Unit1TeenageLifeReadingforwriting課件高中英語人教

Unit1TeenagersLifeReadingforwriting--WritealetterofadviceLead-in:Teenagersmaymeetthefollowingproblems...ProblemsofteenagersInternetaddictionGenerationgapLonelinessPuppyloveLead-in:HaveyoueverhadsuchproblemsWhatdidyoudoOrwhatwillyoudoAreyoucuriousabouttheletterWhensomeonefacedsuchchallenges,hewrotetoSusanLuo.SusanLuo,anadviserforteenagers,hasreceivedaletteraskingforsomeadvice.Observetheletter.DateGreetingBodyCloseSignatureWhile-reading:NowreadherreplyanddiscussthefollowingquestionsWhatis WorriedFriend’sproblemWhatsuggestionsdoesSusanLuogiveBesidessuggestions,whatelsedoesSusanLuosayinherlettersCirclethekeywordsHeisworriedabouthisfriendwhoisaddictedtocomputergames.1)Talktohisfriendabouthisbehaviour2)Encouragehisfriendtotrynewhobbies1)SheunderstandsWorriedFriend’sproblemsandfeelings2)ShealsotalksaboutthenegativeeffectsofcomputeraddictionsReadtheletteragainHowdidSusanorganisethecontentBackground

Iunderstandhowyoufeel

IknowwhattheproblemisThisismyadviceandreasonsIthinkmyadvicewillhelpInordertomakesomechangesabouttheschoolcanteen,LiHua,aseniorhighschoolstudent,wrotealetterforadvicetoprincipal,tooLet’sreadhisletter!Dearprincipal,I’mLiHua.Manystudentsinourschoolarenotsatisfiedwiththecanteen.SoI’mwritingtoadviseyoutomakesomechangesaboutit.Mysuggestionsareasfollows.Firstofall,Iwouldliketosuggestthatthepricesshouldbemoreresonableandthechoicesofdishesshouldbemorevarious.Becausesomestudentsthinkthepricesofthedishesaretoohighandthechoicesaretoolimited.What’smore,mysecondsuggestionisthatyou’dbetteropenmoreservicewindowstoreducingwaitingtime.Sowecanhavemoretimetohavearest.Mostimportantly,it’snecessaryforschoolcanteentoemploysomenewchefwhoaregoodatcooking.Idohopeyoucantakemyadviceintoseriousaccount.AndIhopetheywillbehelpful.Goodluckwithyou.YoursLiHuaObservetheformatoftheletter!Background&Purpose

SuggestionsFirstofall,What’smoreMostimportantlyExpectations&HopesHowdidLiHuamakehissuggestionspersuasive.Now,ifyouwereanadviser,howwillyouwritealetterofadvice獲悉情況+寫作目的提出建議+具體原因表達(dá)期望Usefulexpressions:Situation/Background:Knowingthat.....得知....I’mmorethandelightedtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceon...很高興收到你的信件，詢問我關(guān)于...的建議I'msorryyouhavetroublein...很遺憾你在...(方面)遇到了困難Writingpurpose:I’mwritingto....我寫信....I’mwritingtoyouto...我寫信給你是為了...I’mwritingtoyouinthehopethat....我寫信給你希望....Usefulexpressions:Suggestions&details:Iwouldliketosuggestthat.....,whichishelpfulforyourproblem.我建議你....,這對(duì)你這的問題很有幫助Myfirst/secondadviceisthatyoushould....,because...我的第一/第二條建議是你應(yīng)該...,因?yàn)?...Ithinkitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucan...我覺得這將是更有益的，如果你能....Ithinkitwouldbeagoodideato…我認(rèn)為....將是個(gè)好主意UsesomelinkingwordstomakethemclearUsefulexpressions:Linkingwords:Firstofall/tobeginwith/Inthefirstplace首先，What’smore/Inaddition/Besidethat/Moreover此外，

Mostimportantly最重要的是Atthesametime同時(shí)Andthen然后Lastbutnotleast最后但同樣很重要Usefulexpressions:Hope/Wish/Expect:Ihopethesesuggestionswillbeofusetoyou.

我希望我的建議對(duì)你有用2.Intheend,Iwillbeverygladifyoufindmyadvicehelpful.

最后，如果你覺得我的建議有幫助我將十分高興3.I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.

期待你的回信4.Isincerelyhopemyadvicewillbeofsomehelpforyou.IfthereismoreIcandotohelp,pleaseletmeknow.我真心希望我的建議對(duì)你有所幫助。如果還有什么我能幫上忙，務(wù)必告知我。注意：書寫差，給分降檔MinHoWritingPracticee7d195523061f1c03a90ee8e42cb24248e56383cd534985688F9F494128731F165EE95AB4B0C0A38076AAEA07667B1565C446FC45FF01DFB0E885BCDBDF3A284F3DB14DA61DD97F0BAB2E6C668FB4931DED5FAA0CB712CCE3A8