第5課時　體裁類比突破(5)-演講稿Vs倡議書

第5課時體裁類比突破(5)——演講稿

倡議書一、“演講稿”寫作增分指導(dǎo)[寫作題目](2021·全國乙卷)你校將舉辦英語演講比賽。請你以Besmartonlinelearners為題寫一篇發(fā)言稿參賽，內(nèi)容包括：1．分析優(yōu)勢與不足；2.提出學(xué)習(xí)建議。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2．題目和首句已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。BesmartonlinelearnersGoodmorning,everyone，It'sagreathonourformetostandhereandaddressmyspeechtitled“Besmartonlinelearners”．__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

[悟滿分作文·厚寫作功底]BesmartonlinelearnersGoodmorning,everyone，It'sagreathonourformetostandhereandaddressmyspeechtitled“Besmartonlinelearners”．Onlinelearningisincreasinglyimportantrecently.However,ithasbothadvantagesanddisadvantages.Obviously,onlinelearningallowsustolearnatanytimewhereverweare.Besides,wecanabsorballkindsofresourcestolearnefficiently.Butstaringatthescreenlongisharmfultooureyes.Worsestill,wedon'thavemanyopportunitiestointeractwithourteachersandclassmates.Thenhowtobesmartonlinelearners?First,takeashortbreakwiselywhennecessary.Second,makingascheduleisamust.Inconclusion,onlybybeingsmartonlinelearnerscanwetrulyenjoythebenefitsofmoderntechnology.Thanksforyourlistening!學(xué)亮點寫法1．學(xué)語言風(fēng)格

演講稿具有口語特點，要盡量使用簡短的句子和口語化的語言，流暢表達思想。同時，還要注重語言的感染力，可使用祈使句、感嘆句、倒裝句、強調(diào)句等進行感情強化。本篇演講稿以簡短句子為主，邏輯條理清楚，語言表達流暢。同時，運用了祈使句First,takeashort...Second,makinga...與倒裝句Inconclusion,onlybybeingsmartonlinelearnerscanwe...來增加演講的“鼓動”性。2．學(xué)高級表達(1)使用高級詞匯和詞塊，如：increasingly,obviously,absorb,efficiently,beharmfulto,worsestill,interactwith,inconclusion等。(2)準確運用高級句式，如：讓步狀語從句whereverweare；祈使句和狀語從句的省略takeashortbreakwiselywhennecessary...；部分倒裝Inconclusion,onlybybeingsmartonlinelearnerscanwe...等，這些也是文章的亮點之處。3．學(xué)精彩結(jié)尾

結(jié)尾使用Inconclusion，并結(jié)合以only加狀語bybeing...開頭的倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)，簡潔有力地總結(jié)了自己的演講，最后致謝聽眾。[積寫作素材·造吸睛亮點]Ⅰ.開頭部分：明確演講主題(開門見山，簡潔明了)1．Ladiesandgentlemen,Iamgladtohaveachancetogettogetherwith...Thetopicofmyspeechtodayis...2．Boysandgirls，Ifeelgreatlyhonouredtohaveachancetobewith...Today,I'dliketosharemyideason...3．Goodmorningeverybody!It'smyhonourtospeakhere,andIamverygladtosharemytopicwithyou.ThentodayI'dliketotalksomethingabout...4．Honourablejudges,distinguishedguests,ladiesandgentlemen,goodevening!Ifeelreallyhonouredtostandhereandmakeaspeechtoday.I'mgoingtolooktogetherwithyouinto...5．Iamgladtogiveyouawarmwelcomeonbehalfofourschool.6．Thankyouforyouracceptingourinvitationtocometo...7．Ladiesandgentlemen/Boysandgirls,I'm...I'mgreatlyhonouredtospeakhereonbehalfofmyschool.I'mgoingtotalkabout...Ⅱ.主體部分：展開主題(分析問題，展開論述，提出解決方法)1．Firstly,...Secondly,...Inaddition,...Lastbutnotleast,...2．Asisknowntoall,withtheimprovementofpeople'slivingstandards...3．AsfarasI'mconcerned，ridingbicyclesisagoodsolution.Foronething,...Foranother,...What'smore...4．Ithinkitimportant/necessary/difficult/convenient/possible/likelyforsb.todosth.5．Itplaysanincreasinglyimportantrole/partinourlife.6．Itmakesitpossibleforusstudentstogetourselvesfullydeveloped.7．Withtherapidgrowthof...,...have/hasbecomeincreasinglyimportantinourdailylife.8．WhatIwanttostress/emphasizeis.../Aboveall/Mostimportantofall,/Whatreallymatters/countsis.../Chancesarethat...Ⅲ.結(jié)尾部分：總結(jié)演講(簡要總結(jié)，表達期望或感謝)1．Inconclusion,onlyby...canwetrulyenjoythebenefitsofmoderntechnology.2．Tosumup...have/hasaprofoundinfluenceoneveryone.Therefore,wemust...3．OK,thankyouforlistening.That'sall./That'sall.Thankyou!4．Comeonandjoinus!5．Thanksforyourattention.6．Wishyouanunforgettabletimehere!Thankyou.7．Iamsureyouwillmakegreaterprogress,showabetterperformanceinyourstudy,andobtainabrighterfuture.8．Iamsurethatwithyourgreatefforts,youwillenjoyacolorfullifehere.[建寫作模型·展規(guī)范形體]Goodmorning,everyone!It'ssonicetoseeallofyouhere.I'mveryhonouredtodaytohavetheopportunitytosharemyopinionson

(演講主題)．Asisknowntoall,

(現(xiàn)象)．However,thereare(問題).Inmyopinion,itisaproblemabout

(分析問題)．Howcanwesolveitthen?AsfarasI'mconcerned,thefollowingmethodiseffective.Thatis

(解決方法)．Foronething,

(理由一).Foranother,(理由二)．What'smore,

(理由三)．Therefore,let'staketheresponsibilityto

(號召行動)．Comeonandputitintoaction.Thanksforlistening.二、“倡議書”寫作增分指導(dǎo)[寫作題目](2022·全國甲卷)你校將以六月八日世界海洋日為主題，舉辦英語征文比賽，請你寫一篇短文投稿。內(nèi)容包括：1．海洋的重要性；2．保護海洋的倡議。注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；2．題目和首句已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。OurOceans,OurResponsibilityJune8thwasofficiallynamedbytheUNin2009asWorldOceansDay.

