新高考英語讀后續(xù)寫素材積累

讀后續(xù)寫素材積累一、環(huán)境描寫的素材環(huán)境描寫分為客觀和主觀兩種角度:客觀為從環(huán)境事物本身入手,主觀則從觀察者角度描寫。通常在描寫時主客觀交替進(jìn)行,主觀描寫比重稍大?？陀^環(huán)境描寫:Part1環(huán)境描寫的adj要求:有聲,有色,有質(zhì)感,有味道thebluesky(藍(lán)天)thesongsofbirds(鳥鳴)thethunderingclouds(電光閃雷鳴)thefragileflowers(嬌嫩的花);(thedark,rainingevening雨夜交加的夜晚)thegreengrass(青草)thefragrantroses(艷麗的玫瑰);thesetting/risingsun(落日/冉冉升起的太陽)…Part2環(huán)境描寫的verb(vi&vt)要求一).Wind(blow/click/howl/wail/roar)1.Agustofwindblewandpartedthedroopingbranchesoftheweepingwillowlikeacurtain,…一陣風(fēng)吹,吹起了彎柳的低垂枝條,就像卷起的窗簾。2.Thewind,softandcold,clickedthroughtreebranchesandstirredthebushesthatsprinkledtheslope.風(fēng),輕柔卻寒冷,輕點著樹枝,攪動著斜坡下的灌木叢。3.Acoolbreezeblewthroughthequietpark.涼爽的微風(fēng)吹拂著寂靜的公園。4.Acoldbreezewaftedthroughmyhair.(冷風(fēng)吹拂過我的頭發(fā))Thewindwasperfectforkiteflying,blowingjusthardenoughtogivesomelift.(今日正是放風(fēng)箏的好天氣,強(qiáng)勁的風(fēng)力帶動了風(fēng)箏的上升。)二).Water(flow/travel/move/meander/enter)聲音:1.Atonepoint,thefaintsoundofwatertumblingthroughthevalley.在某處,潺潺的的水聲在山谷中奏響。顏色2.Thewaterwasdeepblueandsunlightglitteredonitslookingglass-clearsurface.水是深藍(lán)色的,陽光在透明的玻璃表面閃閃發(fā)光。3.Alittlewayoffwasasmallbrook,rushingandsparklingalongbetweengreenbank.離此不遠(yuǎn),有一條小溪,在綠色的河岸間奔騰閃耀。4.Itmurmuredinasoftvoicelikealittleinnocentgirlwhisperedtoherlovingmother.似乎它在溫柔低語,就一位天真少女對著她那慈愛的母親細(xì)細(xì)私語。(action,sound,colour)三).Sky(stand/appear/turn)1.Theskywasacurdledgrayburdenedwithlumpsofclouds.天空是濃濃的灰色,伴著擁擠的朵朵云2.Blueskiesstoodtallandfar藍(lán)藍(lán)的天空高高聳立主觀環(huán)境描寫:1.Sbfoundsthadj/doing/done某人發(fā)現(xiàn)某物(狀態(tài)/動作/被)...2.Sbsaw/heard/felt/smeltsthdoing/done某人看到/聽到/感到/聞到某物(狀態(tài)/動作/被)3.Itwassoadjthatwefind/feel它是如此....以至于4.Sthkeptsbspellbound/amazed/景物使我如此陶醉/驚訝/sthheldsbentirelyintheirpower景物讓我完全驚呆了5.Itlooked/seemed/appeared/feltlike…景物看起來像…二、場景描寫的素材(來自原著:追風(fēng)箏的人)1.Atleasttwodozenkitesalreadyhunginthesky,likepapersharksroamingforprey.Withinanhour,thenumberdoubled,andred,blue,andyellowkitesglidedandspuninthesky.Acoldbreezewaftedthroughmyhair.Thewindwasperfectforkiteflying,blowingjusthardenoughtogivesomelift,makethesweepseasier.(放風(fēng)箏的場景描寫,從各個角度,立體描述)空中已經(jīng)掛著至少二十來只風(fēng)箏,如同紙制的鯊魚,巡游搜獵食物。不到一個鐘頭,這個數(shù)字翻了一番,紅色的、藍(lán)色的、黃色的風(fēng)箏在蒼穹來回飛舞,熠熠生輝。寒冷的微風(fēng)吹過我的頭發(fā)。這風(fēng)正適宜放風(fēng)箏,風(fēng)速不大,恰好能讓風(fēng)箏飄浮起來,也便于操控。2.Thewaterwasadeepblueandsunlightglitteredonitslookingglass-clearsurface.湖水澄藍(lán),波平如鏡,陽光照在湖上熠熠生輝。3.ThenIglancedupandsawapairofkites,redwithlongbluetails,soaringinthesky.Theydancedhighabovethetreesonthewestendofthepark,overthewindmills,floatingsidebysidelikeapairofeyeslookingdownonSanFrancisco,thecityInowcallhome.(場景、比喻)我抬起頭,望見兩只紅色的風(fēng)箏,帶著長長的藍(lán)色尾巴,在天空中冉冉升起。