2024屆高考英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)：議論文復(fù)習(xí)寫作課件1(共16張PPT)

第第頁2024屆高考英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)：議論文復(fù)習(xí)寫作課件1(共16張PPT)(共16張PPT)

如何寫議論文

Howtowriteanargumentation

寫作按照寫作類型來說，有圖畫作文，圖表作文，提綱作文，開放作文。

按照文體類型來說，有記敘文，說明文，議論文和應(yīng)用文。

針對不同的文章都要針對不同的應(yīng)試技巧去動筆。

Introduction:anintroductiontotheessay

Body:evidencetosupportyouridea

(用論據(jù)說明自己的觀點)

Conclusion:stateorrestateyouridea

結(jié)論(重申自己的觀點,呼應(yīng)前文)

Argumentation(議論文)

范例1：

某中學(xué)生英語報社正開展一場題為“Youngteachersorelderlyteachers，whichdoyouprefer”

請你依據(jù)下面表格所提供的要點寫一篇短文，向該報社投稿。

老年教師

青年教師

·教學(xué)耐心．講解細(xì)致．經(jīng)驗豐富

·精力充沛．教學(xué)活潑．勇于創(chuàng)新

你的觀點

注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右，開頭語已為你寫好，不計入總數(shù)；2．短文必須包含表格的全部內(nèi)容。要求觀點明確，結(jié)構(gòu)合理，緊湊連貫

學(xué)生作品1：

Comparewithyoungteachers,Ipreferelderlyteachers.Therearesomereasonsbelow.

Foronething,mostofelderlyteachersarepatientinteaching.Theynotonlysparenoefforttoteachthestudents,butalsogiveclassescarefully.Theywilldoalltheycantomakethestudentsunderstandtheteachingcontent.Whatgoodteachers!Foranotherthing,elderlyteachersarefullofteachingexperience.Thisisalsothemostimportant,especiallyforusseniorstudents.

Thisisonlymyopinion.Ithinkyoungteachersarealsogood.

點評：

亮點：1、觀點鮮明，詞匯句型的運用

比較靈活

2、過渡詞及連詞的使用使文章結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊連貫、條理清楚。

2、審題不全面，忽略了對青年教師這部分信息的處理。這一點是比較大的失誤。

∧

1)

2)

3)

1)Compared

2)more

3)trytomaketheclasses

livelyandinteresting

不足之處：

1、個別地方的表達(dá)需

要改進(jìn)。

學(xué)生作品2:

Opinionsaredividedonthisquestion.

Somestudentswholiketheelderly

teachersmorethantheyoungonesthinkthat

theelderlyonesaremorepatientinteaching,

morecarefulinexplainingandalsohavea

lotofexperience.

However,theothershaveadifferent

opinion.Theythinktheteacherswhoare

youngarefullofenergy.Besides,their

teachingislivelyandtheydaretobringin

thenewideas.

Well,inmyopinion,Ilikeboththeelderly

teachersandtheyoungonesbecausefrom

themwebothcanlearnalot.

點評：

亮點：

1、段落清楚，要點齊

全，句式表達(dá)比較靈

活，能適當(dāng)運用復(fù)句。

2、過渡詞運用也比較

熟練。

需要改進(jìn)的地方：

1）

2)

3)

＼

4)

1)prefertheelderly

teacherstothe

youngones

2)withexplanations

3)the去掉

4)Theyoung

teachers

Onepossibleversion:

Opinionsaredividedonthisquestion.Somestudentsmaylikeelderlyteachers'teachingbecausetheythinkelderlyteachershavemoreteachingexperienceandthattheytendtobepatientandcarefulwithexplanations.However,Iprefertobetaughtbyyoungteachers.Firstly,westudentshavemuchincommonwiththem.Sotheyareourfriendsaswellasourteachers.Secondly,theyaremore.energeticandenthusiastic.Usuallytheycanmaketheirclasseslivelyandinteresting.Besides,theyaremorereadytoacceptorcreatenewideas,includingteaching.Thirdly,mostyoungteachersdevotethemselvestotheirwork,makingthemteachcreativelyandeffectively.

Inaword,Ipreferyoungteacherstoelderlyteachers.

Introduction(開頭)：

Nowadays,…playamoreandmoreimportantroleinourdailylife.

