觀點對比類作文寫作技巧課件

觀點對比類作文寫作技巧觀點對比類作文1第四次周練作文假設(shè)你校英語社團(tuán)舉辦以“批評還是表揚?”為主題的征文活動,請你以“ToCriticizeortoPraise”為題,寫一篇英語短文內(nèi)容主要包括:1.有些人認(rèn)為:批評讓人進(jìn)步2.還有些人認(rèn)為:表揚讓人進(jìn)步3.你更傾向于哪一種觀點ToCriticizeortoPraise?第四次周練作文2Mainerrors:1審題不清本次作文是屬于典型的正反觀點型作文,文章的構(gòu)思應(yīng))提出問題2)不同觀點的對比3)說明自己的觀點在表明自己觀點部分,考生應(yīng)旗幟鮮明的表明自己支持其中的一種觀點,而不能持中立態(tài)度,模棱兩可的說兩種觀點都有利弊。如Mainerrors:31)Inmyopinion,bothcriticismandpraiseareImportant2)Inmyview,bothpraiseandcriticismshouldbecombinedproperly.3)AsfarasI'mconcerned,itdependsondifferentstudents4)Inmyopinion,tocriticizeandtopraisebotharegoodPeopleshouldbecriticizedwhenmakingmistakes,whileheshouldbepraisedwhenmakingprogress1)Inmyopinion,bothcriticis4Betterversion1)AsfarasImconcernedStudentsalwayshavemuchpressureinstudy.Inthatcase,praisecangiveusconfidence.2)AsfarasI'mconcerned,thatistosay,beingcriticizedcanhelpusrealizeourmistakesandcorrectthemeasily3)Inmyopinion,SoIfinallythinkpraisingisthebestwaytomakepeoplegetgoodgrades.Betterversion52.表達(dá)錯誤1.Somestudentsthinkcriticizecanhelpthemimprovetheirstudy.Ibelievethatpraisegetprogress3.Theythinkpeoplelikeotherspraisethem4.Becausesomepeoplecan'tstandcriticize5.Somestudentsthinkthatitiscriticismthatletonehaveaprogress6.Praiseletusgainmoreinterestedinworkingandstudying.2.表達(dá)錯誤6Correction1.Somestudentsthinkcanhelpthemimprovetheirstudy2.Ibelievethatpraiseprogress.3.Theythinkpeoplelikeothersthem/like4.Becausesomepeoplecantstand5.Somestudentsthinkthatitiscriticismthatletone6.Praiseletusworkingandstudying.Correction7審題謀篇1.對同一件事情,人們常有不同的看法,即正反兩種觀點。在寫作時,常使用般現(xiàn)在時。人稱可以是第三人稱和第一人稱2.寫作格式一般是1)提出問題(批評和表揚,哪種方法更易讓人進(jìn)步?)2)兩種不同觀點→對兩種不同觀點的論據(jù)(理由)一些人認(rèn)為批評能使人進(jìn)步?！碛?幫助其認(rèn)識錯誤,并加以改正;能更好的從錯誤中汲取經(jīng)驗,避免再犯)些人認(rèn)為表揚能使人進(jìn)步?！碛?努力得到了認(rèn)可,能激勵人更加努力;能幫人建立自信,激勵人的潛能)3)→發(fā)表自己的觀點(理由)我認(rèn)為表揚更能讓人進(jìn)步和成長。表揚不僅能讓人獲得自信,還能激發(fā)人們的創(chuàng)造力和潛能審題謀篇8參考詞匯批評:tocriticize/criticizing/beingcriticized/criticism表揚:praise/praising/beingpraised取得進(jìn)步/成長:makeprogress/getpromoted/gaingrowth/makesbimprove/getadvance/getimprovement激勵:encouragesbtodo/inspiresbtodo/motivatesbtodo/beinspiredtodo.更易取得成功:bemorelikelytoachievesuccess認(rèn)識到錯誤:realizeone’smistakes改正錯誤:correctmistakes汲取經(jīng)驗:1earnlessons/experiencefrom記住:keep/bearinmind參考詞匯9Howtoorganizethewholepassage?Nexthaveatry.Howtoorganizethe10觀點對比類作文寫作技巧課件11觀點對比類作文寫作技巧課件12觀點對比類作文寫作技巧課件13觀點對比類作文寫作技巧課件14觀點對比類作文寫作技巧課件15觀點對比類作文寫作技巧課件16觀點對比類作文寫作技巧課件1