2024屆高考英語(yǔ)沖刺復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)災(zāi)難故事類(lèi)+與朋友結(jié)伴滑雪突遇雪崩后死里逃生

高考英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)語(yǔ)篇練習(xí)災(zāi)難故事——與朋友結(jié)伴滑雪，突遇雪崩后死里逃生1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫(xiě)原文KenScottkickedoffthecoversandleaptoutofbedathishomeintheRockyMountaintownofMullan,Idaho.He’djustheardontheradiothatthenearbySilverMountainResorthadbeenblessedwithnearlyafootandahalfofnewsnow.Asanexperiencedskiaddict,hedidn’twanttomissthisbiggoldenopportunity.Theseconditionsarewhatskierslivefor.WhenScottreachedSilverMountain’slockerroom,hecameacrosshisfriendPaul,aformerskiinstructorwhohadalsobeenaregularontheseslopesformorethantwodecades.Bothofthemwereexhilarated.Beforesettingoff,itwasPaul’sroutinetocheckhisphonetightlyfixedinsidehisparka(風(fēng)雪外套).Forthenexthourthepairskiedonvariousrunsunderalightlydullsky,makingfreshtracks.Theywerebothinaplayfulmood,laughingastheytackledthesteepruns.4續(xù)寫(xiě)原文Almostimmediately,thesnowbeneaththeirfeetgaveway.Inamillisecond,Paulrealizedwhatwashappening.“Avalanche!(雪崩)”heyelledtoScott,whowasnotfarbehind.Scottresponded.Thesuddensnowslidecausedfearinhisvoice.“Thisishappening!”Instantly,bothwerehitbyamassofsnowthatwouldhitandcarrythemsome500feetdownthemountain.Scottfeltitsurroundingandenclosinghim,movingquicklyuphisbackandoverhisshoulders,thenheavyagainsthisneck.Snowfilledthespaceinfrontofhimandpileduparoundthewholeofhim.Paul,too,wassweptdownhill.Theyrememberedtheavalanchesurvivallessonstheyhadlearned.Keepyourheadup.Trytoswim.Stayontopofthesnow.Butthesnowwastoopowerfulandtheyfeltthemselvesrollinglikealoadofclothesinawashingmachine.WhenScottfinallycametorest,hewaslyingonhisleftsideandcompletelyburied,skisandpolesstillattached.5段首句Paragraph1：Paulwasluckier,endinguppartiallyburiedandprobablysurviving.Paragraph2：Recallingtheterribleexperience,Scottthankedhisfriendandtherescueteam.6Part2題目分析7點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第二段段首，續(xù)寫(xiě)銜接第二段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)8續(xù)寫(xiě)思路分析本文以人物為線(xiàn)索展開(kāi)，講述了經(jīng)驗(yàn)豐富的滑雪愛(ài)好者肯·斯科特和好友保羅結(jié)伴滑雪，突遇雪崩后死里逃生的故事。9續(xù)寫(xiě)思路分析Para1：Paulwasluckier,endinguppartiallyburiedandprobablysurviving.由第一段首句內(nèi)容“保羅比較幸運(yùn)，部分被埋葬，很可能還活著?！笨芍?，第一段可描寫(xiě)保羅如何脫險(xiǎn)，以及脫險(xiǎn)后尋找好友和尋求救援。10續(xù)寫(xiě)思路分析Para2：Recallingtheterribleexperience,Scottthankedhisfriendandtherescueteam.由第二段首句內(nèi)容“回憶起那次可怕的經(jīng)歷，斯科特感謝了他的朋友和救援隊(duì)伍。”可知，第二段可描寫(xiě)當(dāng)被埋在封閉空間的積雪下時(shí)，斯科特的心理活動(dòng)及獲救后的感激之情。11續(xù)寫(xiě)思路分析續(xù)寫(xiě)線(xiàn)索結(jié)伴滑雪——突遇雪崩——尋求援助——獲救——感激12續(xù)寫(xiě)素材可用詞匯：行為類(lèi)1.到達(dá)：arrivein/reach2.遇見(jiàn)：comeacross/meet3.集中:focuson/concentrateon情緒類(lèi)1.高興的：exhilarated/pleased2.驚恐：terror/panic13續(xù)寫(xiě)素材可用句型：[高分句型1].Justashewasfeelinghimselffadingaway,therescueteamarrived.（as引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句）[高分句型2]Withgreatefforts,PaulandtheteamlocatedScottandfoundhimaliveinanenclosedspace,whichendedtheunthinkableaccidentwithanincrediblesurvival.（由關(guān)系代詞which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句）14Part3范文呈現(xiàn)15范文呈現(xiàn)Paulwasluckier,endinguppartiallyburiedandprobablysurviving.Sofortunatewashethatmostofthesnowhadgoneoverhisbodyandcontinueddownthehill.Insuchashallowburial,hebegantoshakeoffthesnow,scoopedsnowawaywithbarehands,andmanagedtopullhimselfout.Lookingaroundtheworldofsnow,hedesperatelyshoutedScott’snamebutreceivednotraceofresponses.Paulunzippedhisparkaandpulledoutthephonetomaketheemergencycall.Shortlyafterwards,therescueteamarrived.Withgreatefforts,PaulandtheteamlocatedScottandfoundhimaliveinanenclosedspace,whichendedtheunthinkableaccidentwithanincrediblesurvival.16范文呈現(xiàn)Recallingtheterribleexperience,Scottthankedhisfriendandtherescueteam.Whenburiedundersnowintheenclosedspace,Scottdriftedbetweenterrorandpanic,hopingthathisfriendPaulwasnotburiedsodeep.Heheldontothatfaintpossibilitylikearopewhichcouldpullhimtosafety.Hepainstakinglytookonlytinybreaths,fightingtostaypositivebyfocusingonthisbreathing.Timetickedawayslowly.Justashewasfeelinghimselffadingaway,therescueteamarrived.Inthatone-in-a-millionchance,theymadeit.Withthedullskyclearingup,bothPaulandScottbreathedinthefreshairwithabandon,feelingtherebirthoflife.17范文譯文保羅更幸運(yùn)，最終被部分埋葬，可能還活了下來(lái)。他是如此幸運(yùn)，以至于大部分的雪都蓋過(guò)了他的身體，繼續(xù)下山。在這樣一個(gè)淺埋的地方，他開(kāi)始抖雪，徒手鏟雪，然后設(shè)法把自己拉了出來(lái)。環(huán)顧雪地，他拼命喊著斯科特的名字，但沒(méi)有得到任何回應(yīng)。保羅拉開(kāi)他的派克大衣的拉鏈，拔出電話(huà)打緊急電話(huà)。不久之后，救援隊(duì)趕到了。在巨大的努力下，保羅和團(tuán)隊(duì)找到了斯科特，并在一個(gè)封閉的空間里發(fā)現(xiàn)了他還活著，這以令人難以置信的生還結(jié)束了這場(chǎng)不可思議的事故。18范文譯文回憶起那段可怕的經(jīng)歷，斯科特感謝他的朋友和救援隊(duì)。當(dāng)斯科特被埋在封閉的空間里的雪下時(shí)，他在恐懼和恐慌之間徘徊，希望他的朋友保羅不要埋得那么深。他緊緊抓住那微