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________[悟滿分作文·厚寫作功底]OurOceans,OurResponsibilityJune8thwasofficiallynamedbytheUNin2009asWorldOceansDay.Itisadaytoraisepeople'sawarenessofprotectingtheoceanswhicharevitaltohumanbeings.Coveringabout71%oftheEarth'ssurface,theoceanscanregulatetheclimateandmakeitlivableforhumans.Inaddition,theoceansproduceoverhalfoftheworld'soxygenandarehometoalargevarietyofsealife.Theoceansaresoimportantthatweshouldprotectthemforourfuturegenerations.Asstudents,wecantakepartbydoingsmallthings,suchascollectinggarbageontheseashoreoravoidingpouringwastewaterintotheoceans.Ouroceansarebeingbadlypollutedandit'shightimewetookaction.Onlybyworkingtogethercanweprotectandrestoreourpreciousoceans.學(xué)亮點寫法1．學(xué)高級表達(1)使用高級詞匯和詞塊，如：raisepeople'sawarenessof，bevitalto,regulate,behometo,alargevarietyof,pouring...into...等。(2)準確運用高級句式，如：定語從句whicharevitaltohumanbeings；非謂語動詞短語作狀語Coveringabout71%...；結(jié)果狀語從句...soimportantthat...；虛擬語氣it'shightimewetookaction；倒裝句Onlybyworkingtogethercanwe...等。2．學(xué)精彩結(jié)尾

本文結(jié)尾部分arebeingbadlypolluted形象描述了海洋正在被污染；it'shightimewetookaction簡潔有力地呼吁大家行動起來；Onlybyworkingtogethercanwe...特別強調(diào)只有大家共同努力才能拯救海洋。3．學(xué)行文邏輯

首段中第二句的主語It代替首句中的WorldOceansDay，從而使兩句自然銜接；whicharevitaltohumanbeings...引出第二段內(nèi)容。第二段中Inaddition連接了海洋兩方面的重要性。第三段的第一句話起到承上啟下作用。尾段說明現(xiàn)狀，發(fā)出呼吁，與標(biāo)題和首段內(nèi)容相呼應(yīng)?？傊顺h書上下文銜接緊密，全文邏輯連貫。

[積寫作素材·造吸睛亮點]Ⅰ.開頭部分：發(fā)出倡議的背景、原因和目的1．Nowadays/Currently/Inrecentyears,wehavetofacetheproblem...(現(xiàn)象),whichisbecomingmoreandmoreserious.2．Inorderto...,I'dliketocallyourattentiontotheimportanceof.../To...,Isincerelyappealto/callonsb.todo...3．Istronglyadvocatethatsb.(should)do...4．With/Forthepurposeof...，I'dliketocallyourattentiontotheimportanceof...5．Recently,thereexistsaproblem/phenomenonthat...，whichleadstomanybadeffects.Soit's(high)timethatwedid/shoulddo...6．Inorderto...，allofusaresupposedtodoasfollows.7．Iamwritingthislettertocalloneveryonetopayattentionto...Ⅱ.主體部分：倡議的具體內(nèi)容和要求1．Wearesupposed/required/expectedtodo.../Wehadbetterdo/oughttodo...2．Itissuggested/advisedthat.../It'sagoodchoicetodo.../Itisadvisabletodo.../Itwouldbewiseif.../It'sofgreatimportance/significancetodo...3．Asstudents,wecantakepartbydoingsmallthings,suchas...4．Immediatemeasuresshouldbetakentodo.../Itisurgentthatsomestrongmeasuresshouldbeadoptedtosolvetheproblem.5．Wecansaveourplanetthroughmanyways,suchas...6．Allthesehavesoundedanalarmtohumanbeings,soitishightimethatwejoined/shouldjoineffortsto...7．Inordertomakeagoodnetworkenvironment,Ihopeeveryonecan...8．Ithinkitnecessarytolaystresson...First,...Second,...Third,...9．Effectivemeasuresshouldbeadoptedbeforethingsgetworse.Firstly,...Secondly,...Thirdly,...10．Withtheaimof...,wearesupposedtocarryoutaseriesofmeasures.Foronething,...Foranother,...Ⅲ.結(jié)尾部分：倡議者的決心和希望1．Let'sjointogethertofight...2．Let'stakeresponsibilityforourselvesandothers.3．Evenasmallactionismeaningfulto.../Let'stakeactionnow!4．Let'smakeeveryeffort/sparenoefforttoovercomethedifficulties.5．Onlyifwetakeeffectivestepstodealwiththisproblemnowcanwe...6．Onlyinthiswaycanwemakeagreatsuccess.7．Let'sjoinhandsandtakeactionimmediately.8．Webelieveyourcontributionscanmakeadifference.9．Iamcertainthatremarkableresultswillbeachievedinthisrespect.10．Let'sjoinourhandsinfightingagainst...andmakeourplanetabetterplacetolivein.[建寫作模型·展規(guī)范形體]Dear

，Inrecentyears,wehavetofacetheproblem

(社會現(xiàn)象)．Asweal