讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)個(gè)人成長(zhǎng)類(lèi)-Perseverance+that+winsz+毅力和勇氣戰(zhàn)勝了一切苦難講義 高考英語(yǔ)作文復(fù)習(xí)專(zhuān)項(xiàng)

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中文ManyyearsagoIsteppedintoabookstoreinCincinnatiinsearchofsomebooksthatIwanted.許多年前，我走進(jìn)Cincinnati的一家書(shū)店，尋找一些我想要的書(shū)。WhileIwasthere,apoorlittleboy,abouttwelve,cameintoaskwhethertheyhadaworldatlasforsell.當(dāng)我在那里的時(shí)候，一個(gè)大約十二歲的貧窮小男孩進(jìn)來(lái)詢問(wèn)是否有世界地圖集?！癥es.Itcostsonedollar,”repliedthesalesman.“Ihaveonlysixty-twocents,”theboysaid.“有的，一美元?！笔圬泦T回答?！拔抑挥辛婪?，”男孩說(shuō)?！癢ouldyouletmehaveitandwaitalittlewhilefortherestofthemoney?”Hisrequestbeingrefused,theboyleft.“你能讓我先拿走它，等一會(huì)兒再給你剩下的錢(qián)嗎？”電院拒絕了他的請(qǐng)求，男孩就離開(kāi)了。Ifollowedhim.“Andwhatnow?”Iasked.我跟著他?！艾F(xiàn)在怎么辦？”我問(wèn)。"Ishalltryanotherplace,sir.”“我會(huì)去另一個(gè)地方試試，先生。”"DoyoumindifIgotooandseehowyousucceed?”“你介意我也去看看你是否能成功嗎？”"Ifyoulike,"hesaidinsurprise.“如果你愿意跟著就可以，”他驚訝地說(shuō)。FourtimesIsawthelookontheboy'sfaceturntodisappointment.Buthecontinued.小男孩被拒絕了四次。但他繼續(xù)前行。Whenweenteredthefifthstore,hetoldthebooksellerwhathadhappened.當(dāng)我們走進(jìn)第五家店時(shí)，他告訴書(shū)商發(fā)生了什么。Whenaskedwhyhewantedtheatlassomuch,theboysaid,"Myfatherwasasailor,butheisdead.當(dāng)被問(wèn)及為什么這么想要這本地圖集時(shí)，男孩說(shuō)：“我的父親是個(gè)水手，但他已經(jīng)去世了。IwanttoknowabouttheplacesheusedtogotoandI'mgoingtobeasailor,too.”我想了解他去過(guò)的地方，我也想成為一名水手。”Deeplytouched,thebooksellersoldtheboyanatlasandpresentedhimwithanewpencilforhisperseverance.書(shū)商深受感動(dòng)，賣(mài)給了男孩一本地圖集，并給了他一支新鉛筆以表彰他的毅力。Ialsogavehimtwodollarsforotherbookshewanted.Tearsinhiseyes,hetoldushisnameisWilliamHartley.我還給了他兩美元，讓他買(mǎi)他想要的其他書(shū)。他眼含淚水，告訴我們他的名字是WilliamHartley。Hehopedtorepayussomeday.他希望有一天能報(bào)答我們。Manyyearslater,IleftforLiverpoolbywater.多年后，我乘船前往利物浦。Attheendofthejourney,therecameaterriblestormandtheshipwasintrouble.在旅途的盡頭，暴風(fēng)雨來(lái)臨，船只遇險(xiǎn)。Agreatleakwasfillingtheshipwithwater!Thecrewwasmadeupofstrongandablemen.一個(gè)大漏洞讓船只充滿了水！船員都是強(qiáng)壯有能力的人。Butafterfightingforonewholenightwiththewaterstillflowingin,thesailorsgaveupdesperately.但是在與水搏斗了一整夜后，水手們絕望地放棄了。Butthecaptaindidn'tgiveup.Heorderedeverymantohispositionandwentbelowtolookfortheleak.但是船長(zhǎng)沒(méi)有放棄。他命令每個(gè)人到自己的位置，并下去尋找漏洞。Ashepassedme,Iaskedwhethertherewasanyhopeofsavingtheship.當(dāng)他經(jīng)過(guò)我身邊時(shí)，我問(wèn)是否有希望救船。Helookedatme,firmlysaying,“Yes,sir.Aslongasoneinchofthisshipremainsabovewater,thereishope.”他堅(jiān)定地看著我說(shuō)：“是的，先生。只要船只上還有一寸是在水面上，就有希望。”續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段：Threetimesduringthatdayweencounteredratherdangeroussituations.在那一天，我們?nèi)斡龅搅讼喈?dāng)危險(xiǎn)的情況。續(xù)寫(xiě)第二段：BeforeIexpressedmythankstohim,thecaptainsaidfirst,“Sir,didn'tyourecognizeme?”在我表達(dá)感謝之前，船長(zhǎng)先說(shuō)：“先生，你不認(rèn)出我嗎？”文本分析：故事大意--在書(shū)店一個(gè)男孩拿著僅有的62美分，想去買(mǎi)一張地圖。因?yàn)殄X(qián)不夠，連續(xù)四家書(shū)店的店主拒絕了他。在第五家，他向書(shū)店店主解釋他的父親在海上去世了，他想知道父親遇難的地方，而且立志當(dāng)一名水手。店主大為感動(dòng)，賣(mài)給他本地圖集。并給了他一支新鉛筆以表彰他的毅力。我一直跟著男孩，見(jiàn)證了他的毅力和勇氣。我還給了他兩美元，讓他買(mǎi)他想要的其他書(shū)。他眼含淚水，告訴我們他的名字是WilliamHartley。多年后，我乘船遇到了風(fēng)浪，船上漏了一個(gè)大洞。船長(zhǎng)沒(méi)有放棄，他堅(jiān)定地告訴我，只要船只上還有一寸是在水面上，就有希望。”情節(jié)續(xù)寫(xiě)發(fā)展：--工作人員不知疲倦地抽水和修補(bǔ)漏洞。每次，我都擔(dān)心船會(huì)沉沒(méi)。但船長(zhǎng)保持冷靜和果斷，指揮船員并迅速制定解決方案。到了傍晚，最后一處漏洞已經(jīng)修補(bǔ)好，我們已經(jīng)度過(guò)了風(fēng)暴中最嚴(yán)重的一次，取得了來(lái)之不易的勝利。第二段---“你就是辛辛那提書(shū)店里的那個(gè)男孩！”我喊道。船長(zhǎng)微笑著點(diǎn)了點(diǎn)頭?！澳翘炷愫湍莻€(gè)書(shū)商改變了我的人生，”他說(shuō)?！拔矣肋h(yuǎn)不會(huì)忘記你的恩情，我發(fā)誓總有一天會(huì)報(bào)答你的。”他堅(jiān)定不移的領(lǐng)導(dǎo)和決心不僅確保了我們船的安全，而且實(shí)現(xiàn)了他從小就懷有的夢(mèng)想。參考答案：Threetimesduringthatdayweencounteredratherdangeroussituations.

