江蘇省2021屆高三上學期大市期中試題匯編：應用文寫作(含解析)

江蘇省2021屆高三上學期大市期中試題匯編：應用文寫作（含解析）江蘇省南通市2020-2021學年高三上學期期中學情檢測英語61.假定你是李華。上周日你校邀請本市志愿援助武漢抗擊新冠病毒的劉醫(yī)生為全校師生做了一場演講，大家深受感動和鼓舞。請你就本次活動給校園英語報寫一篇報道。內容包括：1.活動時間和地點；2.活動內容；3.活動的意義。注意：詞數80左右。新冠病毒Covid-19_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】LastSunday,ourschoolheldameaningfulactivityatourschoollecturehall.Mr.Liu,adoctorfromourlocalhospitalwhovolunteeredtoWuhanthisspringtofightagainstCovid-19,wasinvitedtodeliveraspeechforus.Alltheteachersandstudentsweredeeplymovedandinspiredbyhisheroicdeeds.Attheendofhisspeech,weshowedourrespectforMr.Liuwithapplause.Welearnedalotfromhimandmanystudentssaidthattheywantedtobeadoctorinthefuture.【解析】【分析】本篇書面表達是提綱類寫作，要求寫一篇報道?！驹斀狻康?步：根據提示可知，假定你是李華。上周日你校邀請本市志愿援助武漢抗擊新冠病毒的劉醫(yī)生為全校師生做了一場演講，大家深受感動和鼓舞。請你就本次活動給校園英語報寫一篇報道。內容包括：1.活動時間和地點；2.活動內容；3.活動的意義。第2步：根據寫作要求，確定關鍵詞（組）：holdameaningfulactivity(舉辦一次有意義的活動)；schoollecturehall(學校演講廳)；volunteertodo(志愿做某事)；fightagainst(抗擊)；deliveraspeech(發(fā)表演講)；deeplymoved(深受感動)；heroicdeeds(英雄事跡)；attheendof(在……結束時)；applause(掌聲)等。第3步：根據提示及關鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。此處文章主要應用一般過去時。第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當的連詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的?！军c睛】范文內容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數適當。作者在范文中使用了較多高級表達方式，如Mr.Liu,adoctorfromourlocalhospitalwhovolunteeredtoWuhanthisspringtofightagainstCovid-19,wasinvitedtodeliveraspeechforus.運用了定語從句；Welearnedalotfromhimandmanystudentssaidthattheywantedtobeadoctorinthefuture.運用了賓語從句。全文中沒有中國式英語的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語的能力。另外文章思路清晰、層次分明，上下句轉換自然，為文章增色添彩。江蘇省蘇州市2021屆高三上學期期中考試英語試題第一節(jié)(滿分15分)46.假定你是李華，你的朋友Frank詢問你最近的情況。你校在教育部提倡的勞動教育中，開展了“Let'sdohousework”活動，請你給他回一份郵件，告訴他相關信息，郵件內容包括:1.活動的目的;2.活動的內容;3.你的感想。注意:1.詞數80左右;2.郵件開頭和結尾已為你寫好，不計入詞數。參考詞匯:勞動教育:educationonthehard-workingspiritDearFrank,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua,【答案】Possibleversion：DearFrank,IamsogladtohearfromyouandIamwritingtotellyouaboutmylife.Tostrengtheneducationonthehard-workingspiritamongstudents,ourschoolhaslaunchedacampaigncalled“Let’sdohousework”.Studentsaresupposedtoacquirebasicworkingcapabilityandformgoodworkinghabitsthroughit.Wedowhateverwecanafterstudylikewashingthedishes,tidyingtheroomanddoingthelaundry.Doinghouseworknotonlyhelpsreduceparents’burdenbutalsohelpsustodevelopasenseofresponsibility.Yours,LiHua【解析】【分析】本篇書面表達屬于應用文，要求考生給朋友Frank寫封郵件，告訴他你校在教育部提倡的勞動教育中開展的“Let'sdohousework”活動相關信息?！驹斀狻康谝徊剑簩忣}體裁：應用文時態(tài)：根據提示，時態(tài)主要為一般現在時和少量現在完成時。結構：總分法總分法指把主題句作為總說，把支持句作為分說，并以這種方式安排所寫內容。要求：1.介紹活動的目的；2.介紹活動的內容;3.說出你的感想。第二步:列提綱（重點詞組）strengtheneducation;launchacampaign;acquirebasicworkingcapability;formgoodworkinghabits;reduceparents’burden;developasenseofresponsibility第三步：連詞成句1.Tostrengtheneducationonthehard-workingspiritamongstudents,ourschoolhaslaunchedacampaigncalled“Let’sdohousework”.2.Studentsaresupposedtoacquirebasicworkingcapabilityandformgoodworkinghabitsthroughit.3.Doinghouseworknotonlyhelpsreduceparents’burdenbutalsohelpsustodevelopasenseofresponsibility.