第一講考試介紹并列結構名詞化技巧

IELTS

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1Jack課堂特點和要求雅思寫作考試介紹雅思寫作的句型擴展方法寫作中的名詞化標點符號和銜接詞獨角戲小組討論頭腦風暴OR多練習真題題目修改習作總結錯誤，對弱項進行針對性強化練習雅思寫作20全球各考區(qū)總體情況（截至2010年）21全球各考區(qū)總體情況（截至2011年）2223242526271.小作文（20’00’’）150

words

at

least2.大作文（40’00’’)250

words

at

leastOrganise,

present

andpossibly

compare

dataDescribe

the stages

of

aprocessDescribe

an

object

or

eventExplain

how

something

works1.分值占作文部分總分值的1/3，所用時間直接影響到Task2的寫作時間和臨場發(fā)揮。2.論文寫作和答辯&工作1.Task

Achievement任務完成2.Coherence

and

Cohesion連貫銜接3.Lexical

Resource詞匯量4.

Grammatical

Range

and

Accuracy語法準確性雙邊題Discuss

both

viewsand

giveyour

ownopinion單邊題To

what

extent

do

you

agreeor

disagree?說明文What

are

the

causes

and

what

solutionscan

you

give?另類report:These

days,

many

people

living

in

big

cities

donot

go

to

museums

with

objects

of

historical,artistic

and

cultural

value.What

are

the

causes?How

is

it

important

to

society?(2012.12.15)1.Science

and

technology2.Education3.Life

and

Occupation4.Media5.Environment6.Language

and

Culture7.Tourism8.Arts

and

Sports9.Social

problems10.GovernmentPresent

a

solution

to

a

problemPresent

and

justify

an

opinionCompare

and

contrast

evidenceand

opinions1.TaskResponse2.

Coherence

and

Cohesion3.

Lexical

Resource4.

Grammatical

Range

and

AccuracyDo

you

answer

the

question

directly

or

doyou

talk

about

something

else

instead?Does

your

writing

make

sense?Is

your

essay

logically

organized

at

thesentence,

paragraph

and

whole

text

level?Do

you

use

a

wide

range

of

vocabularyaccurately

and

appropriately?Do

you

spell

correctly?Do

you

use

many

different

sentencestructures

or

do

you

always

use

thesameones?How

often

do

you

make

mistakeswithyour

grammar?不要背單詞不要脫離語境背單詞不要背范文背句子背模板句背課外閱讀的句子Why

IELTS?Why

IELTS

writing?What:

they

just

follow

what

the

teacher

tells

them

to

do(task-oriented)How:

they

try

to

find

out

the

most

suitable

learningstyle

in

their

own

way

(solution-oriented)Why:

they

do

everything

by

asking

themselves

“whyam

I

doing

it?”(goal-oriented)ParagraphSentenceWordEssayA

tool

boxVocabularyGrammarParagraphWriting復雜句意簡單化簡單句意英語化簡單英語復雜化中-------中中-------英英英我對雅思考試胸有成竹。我對雅思考試很有信心。I

am

confident

about

IELTS.I

am

very/quite

confident

about

IELTS.I

feel

fairly/reasonably

confident

about

IELTS.I

have

an

absolute

conviction

that

I

will

passIELTS.I

have

an

absolute

conviction

that

I

will

pass

IELTSwith

minimum

effort.I

have

an

absolute

conviction

that

I

will

passIELTS

as

easy

as

falling

off

the

log.I

have

an

absolute

conviction

that

I

will

passIELTS

this

year just

as

easy

as

falling

offthe

log.I

have

an

absolute

conviction

these

days

thatI

will

pass

IELTS

this

year

just

as

easy

asfalling

off

the

log

with

the

great

help

ofJack,

who

is

one

of

the

best

teachers

Ihave

ever

seen

in

my

life.Food

can

be

produced

cheaper

ifwe

use

improved

fertilisersHowever,

some

of

methods

maybe

dangerous

for

human

healthand

have

negative

effects

on

localcommunities.

What

is

youropinion?主題句使用化肥對人體有害。Using

fertilizers

may

damage

people’s

health.支持句研究顯示很多疾病都是食物中化學物質含量過多導致的。Researches

have

shown

that

many

diseases

arecaused

by

too

much

chemical

substance

in

thefood.Using

fertilizers

may

damagepeople’s

health.

Researches

haveshown

that

many

diseases

arecaused

by

too

much

chemicalsubstance

in

the

food.22wordsIt

has

been

acknowledged

by

most

people

thatusing

fertilizers

may

damage

people’s

healthbecause

a

number

of

researches

conducted

bysome

American

scientists

of

authority

recentlyhave

shown

that

many

diseases

which

are

quitecommon

are

actually

caused

by

too

muchchemical

substance

observed

in

the

food

weconsume

every

day.52

wordsHis

responses

helped

avert

a

Depression.His

responses—

an

aggressive

stimulus

—helpedavert

a

Depression.His

responses—an

aggressive

stimulus,

bailing

outGeneral

Motors

and

Chrysler,

putting

the

banksthrough

a

sensible

stress

test

and

forcing

them

toraise

capital

—helped

avert

a

Depression.His

responses—an

aggressive

stimulus,bailing

out

General

Motors

and

Chrysler,putting

the

banks

through

a

sensiblestress

test

and

forcing

them

to

raisecapital

(so

that

they

are

now

in

muchbetter

shape

than

their

European

peers)—helped

avert

a

Depression.添加副詞、形容詞、分詞（現(xiàn)在分詞和過去分詞）添加介詞結構（伴隨狀語、方式狀語）添加并列結構:X

and

Y添加插入語添加從句（定語從句、狀語從句、同位語從句等）變換句型（簡單句 復合句&復雜句）名詞化Nominalization

is

one

of

themost

remarkable

features

offormal

English

writingstyle.句子的三六九等考官眼中的句子從句型和用詞的角度一般分為3個檔次:最底層的是主動句較好的是被動句倒裝句強調句…最好的nominalization的句子，這樣的句子最有學術范兒最適合寫論文和應試寫作Nominalization

