortheregionalandeven

globalnetworkingbetweenindustrialproductionand

scienceresearch.Internetshoppingbelongstothe【S6】______

firstaspect.

Fromalong-termrespective,Internetshopping【S7】______

isbutalow-levelaspectoftheNet,anditis

verylikelytobecomethemostimportanttrend.【S8】______

Afterall,mostcommoditiesareunsuitablefor

Internetshopping.Besides,ifeveryoneshopson

theNet,whatwillcometothehundredsandthousands【S9】______

ofshoppingmalls?Therefore,thesecond

aspectoftheNetwillbemoreimportant.Its

significancegoespastthatofconnectingbusinesses.【S10】______

Therehavebeenreportsofimmediateconsultation

ofdoctorsfromallovertheworldontheInternet.

Theseareearlyexamplesofhigh-levelnetworking.

【S1】

36.

【S10】

六、6.ErrorCorrection(3題)37.

【S9】

38.

【S8】

39.

【S10】

參考答案

1.Thetableusesfourbroadeconomicindicatorstoshowthestandardoflivinginfiveselectedcountriesin2000includingboththemostdevelopednationintheworldandsomeofthemuchlessdevelopednations.AscanbeseenfromthestatisticstheU.S.A.--oneoftherichestcountriesintheworld--hadthehighestGNPanddailycalorieintakethelongestlifeexpectancyandthelowestinfantmortalityrate.Theotherdevelopingcountrieshadaconsiderablylowerqualityoflife.EgyptIndonesiaandBoliviaweresimilarintheirrangeofindicatorswithEgypthavingthehighestqualityoflifeamongthethree.HoweverEgypt'sinfantmortalityratewasslightlyhigherthanIndonesia'sat40deathsper1000comparedto31inIndonesia.Bangladeshhadbyfarthelowestqualityoflifeinallthefourindicators.ItsGNPwasonlyaboutone-fortieththatoftheU.S.A.ThefigureintermsofthedailycaloriesupplyperheadinBangladeshisthehalfofthatinU.S.A.anditsinfantmortalityratewas6timesgreater.InconclusionitcanbeseenfromtheeconomicindicatorsthatthefourdevelopingcountrieshavealongwaytogobeforereachingthesamelevelofqualityoflifeastheU.S.A.AtthesametimetheU.S:A.hastheresponsibilitytohelptheothercountriestodeveloptheireconomiesandimprovetheirpeople'slivingstandards.Thetableusesfourbroadeconomicindicatorstoshowthestandardoflivinginfiveselectedcountriesin2000,includingboththemostdevelopednationintheworldandsomeofthemuchlessdevelopednations.Ascanbeseenfromthestatistics,theU.S.A.--oneoftherichestcountriesintheworld--hadthehighestGNPanddailycalorieintake,thelongestlifeexpectancyandthelowestinfantmortalityrate.Theotherdevelopingcountrieshadaconsiderablylowerqualityoflife.Egypt,IndonesiaandBoliviaweresimilarintheirrangeofindicators,withEgypthavingthehighestqualityoflifeamongthethree.However,Egypt'sinfantmortalityratewasslightlyhigherthanIndonesia's,at40deathsper1,000comparedto31inIndonesia.Bangladeshhadbyfarthelowestqualityoflifeinallthefourindicators.ItsGNPwasonlyaboutone-fortieththatoftheU.S.A.ThefigureintermsofthedailycaloriesupplyperheadinBangladeshisthehalfofthatinU.S.A.,anditsinfantmortalityratewas6timesgreater.Inconclusion,itcanbeseenfromtheeconomicindicatorsthatthefourdevelopingcountrieshavealongwaytogobeforereachingthesamelevelofqualityoflifeastheU.S.A.Atthesametime,theU.S:A.hastheresponsibilitytohelptheothercountriestodeveloptheireconomiesandimprovetheirpeople'slivingstandards.

