寫作描述性文章剖析

寫作——描述性文章描述性文章是把人物、事件、景觀、地點(diǎn)、環(huán)境等用生動的語言,形象地描繪出來。描述性文章的結(jié)構(gòu)(1人物:開頭應(yīng)有簡明的介紹文章的主體部分可按時間或事件的主次進(jìn)行描述結(jié)尾進(jìn)行評論或談感受(2地點(diǎn):要學(xué)會準(zhǔn)確地表示方位的詞或短語描述地點(diǎn)的位置通常由上至下,從里到外,從左至右,從遠(yuǎn)到近。總之,無論是描述人物,還是地點(diǎn)、環(huán)境、都要詳略得當(dāng),重點(diǎn)突出。學(xué)習(xí)并牢記下面的短語和句型表空間順序infrontof,inthefrontof,atthebackof,ontheright(leftsidecloseto,nextto,opposite,across,inside,outsidein(tothesouth/east/west/northononeside...,ontheotherside(of常用短語和句型:方位Thereisatallshelfontheleftofmyroom.(ontherightof,inthefrontof,nearthewindow,Abovethebed,thereisalargepaintingofthebluesea.(Ontherightoftheroom,Nexttoitisabed.(Infrontofit,Atthebackof,Inthemiddleof,TotherightofTheyareoppositethedoor.(ontheleft/rightoftheroom.Theofficebuildingisintheeastofthecampus.(inthesouthof,tothewestof,infrontof,behind,atthebackof,Themonument,whichwasbuiltin1894,standsinthecenterofthesquare.描述國家,城市等ChinaislocatedinAsia.(beSituated…besurroundedby,lietotheeastofItcoversahugeareaof9,600000squarekilometers.Thepopulationofthiscityis100,000.路線WhenyouComeoutof…(getto…reach…Crossthestreet(river(keepwalkingalong…walkdown…TurnrightattheendofBridgeStreetintoRiversideRoad.(thesecondtrafficlights,thefirstcrossing,Takethefirstturningonyourleft.(takethepathwhichcrossestheriver.Gostraightontothetrafficlightandthenturnright.You’llsee(findit人物Mygrandpa,kindandpatient,enjoystalkingwithkids.Heisabout5feetand7inchestall.Shehasaroundfacewithtwobigeyes.描述物品Thisropeis100meterslong.=Thelengthofthisropeis100meters.=Thisropeis100metersinlength.(inweight,inwidth,inheight,insize,incolor,inshapetisaroundyellowhatwithpinkflowersonit.It’smadeofstraw.21.Therearethreebooksintheherdrawer.1999年NMET書面表達(dá)假設(shè)你是李華,在一所中學(xué)讀書。最近收到美國朋友Smith先生的來信。他三年前參觀過你校,聽說現(xiàn)在變化很大,希望了解有關(guān)情況.參照下圖,給他寫一封回信,介紹你校的變化。注意:1回信須包括圖畫的主要內(nèi)容,可適當(dāng)增減細(xì)節(jié),使內(nèi)容連貫。2詞數(shù)100字左右。三年前圖1圖2審題:①一封信(體裁②談學(xué)校的變化(三年前圖1,三年后圖2③重點(diǎn)在三年后的描述題綱及常用結(jié)構(gòu)①開頭語:收到來信hearfromsb./get(receiveyourletter….②學(xué)校的變化:新教學(xué)樓:anewschoolbuilding圖書館:ournewlibrary新操場:thenewplayground樹木環(huán)繞:lotsoftrees③表述方位的詞:ononeside(ontheothersideontheright(leftTherebe….,infrontof,inandaround將以上要點(diǎn)擴(kuò)展成句并連文,注意句與句之間的過渡。DearMr.Smith,Iwassopleasedtohearfromyouandamwritingtotellyousomethingaboutmyschool.Youareright,Quiteafewchangeshavetakenplace.Ononesideoftheroadthereisanewclassroombuilding.Ontheotherside,wheretheplaygroundusedtobenowstandsanothernewbuildingourlibrary.Initthereareallkindsofbooks,newspapersandmagazines.Theplaygroundisnowinfrontoftheschool.Wehavealsoplantedalotoftreesinandaroundtheschool.Ihopeyoucomeandseeforyourselfsomeday.Bestwishes.Yours,LiHua假如你作為崔劍鋒的同學(xué)接受美國一家報社記者的采訪,請你介紹有關(guān)他的事跡。根據(jù)所給提示,寫一篇100詞左右的短文。Name:CuiJianfengBirthday:8,15,1971Birthplace:Heze,ShandongprovinceEducation:1989---1993,BiologyDepartment,PekingUniversity1996Doctor’sdegree,PrincetonUniversity,NewJerseyDeeds:1977diedforsavingaboyon16thSept.范文分析:L產(chǎn)FrinceturLUniversityA.審題:①文字和圖畫綜合表達(dá)的一篇文章;②文章可分為兩大部分B.