高中英語作文寫作-如何寫建議信課件

書面表達專題---Howtowritealetterforadvice1書面表達專題---Howtowritealetter如何算是一篇好文章？－覆蓋了所有的要點－應用了較多的語法結構和詞匯－有效地使用了語句間的連接成分，使全文結構緊湊，行文連貫，條理清楚。要點全詞匯,句型（高級）和語法多樣化（較復雜）語言地道連接詞2如何算是一篇好文章？要點全詞匯,句型（高級）和語法多樣化寫作要點：1.建議信：作者就有關問題進行分析并針對這些問題提出自己的看法和建議。2.對象：1）寫給個人，就其遇到的某個問題提出自己的看法和觀點；2）寫給某個組織和機構，就改進其服務提出建議或忠告。3寫作要點：33.基本框架：開頭（beginning）----開門見山，向?qū)Ψ疥愂鲎约旱挠^點.(stateyouridea)主體(body)----對所提出的問題進行分析并說明理由，接著提出自己的建議(reasonsandevidence)結尾(ending)----呼應開頭，重申觀點(restateyouropinion.)43.基本框架：44.注意事項：1）建議信要寫出寫信的原因，建議的內(nèi)容，提出建議的理由，提出的理由要入情入理，語氣一定要禮貌當先。因此建議信要寫得簡明扼要、目的明確、具有合理性和說服力；2）建議的角度要多樣化，避免重復。可從政治、經(jīng)濟、文化、倫理、法律以及個人等多角度給出建議；3）符合英文信件的基本格式；4）基本時態(tài)多用一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時。54.注意事項：5常用套語A．建議信開頭常用句式

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(照應材料,表明寫作意圖)6B.表達建議（body）1.Ithinkitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucould…2.Iwouldliketosuggest/recommendthat…3.IfIwereyou,Iwould…4.Whynot…?/How(What)aboutdoing…5.…isagood/greatidea.6.Youmayconsiderdoing…7.Itwouldseem/seemstomethatyoucould…8.Inmyopinion,itwouldbewisetotakethefollowingaction.9.Whenitcomestosuchasituation,Iwouldliketosuggestthatyoushould…

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Ibelieveyouwilltakemyadviceintoaccount/consideration.Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposals/suggestions/recommendationspractical/useful/helpful.Iwillbemorethanhappytoseeimprovementsinthisregard.Iwouldappreciateitverymuchifyoucouldconsidermysuggestions.5.Ifeelthatitwouldbebeneficialifyousticktoit.Intheend,Iwillbegladifyoufindmysuggestionsuseful.8C.建議信結尾常用句式Ibelieveyouwill假如你叫孫軍，是紅星高中的學生，要給市長寫一封信，反映學校門前交通擁擠現(xiàn)象，包括以下要點：參考詞匯:穿行threadone’sway天橋overpass問題建議學校和一所小學毗鄰，對著大街，高峰期交通繁忙；加之孩子小,家長接送。交通更擁擠；學生過街在車輛中穿行危險。政府應采取措施,如修天橋等。9假如你叫孫軍，是紅星高中的學生，要給市長寫一封信，反映學校門第一步：審題養(yǎng)成重視審題的習慣。雖然基礎寫作題是半封閉性的，但審題仍然十分重要?，F(xiàn)以樣題為例，談談如何審題：思考的問題樣題分析第幾人稱？（person）文章的體裁是什么？要寫的文章主題是什么(topic)怎樣安排信息點的順序？

(order)動作是什么時候發(fā)生的？(時態(tài))(when)第一人稱一封信建議政府采取措施舒緩交通擁擠的狀況說理邏輯性一般現(xiàn)在時10第一步：審題思考的問題樣題分析第幾人稱？（person）文章書面表達如何寫？三個步驟Step1ListthekeypointsStep2MakesentencesStep3.Formapassageandpolish11書面表達如何寫？三個步驟Step1Listtheke適當運用模板12適當運用模板12模板二：Dear_____(對象)，Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning______(問題).Firstandforthemost,_______(建議一).Inaddition,_____(建議二).What’smore_____(建議三).Ihopeyou’llfindtheseproposalsuseful.Yourssincerely,LiMing13模板二：13Dear____,Youhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithregardto_____,andI’lltrytomakesomeconductivesuggestionshere.Inmyhumbleopinion(以我拙見),youwouldbewisetotakethefollowingactions:_____.Ihopeyou’llfindtheseproposalsusefulandIwouldbereadytodiscussthismatterwithyoutofurtherdetails.Goodluckwithyou/your______(祝愿).YourssincerelyLiMing14Dear____,14DearBob, I'mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowto

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問題建議學校和一所小學毗鄰，對著大街，高峰期交通繁忙；加之孩子小,家長接送。交通更擁擠；學生過街在車輛中穿行危險。政府應采取措施,如修天橋等。

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問題建議學校和一所小學毗鄰，對著學校與一所小學毗鄰,對著大街standnextto…primary…face/befacedwith…themainstreet…There’saprimaryschoolnearourschool,andbothschoolsfacethemainstreet.Ourschoolstandsnexttoaprimaryschool,facedwith/facingthemainstreet.推薦句型：Therebe+并列句非謂語結構Standingnexttoaprimaryschool,ourschoolisfacedwith/facesthemainstreet.17學校與一所小學毗鄰,對著大街standnextto…潤色小建議Nexttoaprimaryschool將介詞短語提前（全倒裝）stands/lies/isourschool,facedwith/facingamainstreet.可將standnextto替換為高級詞匯/短語belocatednextto(near/beside/by)border/adjoinvt.beadjacentto與…毗鄰在…對面beoppositeto18潤色小建議Nexttoaprimaryschool將

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假定你是李華，你的英國朋友Peter來信向你咨詢?nèi)绾尾拍軐W好中文。

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I'mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadvicenohowtolearnChinesewell._________________________________________________Bestwishes,LiHua參加中文學習班；看電視，報紙，雜志；學唱中文歌曲；交中國朋友；44假定你是李華，你的英國朋友Peter來信向你咨詢?nèi)绾尾拍軐WDearPeter, I'mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtolearnChinesewell.

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TheywilltellyoualotaboutChinaandhelpyoulearnChinese. TrywritingtomeinChinesenexttime.Bestwishes,LiHua45DearPeter,45為了迎接即將到來的期末考試，你校要取消所有的體育課。請你以學生王麗的身份給校長寫一封信，建議不要取消體育課。注意：1.詞數(shù)：120左右；2.文章的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。DearHeadmaster,I’mwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerningourschool’sdecisionthatallphysicaleducationshouldbecancelled.46為了迎接即將到來的期末考試，你校要取消所有的體育課。請你以學常見連接詞表時間關系：

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