Thecrewworkedtirelesslytopumpwateroutandpatchholes,buttheleakskeptspringingupinnewplaces.Eachtime,Ifearedtheshipwouldsink.Butthecaptainremainedcalmandresolute,directingthecrewanddevisingpromptsolutions.

Hisleadershipandunwaveringdeterminationmotivatedthementopersistdespitechallengingcircumstances.

Bynightfall,thelastleakwaspatched,andwehadmadeitthroughtheworstofthestorm.Exhaustedbutcheerful,thecrewcelebratedtheirhard-wonvictoryovertheelements.BeforeIexpressedmythankstohim,thecaptainsaidfirst,"Sir,didn'tyourecognizeme?"

Hiseyesheldaglintofthefamiliar,

andastherecognitiondawnedonme,awaveof

emotionsweptover.

"You'retheboyinthebookshopinCincinnati!"Iexclaimed.Thecaptainsmiledandnodded."Youandthatbooksellerchangedthecourseofmylifethatday,"hesaid."Ineverforgotyourkindnessandvowedtorepayitsomeday."

Iwarmlyshookhishand,thankinghimforthe

rescueandhisshiningexampleofperseverance

andkindness.Hissteadfastleadershipandresolvenotonlysecuredthesafetyofourshipbutalsorealizedthedreamhe'dheldsincehewasaboy.下水文：Threetimesduringthatdayweencounteredratherdangeroussituations.Threetimesduringthatdaywegaveupindespair.Butthecaptain’scourage,perseverance,andpowerfulwillmasteredeverymanonboard,andwewenttoworkagain.“IwilllandyousafeinLiverpool,”hesaid,“ifyouwillbemen.”Andintheendhedidlandussafe,buttheshipsanksoonaftershereachedLiverpool.Thecaptainstoodonthedeckofthesinkingshipreceivingthethanksofthepassengersastheyhurriedofftheship。BeforeIexpressedmythankstohim,thecaptainsaidfirst,"Sir,didn'tyourecognizeme?"ItoldhimthatIdidnot.“Doyouremembertheboywhomyoufollowedwhenhehadsomuchdifficultyingettingageography,somethirtyyearsago,inCincinnati?”“Wh