根據提示及關鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）表并列補充關系：notonly…but(also)連句成文，注意使用恰當的連詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰。【點睛】[高分句型1].Wedowhateverwecanafterstudylikewashingthedishes,tidyingtheroomanddoingthelaundry.(whatever引導的賓語從句和動名詞作介詞like的賓語。)[高分句型2].Doinghouseworknotonlyhelpsreduceparents’burdenbutalsohelpsustodevelopasenseofresponsibility.（動名詞作主語。）江蘇省常州市2021屆高三上學期期中檢測英語試題第一節(jié)(滿分15分)46.假定你是班級英語課代表李華，請參照以下提示，用英文寫一份倡議書，提倡全班同學學會用英語傳播中國文化。要點提示：1.提出倡議：2.用英語傳播中國文化的意義：3.用英語傳播中國文化的方法。注意：1.寫作字數應為80左右：2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答，答題卡中不用再寫已給開頭和結尾。Dearfellowstudents______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________LiHua【答案】Dearfellowstudents,IamcallinguponallofyoutospreadChinesecultureviaEnglish.Thereasonsareasfollows.Firstofall,Chineseculture,whichboastsofalonghistoryandcoversawiderangeofthings,whethermateriallyorideologically,willhighlightouridentityasChinesepeopleandconsolidatenationalcohesion.Secondly,spreadingourgloriousculturebyEnglishwillgetacrosstoforeignersourprofoundwisdomandspectacularcivilization.Finally,tellingChinesestoriesinEnglishisagoodwaytopromoteourcultureabroadsinceitishumannaturetolistentostoriesanddrawfromthemvaluablelessons.Whatismore,organizingcultureexchangeactivitiesamongstudentsalsohelps.Hopetheabovesuggestionsareofpracticaluse.LiHua【解析】【分析】本篇書面表達屬于應用文，要求考生用英文寫一份倡議書，倡導全班同學學會用英語傳播中國文化。【詳解】第一步：審題體裁：應用文時態(tài)：根據提示，時態(tài)主要為一般現在時和一般將來時。結構：總分法總分法指把主題句作為總說，把支持句作為分說，并以這種方式安排所寫內容。要求：1.提出倡議：2.用英語傳播中國文化的意義：3.用英語傳播中國文化的方法。第二步:列提綱（重點詞組）callupon;alonghistory;highlight;consolidate;getacrossto;profound;tellstories;promote;drawlessons;organize;practicaluse第三步：連詞成句1.IamcallinguponallofyoutospreadChinesecultureviaEnglish.2.Chineseculture,whichboastsofalonghistoryandcoversawiderangeofthings,whethermateriallyorideologically,willhighlightouridentityasChinesepeopleandconsolidatenationalcohesion.3.SpreadingourgloriousculturebyEnglishwillgetacrosstoforeignersourprofoundwisdomandspectacularcivilization.4.TellingChinesestoriesinEnglishisagoodwaytopromoteourcultureabroadsinceitishumannaturetolistentostoriesanddrawfromthemvaluablelessons.5.Organizingcultureexchangeactivitiesamongstudentsalsohelps.6.Hopetheabovesuggestionsareofpracticaluse.根據提示及關鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）1.表文章結構順序：Firstofall,Secondly,Finally2.表并列補充關系：Whatismore3.表因果關系：since連句成文，注意使用恰當的連詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，【點睛】[高分句型1]Firstofall,Chineseculture,whichboastsofalonghistoryandcoversawiderangeofthings,whethermateriallyorideologically,willhighlightouridentityasChinesepeopleandconsolidatenationalcohesion.(首先，中華文化源遠流長，內容廣泛，無論是物質上還是思想上，都將突現我們的中華民族的身份，鞏固民族凝聚力)，這句話運用了which引導非限制性定語從句，先行詞是Chineseculture。