2.FoodSafetyWiththeincreaseofthenumberofcasesrelatedtofakefoodsandfoodsofpoorqualityproblemsremainseriousinthemarket．The2008ChinesemilkscandalbeginningwithrevelationsofcontaminatFoodSafetyWiththeincreaseofthenumberofcasesrelatedtofakefoodsandfoodsofpoorquality,problemsremainseriousinthemarket．The2008Chinesemilkscandal,beginningwithrevelationsofcontaminat

3.ScientificBreakthroughsinChinaThenumberofscientificbreakthroughsinChinahasgrownveryfastoverthepastyears.In2001thenumberwasalmost50.In2002thenumberwasabout100andin2004thenumberScientificBreakthroughsinChinaThenumberofscientificbreakthroughsinChinahasgrownveryfastoverthepastyears.In2001,thenumberwasalmost50.In2002,thenumberwasabout100andin2004thenumber解析：這次的作文是看圖表作文。文章第一段應(yīng)該根據(jù)圖表先對(duì)中國(guó)這幾年科學(xué)創(chuàng)新的變化做一個(gè)描述。接下來(lái)，文章的第二段應(yīng)該羅列出這些創(chuàng)新變化產(chǎn)生的原因，一方面是現(xiàn)代科學(xué)技術(shù)的發(fā)展，另一方面是中國(guó)政府十分重視科學(xué)創(chuàng)新并為科學(xué)創(chuàng)新領(lǐng)域提供了大量的資金支持。文章的結(jié)尾應(yīng)提出對(duì)未來(lái)科學(xué)創(chuàng)新發(fā)展的預(yù)測(cè)。而在兩者比較的表達(dá)上，可以運(yùn)用fourtimesasbigas…，twice/threetimesaslarge/long…as或者threetimesthelength/sizeofthatone等表達(dá)方式。文章寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中，在表達(dá)數(shù)字概念時(shí)可以運(yùn)用以下表達(dá)方式，如：thenumberof…，theamountof…或thefigureof…表達(dá)原因可以運(yùn)用的句式為onereasonof…is，anotherreasonis…相關(guān)表達(dá)方法還有ononehand…ontheotherhand…或Foronething…Foranother…等。在表達(dá)個(gè)人的觀點(diǎn)方面可以運(yùn)用inmyopinion，inmypointofview或frommyperspective等。

4.Low-CarbonLifestyleEversincetheWorldClimateConferencewasheldinCopenhagentheterm"low-carbonlifestyle"hasbecomeabuzzwordinourdailylife.Everyoneoldoryoungistalkingaboutitandexertinghimselftoachievethelow-carbongoal.Eventhefamousstarsareexertingtheirgreatinfluenceonthecommongoaloflow-carbonlifestyle.Whatonearthislow-carbonlifestyle?Low-carbonlifestylemeanstolowertheemissionofcarbonespeciallycarbondioxidebyreducingtheenergyweuseinourdailylife.Forcommonpeoplelikeusthisisanattituderatherthanacapacity.Low-carbonlifestylecallsfortheactiveparticipationofallthepeopleintheprocessofsavingelectricityandgasaswellasrecyclingtheusefulmaterials.Ascollegestudentsweshouldcontributetotherevolutionoflow-carbonlifestylebyallmeans.Firstlyweshouldavoidusingdisposablecutlerytoreducetheamountofgarbage.Secondlytakingpublictransportmeansorwalkingratherthantakingataxiwhentravelingisanothereffectiveway.Lastbutnotleastboththeearthandwewillbenefitalotifweeatgreenfoodinsteadofjunkfoodormeat.Low-CarbonLifestyle.EversincetheWorldClimateConferencewasheldinCopenhagen,theterm"low-carbonlifestyle"hasbecomeabuzzwordinourdailylife.Everyone,oldoryoung,istalkingaboutitandexertinghimselftoachievethelow-carbongoal.Eventhefamousstarsareexertingtheirgreatinfluenceonthecommongoaloflow-carbonlifestyle.Whatonearthislow-carbonlifestyle?Low-carbonlifestyle.meanstolowertheemissionofcarbon,especiallycarbondioxide,byreducingtheenergyweuseinourdailylife.Forcommonpeoplelikeus,thisisanattituderatherthanacapacity.Low-carbonlifestyle.callsfortheactiveparticipationofallthepeopleintheprocessofsavingelectricityandgas,aswellasrecyclingtheusefulmaterials.Ascollegestudents,weshouldcontributetotherevolutionoflow-carbonlifestyle.byallmeans.Firstly,weshouldavoidusingdisposablecutlerytoreducetheamountofgarbage.Secondly,takingpublictransportmeansorwalkingratherthantakingataxiwhentravelingisanothereffectiveway.Lastbutnotleast,boththeearthandwewillbenefitalotifweeatgreenfoodinsteadofjunkfoodormeat.

