高中英語(yǔ)2024屆高考復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫素材（場(chǎng)景描寫+語(yǔ)言描寫）VIP

高考英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫素材一、場(chǎng)景描寫（一）自然場(chǎng)景A.夜幕降臨darknessfell.天氣寒冷Thedaywasbitterlycold.天空蔚藍(lán)，陽(yáng)光明媚Theskywasblueandthesunwasshining.大雨傾盆而下Itwaspouringreallyhard.皓月當(dāng)空Themoonwasshiningbrightlyinthesky.天空繁星密布Theskywasdottedwithstars.云散開(kāi)了，太陽(yáng)出來(lái)了Thecloudspartedandthesunshone山丘沐浴在陽(yáng)光下Thehillswerebathedinthesunshine風(fēng)越來(lái)越大，天空開(kāi)始烏云密布Thewindwasgettingupanditwasbecomingcloudy.濃霧籠罩著整個(gè)大地Thethickfogblanketedthefield.夜里一點(diǎn)聲音都沒(méi)有，只有螢火蟲(chóng)還醒著，小心翼翼的在夜空里織著一幅畫.There'snotasinglesoundatnight.Onlythegiowormswerestillawake,carefullyweavingapictureinthenightsky..不遠(yuǎn)處有一條小溪，在綠油油的兩岸間潺潺流動(dòng)。.晴空萬(wàn)里，火熱的太陽(yáng)曬得我后背發(fā)燙Blueskystoodtallandfar,andthesunwassearingmyback..陽(yáng)光下河面波光粼粼.Theriverglittersinthesunshine..月亮在天空中好像一盞夜燈，閃爍的星好奇地眨著眼睛Likealamp,themoonshonefromabove.Thestarstwinkledtheireyeswithcuriosity.Bthebluesky藍(lán)天thesongsofbirds鳥(niǎo)鳴thethunderingclouds雷霆萬(wàn)鈞的云thefragileflowers嬌嫩的花thegreengrass青草thefragrantroses芬芳的玫瑰thesetting/risingsun落日/冉冉升起的太陽(yáng)Darkcloudsweregatheringinthesky.烏云密布。Thenightskywaslitupbyflashesoflight.一道道燈光照亮了夜空。Thecloudshadspreadandnearlycoveredtheentiresky.云彩擴(kuò)散開(kāi)來(lái)，幾乎遮住了整個(gè)天空。Thesunwasnowhighinthesouthernsky.太陽(yáng)正高掛在南邊的天空上。Thesunwentin,andthebreezebecamecold.云層遮住了太陽(yáng)，微風(fēng)有了些涼意。Themistmeltedrapidlyinthemorningsun.在早晨的陽(yáng)光下，薄霧渙然消散了。Themountainareaiscoveredentirelyindensejungle.山區(qū)完全掩映在茂密的叢林中。Weclimbedupawindingtracktowardsamountainrefuge.我們沿著一條蜿蜒的小道爬向山上的一處避難所。Themountaintopwascoveredwithsnow.山頂被積雪覆蓋。Theregionisuninhabitedexceptforafewmountainvillages.除了幾個(gè)小山村之外，這個(gè)地區(qū)杳無(wú)人煙。Bathedinthesunshineanddelightedbyfantasticscenery,weheadedforthedestination.沐浴在陽(yáng)光下，享受著美麗的風(fēng)景，我們向目的地出發(fā)。（二）社會(huì)場(chǎng)景,整個(gè)教室一片安靜Silencespreadacrosstheclassroom.整個(gè)教室安靜了下來(lái)Silencefellintheclassroom.這是在學(xué)校的最后一天，整個(gè)班級(jí)非常難過(guò)Itwasthelastdayofschool.ThewholeclasswasenvelopedInsadness..老師講完故事后,教室里爆發(fā)出陣陣掌聲.Theteacherhavingfinishedthestory,clapsburstoutfromtheclassroom..同學(xué)們爭(zhēng)前恐后地發(fā)言Allthestudentsweretryingtogetawordin..他尷尬得漲紅了臉Hisfaceflushedwithembarrassment.二、語(yǔ)言描寫.對(duì)話標(biāo)簽在前Shesaid,“Iwouldliketogowithyou,butIhaven?tfinishedmyhomework.”.對(duì)話標(biāo)簽在后“Iwouldliketogowithyou,butIhaven,tfinishedmyhomework."Shesaid.這兩句是最常見(jiàn)的形式，大家寫出來(lái)，應(yīng)該問(wèn)題不大。我們來(lái)看第三種形式。3.對(duì)話標(biāo)簽在句子中間“Iwou1dliketogowithyou,“shesaid,“butIhaven'tfinishedmyhomework.”【提升語(yǔ)言描寫小技巧】在對(duì)話標(biāo)簽中加入語(yǔ)氣，嗓音，情感讓你的描寫更生動(dòng)傳神。①第一種：加語(yǔ)氣 _“Iwou1dloveto,saidEmilyinapleasanttone.“我很樂(lè)意這樣做，”艾米麗用一種愉快的語(yǔ)氣說(shuō)。這里用到了“inapleasanttone.",即“用一種愉快的語(yǔ)氣”，基本結(jié)構(gòu)為：ina/an+形容詞+tone如：inapleasant愉悅的/firm堅(jiān)定的/rude粗魯?shù)?sad悲傷的tone也可以用inatoneof+名詞的搭配如：inatoneofsurprise用一種驚訝的語(yǔ)氣inatoneofcuriosity用一種好奇的語(yǔ)氣inatoneofimpatience用一種不耐煩的語(yǔ)氣inatoneofcommand用一種命令的語(yǔ)氣②第二種：加嗓音“Ididn'tmeanto,"shemurmuredinalowvoice.“我不是故意的，”她低聲說(shuō)。這里用到了"inalowvoice",即“小聲地說(shuō)道”或者“用一種...聲音”，基本結(jié)構(gòu)是:ina/an+形容詞+voice如：inahigh/low/sweet/loud/soft/weakvoice用一個(gè)高/低/甜/響亮/軟/弱的聲音③第三種：加情感“I???I??don'tthinkI'mrightforthepart,“Irepliedwithembarrassment.“我??,我..認(rèn)為我不適合這個(gè)角色，"我尷尬地回答。這里用到了uwithembarrassment",即“(伴隨著)難堪”，基本結(jié)構(gòu)是：with+情感名詞。如withexcitement(伴隨著)激動(dòng)。④加副詞“我再也不會(huì)那樣做了J我回答。如何豐富這句話里的對(duì)話標(biāo)簽?zāi)?？“Iwillneverdothatagain,"Iansweredfirmly.加上了副詞firmly(堅(jiān)定地)這句話也可以這么寫：可將副詞提到句首。Firmly,Ianswered,“Iwillneverdothatagain.”【語(yǔ)言素材積累】“Well,“saidthefarmer,asherubbedthesweatofthebackofhisneck.此處在說(shuō)的動(dòng)作后，緊跟了as引導(dǎo)的狀語(yǔ)從句，翻譯成“一邊，一邊”。他一邊擦脖子后面的汗水一邊說(shuō)“好啊?！薄癐wantthatone,“theboysaid,pointingtothelittledog.=Pointingthelittledog,theboysaid,“Iwantthatone.”此處在說(shuō)的動(dòng)作后，緊跟了doing的非謂語(yǔ)結(jié)構(gòu)，表伴隨。(3)Thefarmerpickedupthedog,kneltdownandsaidinasoftvoice,"It'syoursnow.”=Thefarmerpickedupthedogandkneltdown,saying,"It's