[高分句型2]Finally,tellingChinesestoriesinEnglishisagoodwaytopromoteourcultureabroadsinceitishumannaturetolistentostoriesanddrawfromthemvaluablelessons.(最后，用英語講中國故事是一種很好的來推廣我們的文化的方式，因為聽故事并從中吸取寶貴教訓是人類的天性)，這句話運用了since引導原因狀語從句。江蘇省連云港市2021屆高三上學期期中調研英語試題第一節(jié)（滿分15分）46.假定你是李華，你的英國筆友Owen對中國古典名著很感興趣。請你用英文寫一封郵件，推薦他閱讀《西游記》。內容包括：1.作品簡介；2.推薦理由。注意：1詞數80左右（開頭結尾已給出，不計入總詞數）；2.可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.參考詞匯：取經fetchsutrasDearOwen,SogladtoknowyouarefondofChineseclassics.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Hopethatyouwillloveit.Yours,LiHua【答案】DearOwen,SogladtoknowyouarefondofChineseclassics.JourneytotheWestwrittenbyWuCheng’enisamust-readforyou.SetintheTangDynasty,itdescribesthetoughjourneyofamonkXuanzangtofetchsutrasfromIndiawithsomeanimalspirits,includingtheMonkeyKing.Thestoryisnotonlyentertainingwithmagicaltricks,butinspiringintermsofcourageandpersistence.Additionally,youwillenjoybeingexposedtoabundantChinesefolkstories.Honestly,itsmixtureoffantasyandrealityismyfavourite.Hopethatyouwillloveit.Yourssincerely,LiHua【解析】【分析】本篇書面表達屬于應用文，要求考生給對中國古典名著很感興趣的英國筆友Owen寫一封郵件，推薦他閱讀《西游記》。【詳解】第一步：審題體裁：應用文時態(tài)：根據提示，時態(tài)主要為一般現在時和少量一般將來時。結構：總分法要求：

1.作品簡介；2.推薦理由。第二步:列提綱（重點詞組）JourneytotheWest;fetchsutras;notonly…but(also)…;beexposedto;fantasyandreality第三步：連詞成句1.JourneytotheWestwrittenbyWuCheng’enisamust-readforyou.2.SetintheTangDynasty,itdescribesthetoughjourneyofamonkXuanzangtofetchsutrasfromIndiawithsomeanimalspirits,includingtheMonkeyKing.3.Thestoryisnotonlyentertainingwithmagicaltricks,butinspiringintermsofcourageandpersistence.4.Additionally,youwillenjoybeingexposedtoabundantChinesefolkstories.5.Honestly,itsmixtureoffantasyandrealityismyfavourite.根據提示及關鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）文章可運用的表并列補充關系的詞有：Additionally,notonly…but(also),including連句成文，注意使用恰當的連詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，【點睛】[高分句型1]Thestoryisnotonlyentertainingwithmagicaltricks,butinspiringintermsofcourageandpersistence.運用“notonly…but(also)…”結構。[高分句型2]Additionally,youwillenjoybeingexposedtoabundantChinesefolkstories.運用動名詞作賓語。江蘇省泰州市2021屆高三上學期期中英語試題第一節(jié)（滿分15分）46.某英文網站正在征集保護泰州梅蘭芳紀念館（MeiLanfangMemorial)的建議，假定你是李華，請你寫一封信，內容包括：1.保護意義；2.保護措施（至少兩點）注意：1.寫作詞數應為80左右；2.請在答題卡的相應位置作答。DearSir/Madam,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【答案】DearSir/Madam,I'dliketomakesomesuggestionsontheprotectionofMeiLanfangMemorial.Situatedinthedowntown,thememorialis

thesymbolofTaizhou,soitisfundamentaltoundertakingacompleteprotection.Inagesturetopreservethememorialbetter,aspecialcommitteeshouldbeestablishedtostrengthenregulations.Additionally,itisurgenttoraisepublicawarenessoftheimportanceandvalueofprotectingthehistoricsite.Iwouldappreciateitifmyadvicecouldbeconsidered.Yourssincerely,LiHua【解析】【分析】本篇書面表達屬于應用文。某英文網站正在征集保護泰州梅蘭芳紀念館（MeiLanfangMemorial)的建議，要求考生根據其要求寫一封建議信投稿?！驹斀狻康谝徊剑簩忣}體裁：應用文時態(tài)：根據提示，時態(tài)主要為一般現在時。