5.Left-behindChildrenintheCountrysideEveryyearmillionsofpeoplefromruralareas①pourintocitiestofindjobs.①Andthephenomenonofleft-behindchildrenisprevalent.②Left-behindchildrenaresufferingaseriesofproblems.Theyarenottakengoodcareofbytheirparentsbecauseofthedistance.Thereforemanyofthemareratherweakphysicallyandpsychologically.Besidestheyareeasilyledastrayduetotheabsenceofparentalloveandguidance.③Inmyopinionmeasuresshouldbetakentosolvetheproblem.FirstlybothpeopleintheCitiesandcountrysideshouldendeavortoofferloveandconcerntothesechildren.Theparentsinparticularshouldnotmakemoney③atthesacrificeofignoranceoftheirchildren.Secondlypoliciesshouldbeimplementedsothatchildrenfromcountrysidecanalso③haveaccesstoeducationalopportunitiesmedicalcareandotherservicesinthecity.Finallyitisurgenttodevelopeconomyintheruralareassothatpeoplecangetwell-paidjobsneartheirhomes.Left-behindChildrenintheCountrysideEveryyear,millionsofpeoplefromruralareas①pourintocitiestofindjobs.①Andthephenomenonofleft-behindchildrenisprevalent.②Left-behindchildrenaresufferingaseriesofproblems.Theyarenottakengoodcareofbytheirparentsbecauseofthedistance.Therefore,manyofthemareratherweakphysicallyandpsychologically.Besides,theyareeasilyledastrayduetotheabsenceofparentalloveandguidance.③Inmyopinion,measuresshouldbetakentosolvetheproblem.Firstly,bothpeopleintheCitiesandcountrysideshouldendeavortoofferloveandconcerntothesechildren.Theparentsinparticularshouldnotmakemoney③atthesacrificeofignoranceoftheirchildren.Secondly,policiesshouldbeimplementedsothatchildrenfromcountrysidecanalso③haveaccesstoeducationalopportunities,medicalcareandotherservicesinthecity.Finally,itisurgenttodevelopeconomyintheruralareas,sothatpeoplecangetwell-paidjobsneartheirhomes.解析：[寫(xiě)作點(diǎn)撥]①審題及布局。根據(jù)提綱，這篇作文的第一段闡述現(xiàn)象，第二段闡明此現(xiàn)象的弊端，第三段提出解決辦法。這三個(gè)部分的論述要有側(cè)重點(diǎn)，我們可以把重點(diǎn)放在第二段或第三段。第一段闡明留守兒童現(xiàn)象是隨著大批進(jìn)城務(wù)工者的出現(xiàn)而出現(xiàn)的。第二段闡述留守兒童所遭遇的問(wèn)題：缺少父母的關(guān)愛(ài)，他們的身心都很有可能得不到健康的發(fā)展。第三段可以根據(jù)弊端的根源即缺少關(guān)愛(ài)人手，提出一系列建議，讓他們感受到關(guān)愛(ài)，得以健康成長(zhǎng)。②語(yǔ)言。這篇文章討論的是當(dāng)前的情況，用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)即可。在第二、三段的論述中，為了達(dá)到表意清晰，邏輯性強(qiáng)，要使用各種關(guān)聯(lián)詞，同時(shí)注意用詞的鮮明、準(zhǔn)確。