題綱及常用短語:①第一部分,談他的經(jīng)歷:talkabouthisexperience.Experience?name?Birthday?Birthplace?EducationWordsandphrasescouldbeused.graduateform/goabroad/receivetheDoctor’sdegree②第二部分:談他的救人及犧牲的故事HiSDeedsWordsandexpressions:goouting/goforapicnichearthecryforhelpseesb.doingsth.jumpintotheriverloseone'slife③第三部分:結(jié)尾ConclusionHisstoryinspiredlotsofpeople.We’llrememberhimforever.Heisalwaysinourhearts.…C.成文寫作答案:CuiJianfengwasborninAugust,1971,inHeze,Shandongprovince.AftergraduatingfromBiologyDepartment,PekingUniversity,hewentabroadforfurtherstudiesinPrincetonUniversity,NewJersey.Therebestudiedveryhardanditwasin1996thathereceivedtheDoctor’sdegree.Onthe16th,September1997,hewentoutingwithhisclassmates.Neartheriver,theywerehavingapicnicwhenheheardthecryforhelp.Hesawaboysinkinginthewater.Withouthesitation,herushedtowardstheriverandjumpedintothewater.WiththehelpoftheotherAmericanstudents,theboywassaved.Cuiwasabouttogetoutofwaterwhenarockhithimonthehead.Cuilosthislife.Hisheroicstoryspreadalloverthecity.We’llrememberhimforever.練習(xí).假如你叫AliCe,你本應(yīng)去機(jī)場接Danial,但你不得不去醫(yī)院接你的母親回家,你的朋友Mary主動提出替你去機(jī)場接Danial,你給Danial寫信說明上述情況,并描述Mary的外表。AgeinherLwenti-esLooks.slim4ofmediumheigh[τwavyhair.withghsFiesɑɑthesIT-sbirtSlicesIiigh—heeledshoesPersonalitykindandcheerful.假設(shè)你是李華,你的美國朋友Mike將于6月底到北京作短暫停留,請你幫他安排一天的活動。要求用所給的示意圖寫一封信向他提出建議并對各地點(diǎn)加以簡單的介紹。頤和園飯館北京大學(xué)賓館圖書城【參考譯文】DearDanial,I’mverysorryIcan’tcometomeetyouattheairportsinceIhavetotakemymotherhomefromhospital.MyfriendMaryhaskindlyofferedtomeetyouandbringyouhome.Asyouhavenevermetherbefore.I’lldescribehertoyou.MissMaryisayoungladyinhertwentieswithglasses.Sheisofmediumheight.ShehasaroundfacewithWavyhair.Shelikeswearinghigh-heeledshoes.ItiseasytorecognizeherbecausesheisusuallydressedinT-shirtandaskirt.Sheisalwayscheerful.IdohopeyoumanagetorecognizemyfriendMarywithoutanydifficulty.I’mlookingforwardtoseeingyou.Yoursincerely,AliceDearMike,I’mgladtohearyouarecomingsoon.I’veplannedaone-daytripforyouinBeijing.InthemorningyoucanfirstgototheSummerPalace,whichisoneofthemostbeautifulparksinBeijing.Thereyoucangoboatingandclimbing.It’salsoaniceplacefortakingpictures.TheninthemiddleofthedayyoucanenjoyaChineselunchinarestaurant.Intheafternoon,IsuggestyouvisitBeijingUniversity.Asyouknow,itisfamousbothinChinaandintheworld.Beforeyougobacktoyourhotel,youcandropintheBookTown.TherearenotonlydifferentkindsbooksbutalsomanyChinesepaintings.Ihopeyou’llhaveagoodtime.Bestwishes,Yours,LiHuaDearJohn,I’msogratefulyou’recomingtoseemyfatherat10:00a.m.onSunday.HereishowyoucanfindPeople’sHospital.AfteryoucometotheDaZhongSquare,walknorthwardstillyougettothegateofEastPark.Turnrightandwalkalongthestreet.Itwilltakeyouabout5minutes’walktoarriveatthepolicestation.Thenwalknorthwardsagainandturnrightatthesecondcrossing,youwillfindpeople’sHospitalinfrontofyou.I’llmeetyouatthegateofthehospital.I’msureyou’llhavenotroublecominghere.XiaoLi假如你在路上遇見一位外賓，他問你去購物中心怎么走。購物中心離問路處只需半個小時，但為了使這位外賓順利找到購物中心，你給他畫了下面的一幅草圖?，F(xiàn)在，請你根據(jù)草圖，把給外賓指路的話寫下來。內(nèi)容不超過100詞。?Theshoppingcentreisnotfarfromhere.It’sonlyhalfanhour’swalk.Nowtakethefirstturningontheleft.ThengoalongYananRoad.Pleaseturnrightatthetrafficlights.That’stosay,takethesecondturningontheright.Thenyou’llfindabridgeonyourleft.Crossthebridgeandturnleft.Thenyou’l