結構：總分法總分法指把主題句作為總說，把支持句作為分說，并以這種方式安排所寫內容。要求：1.保護意義；2.保護措施（至少兩點）第二步:列提綱（重點詞組）wouldliketodo;makesomesuggestionson;protection;situatedin;downtown;memorial;symbol;fundamental;undertake;gesture;preserve;committee;establish;strengthen;regulations.;Additionally;urgent;toraisepublicawarenessof;importance;value;thehistoricsite;appreciate;considered.第三步：連詞成句1.I'dliketomakesomesuggestionsontheprotectionofMeiLanfangMemorial.2.Situatedinthedowntown,thememorialisthesymbolofTaizhou,soitisfundamentaltoundertakingacompleteprotection.3.Inagesturetopreservethememorialbetter,aspecialcommitteeshouldbeestablishedtostrengthensregulations.4.Additionally,itisurgenttoraisepublicawarenessoftheimportanceandvalueofprotectingthehistoricsite.5.Iwouldappreciateitifmyadvicecouldbeconsidered.根據提示及關鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）1.表文章結構順序：Firstly/First,Secondly/Second…Andthen,Finally,Intheend,Atlast(供參考)2.表并列補充關系：Additionally,moreover(供參考)3.表轉折對比關系：However,Onthecontrary,but,Some…,whileothers…,so…that…(供參考)4.表因果關系：Because,As,So,Thus,Therefore,Asaresult(供參考)連句成文，注意使用恰當的連詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰?！军c睛】[高分句型1]Situatedinthedowntown,thememorialisthesymbolofTaizhou,soitisfundamentaltoundertakingacompleteprotection.(使用了過去分詞作狀語，由so引導結果狀語從句。)[高分句型2]Additionally,itisurgenttoraisepublicawarenessoftheimportanceandvalueofprotectingthehistoricsite.(使用了由it作形式主語的固定句型It’s+形容詞+todosth.)[高分句型3]Iwouldappreciateitifmyadvicecouldbeconsidered.(由if引導條件狀語從句。)江蘇省無錫市2021屆高三上學期期中考試英語第一節(jié)（滿分15分）46.假定你是李華，你英國朋友Jack在“漢語橋”（ChineseBridgeCompetition)中文比賽中獲得一等獎。請你用英語給他寫一封郵件，內容包括：1.表示祝賀；2.肯定Jack付出的努力；3.贈送中國四大名著小說。注意：1.詞數80左右。開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。2.可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearJack,KnowingthatyouwonthefirstprizeintheChineseBridgeCompetition,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I’mlookingforwardtoyourgreaterprogressinthefuture.Yours,LiHua【答案】DearJack,KnowingthatyouwonthefirstprizeintheChineseBridgeCompetition,Ifeelverydelighted.Congratulationstoyou.Asisknowntoall,Chineseisoneofthemostdifficultlanguagestolearn.It’sreallyamazingforaforeignertolearnandspeakChinesesowell.Sinceskillcomesonlywithpractice,patience,andpersistence,youmusthavemadegreateffortstomakeit.Howgreatyouare.IhavealreadydeliveredasetofChina’sfourgreatclassicnovelstoyou.IhopeitcanbeofsomehelptoyouinlearningChinese.I’mlookingforwardtoyourgreaterprogressinthefuture.Yours,LiHua【解析】【分析】本篇書面表達屬于應用文，要求考生寫一封郵件給英國朋友Jack，祝賀他在“漢語橋”（ChineseBridgeCompetition)中文比賽中獲得一等獎?！驹斀狻康谝徊剑簩忣}體裁：應用文時態(tài)：根據提示，時態(tài)主要為一般現在時和現在完成時。結構：總分法總分法指把主題句作為總說，把支持句作為分說，并以這種方式安排所寫內容。要求：1.表示祝賀；2.肯定Jack付出的努力；3.贈送中國四大名著小說；4.可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。