初中英語 祝賀信

PARTTHREE第三篇寫作妙解篇類型(四)

祝賀信典例分析假如你是李華,在你的幫助下,交換生Tom在中文演講比賽中獲得了一等獎(jiǎng)。請(qǐng)你給他寫一封祝賀信,表達(dá)你的真誠祝賀,回憶他比賽時(shí)的表現(xiàn),以及你從他身上學(xué)到了什么。[提示詞語]win,prize,speechcompetition,pronounce,practice[提示問題]·WhydoyoucongratulateTom?·Whatmadehimsuccessfulinthecompetition?·Whatcanyoulearnfromhim?DearTom,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________LiHua【寫作架構(gòu)】【思路點(diǎn)撥】1.要點(diǎn)提煉:本文是一篇應(yīng)用文,類型是祝賀信。根據(jù)題目要求,可以提煉出3個(gè)要點(diǎn):(1)說明祝賀的原因(2)描述比賽中的精彩表現(xiàn)(3)你學(xué)到了什么2.時(shí)態(tài):一般過去時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)3.人稱:第一人稱和第三人稱【基礎(chǔ)寫作】Ⅰ.根據(jù)所給提示詞補(bǔ)全下列各句1.知道你獲得了英語演講比賽的一等獎(jiǎng)我很高興。(behappyto…)______________________________________________________________________________________________2.我們被你精彩的演講而深深吸引。(beattractedby…)We

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3.你在這次比賽中表現(xiàn)很好。(doagoodjobin…)You

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I'mveryhappytoknowyouwonthefirstprizeintheEnglishspeechcompetition.wereattractedbyyourwonderfulspeechdidagoodjobinthiscompetition4.我為你感到驕傲。(feelproudof…)I

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5.為了演講得更好,你應(yīng)該每天堅(jiān)持練習(xí)演講。(tomakeitbetter;keepdoing…)

,youshould

everyday.

feelproudofyouTomakeitbetter

keeppracticingyourspeechⅡ.句子升格按括號(hào)中的要求改寫句子。6.Yourperformancewaswonderful.Wefeltproudofyou.(用so…that…連接兩個(gè)句子)______________________________________________________________________________________________7.Yourvoicewasbeautiful.Yourpronunciationwasperfect.(用both…and…連接兩個(gè)句子)Wewereamazedat

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8.Keepontryingandnevergiveup.(用It'simportantto…改寫成復(fù)合句)Iknow

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Yourperformancewassowonderfulthatwefeltproudofyou.bothyourbeautifulvoiceandyourperfectpronunciationitisimportanttokeepontryingandnevertogiveup9.Yourspeechisinteresting.Yourspeechismeaningful,too.(用notonly…butalso…連接兩個(gè)句子)__________________________________________________________________10.Iwanttothankyouforshowingmethepowerofbelievingourselvesandmakingbigeffortstoreachourdreams.(用notonly…butalso…改寫句子)Iwanttothankyoufor_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.

Yourspeechisnotonlyinterestingbutalsomeaningful.showingmenotonlythepowerofbelievingourselvesbutalsothepowerofmakingbigeffortstoreachourdreams【連句成文】DearTom,I'mveryhappytoknowthatyouwonthefirstprizeintheChinesespeechcompetition,soI'mwritingtocongratulateyouonyourwonderfulperformance.YoudidagoodjobintheChinesespeechcompetition.Youpronouncedreallywellduringyourspeechandyourvoicewasbeautiful.Youspokesofluentlythatweallfeltproudofyou.What'smore,weweresurprisedatyourrichandmeaningfulcontents.Asyourbestfriend,Iknowyoutriedyourbestforthecompetition.Youkeptpracticingyourspeecheverydayinordertomakeitbetter.Iknowitisimportanttokeepontryingandnevertogiveup.IhopeIcanbesuccessfullikeyouonedayinthefuture.LiHua拓展積累【表達(dá)祝賀】1.I'mwritingtocongratulateyouonyourwonderfulperformance.2.I'mgladtosaycongratulationstoyoubecauseofyourwonderfulperformance.【描述精彩表現(xiàn)】1.Wewereallamazedatyourbeautifulvoiceandexcellentpronunciation.2.I'mhappytoknowthatyoudidagoodjobinthecompetition.3.Weweresoproudofyouandenjoyedyourmeaningfulspeech.【學(xué)習(xí)某人優(yōu)秀品質(zhì)】1.Asyourbestfriend,Iknowyoutriedyourbesttomakeitbetter.2.Iknowit'simportanttokeeptryinghardandnevertogiveup.3.Yousetagoodexampleforme.Ireallygetlotsofbenefitfromwhatyousaid.實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練假如你是李華,得知你的美國筆友Peter被他理想的高中錄取,請(qǐng)你給他寫一封電子郵件,要點(diǎn)如下:表示祝賀;介紹自己目前的學(xué)習(xí)情況;請(qǐng)教學(xué)習(xí)方法。[提示詞語]beadmittedinto…,congratulate,advice[提示問題]·WhydoyoucongratulatePeter?·Howisyourstudy?·Whatadvicedoyouwanttogetfromhim?One

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version:DearPeter,Ihavereceivedyoure-mail.I'mverygladtoknowthatyouhavebeenadmittedintoyouridealseniorhighschool.First,I'dliketooffermycongratulationstoyouonyourgreatsuccessandIalsohopetoenterafamousseniorhighschooljustlikeyou.Now,Iwanttotellyousomethingaboutmyself.Asyouknow,I'mbusypreparingforthefinalexamination.DayafterdayIworkhardandhavetostayuplate