in

English1.單詞發(fā)生變化(with

a

derivational

suffix)2.單詞不發(fā)生變化(zero

derivation)Nominalization

in

English1.單詞發(fā)生變化(with

a

derivational

suffix)The

government

intends

to

cut

tax

on

middle

class.The

intention

of

the

government

is

to

cut

tax

onmiddle

class.adjectives----nounsapplicablecarelessdifficultintenseapplicabilitycarelessnessdifficultyintensityverbs----nounsfailnominalizeinvestigatemovereactrefusediscoverfailurenominalizationinvestigationmovementreaction

refusaldiscoveryNominalization

in

English2.

單詞無變化(zero

derivation)ChangeI

need

a

change.I

need

to

change.hope,

charge,

result,

answer,

repair,return單詞讀音的變化—詞性變化Our

plan

must

progress

nicely.Progress

is

important.Please

use

your

fork!The

use

of

drugs

is

dangerous.注意名詞化有時會使句子顯得冗長繁瑣晦澀難懂所以：使用有度名詞化的常用情況1.

名詞化的部分是謂語動詞的賓語原句：I

do

not

understand

either

what

shemeant

or

what

he

intends.名詞化：I

do

not

understand

either

her

meaningor

his

intention.名詞化常用情況2.把名詞化和被動結合起來原句：If

people

decide

without

enoughpersuasive

information,名詞化：If

a

decision

is

made

withoutenough

persuasive

information,名詞化常用情況3.名詞化部分用在there

is/are的后面原句：We

demand

that

the

government

stoptaxing

entertainment.名詞化：There

is

a

demand

for

an

end

totaxation

on

entertainment.Terminateterminator名詞化使用練習As

long

as

teachers

and

parents

communicatefrequently

and

directly,

parents

can

be

ensured

tohave

a

general

understanding

of

the

progress

oftheir

children.Direct

and

frequent

communication

betweenparents

and

teachers

can

ensure

the

parents

ageneral

understanding

of

the

progress

of

theirchildren.Importanceof

punctuation中國考生出現(xiàn)頻率最高的標點符號錯誤是？？句號寫得像逗號甚至到了看不清和看不見的地步“行路人等不得在此小便?！薄靶新啡?，等不得，在此小便?！鄙下?lián)：釀酒缸缸好造醋壇壇酸；下聯(lián)：養(yǎng)豬大如山老鼠頭頭死。橫批：人多病少發(fā)財。釀酒缸缸好造醋、壇壇酸；養(yǎng)豬大如山老鼠、頭頭死。橫批：人多病、少發(fā)財。Importance

of

punctuationWoman

without

her

man

is

nothing.Woman,

without

her

man,

is

nothing.Woman,

without

her,

man

is

nothing.作文中偶爾使用分號In

conclusion,

the

main

purpose

ofuniversities

should

be

teachingtheoretical

knowledge;

however,

theimportance

of

work-related

skills

alsodeserve

some

more

attention

fromschool

authorities.However

前后都要加逗號嗎？When

people

are

faced

with

such

problems,however,

it

requires

more

wisdom

andcourage

to

address

them.When

conjunctive

adverbs

occur

within

anindependent

clause,

however,

they

areenclosed

in

a

pair

of

commas.Transitions

and

Connectors1.Causeandeffectcause:because,

as,

since,

due

to,

owing

toeffect:hence,

thus,

therefore,

as

a

consequence,accordingly,

as

a

result,consequently1.CauseandeffectE.g.

The

ecological

problems

are

beingaggravated.

Hence,

it

is

imperative

thatwe

take

measures

to

curbenvironmentpollution.2.

Exemplification...is

a

case

in

point.Take

...forexample,For

instance,Toillustrare,As

an

illustration,2.

ExemplificationE.g.

The

Asian

countries

are

gettingwesternized

at

a

staggering

rate.

TakeChina

for

example,

when

young

people

goto

the

cinema,

they

will

choose

Hollywoodblockbuster

over

domestic

films.3.

Comparisonandcontrastwhile,

whereas,

whilst,

in

contrast,

onthe

contraryE.g.

Whereas

modern

people

are

sorushed

and

stressed,

our

ancestorscould

perform

their

business

in

arelaxed

manner.4.

Concessiondespite,

in

spite

of,

albeit,

adj.+as

it

may

be,nontheless,

nevertheless,Tough

as

it

may

be

to

get

accustumed

to

anew

culture,

it

will

prove

very

rewarding.5.

DefinitionA

is

characterizedby...A

constitutes...A

consistsof...E.g.

Animal

experimentation,

in

somecases,

constitutes

callous

abuse

of

testanimals.6.

Suppositionprovided

that...given

the

choic