讀后續(xù)寫個(gè)人成長類同學(xué)們給Sally的驚喜派對(duì)講義高三英語一輪復(fù)習(xí)

一、續(xù)寫原題閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事Sally'sbirthdaywasapproaching,andtheexcitementthatusuallyfilledherheartwasnowreplacedwithdisappointmentandstress.Turningelevenwasabigdeal,andshehadalwayscelebrateditwithagrandpartysurroundedbyherfriends.However,thisyearwasdifferent.Theburdenofexcessivehomeworkandherparents'strugglingbusinessweighedheavilyonher,forcingSallytomakethedifficultdecisionofnothavingabirthdayparty,eventhoughitwasaneventsheenjoyeddearlyeveryyear.Oneday,duringbreak,herbestfriend,Jane,withacuriouslookinhereyes,approached."Areyougoingtohaveabirthdaypartythisyear?"Janeasked,sensingSally'ssadness."No,"Sallysighedandrepliedsadly,"There'sjusttoomuchgoingonandmyparentsaregoingthroughfinancialdifficulties."Shesmiledweakly,tryingtoconcealherimmensedisappointmentandstress,butJanesawthroughherpretence(假裝)easily.Janenoddedthoughtfullyanddidnotsayanything.Afterthebreak,Sallysawhertalkingtooneoftheirclassmates,Sarah,secretively.Curious,Sallywentovertothem,butassoonasJanesawher,shequicklywalkedaway.SallywasstartledbyJane'sstrangeactionsandturnedtowardsSarah."Whatdidshesay?"Sallyasked.However,SarahsimplyshruggedandwalkedawaywithJane,leavingSallystandingthere,feelingleftoutandanxious.Whatishappening?Sallywonderedanxiously.Aretheykeepingsomethingfromme?AsSally'sbirthdaydrewnearer,Janewasoftenfoundchattingsoftlywithherotherclassmates.WheneverSallywentovertothem,theywouldjustwalkawayortellherthattheyweretalkingaboutasecretwhichSallywasnotallowedtoknow.Janehasneverkeptsecretsfrommebefore,Sallythought.Herheartfell.Evenherfriendsweredistancingthemselvesfromher!Sheswungbetweenconfusionandsadnesswitheachpassingmoment,desperatelytryingtofigureoutwhatwashappening.Whywereherfriendsdistancingthemselvesfromher?Andwhatweretheyhiding?注意：1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置做答。Paragraph1:

OnthedayofSally'sbirthday,shewenttoschoolandfoundherclassroomintotaldarkness.Paragraph2:

TearssprangfromSally'seyesandherfacebrokeintoaradiantsmile.

文章大意：Sally的生日快到了，本該是她一年中最快樂的日子，現(xiàn)在卻高興不起來。因?yàn)榉敝氐膶W(xué)習(xí)壓力迫使她放棄生日聚會(huì)。同學(xué)Jane問起Sally生日聚會(huì)的事，Sally只能裝作若無其事。后來同學(xué)們開始疏遠(yuǎn)她，Sally不知到底發(fā)生了什么事情。情節(jié)續(xù)寫：生日當(dāng)天，來到教室，一片黑暗。正困惑時(shí)，遲疑著要不要進(jìn)教室，她聽到異口同聲的歡呼”surprise!“原來同學(xué)們這兩天偷偷籌劃了一場驚喜派對(duì)。Sally的一系列激動(dòng)的反應(yīng)，語言動(dòng)作神態(tài)等等大的描寫。語言積累Theexcitementthatusuallyfilledherheartwasnowreplacedwithdisappointmentandstress(充滿她內(nèi)心的興奮現(xiàn)在被失望和壓力所取代bereplacedwith...).Theburdenofexcessivehomeworkandherparents'strugglingbusiness

weighedheavilyon(weighheavilyonsb...使某人焦慮；使某人心事重重)

her,forcingSallytomakethedifficultdecisionofnothavingabirthdayparty.3.Oneday,duringbreak,herbestfriend,Jane,

withacuriouslookinhereyes(帶著好奇的目光;作狀語),approached."Areyougoingtohaveabirthdaypartythisyear?"Janeasked,

sensingSally'ssadness(感覺到薩莉的悲傷；doing作狀語).4.She

smiledweakly(淡淡地；勉強(qiáng)地一笑),

tryingtoconcealherimmensedisappointmentandstress(試圖掩飾她巨大的失望和壓力;doing狀語),butJanesawthroughherpretenceeasily(輕而易舉地看穿了她的偽裝).5.

Curious,Sallywentovertothem(出于好奇，薩莉走到他們面前;curious形容詞作狀語，outofcuriosity),butassoonasJanesawher,shequickly

walkedaway(走開).Sally

wasstartledby

Jane'sstrangeactions

(被簡的奇怪舉動(dòng)嚇了一跳)

andturnedtowardsSarah.6..

Herheartsank(心情一下子很沮喪；變低落).7.She

swungbetweenconfusionandsadness(在...與...之間擺動(dòng)；變化)

witheachpassingmoment(隨著每一時(shí)刻的過去),

desperatelytryingtofigureoutwhatwashappening(極力想弄清楚發(fā)生了什么;doing作狀語).二參考范文：官方范文OnthedayofSally'sbirthday,shewenttoschoolandfoundherclassroomintotaldarkness.

Awaveofconfusionwashedoverherasshesteppedhesitantlyintotheroom,herheartpounding.Shereachedforthelightswitch,butbeforeherhandcouldfindit,achorusofvoicesbrokethesilence."Surprise!",herclassmates,ledbyJane,jumpedoutfromallsortsofhidingplaces.Astheroomfloodedwithlight,Sally'seyeswidenedinsurpriseanddisbelief.Theclassroomwasdecoratedwithballoonsandstreamers,abeautifulcakesatontheteacher'sdesk,andinthecorner,apileofpresentswaitedtobeunwrapped.TearssprangfromSally'seyesandherfacebrokeintoaradiantsmile.SheturnedtowardsJane,whowasgrinningfromeartoear."Weknewyoucouldn'thaveapartythisyear,sowedecidedtobringthepartytoyou,"Janesaid,hereyestwinklingwithmischief，indeedagrandbirthdayparty,justliketheonessheusedtohave.三、下水范文Paragraph1:

OnthedayofSally'sbirthday,shewenttoschoolandfoundherclassroomintotaldarkness.

Asenseofconfusionsweptoverherasshewalkedintotheclassroom.Cautiously,sheedgedherwaytowardsthelightswitch,herheartpounding.Butbeforeherhandcouldtouchit,achorusofthe"HappyBirthday"songerupted.Allofasudden,thelightsturnedon,andherclassmates,togetherwithJane,appearedoutofnowhere.Sallystoodfrozen,hereyeswideningwithdisbelief.Likemagic,theclassroomwasfilledwithcolorfulballoonsandstreamers,andontheteacher'sdeskwasabeautifullydecoratedbirthdaycake.NeverinherwildestdreamcouldSallyhaveimaginedthatherclassmateswouldorganizeasurprisebirthdaypartyforher.Paragraph2:

TearssprangfromSally'seyesandherfacebrokeintoaradiantsmile.Overwhelmedwithjoyandgratitude,sheh