(如今,…在我們的日常生活中越來越重.)

2)Should……Differentpeoplehavedifferentopinionsontheissuesof…

3)Recentlywehadaheateddiscussionon…Opinionsarevariousamongdifferentpeople.

(人們對此事有不同的看法)

(04)湖北:學(xué)習(xí)英語要不要從兒童時期開始

DifferentpeoplehavedifferentopinionsontheissuesofwhetheritisnecessarytostartlearningEnglishfromchildhood.

Body(正文)：

1.Somemayholdtheviewthat…because/firstly..(有些人認(rèn)為…)

Butothershaveanegativeattitude.Fromtheirpointofview,…

(有些人卻持有不同的觀點,他們認(rèn)為…)

2.somepeopleareagainsttheideaof…because….

whilesomearefortheideaof…

3.1)(表順序)Firstly….(inthefirstplace,/firstofall)secondly…thirdly…,thelastbutnottheleast,

2)(表遞進(jìn))whatismore/inaddition/furthermore/moreover(另外),whatisworse(更糟糕的是…)

3)(表比較)ononehand….ontheotherhand,

onthecontrary

Practice

1.有些人認(rèn)為做運動可以強身健體,然而有些人認(rèn)為運動是浪費時間.

2.對于高考,一方面我們要盡我們所能,另一方面我們要保持良好的心態(tài).

3.上網(wǎng)不僅可以獲得最新的國內(nèi)外新聞,而且還可以交朋友

Someholdtheviewthatdoingsportscankeepfit,whileothersthinkthatitisawasteoftimetodosports.

Asfortheexaminationstocollege,ononehand,we

shouldtryourbest,ontheotherhand,weshould

keepagoodstateofmind.

WecangetthelatestnewsbothathomeandabroadbysurfingtheInternet,whatismore,

wecanalsomakefriends.

body

4.AsfarasIamconcerned,Itotallyagreewiththestatementthat…

5.Personally,Isupporttheideathat…

Thereasonsarepresentedbelow.

(我的觀點是…,論據(jù)如下…)

Conclusion(結(jié)論)：

1.Takingallthesefactorsintoconsideration,wemayreachtheconclusionthat…

2.Therefore,itiseasytodrawtheconclusionthat…

3.Tosumup/inaword/aboveall/generallyspeaking,Istillholdtheviewthat…

范例2：假如你事實李華，你班同學(xué)最近開長了一場討論，主題是：高三學(xué)生要不要參加體育鍛煉，請根據(jù)下面所提供的信息，寫一篇短文，介紹討論的情況，并發(fā)表自己的觀點．

比例５５％４５％你的觀點

觀點支持反對

主要理由１．應(yīng)該明天進(jìn)行體育鍛煉２．做早操，打乒乓球，打籃球，但時間不要過３．鍛煉能增強質(zhì)減少疾病４．鍛煉能使大腦休息，使學(xué)習(xí)效果更好．１鍛煉浪費時間２．鍛煉使人疲勞３．鍛煉以后很興奮，較長時間不能學(xué)習(xí)４．鍛煉中可能受傷

．．．．．．

1.關(guān)鍵詞語

體育鍛煉

做早操

增強體質(zhì)

減少疾病

休息

學(xué)習(xí)有效果

浪費時間

投入學(xué)習(xí)

受傷

takeexercises

domorningexercises

buildupthebody

reducethedisease

havearest

studymoreeffectively

awasteoftime

payattentiontostudy

behurt

2.作文結(jié)構(gòu)

1.….havehadadiscussionaboutwhetherstudentsofSenior3shouldtakephysicalexercises.Asweknow,everycoinhastwocoins./Differentstudentshavedifferentideas.

2.55%ofthestudentsthink………….suchas(舉例)……..（原因）…..

3.Ontheotherhand,45%ofthestudentsbelieve…….(原因）……..

4.Inmyopinion,Ipreferto

3.范文：

Recently,wehavehadadiscussionaboutwhetherhavehadadiscussionaboutwhetherstudentsofSenior3shouldtakephysicalexercises.Asweknow,everycoinhastwocoins.

55%ofthestudentsthinktheyshouldtakeallkindsofexerciseseveryd