6.CollegeStudents'MakingMoneyNowadaysitisratherfashionableforcollegestudentstotakepart-timejobs.Theyworkintheftsparetimeinrestaurantsbarsorhelpchildrenasatutor.Afewofthemevensetuptheirowncompany.Thereareseveralreasonsforthemtotakepart-timejobs.Firsttheythinkmakingmoneythroughtheireffortscanhelpthemknowthevalueoflaborsothattheycanbemoreindependentmoreconfidentandmoreeconomicallyminded.Inadditionmakingmoneyoffcampuscanhelpthemgetmoresocialexperiencerealizewhatthesocietyisreallylikewhichisgoodforthemtogetabetterjobandgraspthecommunicatingskills.Inmyopiniontousstudentsstudyinghardisthemostimportanttask.Ifwehavefinishedourlessonswemaytakesomepart-timejobs.Thusthemoreimportantthingistokeepthebalancebetweenstudyandwork...Ifwecandealwithitwellwecanbenefitalotfromit.(168words)CollegeStudents'MakingMoneyNowadays,itisratherfashionableforcollegestudentstotakepart-timejobs.Theyworkintheftsparetimeinrestaurants,bars,orhelpchildrenasatutor.Afewofthemevensetuptheirowncompany.Thereareseveralreasonsforthemtotakepart-timejobs.First,theythinkmakingmoneythroughtheireffortscanhelpthemknowthevalueoflaborsothattheycanbemoreindependent,moreconfidentandmoreeconomicallyminded.Inaddition,makingmoneyoffcampuscanhelpthemgetmoresocialexperience,realizewhatthesocietyisreallylike,whichisgoodforthemtogetabetterjobandgraspthecommunicatingskills.Inmyopinion,tousstudents,studyinghardisthemostimportanttask.Ifwehavefinishedourlessons,wemaytakesomepart-timejobs.Thus,themoreimportantthingistokeepthebalancebetweenstudyandwork...Ifwecandealwithitwell,wecanbenefitalotfromit.(168words)解析：[寫(xiě)作思路]這篇作文屬于夾敘夾議的類型，其特點(diǎn)是往往以一個(gè)社會(huì)問(wèn)題或社會(huì)現(xiàn)象開(kāi)頭，中間部分分析原因、列舉影響或危害，最后提出解決問(wèn)題的建議或者展望未來(lái)。因此我們可以按照這種程序來(lái)展開(kāi)文章。第一段指出目前高校學(xué)生兼職的現(xiàn)象很普及，可舉在飯店、公司做兼職以及做家教辦公司等例子加以說(shuō)明。第二段闡述造成這種現(xiàn)象的原因：首先通過(guò)自己的努力掙些錢(qián)可以使學(xué)生們意識(shí)到勞動(dòng)的價(jià)值，從而獲得經(jīng)濟(jì)上的獨(dú)立。其次，在社會(huì)上兼職也可以使學(xué)生更多地了解社會(huì)，為他們以后踏上社會(huì)做好準(zhǔn)備。第三段結(jié)合自己談我們應(yīng)該怎么做：對(duì)于學(xué)生米講，最重要的還是先把學(xué)習(xí)學(xué)好；同時(shí)，還要注意保持好二者的平衡。根據(jù)以上思路便可以形成以下的作文。

7.AbilityandGoodLooksOldpeopleusuallytollyoungpeoplethattheyshouldnotjudgepeoplebytheirappearance.Thatmeansappearanceislossimportantthansayability.Indeedwe'veseensomanybrilliantpeoplewhoarenotgood-lookingatall.Inthefilm"Mozart"anoperasingerreiteratesthisviewbysaying:"Forawomanoftasteitisnotthelooksbutthetalentthatinterestsus."Forherthepreferenceshowsone'staste.Nowadayshoweverthingsaremuchdifferentinthejobmarket.Withmoreandmoreinterviewersputtingemphasisonthelooksortheappearanceofthejobapplicantsalotofpeoplecometotheconclusionthatappearanceismoreimportantthanability.Manybeautifulgirlsacquireverygoodpositionsalthoughtheydon'thavemuchtalent.Inmyopinionabilityisdefinitelymuchmoreimportantthangoodlooksnotonlybecauseabilitycomesfromeffortswhilegoodlooksarebornbutalsobecauseabilityisthemostimportantfactorthatdeterminesaperson'svalue.GoodlooksarepleasantbutifIhavetomakeachoicebetweenthemI'llchooseabilitybecauseitprovesmyvalue.AbilityandGoodLooksOldpeopleusuallytollyoungpeoplethattheyshouldnotjudgepeoplebytheirappearance.Thatmeansappearanceislossimportantthan,say,ability.Indeed,we'veseensomanybrilliantpeoplewhoarenotgood-lookingatall.Inthefilm"Mozart",anoperasingerreiteratesthisviewbysaying:"Forawomanoftaste,itisnotthelooks,butthetalentthatinterestsus."Forher,thepreferenceshowsone'staste.Nowadays,however,thingsaremuchdifferentinthejobmarket.Withmoreandmoreinterviewersputtingemphasisonthelooks,ortheappearanceofthejobapplicants,alotofpeoplecometotheconclusionthatappearanceismoreimportantthanability.Manybeautifulgirlsacquireverygoodpositionsalthoughtheydon'thavemuchtalent.Inmyopinion,abilityisdefinitelymuchmoreimportantthangoodlooks,notonlybecauseabilitycomesfromeffortswhilegoodlooksareborn,butalsobecauseabilityisthemostimportantfactorthatdeterminesaperson'svalue.Goodlooksarepleasant,butifIhavetomakeachoicebetweenthem,I'llchooseabilitybecauseitprovesmyvalue.

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