第二步:列提綱（重點詞組）wonthefirstprizein;theChineseBridgeCompetition;feeldelighted;congratulationstosb.;asisknowntoall;it’sreallyamazingforaforeignerto;skillcomesonlywithpractice;patience,andpersistence;makegreateffortstomakeit;deliver…to...;asetofChina’sfourgreatclassicnovels;beofsomehelpto;lookingforwardtoyourgreaterprogressinthefuture第三步：連詞成句1.Asisknowntoall,Chineseisoneofthemostdifficultlanguagestolearn.2.It’sreallyamazingforaforeignertolearnandspeakChinesesowell.3.Sinceskillcomesonlywithpractice,patience,andpersistence,youmusthavemadegreateffortstomakeit.4.IhavealreadydeliveredasetofChina’sfourgreatclassicnovelstoyou.5IhopeitcanbeofsomehelptoyouinlearningChinese.6.I’mlookingforwardtoyourgreaterprogressinthefuture.根據提示及關鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）表因果關系：since。連句成文，注意使用恰當的連詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，【點睛】[高分句型1]Asisknowntoall,Chineseisoneofthemostdifficultlanguagestolearn.句中使用了as引導非限制性定語從句。[高分句型2]Sinceskillcomesonlywithpractice,patience,andpersistence,youmusthavemadegreateffortstomakeit。句中使用了musthavedone表對過去的肯定猜測。[高分句型3]IhopeitcanbeofsomehelptoyouinlearningChinese。句中使用了“beof+名詞”結構，此處beofsomehelptoyou，它與比普通表達behelpfultoyou相比，句型更高級，體現了作者很高的英語駕馭能力。江蘇省徐州市2021屆高三上學期期中英語試題第一節(jié)（滿分15分）46.假定你校新校區(qū)剛落成，你作為學生代表參觀了新校區(qū)。請用英語向全班同學做簡單介紹。內容包括：1.新校區(qū)概況（面積翻倍；綠樹成蔭，設施先進······);2.你參觀后的感受。注意：1.詞數80左右；2.題目、開頭和結尾已為你寫好。OurNewCampusHello.boysandgirls.AseveryoneiseagertolearnaboutournewschoolcampusIwouldliketogiveyouabriefintroduction.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thankyouforlistening.【答案】OurnewcampusHello,boysandgirls.Aseveryoneiseagertolearnaboutournewschoolcampus，Iwouldliketogiveyouabriefintroduction.Ournewcampusistwicetheareaofthepreviousone.Treeslininguponbothsides,youcanfeelthefreshnessofspring,coolnessofsummer,fruitfulnessofautumnandsolemnnessofwinter.Equippedwiththemostadvancedteachingfacilities,everyclassroomisspacious,modernanduser-friendly.Myfeelingafterthisvisitissheerblissandpride.Iamblissfulbecausewemodernstudentsareabletopursueourstudycare-freelyinsuchcomfort.Iamproudbecauseourschoolistheonlyoneinthecityboastingoffrontierteachingtechnologyandequipment.Thankyouforyourlistening.【解析】【分析】本篇書面表達屬于應用文，要求考生寫一篇發(fā)言稿，用英語向全班同學對新校區(qū)做個介紹。【詳解】第一步：審題體裁：應用文時態(tài)：根據提示，時態(tài)主要為一般現在時，可兼用少量其他時態(tài)。結構：總分法總分法指把主題句作為總說，把支持句作為分說，并以這種方式安排所寫內容。要求：1.新校區(qū)概況面積翻倍；綠樹成蔭；設施先進……2.參觀后的感受。第二步:列提綱（重點詞組）twicetheareaofthepreviousone;treeslininguponbothsides;equippedwiththemostadvancedteachingfacilities;blissandpride第三步：連詞成句1.Ournewcampusistwicetheareaofthepreviousone.2.Treeslininguponbothsidesyoucanfeelthefreshnessofspring,coolnessofsummer,fruitfulnessofautumnandsolemnnessofwinter.3.Equippedwiththemostadvancedteachingfacilities,everyclassroomisspacious,modernanduser-friendly.4.Myfeelingafterthisvisitissheerblissandpride.5.Iamblissfulbecausewemodernstudentsareabletopursueourstudycarefreelyinsuchcomfort.6.Iamproudbecauseourschoolistheonlyoneinthecityboastingoffrontierteachingtechnologyandequipment.