它們舞動著,飛越公園西邊的樹林,飛越風(fēng)車,并排飄浮著,如同一雙眼睛俯視著舊金山,這個我現(xiàn)在當(dāng)成家園的城市。4.Blueskiesstoodtallandfar,thesunlikeabrandingironsearingthebackofyourneck.CreekswhereHassanandIskippedstonesallspringturneddry,andrickshawsstirreddustwhentheysputteredby.(場景、比喻)天空一碧如洗,陽光像烙鐵般灼痛后頸。整個春天我和哈桑在溪流打水漂,到了夏天它們也干涸了。黃包車嗒嗒走過,揚起陣陣灰塵。5.Somewhere,abranchsnapped,anowlhooted.Thewind,softandcold,clickedthroughtreebranchesandstirredthebushesthatsprinkledtheslope.Andfrombelow,thefaintsoundofwatertumblingthroughthevalley.在某個地方傳來樹枝劈啪作響的聲音,還有貓頭鷹的叫聲。寒風(fēng)微微拂動樹枝,吹過山坡上的灌木叢。而下面,水流在山谷淌動,傳來陣陣微弱的聲音。6.Bythreeo'clock,therainhadstoppedandtheskywasacurdledgrayburdenedwithlumpsofclouds.Acoolbreezeblewthroughthepark.(天氣)到三點時,雨停了,鉛灰色的天空陰云密布,一陣寒風(fēng)吹過公園。7.Thesunwasbeginningtoset,glitteringredthroughthecracksbetweentheramshacklebuildings.(景象)太陽開始下山,那些搖搖欲墜的房子的裂縫中,滲出閃閃的紅色斜暉。三、描寫時間,動作,心理和情感一)、情感好詞:1.喜樂①Thesmileonherfaceshonelikeadiamond.她臉上的笑容像鉆石一樣閃閃發(fā)光。②Asmileofunderstandingflashedacrosshisface.他臉上露出了一種理解的微笑。③Arippleofexcitementranthroughthem.一陣激動聲穿過他們。④Laughterlingeredaroundtheroom.笑聲在房間里縈繞。⑤Hiseyestwinkledwithpleasure.他的眼睛閃爍著快樂。⑥Awildgaiety(快樂)tookholdofher.一種瘋狂的快樂控制了她。⑦Unforgettablewerehereyesthatshonelikediamondsandlipsheldinasteadysmile.令人難忘的是她的眼睛像鉆石一樣閃閃發(fā)光,嘴角保持著穩(wěn)定的微笑。⑧Iwaswildwithjoy.我欣喜若狂。⑨Iwaspleasedbeyonddescription.我高興得難以形容。⑩Sheworeashiningsmileonherface.她臉上帶著燦爛的笑容。?Hersmilelitupthewholeroom.她的笑容照亮了整個房間。?Sheshedtearsofjoy.她高興得流下了眼淚。?Hereyesweresparklinglikediamonds.她的眼睛閃著鉆石般的光芒。?Shewasoverflowingwithhappiness.她洋溢著幸福。?Herflushedfacewasshiningwithexcitement.她激動得滿臉通紅。?Joywelledupinsideher.她心中涌起喜悅。?Iwasfloatingonair.我漂浮在空中。?Amusementgleamedinhiseyes.他眼睛流露出愉快的神情。2.憤怒:①Iwasseizedbyanger.我充滿了憤怒。②Hewasfumingwithrage.他氣得大發(fā)雷霆。③Hisangerboiledover.他的憤怒爆發(fā)了。④Hecouldhardly/scarcelycontainhisrage.他幾乎控制不住怒火。⑤Hewasbreathingfireandfury.他充滿著怒火。⑥Hisvoicetrembledwithanger.他的聲音因憤怒而顫抖。⑦Hegavemealookofburninganger.他憤怒地看了我一眼。⑧Heglaredatmewithburningeyes.他用灼熱的目光怒視著我。⑨Heflaredupattheword.他一聽到這個字就勃然大怒。⑩Hisfacecloudedwithanger.他氣得臉色陰沉。3.悲傷煩惱①Hestoodsilently,tearsrollingdownhischeeks.他靜靜地站著,眼淚順著面頰流了下來。②IfeellikeIamfloatinginanoceanofsadness.我漂浮在悲傷的海洋里。③Herhandswereshaking.Shewasonthevergeoftears.她的手在顫抖。她快要哭了。④Hearingthenews,sodesperatewashethathedrownedsadnessinwine.聽到這個消息,他絕望地把悲傷淹沒在酒里。⑤Sheburstintotearsandranoutoftheroom.她突然哭了起來,跑出了房間。⑥Shesobbed,hidingherfaceinherhands.她掩面哭泣。⑦Itriedtofightbacktears./Myeyeswerefilledwithtears.我努力忍住眼淚。/我的眼里充滿了淚水。⑧Afrown(皺眉)nowstoodonhisface.他皺起了眉頭。⑨Theysattherewithglumlooksontheirfaces.他們坐在那里,帶著一臉憂郁。⑩Thenewscastacloudofgloomoverhisface.這消息使他臉上蒙上了一層陰影。?Hebrimmedoverwithsorrowwhen...他滿是悲傷……?Theywereimmersedinsorrow.他們沉浸在悲痛之中。?Thesedayshewasinlowspirits.這些日子他情緒低落。4.害怕:①Heturnedtome,