讀后續(xù)寫指導(dǎo)練習(xí)旅行故事講義高三英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)

讀后續(xù)寫指導(dǎo)練習(xí)旅行故事閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。“Oncetherewasashiptravellingonthetoughseaandontheshiptherewasapairofcouple.Allofasudden,theshipmetwithanaccidentandthecouplehadnochoicebuttoruntothelifeboatwithoutdelay.Afterreachingthere,theyrealizedthattherewasspaceonlyforoneperson.Atthatverymoment,thehusbandpushedhiswifebehindhimandjumpedontothelifeboathimself,leavinghiswifestandingonthesinkingship,shoutingsomethingdesperatelytoherhusband,eyesfilledwithtears.”Theteacherstoppedherstorytellingandaskedherstudents,“Guys,guesswhatitwasthatsheshouted.”Moststudentsanswered.“Ihateyou！”Afterlisteningtoallthisreply,theteacherglancedthroughthewholeclassagainandnoticedthattherewasaboysittingsilentlythroughout.Thensheaskedhimthesamequestion.Theboyanswered,“Ibelieveshewouldhaveshouted—Takecareofourchild.”Listeningtohisremarks,theteacherwassurprisedandaskedtheboydoubtfully.“Haveyouheardofthisstorybefore？”Shakinghishead,theboysaidsoftlyandsadly,“No,Ihaven't.Butthat'swhatmymothersaidtomyfatherbeforeshediedofadeadlydisease.”Movedandfeelingsad,theteacherreplied.“Youranswerisabsolutelyright！”Thenshecontinued,“Let'stakeupthestory.Theshipsankeventuallyandthehusbandwenthomeandbroughtuptheirdaughteralone.Manyyearslaterafterthedeathoftheman,theirdaughterwastidyingupallhisbelongingswhenshefoundhisdiary.Inhisdiaryshefoundthatwhenherparentswereontheship,hermotherhadalreadybeendiagnosed(診斷)withadvancedillnessandatthecriticalmoment,thefatherrushedtotheonlychanceofsurvival.”注意：1．續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2．請按如下格式在相應(yīng)位置作答。Inhisdiary,themanmentionedhewishedtosinktotheoceanwithhiswifebutfortheirdaughterhehadtolive.Thestorywasfinishedandtheclasswassilent.讀原文，找伏筆段落伏筆Para.1伏筆句：Atthatverymoment,thehusbandpushedhiswifebehindhimandjumpedontothelifeboathimself,leavinghiswifestandingonthesinkingship,shoutingsomethingdesperatelytoherhusband,eyesfilledwithtears.關(guān)鍵信息詞：shoutingsomethingdesperately;eyes__filled__with__tearsPara.2－3伏筆句：Theteacherstoppedherstorytellingandaskedherstudents.Moststudentsanswered.“I__hate__you！”關(guān)鍵信息詞：storytelling;__askedherstudents;__hate—8伏筆句：“Take__care__of__our__child.”Shakinghishead,theboysaidsoftlyandsadly,“No,Ihaven't.Butthat'swhatmymothersaidtomyfatherbeforeshediedofadeadlydisease.”Movedandfeelingsad,theteacherreplied.“Your__answer__is__absolutely__right！”關(guān)鍵信息詞：takecareof;diedofadeadlydisease;absolutelyrightPara.9伏筆句：Let's__take__up__the__story.Inhisdiaryshefoundthatwhenherparentswereontheship,hermotherhadalreadybeendiagnosed(診斷)withadvancedillnessandatthecriticalmoment,thefatherrushedtotheonlychanceofsurvival.關(guān)鍵信息詞：takeupthestory;diagnosed(診斷)withadvancedillness;rushedtotheonlychanceofsurvival思首句，順情節(jié)Inhisdiary,themanmentionedhewishedtosinktotheoceanwithhiswifebutfortheirdaughterhehadtolive.問題鏈1：1．Whatwouldhehaveinmindwhenthinkingofhisdaughter?2．How__did__he__feel__after__his__wife__died?3．Whatdidhedowhenhethoughtofhispromisetohiswife?Thestorywasfinishedandtheclasswassilent.問題鏈2：1．Whatwasthestudents'feelingstothestory?2．Howdidthestudentsgetthehiddensecretsbehindthestory?3．What__can__we__learn__from__the__story?寫前導(dǎo)讀：本文是一篇記敘文。老師在課堂上講述了一則故事：一對夫妻乘船旅行，不料遭遇事故，沉船之際，丈夫跳上了只能承載一人的救生艇，而妻子卻淹沒水中。從丈夫的日記里，我們能找到他這么做的原因嗎？故事講完了，孩子們有什么感慨？[精彩范文]Inhisdiary,themanmentionedhewishedtosinktotheoceanwithhiswifebutfortheirdaughterhehadtolive.Withouthim,theirbabydaughterwouldbeeanorphan.Afterdrowninghimselfinsorrowforashorttime,heupliftedhimselfandlearnedhowtoraiseababy.Wheneverfacedwithhardships,hewouldinspirehimselfwithhiswife'swords—“Takecareofourchild.”Seeingthelittlegirlgrowintoasunny,prettygirlwithdoublelovefrombothparents,themanknewhemadeittokeephispromise.Thestorywasfinishedandtheclasswassilent.Nobodytalkedorlaughedasusual.Instead,itseemedthateverystudentwaslostindeepthought,tastingthemovinglifestory.Theteacherwassurethatthestudentswerereflectingontheirrepliesandthattheyhadunderstoodthemoralofthe