根據提示及關鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）連句成文，注意使用恰當的連詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，如果沒必要運用銜接與過渡詞語，心中也要有文章紐帶貫穿的邏輯，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，【點睛】[高分句型1]Treeslininguponbothsides,youcanfeelthefreshnessofspring,coolnessofsummer,fruitfulnessofautumnandsolemnnessofwinter.（獨立主格結構作狀語）[高分句型2]Equippedwiththemostadvancedteachingfacilities,everyclassroomisspacious,modernanduser-friendly.（非謂語動詞過去分詞作狀語）[高分句型3]Iamblissfulbecausewemodernstudentsareabletopursueourstudycarefreelyinsuchcomfort.（原因狀語從句）江蘇省鹽城市2021屆高三上學期期中英語試題第一節(jié)（滿分15分）46.假定你是李華，下周你將代表班級參加學校以“SustainableDevelopment”為題的演講比賽，請寫一份英文演講稿，內容包括：1.自然資源的劣勢；2.替代能源的優(yōu)勢。注意：1.寫作詞數應為80左右，文章標題和首尾句已給出，不計入總詞數；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。SustainableDevelopmentHello,everyone!I'mprivilegedtohavethechancetospeakhereonbehalfofmyclass.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That'sall.Thankyou.【答案】Hello,everyone!I’mprivilegedtohavethechancetospeakonbehalfofmyclasshere.Aspeoplearebecomingmoreawareoftheneedtoprotecttheenvironment,sustainabledevelopmenthasbecomeanirreversibletrend.WhilenearlyeverythingwedoinmodernlivesrequiresuseoftheEarth’snaturalresources,theydohavemanydisadvantages.Theyarenon-renewableandburningfuelscanbeharmfultotheenvironment.That’swhypeoplearepushingfortheuseofalternativeenergysources.Alternativeenergysources,includingsolarenergy,windenergyandhydroelectricity,canbeusedwithoutrunningout.Ontopofthis,theyareenvironment-friendlyandbeneficialtothelivesofourchildrenandgrandchildren.That’sall.Thankyou.【解析】【分析】本篇書面表達屬于應用文，要求考生以“SustainableDevelopment”為題，寫一篇演講稿?！驹斀狻康谝徊剑簩忣}體裁：應用文時態(tài)：根據提示，時態(tài)應為一般現在時。結構：總分法???總分法指把主題句作為總說，把支持句作為分說，并以這種方式安排所寫內容。要求：演講稿內容應該包括：1.自然資源的劣勢；2.替代能源的優(yōu)勢。第二步:列提綱（重點詞組）onbehalfof;beawareof;beharmfulto;runout;bebeneficialto第三步：連詞成句1.I’mprivilegedtohavethechancetospeakonbehalfofmyclasshere.2.Aspeoplearebecomingmoreawareoftheneedtoprotecttheenvironment,sustainabledevelopmenthasbecomeanirreversibletrend.3.WhilenearlyeverythingwedoinmodernlivesrequiresuseoftheEarth’snaturalresources,theydohavemanydisadvantages.4.Theyarenon-renewableandburningfuelscanbeharmfultotheenvironment.5.That’swhypeoplearepushingfortheuseofalternativeenergysources.6.Alternativeenergysources,includingsolarenergy,windenergyandhydroelectricity,canbeusedwithoutrunningout.7.Ontopofthis,theyareenvironment-friendlyandbeneficialtothelivesofourchildrenandgrandchildren.根據提示及關鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。第四步：連句成篇連句成文，注意使用恰當的連詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，第五步：潤色修改【點睛】范文內容完整，要點全面，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數適當，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系。作者在范文中使用了較多主從復合句，如：That’swhypeoplearepushingfortheuseofalternativeenergysources.這句話運用了why引導的表語從句；文章也使用了一些固定詞組，如beawareof;beharmfulto;runout;bebeneficialto等。全文中沒有中國式英語的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、層次分明，上下句轉換自然，為文章增色添彩。江蘇省揚州市2020-2021學年高三